Comments received on poems by Friendship
Happy Birthday, my brother from another mother.❤️
2781 said:
That\'s a great present.
May 20th, 2026 08:46
2781 said:
That\'s a great present.
May 20th, 2026 08:46
It\'s scared the shit out of me.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, sorry, me and my family will move out right away! 🤣
Okay…just kidding. This genuinely creeped me out, my friend. The way the invasion slowly shifts from invasive plants into something sentient and aware is incredibly effective. By the end, it feels less like a garden and more like a living siege. Powerful horror piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 19th, 2026 19:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, sorry, me and my family will move out right away! 🤣
Okay…just kidding. This genuinely creeped me out, my friend. The way the invasion slowly shifts from invasive plants into something sentient and aware is incredibly effective. By the end, it feels less like a garden and more like a living siege. Powerful horror piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 19th, 2026 19:53
It\'s scared the shit out of me.
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah is your yard infested with the lizard in picture? Looks small unless too many then may seem a problem. Do they harm or bite? My dad has lizard phobia, i dont. I have roach phobia big time.
Your poem is fantastic haunting! Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
May 19th, 2026 12:15
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah is your yard infested with the lizard in picture? Looks small unless too many then may seem a problem. Do they harm or bite? My dad has lizard phobia, i dont. I have roach phobia big time.
Your poem is fantastic haunting! Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
May 19th, 2026 12:15
It\'s scared the shit out of me.
Paul Bell said:
I like the way golfers in Florida work their way around the aligators.
Lizards I forgot about. We just get the ferals in Britain, and we can\'t even shoot them.
I take it you\'re a careful gardener.
May 19th, 2026 11:01
Paul Bell said:
I like the way golfers in Florida work their way around the aligators.
Lizards I forgot about. We just get the ferals in Britain, and we can\'t even shoot them.
I take it you\'re a careful gardener.
May 19th, 2026 11:01
What to paint?
NafisaSB said:
Beautifully captured how we seek the flaws in others and keep bruising others and sometimes ourselves rather than accepting people as they are.
May 19th, 2026 09:23
NafisaSB said:
Beautifully captured how we seek the flaws in others and keep bruising others and sometimes ourselves rather than accepting people as they are.
May 19th, 2026 09:23
It\'s scared the shit out of me.
David Wakeling said:
Yes reptiles can be scary. An amazing description of the fear and the damage.Had me hiding under the covers.Excellent
May 18th, 2026 17:56
David Wakeling said:
Yes reptiles can be scary. An amazing description of the fear and the damage.Had me hiding under the covers.Excellent
May 18th, 2026 17:56
It\'s scared the shit out of me.
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read where a lizard becomes a monster in the mind. So well written it carries the reader along.
May 18th, 2026 16:39
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read where a lizard becomes a monster in the mind. So well written it carries the reader along.
May 18th, 2026 16:39
It\'s scared the shit out of me.
Fränz Müller said:
It sounds like you’re describing my yard! Quite enjoyed this!
May 18th, 2026 16:38
Fränz Müller said:
It sounds like you’re describing my yard! Quite enjoyed this!
May 18th, 2026 16:38
What to paint?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this really moved me…and both the poem and painting carry the same spirit. I could immediately tell that artwork in the picture had to be yours. I’m actually at the ocean right now while reading this...at Wildwood, NJ. There’s something calming and beautiful in it that feels unmistakably you. The poem itself cuts right to that human habit of searching for stains instead of light…and that final turn lands hard. Beautiful work, my friend. All around fantastic. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 18th, 2026 09:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this really moved me…and both the poem and painting carry the same spirit. I could immediately tell that artwork in the picture had to be yours. I’m actually at the ocean right now while reading this...at Wildwood, NJ. There’s something calming and beautiful in it that feels unmistakably you. The poem itself cuts right to that human habit of searching for stains instead of light…and that final turn lands hard. Beautiful work, my friend. All around fantastic. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 18th, 2026 09:28
What to paint?
sorenbarrett said:
A truly insightful poem of people\'s character to look for fault until we find it fore in it we confirm our superiority. And if we turn this vigilance inward and look for personal faults we find them too confirming our self blame and cause of our state. This is a masterful poem carefully worded and psychologically well built. It in most poetic terms with great rhyme and meter sets forth the human need for blame as an explanation for all that befalls us. Very nicely penned and a fave
May 17th, 2026 13:04
sorenbarrett said:
A truly insightful poem of people\'s character to look for fault until we find it fore in it we confirm our superiority. And if we turn this vigilance inward and look for personal faults we find them too confirming our self blame and cause of our state. This is a masterful poem carefully worded and psychologically well built. It in most poetic terms with great rhyme and meter sets forth the human need for blame as an explanation for all that befalls us. Very nicely penned and a fave
May 17th, 2026 13:04
What to paint?
Thomas W Case said:
You’re pointing straight at how the mind sharpens itself on imperfection, like it’s safer than softness,
There’s a quiet ache in it—how we learn to inspect the crack before we ever trust the whole.
May 17th, 2026 08:58
Thomas W Case said:
You’re pointing straight at how the mind sharpens itself on imperfection, like it’s safer than softness,
There’s a quiet ache in it—how we learn to inspect the crack before we ever trust the whole.
May 17th, 2026 08:58
Trapped in one\'s mind.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this reads like a gothic psychological prison built entirely from consciousness itself. Locked doors, hollow corridors, mirrors of the past, static fear, and the endless pendulum of thought all work together to create something deeply claustrophobic and emotionally precise. And that final couplet lands with frightening force. Exceptional piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 17th, 2026 08:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this reads like a gothic psychological prison built entirely from consciousness itself. Locked doors, hollow corridors, mirrors of the past, static fear, and the endless pendulum of thought all work together to create something deeply claustrophobic and emotionally precise. And that final couplet lands with frightening force. Exceptional piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 17th, 2026 08:01
Who I truly am 🌹
NafisaSB said:
this rings true for me, and most of us, because most of us are sensitive [or rather over-sensitive] because that is where the words spring forth and burst into indelible verse...
May 16th, 2026 23:57
NafisaSB said:
this rings true for me, and most of us, because most of us are sensitive [or rather over-sensitive] because that is where the words spring forth and burst into indelible verse...
May 16th, 2026 23:57
Trapped in one\'s mind.
David Wakeling said:
For me we have the ultimate existentialism manifesto.Loneliness and a feeling of despair and entrapment.I love the construction it is impeccable.I also share those feelings of isolation
May 16th, 2026 17:30
David Wakeling said:
For me we have the ultimate existentialism manifesto.Loneliness and a feeling of despair and entrapment.I love the construction it is impeccable.I also share those feelings of isolation
May 16th, 2026 17:30
Trapped in one\'s mind.
sorenbarrett said:
Here in this poem I am left with the feeling of being trapped in a mechanical mind with glass and mirrors to reflect. It feels cold. Well written
May 16th, 2026 15:19
sorenbarrett said:
Here in this poem I am left with the feeling of being trapped in a mechanical mind with glass and mirrors to reflect. It feels cold. Well written
May 16th, 2026 15:19
Obligation.
Neville said:
Oh\' my word, say it like it really & truly so oft is why don\'tcha .. the ache & sadness toward the end are so very tangible .. 🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻👍
May 16th, 2026 09:20
Neville said:
Oh\' my word, say it like it really & truly so oft is why don\'tcha .. the ache & sadness toward the end are so very tangible .. 🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻👍
May 16th, 2026 09:20
Hidden Like Rubbish
arqios said:
A theme that has hovered about my writing for some time. Glad to see it being voiced from other springs. Most enjoyed dear Friendship 🙏🕊️
May 14th, 2026 16:39
arqios said:
A theme that has hovered about my writing for some time. Glad to see it being voiced from other springs. Most enjoyed dear Friendship 🙏🕊️
May 14th, 2026 16:39
Obligation.
Paul Bell said:
The givers and the takers.
When that reality hits home it sure can be painful.
I suppose it\'s also a way to get rid of dead wood, though for some reason they tend to come back.
May 12th, 2026 13:55
Paul Bell said:
The givers and the takers.
When that reality hits home it sure can be painful.
I suppose it\'s also a way to get rid of dead wood, though for some reason they tend to come back.
May 12th, 2026 13:55
Existing
FrasMac said:
Trips along perfectly metred. Solid message. Good writing!
May 11th, 2026 12:25
FrasMac said:
Trips along perfectly metred. Solid message. Good writing!
May 11th, 2026 12:25
I’m tired, Mama
Zafor Pathan { Poetry Writer } said:
A very thoughtful piece of writing, which cannot be grasped with ordinary thought. I liked the prose poem arranged with similes, metaphors and imagery. good luck
May 10th, 2026 12:48
Zafor Pathan { Poetry Writer } said:
A very thoughtful piece of writing, which cannot be grasped with ordinary thought. I liked the prose poem arranged with similes, metaphors and imagery. good luck
May 10th, 2026 12:48
Existing
Zafor Pathan { Poetry Writer } said:
Excellent, realistic and empathetic exposition. That encourages the mind to think and feel. thank you
May 10th, 2026 12:42
Zafor Pathan { Poetry Writer } said:
Excellent, realistic and empathetic exposition. That encourages the mind to think and feel. thank you
May 10th, 2026 12:42
Obligation.
Thomas W Case said:
This lands like a slow-burning reckoning—grief wrapped in disappointment, and the moment someone realizes they were giving warmth into a place that only took.
There’s a steady, bitter clarity in it, like watching a contract you thought was love finally reveal itself as paper thin.
May 10th, 2026 07:39
Thomas W Case said:
This lands like a slow-burning reckoning—grief wrapped in disappointment, and the moment someone realizes they were giving warmth into a place that only took.
There’s a steady, bitter clarity in it, like watching a contract you thought was love finally reveal itself as paper thin.
May 10th, 2026 07:39
Obligation.
sorenbarrett said:
A poem well written with good rhyme and meter. It speaks to feeling abandoned from those that turned their backs after you had given all you had to give. It speaks of a false friendship based on using someone. A sad write indeed.
May 9th, 2026 18:40
sorenbarrett said:
A poem well written with good rhyme and meter. It speaks to feeling abandoned from those that turned their backs after you had given all you had to give. It speaks of a false friendship based on using someone. A sad write indeed.
May 9th, 2026 18:40
Obligation.
David Wakeling said:
Wow a wonderful poem on ingratitude.Nothing more saddening than ingratitude.Enjoyable well constructed poem
May 9th, 2026 17:41
David Wakeling said:
Wow a wonderful poem on ingratitude.Nothing more saddening than ingratitude.Enjoyable well constructed poem
May 9th, 2026 17:41
Obligation.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, I think many people who naturally give of themselves will recognize this feeling…the painful moment where relationships start to feel conditional only after your strength begins to fail. That realization can cut deeply. This really stayed with me, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 9th, 2026 15:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, I think many people who naturally give of themselves will recognize this feeling…the painful moment where relationships start to feel conditional only after your strength begins to fail. That realization can cut deeply. This really stayed with me, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 9th, 2026 15:59
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