Comments received on poems by Parsa
The Sorrow in Your Eyes
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write and a real pleasure to read
June 5th, 2025 09:03
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write and a real pleasure to read
June 5th, 2025 09:03
The Sorrow in Your Eyes
sorenbarrett said:
For the craft of writing alone this poem deserves a fave. Beautiful in its meter and rhyme it speaks from the heart of a disillusioned soul with a longing for what will not be. The emotion one more reason for the fave. Wonderful images with references to Astronomy born in myth. Associated with Isis it is a guiding beacon to carry us to a better place. To the Chinees a pivotal aspect central to cosmological belief. In metaphor this poem is again rich and another fave. A truely beautiful poem
June 5th, 2025 06:27
sorenbarrett said:
For the craft of writing alone this poem deserves a fave. Beautiful in its meter and rhyme it speaks from the heart of a disillusioned soul with a longing for what will not be. The emotion one more reason for the fave. Wonderful images with references to Astronomy born in myth. Associated with Isis it is a guiding beacon to carry us to a better place. To the Chinees a pivotal aspect central to cosmological belief. In metaphor this poem is again rich and another fave. A truely beautiful poem
June 5th, 2025 06:27
The First Fall
Poetic Licence said:
A very relatable write, a sense of desperation written in a sensitive way, enjoyed the read
June 4th, 2025 07:49
Poetic Licence said:
A very relatable write, a sense of desperation written in a sensitive way, enjoyed the read
June 4th, 2025 07:49
The First Fall
sorenbarrett said:
These are feelings that many have somewhere in life. Deeply felt it reads well and with a sense of desperation. Well done
June 4th, 2025 05:43
sorenbarrett said:
These are feelings that many have somewhere in life. Deeply felt it reads well and with a sense of desperation. Well done
June 4th, 2025 05:43
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