Comments received on poems by Friendship
Pray for Peace in the Middle East
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is expansive and heartfelt. The shared sky, the olive trees, the calls to prayer rising as hope…all build steadily. “for a Middle East that sings, at last, a single, peaceful hymn.” lands as both plea and promise. It feels sincere and necessary. I say, amen...it is more than just ending conflicts...but rather gaining understanding so that we avoid conflicts at all, if possible. Powerful! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 1st, 2026 08:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is expansive and heartfelt. The shared sky, the olive trees, the calls to prayer rising as hope…all build steadily. “for a Middle East that sings, at last, a single, peaceful hymn.” lands as both plea and promise. It feels sincere and necessary. I say, amen...it is more than just ending conflicts...but rather gaining understanding so that we avoid conflicts at all, if possible. Powerful! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 1st, 2026 08:43
When the Cipher Fades
Paul Bell said:
Words are so powerful, and you\'re right, put them in the wrong order and all hell is let loose.
You can see why relationships breakdown never to be retrieved now.
Love and rage, that\'s a poem in itself.
March 1st, 2026 06:54
Paul Bell said:
Words are so powerful, and you\'re right, put them in the wrong order and all hell is let loose.
You can see why relationships breakdown never to be retrieved now.
Love and rage, that\'s a poem in itself.
March 1st, 2026 06:54
Perception – Am I Coming or Going?
Poetic Licence said:
This is very nicely written, as with all things in life,it is not the final result that really matters, it is what what we did or how we arrived at that result that matter\'s. Enjoyed the read
March 1st, 2026 06:28
Poetic Licence said:
This is very nicely written, as with all things in life,it is not the final result that really matters, it is what what we did or how we arrived at that result that matter\'s. Enjoyed the read
March 1st, 2026 06:28
Perception – Am I Coming or Going?
Dan Williams said:
This is just wonderful. Starts out strong \"a breath caught in the hinge of a half‑opened door.\" and gets better. You could have stopped after \"but forgets the stones that never fell.\" and it would still shine. Then the conclusion, always leaving only to return, closes grandly Very nice.
February 28th, 2026 22:37
Dan Williams said:
This is just wonderful. Starts out strong \"a breath caught in the hinge of a half‑opened door.\" and gets better. You could have stopped after \"but forgets the stones that never fell.\" and it would still shine. Then the conclusion, always leaving only to return, closes grandly Very nice.
February 28th, 2026 22:37
Perception – Am I Coming or Going?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this feels expansive… like standing inside a thought as it breathes. The movement between arrival and departure never feels rushed. It’s reflective without losing warmth. That closing sense of endless turning lingers beautifully. Well done, my friend. Happy Saturday to you! 55 here in PA, hopefully much warmer for you! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 28th, 2026 12:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this feels expansive… like standing inside a thought as it breathes. The movement between arrival and departure never feels rushed. It’s reflective without losing warmth. That closing sense of endless turning lingers beautifully. Well done, my friend. Happy Saturday to you! 55 here in PA, hopefully much warmer for you! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 28th, 2026 12:37
Perception – Am I Coming or Going?
orchidee said:
I ask myself the same thing, as I met myself coming back from town while I was on the way there! Eh? Me talking rubbish again! lol.
February 28th, 2026 10:21
orchidee said:
I ask myself the same thing, as I met myself coming back from town while I was on the way there! Eh? Me talking rubbish again! lol.
February 28th, 2026 10:21
Perception – Am I Coming or Going?
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of a process that has enough ambiguity that one can not tell where one is within it. There is confusion and simply the awareness that one is. Well written
February 28th, 2026 09:59
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of a process that has enough ambiguity that one can not tell where one is within it. There is confusion and simply the awareness that one is. Well written
February 28th, 2026 09:59
Perception – Am I Coming or Going?
2781 said:
As Solomon said - All is vanity
February 28th, 2026 09:58
2781 said:
As Solomon said - All is vanity
February 28th, 2026 09:58
When the Cipher Fades
MendedFences27 said:
The danger of vulnerability. Whether machine or human, everything has an Achilles Heel, a breaking point, or a flash point. No matter the safeguards employed someone will find the weakness. The result could be a broken mainframe or a broken heart. - Beautiful poetry. - Phil A.
February 25th, 2026 22:10
MendedFences27 said:
The danger of vulnerability. Whether machine or human, everything has an Achilles Heel, a breaking point, or a flash point. No matter the safeguards employed someone will find the weakness. The result could be a broken mainframe or a broken heart. - Beautiful poetry. - Phil A.
February 25th, 2026 22:10
When the Cipher Fades
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this feels uncomfortably familiar…that moment when something slips past the interface and lands straight in the chest. The idea that no firewall can filter intent is painfully true. “a personal affront that no patch can ever truly seal.” captures that human residue so well. Fantastic job, dearest Friendship.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 25th, 2026 19:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this feels uncomfortably familiar…that moment when something slips past the interface and lands straight in the chest. The idea that no firewall can filter intent is painfully true. “a personal affront that no patch can ever truly seal.” captures that human residue so well. Fantastic job, dearest Friendship.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 25th, 2026 19:10
When the Cipher Fades
RSM0812 said:
\"when the language of love and rage abandons the script,\". WTF. The whole poem is like this. Amazing. It remins me of Take This Waltz by Leonard Cohen. Every line a masterpiece.
February 25th, 2026 16:18
RSM0812 said:
\"when the language of love and rage abandons the script,\". WTF. The whole poem is like this. Amazing. It remins me of Take This Waltz by Leonard Cohen. Every line a masterpiece.
February 25th, 2026 16:18
When the Nickname Fades
RSM0812 said:
This is one of the best poems on the sight period. Are you ever a remarkable writer friendship. If i had half the talent i would be happy. :)
February 25th, 2026 16:15
RSM0812 said:
This is one of the best poems on the sight period. Are you ever a remarkable writer friendship. If i had half the talent i would be happy. :)
February 25th, 2026 16:15
When the Cipher Fades
Zak McKay said:
I personally agree deeply with this message. Good job :)
February 25th, 2026 14:06
Zak McKay said:
I personally agree deeply with this message. Good job :)
February 25th, 2026 14:06
Happy Valentine\'s Day, my poetic friends
Zak McKay said:
This was very nice, well written. :)
February 25th, 2026 14:04
Zak McKay said:
This was very nice, well written. :)
February 25th, 2026 14:04
Letting It All Go
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this breathes. From the first candle to the final surrender, it moves with calm intention. “The water does not mourn the loss; it simply flows” feels like the quiet center of it all. There’s gentleness here without softness. Powerful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 24th, 2026 08:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this breathes. From the first candle to the final surrender, it moves with calm intention. “The water does not mourn the loss; it simply flows” feels like the quiet center of it all. There’s gentleness here without softness. Powerful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 24th, 2026 08:10
Letting It All Go
Paul Bell said:
Clear out the wardrobe, clear out your life.
Strangely enough, this usually happens on Jan 1st, every year.
It is sort of cathartic and definitely recommended.
February 24th, 2026 05:56
Paul Bell said:
Clear out the wardrobe, clear out your life.
Strangely enough, this usually happens on Jan 1st, every year.
It is sort of cathartic and definitely recommended.
February 24th, 2026 05:56
Between the Fracture and the Dawn
NafisaSB said:
so tender and lovely which conveys the longing beautifully...
February 24th, 2026 00:30
NafisaSB said:
so tender and lovely which conveys the longing beautifully...
February 24th, 2026 00:30
Letting It All Go
sorenbarrett said:
Great images where incongruencies melt together into metaphor. Well done and with an even better message of letting things go
February 23rd, 2026 19:16
sorenbarrett said:
Great images where incongruencies melt together into metaphor. Well done and with an even better message of letting things go
February 23rd, 2026 19:16
Between the Fracture and the Dawn
Paul Bell said:
Forgiveness and second chances are always tough.
Once bitten and all that.
If it can be put back together and made stonger, then the magic can return and the fracture healed.
February 23rd, 2026 12:09
Paul Bell said:
Forgiveness and second chances are always tough.
Once bitten and all that.
If it can be put back together and made stonger, then the magic can return and the fracture healed.
February 23rd, 2026 12:09
My Independent Little Girl
Thomas W Case said:
She carries the sunrise in her socks and a rebellion in her breath—raw, tender, unstoppable.
Watching her spin the world, you feel the weight and wonder of letting go without breaking.
February 22nd, 2026 08:59
Thomas W Case said:
She carries the sunrise in her socks and a rebellion in her breath—raw, tender, unstoppable.
Watching her spin the world, you feel the weight and wonder of letting go without breaking.
February 22nd, 2026 08:59
Apology in the Language of Stars
Nyra M said:
A deeply moving apology. The imagery of stars and light makes the regret feel sincere and earned, and the closing lines are especially powerful. Beautifully written and emotionally honest.
February 21st, 2026 13:31
Nyra M said:
A deeply moving apology. The imagery of stars and light makes the regret feel sincere and earned, and the closing lines are especially powerful. Beautifully written and emotionally honest.
February 21st, 2026 13:31
My Independent Little Girl
Mutley Ravishes said:
A beautiful write by your Mom, , Friendship. I used to listen to an album called \"Misplaced Childhood\" when I was a teenager.
February 20th, 2026 17:20
Mutley Ravishes said:
A beautiful write by your Mom, , Friendship. I used to listen to an album called \"Misplaced Childhood\" when I was a teenager.
February 20th, 2026 17:20
My Independent Little Girl
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this captures the sacred ache of watching independence bloom. The parent voice isn’t possessive…it’s reverent. That letting-go energy feels real. I was fine at the beginning. By the end I’m staring at the wall reconsidering my entire emotional stability. How powerful to know it was your mom\'s poem about you. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 20th, 2026 11:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this captures the sacred ache of watching independence bloom. The parent voice isn’t possessive…it’s reverent. That letting-go energy feels real. I was fine at the beginning. By the end I’m staring at the wall reconsidering my entire emotional stability. How powerful to know it was your mom\'s poem about you. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 20th, 2026 11:21
My Independent Little Girl
Paul Bell said:
Trees to conquer, and the world was your oyster.
Sort of feel sorry for kids today, I feel they\'re missing out on lives adventures now.
The computer has stolen them it seems.
February 20th, 2026 07:57
Paul Bell said:
Trees to conquer, and the world was your oyster.
Sort of feel sorry for kids today, I feel they\'re missing out on lives adventures now.
The computer has stolen them it seems.
February 20th, 2026 07:57
My Independent Little Girl
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of stubbornness turned resolution of childhood rebellion becoming independence. It reveals a childlike view growing to an adult vision. Innocence becoming wisdom. With wonderful metaphoric images it paints the picture in color. Very nice and a fave
February 20th, 2026 06:39
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of stubbornness turned resolution of childhood rebellion becoming independence. It reveals a childlike view growing to an adult vision. Innocence becoming wisdom. With wonderful metaphoric images it paints the picture in color. Very nice and a fave
February 20th, 2026 06:39
Between the Fracture and the Dawn
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Friendship, may those shadows merge into the love of all.
Andy
February 20th, 2026 02:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Friendship, may those shadows merge into the love of all.
Andy
February 20th, 2026 02:51
Between the Fracture and the Dawn
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this moves from fracture to invitation with such quiet strength. The imagery is delicate, but the resolve underneath it is firm. It doesn’t rush healing…it chooses it. There’s humility, hope, and maturity woven together here. Beautifully crafted. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 20th, 2026 02:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this moves from fracture to invitation with such quiet strength. The imagery is delicate, but the resolve underneath it is firm. It doesn’t rush healing…it chooses it. There’s humility, hope, and maturity woven together here. Beautifully crafted. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 20th, 2026 02:43
Between the Fracture and the Dawn
Neville said:
Extraordinarily moving if you don\'t mind me stating a fact .. 10/10 ma\'am & that\'s another fact .. fact is, how can this not be liked or loved .. Neville 💛🌻👍
February 19th, 2026 13:56
Neville said:
Extraordinarily moving if you don\'t mind me stating a fact .. 10/10 ma\'am & that\'s another fact .. fact is, how can this not be liked or loved .. Neville 💛🌻👍
February 19th, 2026 13:56
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