Comments received on poems by AJ



First Steps
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write.

February 26th, 2017 13:20

First Steps
Fay Slimm. said:

Those final two lines did it for me AJ - - a fine verse of reasons why first steps are vital. Well done.

February 26th, 2017 09:39

Through the Looking Glass
Tony36 said:

Wonderfully written and expressed Great write

February 16th, 2017 09:01

Through the Looking Glass
Fay Slimm. said:

An engaging verse of well written reflection and questions we all think of asking. Great read

February 16th, 2017 06:24

A Crusade
MendedFences27 said:

I\'ve always said, \"The world would be a beautiful place if it were not for people.\"
Justice is not innocent. People are innocent in the eyes of the law. Religion is not guilty, some of its people are.
Take people out of the equation and this place is paradise. Oh yeah, that\'s what it was before people arrived. A stirring piece. - Phil A.

February 15th, 2017 21:05

Institutionalised
Tony36 said:

Great write

February 13th, 2017 09:43

Institutionalised
BeckyJo said:

Interesting poem! Keep writing. Your good.

February 13th, 2017 07:00

Institutionalised
P.X. Vexxus said:

Great write!

February 13th, 2017 05:17

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Zwitterion said:

This was nice to read.

December 20th, 2016 20:22

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

I love you as I never loved before # Since first I met you on the village green # Come to me ere my dream of love is o'er # I love you as I loved you # when you were sweet # when you were sweet sixteen ! O yes I remember it well - Thanks for sharing - BRIAN

April 23rd, 2016 08:05

Spring
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HI AMETHYST (LOVELY GEM STONE - LOVELY NAME) Welcome to MPS - nice site. Love you poem and I empathize ! Spring should be bursting with life but sometimes it is so soporific - just like a COMA ! BRIAN

April 22nd, 2016 13:41

Spring
shewrites said:

I feel the same...

April 22nd, 2016 12:37

Spring
rainbowhalo1 said:

dont i know it.you lay down the words of emotions of many.

April 22nd, 2016 09:13

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