Comments received on poems by Parsa
Eileen
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for some really wonderful lines in this poem to etch a mountain on a grain of sand caught my eye as did many others, This ode expands in all directions from philosophy to mythology it has great rhyme and meter and extols the the wonderous aspects of the adored. Very nicely done and must have taken a good deal of work.
August 21st, 2025 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for some really wonderful lines in this poem to etch a mountain on a grain of sand caught my eye as did many others, This ode expands in all directions from philosophy to mythology it has great rhyme and meter and extols the the wonderous aspects of the adored. Very nicely done and must have taken a good deal of work.
August 21st, 2025 04:59
Hidden in the Rye
Poetic Licence said:
A really lovely write with some wonderful lines, enjoyed the read
August 15th, 2025 05:34
Poetic Licence said:
A really lovely write with some wonderful lines, enjoyed the read
August 15th, 2025 05:34
Hidden in the Rye
sorenbarrett said:
The power of the moon over tides and planting times comes through in this poem. A wonderful metaphor that recalls moon goddesses and seasons as well. Nicely done
August 15th, 2025 05:30
sorenbarrett said:
The power of the moon over tides and planting times comes through in this poem. A wonderful metaphor that recalls moon goddesses and seasons as well. Nicely done
August 15th, 2025 05:30
To Helen
sorenbarrett said:
Such a lovely flattering description of one loved. Well worded and upbeat it shines. Nicely done
August 5th, 2025 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
Such a lovely flattering description of one loved. Well worded and upbeat it shines. Nicely done
August 5th, 2025 04:59
First Rays of Dawn
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful imagery fill this love poem. Very nicely written
July 28th, 2025 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful imagery fill this love poem. Very nicely written
July 28th, 2025 05:03
Monoluna
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice. This poem speaks to me of the duality of light, day and night, reflections and gives a sense of peace. Loved it
July 23rd, 2025 06:18
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice. This poem speaks to me of the duality of light, day and night, reflections and gives a sense of peace. Loved it
July 23rd, 2025 06:18
An Ode To Hedieh
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of the appreciation of help received, has a beautiful flow and some wonderful lines, enjoyed the read
July 22nd, 2025 06:54
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of the appreciation of help received, has a beautiful flow and some wonderful lines, enjoyed the read
July 22nd, 2025 06:54
An Ode To Hedieh
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of gratitude and praise for help received. I shows good rhyme and meter and flows nicely. Well done
July 22nd, 2025 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of gratitude and praise for help received. I shows good rhyme and meter and flows nicely. Well done
July 22nd, 2025 04:23
The Last
RSM0812 said:
This is the best poem ive read today. I love the classic style. You are a beautiful poet with beautiful words, written beautifully.
July 21st, 2025 09:17
RSM0812 said:
This is the best poem ive read today. I love the classic style. You are a beautiful poet with beautiful words, written beautifully.
July 21st, 2025 09:17
Limerence
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem with such a soft and drifting tone. It speaks to the soul and is a fave
July 16th, 2025 06:58
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem with such a soft and drifting tone. It speaks to the soul and is a fave
July 16th, 2025 06:58
Imperfect Heaven
sorenbarrett said:
A prayer and poem spoken for one desired. Nicely written
July 13th, 2025 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
A prayer and poem spoken for one desired. Nicely written
July 13th, 2025 05:03
The Last
sorenbarrett said:
A strong play on words in this poem as it makes its point. A fun read
July 5th, 2025 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
A strong play on words in this poem as it makes its point. A fun read
July 5th, 2025 04:19
I Follow You in My Dreams
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write, some wonderful imagery, enjoyed the read
June 30th, 2025 04:06
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write, some wonderful imagery, enjoyed the read
June 30th, 2025 04:06
I Follow You in My Dreams
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and sad. A poem with wonderful imagery and rhyme. It runs smoothly onto the tongue as honey and fades away into sorrow. Lovely
June 29th, 2025 06:52
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and sad. A poem with wonderful imagery and rhyme. It runs smoothly onto the tongue as honey and fades away into sorrow. Lovely
June 29th, 2025 06:52
To Thy Companion
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of past myth cast in old language to give it a sense of age it is wonderfully worded and rhymed telling its tail and leaves its question. A fave
June 27th, 2025 06:24
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of past myth cast in old language to give it a sense of age it is wonderfully worded and rhymed telling its tail and leaves its question. A fave
June 27th, 2025 06:24
My Garden
Poetic Licence said:
This paints some lovely images as you read the author pleads their case of love and passion for another person, lovely write
June 26th, 2025 06:35
Poetic Licence said:
This paints some lovely images as you read the author pleads their case of love and passion for another person, lovely write
June 26th, 2025 06:35
My Garden
sorenbarrett said:
Full of vivid images this poem pleads its case of love and passion for another. Very nicely written
June 26th, 2025 05:44
sorenbarrett said:
Full of vivid images this poem pleads its case of love and passion for another. Very nicely written
June 26th, 2025 05:44
Well-Wishing
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely of only wishing the best for the one they love, enjoyed the read
June 21st, 2025 07:37
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely of only wishing the best for the one they love, enjoyed the read
June 21st, 2025 07:37
Well-Wishing
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful wish for the best for one that one loves nicely written
June 21st, 2025 06:34
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful wish for the best for one that one loves nicely written
June 21st, 2025 06:34
Compensation
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful love sonnet that is filled with lovely lines. So nicely written
June 18th, 2025 08:08
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful love sonnet that is filled with lovely lines. So nicely written
June 18th, 2025 08:08
My Rose in the Battlefield
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful wording in this beautiful sonnet but it is for the metaphor that I give the fave. This is to me a deep poem of anguish at loss and anger stemmed by tears. Simply beautiful
June 17th, 2025 07:03
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful wording in this beautiful sonnet but it is for the metaphor that I give the fave. This is to me a deep poem of anguish at loss and anger stemmed by tears. Simply beautiful
June 17th, 2025 07:03
The Long Goodbye
NafisaSB said:
such hopeful longing conveyed so beautifully
lovely poem
June 17th, 2025 00:40
NafisaSB said:
such hopeful longing conveyed so beautifully
lovely poem
June 17th, 2025 00:40
My Divine Muse
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of the declaration of their love, some lovely lines in this write, enjoyed the read
June 15th, 2025 09:29
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of the declaration of their love, some lovely lines in this write, enjoyed the read
June 15th, 2025 09:29
My Divine Muse
sorenbarrett said:
Most romantic a poem of declared love and in such classic form. Well done
June 15th, 2025 05:12
sorenbarrett said:
Most romantic a poem of declared love and in such classic form. Well done
June 15th, 2025 05:12
Where is she now?
sorenbarrett said:
For beautiful images and metaphors this poem of longing gets a fave
June 14th, 2025 07:55
sorenbarrett said:
For beautiful images and metaphors this poem of longing gets a fave
June 14th, 2025 07:55
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