Comments received on poems by Friendship
Monday
MendedFences27 said:
Why must everything have a beginning and an end? External forces drive us to live within the norms of society. Your poem raised these questions as I read it. Got me to think why everyone hates Mondays. Then you closed with the answer, \"spinning time.\" The clock is ticking, time to respond. These days I hardly know what day it is, but I surely know the end is coming, It\'s a beautiful sunny Spring day here, why worry about tomorrow? -Phil A.
April 13th, 2026 12:22
MendedFences27 said:
Why must everything have a beginning and an end? External forces drive us to live within the norms of society. Your poem raised these questions as I read it. Got me to think why everyone hates Mondays. Then you closed with the answer, \"spinning time.\" The clock is ticking, time to respond. These days I hardly know what day it is, but I surely know the end is coming, It\'s a beautiful sunny Spring day here, why worry about tomorrow? -Phil A.
April 13th, 2026 12:22
Monday
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship… this carries that steady transition into the week…quiet giving way to responsibility without any rush. It feels real and familiar, like stepping into something that just keeps moving. You held that balance really well. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 13th, 2026 08:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship… this carries that steady transition into the week…quiet giving way to responsibility without any rush. It feels real and familiar, like stepping into something that just keeps moving. You held that balance really well. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 13th, 2026 08:42
Because you believed.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship… this hit me hard…there’s a quiet strength in this that just stays with you. It feels steady, like something meant to be held onto. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 13th, 2026 08:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship… this hit me hard…there’s a quiet strength in this that just stays with you. It feels steady, like something meant to be held onto. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 13th, 2026 08:27
Existing
Joseph M Marion said:
This is beautiful very well written definitely from the heart
April 13th, 2026 07:27
Joseph M Marion said:
This is beautiful very well written definitely from the heart
April 13th, 2026 07:27
Because you believed.
Katie B. said:
It is amazing the confidence that grows in us when someone believes in us. This poem flows well and leaves you waiting for the next line. I love it and believe it. Absolutely beautiful. Excellent write my friend. a FAVE!
Katie
April 12th, 2026 07:00
Katie B. said:
It is amazing the confidence that grows in us when someone believes in us. This poem flows well and leaves you waiting for the next line. I love it and believe it. Absolutely beautiful. Excellent write my friend. a FAVE!
Katie
April 12th, 2026 07:00
Because you believed.
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice this poem speaks of a spark igniting into a flame and finally light and fire. Metaphoric it speaks clearly
April 12th, 2026 06:51
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice this poem speaks of a spark igniting into a flame and finally light and fire. Metaphoric it speaks clearly
April 12th, 2026 06:51
I have no control.
NinjaGirl said:
Maybe we have to fall into the sea to realize what we\'re chasing on boat isn\'t worth it.
Very well done, I do love your writing style.
April 11th, 2026 20:23
NinjaGirl said:
Maybe we have to fall into the sea to realize what we\'re chasing on boat isn\'t worth it.
Very well done, I do love your writing style.
April 11th, 2026 20:23
I have no control.
sorenbarrett said:
A most metaphoric depiction of the body. Nicely written
April 11th, 2026 18:54
sorenbarrett said:
A most metaphoric depiction of the body. Nicely written
April 11th, 2026 18:54
I have no control.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this really stays with me…that unraveling where control just slips away and you’re left drifting. And…as I see it…none of us really have control. We just think we do until something proves otherwise. Control is an illusion. Your poem\'s imagery carries that all the way through. Heavy, honest, and it lands. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 11:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this really stays with me…that unraveling where control just slips away and you’re left drifting. And…as I see it…none of us really have control. We just think we do until something proves otherwise. Control is an illusion. Your poem\'s imagery carries that all the way through. Heavy, honest, and it lands. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 11:24
I have no control.
arqios said:
Drifting darkness and a wait for freedom, classic debacle 🕊️🙏🏻
April 11th, 2026 09:41
arqios said:
Drifting darkness and a wait for freedom, classic debacle 🕊️🙏🏻
April 11th, 2026 09:41
Existing
2781 said:
What was that that Bob Dylan wrote? Something about serving somebody..
April 11th, 2026 07:51
2781 said:
What was that that Bob Dylan wrote? Something about serving somebody..
April 11th, 2026 07:51
Please free me.
2781 said:
This sounds like the fate of a generation - the nursing home.
April 11th, 2026 07:31
2781 said:
This sounds like the fate of a generation - the nursing home.
April 11th, 2026 07:31
Please free me.
Dan Williams said:
And what a nice encore from \"Existing\". I tend to avoid rhyme, find it he need for suitable words sometimes exasperating, but you have navigated it wonderfully. \"The walls have tasted every silent plea, The bitter salt of what it costs to be.\", brilliant.
April 11th, 2026 01:31
Dan Williams said:
And what a nice encore from \"Existing\". I tend to avoid rhyme, find it he need for suitable words sometimes exasperating, but you have navigated it wonderfully. \"The walls have tasted every silent plea, The bitter salt of what it costs to be.\", brilliant.
April 11th, 2026 01:31
Existing
Dan Williams said:
What a fine summation of spiritual freedom.\" It is what it is—the stone and the stream\" is simple and accurate, as is the whole of it. Then \"Just the breath in my lungs and the ground at my feet\" polishes it. Nice, very nice.
April 11th, 2026 01:23
Dan Williams said:
What a fine summation of spiritual freedom.\" It is what it is—the stone and the stream\" is simple and accurate, as is the whole of it. Then \"Just the breath in my lungs and the ground at my feet\" polishes it. Nice, very nice.
April 11th, 2026 01:23
Existing
NafisaSB said:
yet to get there - so am glad you have found the peace and release...
April 11th, 2026 00:04
NafisaSB said:
yet to get there - so am glad you have found the peace and release...
April 11th, 2026 00:04
Please free me.
Paul Bell said:
Freedom these days come at a high price it seems.
Once upon a time we saw ourselves as free.
Now societies restraints hold us back.
April 10th, 2026 09:44
Paul Bell said:
Freedom these days come at a high price it seems.
Once upon a time we saw ourselves as free.
Now societies restraints hold us back.
April 10th, 2026 09:44
Please free me.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, there’s strength in this that doesn’t shout…it endures. You hold pain, accountability, and exhaustion all at once, but what rises through it is the right to be released. Not given…earned. That’s what makes this powerful. It stays with you long after. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 10th, 2026 09:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, there’s strength in this that doesn’t shout…it endures. You hold pain, accountability, and exhaustion all at once, but what rises through it is the right to be released. Not given…earned. That’s what makes this powerful. It stays with you long after. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 10th, 2026 09:01
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