Comments received on poems by Friendship
They labeled me inappropriate! Then made me out to be the Bitchy-witch.
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant. What matters is, you know the truth.
May 3rd, 2026 13:49
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant. What matters is, you know the truth.
May 3rd, 2026 13:49
They labeled me inappropriate! Then made me out to be the Bitchy-witch.
arqios said:
Exciting read here, Friendship 🕊️🙏🏻
May 3rd, 2026 07:05
arqios said:
Exciting read here, Friendship 🕊️🙏🏻
May 3rd, 2026 07:05
They labeled me inappropriate! Then made me out to be the Bitchy-witch.
sorenbarrett said:
Technically well crafted with good rhyme and meter it flows well telling its story of betrayal and labeling. There is evident emotion in the write that seems to grow with each verse. On its technical merit a fave
May 3rd, 2026 06:15
sorenbarrett said:
Technically well crafted with good rhyme and meter it flows well telling its story of betrayal and labeling. There is evident emotion in the write that seems to grow with each verse. On its technical merit a fave
May 3rd, 2026 06:15
They labeled me inappropriate! Then made me out to be the Bitchy-witch.
David Wakeling said:
your secret is safe with me.A magnificent poem.So creative and clever.I really enjoyed reading
May 3rd, 2026 06:13
David Wakeling said:
your secret is safe with me.A magnificent poem.So creative and clever.I really enjoyed reading
May 3rd, 2026 06:13
They labeled me inappropriate! Then made me out to be the Bitchy-witch.
Demar Desu said:
Woah, what a change of pace.
May 3rd, 2026 05:35
Demar Desu said:
Woah, what a change of pace.
May 3rd, 2026 05:35
I’m tired, Mama
RSM0812 said:
This envokes to me a person who is ready for change. Not just any change but a major life change that will bring the person home. The home is the heart.The home is love. The home is safe. I think we all want to be home. In the quiet. In the solitude. Surrounded by loved ones and blessed that our soul keeps shinning light for others to see.
May 2nd, 2026 21:19
RSM0812 said:
This envokes to me a person who is ready for change. Not just any change but a major life change that will bring the person home. The home is the heart.The home is love. The home is safe. I think we all want to be home. In the quiet. In the solitude. Surrounded by loved ones and blessed that our soul keeps shinning light for others to see.
May 2nd, 2026 21:19
I’m tired, Mama
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Your use of rhyme is truly impressive, and I almost never say that.
May 2nd, 2026 20:25
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Your use of rhyme is truly impressive, and I almost never say that.
May 2nd, 2026 20:25
I’m tired, Mama
David Wakeling said:
What a great realisation poem.The awareness that all the struggling is done and the suthor is prepared for the after life.I really enjoyed reading this.I relate to the theme and the rhyme is wonderful/Well done
May 2nd, 2026 18:46
David Wakeling said:
What a great realisation poem.The awareness that all the struggling is done and the suthor is prepared for the after life.I really enjoyed reading this.I relate to the theme and the rhyme is wonderful/Well done
May 2nd, 2026 18:46
I’m tired, Mama
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
Friendship; this write speaks of a life that has learned some lessons, a life that is beyond tired and ready to return to oneself! Beautifully written!
May 2nd, 2026 11:37
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
Friendship; this write speaks of a life that has learned some lessons, a life that is beyond tired and ready to return to oneself! Beautifully written!
May 2nd, 2026 11:37
I’m tired, Mama
sorenbarrett said:
This poem bears the exhaustion of a life lived in various types of pain and suffering and the readiness to move on. Well written
May 2nd, 2026 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
This poem bears the exhaustion of a life lived in various types of pain and suffering and the readiness to move on. Well written
May 2nd, 2026 04:24
Please stop!
arqios said:
A tough deal and yet so real to what we face on a daily basis🙏🏻🕊️
May 1st, 2026 06:52
arqios said:
A tough deal and yet so real to what we face on a daily basis🙏🏻🕊️
May 1st, 2026 06:52
Please stop!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Friendship, that contrast of offering peace and receiving stone really stays with me. It’s so simple, but it carries the whole weight of the piece…that imbalance, that constant giving into something that won’t return it. That moment lands heavy. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 1st, 2026 05:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Friendship, that contrast of offering peace and receiving stone really stays with me. It’s so simple, but it carries the whole weight of the piece…that imbalance, that constant giving into something that won’t return it. That moment lands heavy. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 1st, 2026 05:46
Please stop!
David Wakeling said:
This is a classic dysfunctional relationship.Very well crafted and expressed.The reader wold wish the relationship be resolved.Interesting
May 1st, 2026 05:41
David Wakeling said:
This is a classic dysfunctional relationship.Very well crafted and expressed.The reader wold wish the relationship be resolved.Interesting
May 1st, 2026 05:41
My Canvas.
David Wakeling said:
What an amazing journey into the mind of the artist. An incredible poem.I like the rhyme and cadence,Exceptional.
April 30th, 2026 19:25
David Wakeling said:
What an amazing journey into the mind of the artist. An incredible poem.I like the rhyme and cadence,Exceptional.
April 30th, 2026 19:25
My Canvas.
sorenbarrett said:
My friend I see the ghost as the image of true art not just learned craft and technical ability. That is the ghost that we all search for but that illusively hides from view only to show their face on rare occasions. Nicely crafted this poem with its rhyme is a fave
April 30th, 2026 05:51
sorenbarrett said:
My friend I see the ghost as the image of true art not just learned craft and technical ability. That is the ghost that we all search for but that illusively hides from view only to show their face on rare occasions. Nicely crafted this poem with its rhyme is a fave
April 30th, 2026 05:51
I am conquering my fears this time, I\'m holding my head up high.
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful written and expressed, finding their inner strength and standing proud and strong, a very positive write to read, enjoyed
April 29th, 2026 22:00
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful written and expressed, finding their inner strength and standing proud and strong, a very positive write to read, enjoyed
April 29th, 2026 22:00
When the mind is enhanced,it create a beautiful grome.🌹
arqios said:
A very fun read, Friendship🕊️🙏
April 29th, 2026 21:58
arqios said:
A very fun read, Friendship🕊️🙏
April 29th, 2026 21:58
When the mind is enhanced,it create a beautiful grome.🌹
sorenbarrett said:
I love mythical creatures and the story behind them. I think the Greeks were the best at it but so many others as well. Nicely written my friend
April 29th, 2026 13:40
sorenbarrett said:
I love mythical creatures and the story behind them. I think the Greeks were the best at it but so many others as well. Nicely written my friend
April 29th, 2026 13:40
When the mind is enhanced,it create a beautiful grome.🌹
Paul Bell said:
I wonder how humans would do if we used our whole brain.
Would that be the greatest height we could reach.
Your poem asks questions.
April 29th, 2026 13:16
Paul Bell said:
I wonder how humans would do if we used our whole brain.
Would that be the greatest height we could reach.
Your poem asks questions.
April 29th, 2026 13:16
When the mind is enhanced,it create a beautiful grome.🌹
Neville said:
I can assure you my friend there aint gonna be nobody that don\'t like this a whole lot .. nope, not a single no one .. Neville 😎⭐⭐⭐⭐🌻👍
April 29th, 2026 12:21
Neville said:
I can assure you my friend there aint gonna be nobody that don\'t like this a whole lot .. nope, not a single no one .. Neville 😎⭐⭐⭐⭐🌻👍
April 29th, 2026 12:21
I am conquering my fears this time, I\'m holding my head up high.
David Wakeling said:
Good for you.Nice to hear positive affirmations
April 28th, 2026 17:39
David Wakeling said:
Good for you.Nice to hear positive affirmations
April 28th, 2026 17:39
I am conquering my fears this time, I\'m holding my head up high.
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely Friendship this poem show strength in its words, its rhyme and meter very well written and a fave
April 28th, 2026 14:29
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely Friendship this poem show strength in its words, its rhyme and meter very well written and a fave
April 28th, 2026 14:29
S.H.I.T happens… and today it’s a good thing 😄
boot said:
Cool...I\'ve been reading some of your stuff and I find myself liking it...good words
April 28th, 2026 11:50
boot said:
Cool...I\'ve been reading some of your stuff and I find myself liking it...good words
April 28th, 2026 11:50
I am conquering my fears this time, I\'m holding my head up high.
orchidee said:
Good write F.
April 28th, 2026 08:52
orchidee said:
Good write F.
April 28th, 2026 08:52
Iron in the Velvet.
David Wakeling said:
A well constructed poem here.So many powerful lines and images.The ending is particularly good.That kindness should win in the end.An enjoyable read
April 27th, 2026 18:51
David Wakeling said:
A well constructed poem here.So many powerful lines and images.The ending is particularly good.That kindness should win in the end.An enjoyable read
April 27th, 2026 18:51
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