Comments received on poems by Parsa
The Long Goodbye
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of farewell that seems sad and still with a sense of longing. Nicely done
June 12th, 2025 07:52
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of farewell that seems sad and still with a sense of longing. Nicely done
June 12th, 2025 07:52
O\' My Spirit
sorenbarrett said:
Beauty in this Shakspearian style poem that bleeds nostalgia of another era where things were more clearcut and simpler (or so we think now). Well done with a strong sense of romanticism.
June 10th, 2025 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
Beauty in this Shakspearian style poem that bleeds nostalgia of another era where things were more clearcut and simpler (or so we think now). Well done with a strong sense of romanticism.
June 10th, 2025 04:59
The Sorrow in Your Eyes
NafisaSB said:
sad, soulful and so beautiful
lovely write - keep them coming
June 9th, 2025 23:51
NafisaSB said:
sad, soulful and so beautiful
lovely write - keep them coming
June 9th, 2025 23:51
Your Kindness
Poetic Licence said:
Beautifully written love poem with some wonderful lines, enjoyed the read
June 9th, 2025 07:36
Poetic Licence said:
Beautifully written love poem with some wonderful lines, enjoyed the read
June 9th, 2025 07:36
Your Kindness
sorenbarrett said:
Great metaphor in this love poem that intricately weaves its story. Nicely done
June 9th, 2025 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
Great metaphor in this love poem that intricately weaves its story. Nicely done
June 9th, 2025 05:19
Possessed
sorenbarrett said:
Supernatural and surreal in tone this poem conveys a sense of sadness and despair. Nicely done
June 8th, 2025 06:26
sorenbarrett said:
Supernatural and surreal in tone this poem conveys a sense of sadness and despair. Nicely done
June 8th, 2025 06:26
A Miracle
sorenbarrett said:
A nicely constructed sonnet that is wistfully romantic as to nature itself. Very nice and a fave
June 7th, 2025 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
A nicely constructed sonnet that is wistfully romantic as to nature itself. Very nice and a fave
June 7th, 2025 06:48
The Sorrow in Your Eyes
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write and a real pleasure to read
June 5th, 2025 09:03
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write and a real pleasure to read
June 5th, 2025 09:03
The Sorrow in Your Eyes
sorenbarrett said:
For the craft of writing alone this poem deserves a fave. Beautiful in its meter and rhyme it speaks from the heart of a disillusioned soul with a longing for what will not be. The emotion one more reason for the fave. Wonderful images with references to Astronomy born in myth. Associated with Isis it is a guiding beacon to carry us to a better place. To the Chinees a pivotal aspect central to cosmological belief. In metaphor this poem is again rich and another fave. A truely beautiful poem
June 5th, 2025 06:27
sorenbarrett said:
For the craft of writing alone this poem deserves a fave. Beautiful in its meter and rhyme it speaks from the heart of a disillusioned soul with a longing for what will not be. The emotion one more reason for the fave. Wonderful images with references to Astronomy born in myth. Associated with Isis it is a guiding beacon to carry us to a better place. To the Chinees a pivotal aspect central to cosmological belief. In metaphor this poem is again rich and another fave. A truely beautiful poem
June 5th, 2025 06:27
The First Fall
Poetic Licence said:
A very relatable write, a sense of desperation written in a sensitive way, enjoyed the read
June 4th, 2025 07:49
Poetic Licence said:
A very relatable write, a sense of desperation written in a sensitive way, enjoyed the read
June 4th, 2025 07:49
The First Fall
sorenbarrett said:
These are feelings that many have somewhere in life. Deeply felt it reads well and with a sense of desperation. Well done
June 4th, 2025 05:43
sorenbarrett said:
These are feelings that many have somewhere in life. Deeply felt it reads well and with a sense of desperation. Well done
June 4th, 2025 05:43
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