Comments received on poems by AJ
Tactile Values
Neville said:
An impressive little poem & does precisely what it say\'s on the label.. I sincerely hope this gets the merit that I think it deserves, Neville
December 8th, 2018 08:44
Neville said:
An impressive little poem & does precisely what it say\'s on the label.. I sincerely hope this gets the merit that I think it deserves, Neville
December 8th, 2018 08:44
Tracking Backwards
orchidee said:
Woof, woof! My watchdog Fido is barking. Should be marked 18+, with F word in this?
December 8th, 2018 08:35
orchidee said:
Woof, woof! My watchdog Fido is barking. Should be marked 18+, with F word in this?
December 8th, 2018 08:35
States of Ignored
Fay Slimm. said:
An amazing use of word here to underline the abuse life dishes out to some who cringe in facades until they resist those \"states of ignored\" - a compelling read AJ.
December 4th, 2018 13:56
Fay Slimm. said:
An amazing use of word here to underline the abuse life dishes out to some who cringe in facades until they resist those \"states of ignored\" - a compelling read AJ.
December 4th, 2018 13:56
States of Ignored
sylviasearcher said:
I was unable to ignore this poem.
I loved it.
So many states of ignored...
It really gets my mind thinking how much I focus too long on my own invisibility
December 4th, 2018 08:19
sylviasearcher said:
I was unable to ignore this poem.
I loved it.
So many states of ignored...
It really gets my mind thinking how much I focus too long on my own invisibility
December 4th, 2018 08:19
My Thoughts on Perfection
orchidee said:
Some adverts are just silly: \'Must give 110%\' - which is impossible! lol.
Do our best - we can do no more!
November 30th, 2018 12:16
orchidee said:
Some adverts are just silly: \'Must give 110%\' - which is impossible! lol.
Do our best - we can do no more!
November 30th, 2018 12:16
The Nomad
Debsspot said:
So true. Time rules all and we\'re constantly fighting it.
November 1st, 2018 14:23
Debsspot said:
So true. Time rules all and we\'re constantly fighting it.
November 1st, 2018 14:23
Just a thought on the heart
Poetic Dan said:
Your work so wonderfully you I\'ve read a few and they just keep getting better.
Definitely unforgettable and the magic lives in you thank you for being the who that you so perfectly are.
Keep Spreading the light
July 26th, 2018 13:09
Poetic Dan said:
Your work so wonderfully you I\'ve read a few and they just keep getting better.
Definitely unforgettable and the magic lives in you thank you for being the who that you so perfectly are.
Keep Spreading the light
July 26th, 2018 13:09
A Smile Across From You
Fay Slimm. said:
A few lines of pure encouragement to smile even when sad - - love the feel of peace about this read A.J.
February 1st, 2018 09:16
Fay Slimm. said:
A few lines of pure encouragement to smile even when sad - - love the feel of peace about this read A.J.
February 1st, 2018 09:16
Mamma Mia
dusk arising said:
This really is quite quite touching. I\'ve re-read it several times and it is superb. Sad yes and heart rending but the writing is superb.
Great work AJ
January 28th, 2018 13:04
dusk arising said:
This really is quite quite touching. I\'ve re-read it several times and it is superb. Sad yes and heart rending but the writing is superb.
Great work AJ
January 28th, 2018 13:04
Just a thought on the heart
Elizabethan Sea said:
What a beautiful message. I hadn\'t thought about it that way, since the heart can also lead us into danger sometimes. It doesn\'t reason like our mind and sometimes follows whims that don\'t pan out. But it is true, it never stops as long as we live. Our \"heart\" and spirit keep us forging ahead, loving, fighting for life, truth and our beliefs. Our \"heart\" stays loyal and true and even gives us intuitive hints at times. So we must not underestimate that power of ours to love and passionately push ahead.
December 27th, 2017 19:59
Elizabethan Sea said:
What a beautiful message. I hadn\'t thought about it that way, since the heart can also lead us into danger sometimes. It doesn\'t reason like our mind and sometimes follows whims that don\'t pan out. But it is true, it never stops as long as we live. Our \"heart\" and spirit keep us forging ahead, loving, fighting for life, truth and our beliefs. Our \"heart\" stays loyal and true and even gives us intuitive hints at times. So we must not underestimate that power of ours to love and passionately push ahead.
December 27th, 2017 19:59
Paralysed with fear
MaddieJ said:
I\'ve been to this world of fear. I chose not to take permanent residence, but it took a long time to come back from it. Good write, very deep.
August 14th, 2017 23:38
MaddieJ said:
I\'ve been to this world of fear. I chose not to take permanent residence, but it took a long time to come back from it. Good write, very deep.
August 14th, 2017 23:38
Michaelmas
Louis Gibbs said:
Your lovely poem envisions a lovely place for us, AJ. Nice work!
August 12th, 2017 19:13
Louis Gibbs said:
Your lovely poem envisions a lovely place for us, AJ. Nice work!
August 12th, 2017 19:13
Confession
Gary Edward Geraci said:
The double negatives were a bit distracting for me but I guess one \'can\'t not\' discount the power of grace to lead one out of the fog (I must confess)! Wait a minute....what am I saying here?
June 28th, 2017 21:34
Gary Edward Geraci said:
The double negatives were a bit distracting for me but I guess one \'can\'t not\' discount the power of grace to lead one out of the fog (I must confess)! Wait a minute....what am I saying here?
June 28th, 2017 21:34
Confession
FredPeyer said:
I really like how you use double negatives, making them positives.
June 28th, 2017 20:11
FredPeyer said:
I really like how you use double negatives, making them positives.
June 28th, 2017 20:11
Confession
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing AJ ~ very true to all our experiences ! All us SILVER plated people dream of a GOLD plated Partner and the COPPER plated dream of a SILVER one ! Experience has taught me that as a Silver Plated Knife (YANG) I am happiest in a cutlery box with a Silver Plated Fork (YIN) ~ I might be tempted to look down on COPPER and I know GOLD would look down on me ! This concept of LIKE with LIKE for maximum compatibility is implied in your very elegant Poem ~ Yours BRIAN (UK). Please check my DEJA VU Poem and my FUSIONS ~ Thanks B
June 28th, 2017 19:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing AJ ~ very true to all our experiences ! All us SILVER plated people dream of a GOLD plated Partner and the COPPER plated dream of a SILVER one ! Experience has taught me that as a Silver Plated Knife (YANG) I am happiest in a cutlery box with a Silver Plated Fork (YIN) ~ I might be tempted to look down on COPPER and I know GOLD would look down on me ! This concept of LIKE with LIKE for maximum compatibility is implied in your very elegant Poem ~ Yours BRIAN (UK). Please check my DEJA VU Poem and my FUSIONS ~ Thanks B
June 28th, 2017 19:27
Angel Boy
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like this object of your admiration is well worth pursuing. Good write, AJ!
June 27th, 2017 17:12
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like this object of your admiration is well worth pursuing. Good write, AJ!
June 27th, 2017 17:12
Angel Boy
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FRIEND ~ for a challenging Poem with a touch of the SUPERNATURAL > If we are Spiritually Aware (as you are) we all have ANGELS in our lives ! In my experience they challenge me ~ BUT ~ thy also Bless me. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my Developing FUSION on ANIMALS ~ Thanks B.
June 27th, 2017 16:45
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FRIEND ~ for a challenging Poem with a touch of the SUPERNATURAL > If we are Spiritually Aware (as you are) we all have ANGELS in our lives ! In my experience they challenge me ~ BUT ~ thy also Bless me. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my Developing FUSION on ANIMALS ~ Thanks B.
June 27th, 2017 16:45
Shockwaves
thisuniqueisusername said:
This reminds me of my struggle with PTSD. Well written. Thank you.
May 13th, 2017 13:21
thisuniqueisusername said:
This reminds me of my struggle with PTSD. Well written. Thank you.
May 13th, 2017 13:21
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