Comments received on poems by AJ



A guide to getting by
Lorna said:

Food has a loud loud voice doesn\'t it............ especially sweet stuff......... and water tries it\'s best......

October 12th, 2020 05:28

A guide to getting by
Goldfinch60 said:

In life we have to keep going, it will get better.

Andy

October 12th, 2020 00:39

pieces of me
Whimsical_1 said:

This is such a raw experience of what it is to be bulimic. I commend you for using this outlet. It is not always easy to express.

October 5th, 2020 14:38

I wish I were a plant
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Brian here ~ Good Evening AJ I agree with your first Premise - about the MOUTH & STOMACH being the rooth cause of a lot of our daily niggling ailments & discomfort because of what WE acctually eat & drink during a 24 hour day! Keep a diary for a week and you will suprise yourself! However if this is not a death wish - if you stay HUMAN you will have to be fed INTRAVENIOUSLY with predigested food which is not very pleasent ! There are People (with Bowel Cancer etc) who are forced to do just that !
Your alternative however - of being a *Flowering Plant* is not as easy & stress free as it looks ! During each period of Sunlight you MUST PHOTOSYNTHESISE to survive ! So three things are necessary. SUNLIGHT (not a problem) CO2 (not a problem too much @ the moment) H2O (this can be a problem in arid regions) also the water must contain N P K and other minerals for growth. So in a sense a Plant does have internal Digestive & Synthetic Systems to function ! CO2 & H2O combine in the leaves (using Chlorophyll C55H72MgN4O5) to form GLUCOSE (C6H12O6) which polymerises to form STARCH & CELLULOSE and it can make other Molecules by Plant Bosynthesis to form the Colours & Scents in your Flowers. So there is just as much going on in a Plants Digestive System as in the Human one. I teach Applied Scince in a Adult College (17+) and i am responsible - - with Tecnicians - for an Allotment & Greenhouses and believe you ME ~ Plants can get Pretty Sick despite apparently not having a MOUTH or a STOMACH so you might like to think again. If we get thirsty or hungry we can move to a water or food source ! A PLANT has to LIVE or DIE where its planted !

Love Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 💛💛💛

September 2nd, 2020 15:30

out for lunch
Audax said:

You may look happy on the outside, but hurting on the inside! Thank you fur writing something that many can relate to at an emotional and psychological level. Nicely written and good choice of words!

You should check out some of my work, which you will come to like!

August 26th, 2020 22:05

Pity the gruel
Audax said:

This is a fine write! I look forward to reading more!

May 21st, 2020 23:15

thin skin
dusk arising said:

Have you actually tried laying down on your own at night in a graveyard. It starts off very peaceful.....

February 28th, 2020 16:53

Breakable me
Jane Frye said:

Very nice poem.

November 21st, 2019 04:00

Hope
Goldfinch60 said:

May that hope never fail.

November 17th, 2019 02:23

I don’t want to read between lines anymore
dusk arising said:

This is so similar to my thoughts of the afterlife. A place of unconditional love.

Don\'t misunderstand me though, I have no death wish nor do i see one in your writing.

A desire to be accepted for what you are, unconditionally. Hard to find outside of a mother\'s love.

September 4th, 2019 11:06

I don’t want to read between lines anymore
Clara said:

This makes me think of a mirror image almost, an alternative universe, where what you wish for, to belong and accepted, is happening. But maybe it isn\'t where you are now.

CLARA X

September 4th, 2019 08:21

A Person Who Isn\'t There
Crystal Hope said:

this is so moving. beautiful write.

May 14th, 2019 14:37

Our World
dusk arising said:

Distressing. Is this to self or to another, or yet still oncoming schizophrenia?

May 13th, 2019 01:20

Easy 19
dusk arising said:

You told it like it ever was. Desire is so dangerous in the hands of the young. Most of us survive it.
Excellent style you have commanded here. Very readable and great allowance for your readers picture making.

I want this in my favourites and i want to read much more in this style.

May 12th, 2019 13:52

it’s ok, it’s ok, it’s ok
Poetic Dan said:

Loved this! You have a wonderful flow

May 12th, 2019 05:26

Easy 19
Poetic Dan said:

Wow.... Such a vulnerable and powerful writing.
Thank you

May 12th, 2019 05:23

don’t kill me yet
Jason Vancelette (AKA Pharaoh33) said:

i..i like it alot....can relate bery much

March 30th, 2019 01:49

Look up and to the right
Nicholas Browning said:

An enigmatic read for sure. The conclusion is pretty cool.
Nice.

March 19th, 2019 14:34

Gently
sylviasearcher said:

It read like mindfulness
As I laid in silence and watched the world.

February 22nd, 2019 02:45

My sky
dusk arising said:

I like this, gave me a big smile. Cute.

February 11th, 2019 08:58

Lest We Forget
psychofemale said:

nicely penned :)

February 7th, 2019 20:52

Lest We Forget
dusk arising said:

A famous poem by Dylan Thomas comes to mind, it begins:- \'Do not go gentle into that dark night, rage, RAGE against the dieing of the light\'. It was written about his father on his deathbed.
You are the sum of both that which makes you different from everyone else and that which makes you the same - humanity. Rage on with measured indifference and stand your ground when your footing is firm.
An excellent, intriguing piece of writing.

February 7th, 2019 16:07

Moving but she just can\'t move
sylviasearcher said:

What a gem of a poem.
Great metaphor.
How many of us are lost or asleep at sea?

February 7th, 2019 06:19

Tell me what it feels like to be you,
psychofemale said:

wow. i have totally felt this way...just lost of hope. drowning.

January 30th, 2019 16:52

Please Paint Me Humble
Nicholas Browning said:

It\'s quite simple, but the read was enjoyable. Like it a lot.

December 18th, 2018 02:49

Tactile Values
Neville said:

An impressive little poem & does precisely what it say\'s on the label.. I sincerely hope this gets the merit that I think it deserves, Neville

December 8th, 2018 08:44

Tracking Backwards
orchidee said:

Woof, woof! My watchdog Fido is barking. Should be marked 18+, with F word in this?

December 8th, 2018 08:35

States of Ignored
Fay Slimm. said:

An amazing use of word here to underline the abuse life dishes out to some who cringe in facades until they resist those \"states of ignored\" - a compelling read AJ.

December 4th, 2018 13:56

States of Ignored
sylviasearcher said:

I was unable to ignore this poem.

I loved it.

So many states of ignored...
It really gets my mind thinking how much I focus too long on my own invisibility

December 4th, 2018 08:19

My Thoughts on Perfection
orchidee said:

Some adverts are just silly: \'Must give 110%\' - which is impossible! lol.
Do our best - we can do no more!

November 30th, 2018 12:16

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