Comments received on poems by AJ



A Smile Across From You
Lorna said:

Lovely.....

February 1st, 2018 07:29

Mamma Mia
dusk arising said:

This really is quite quite touching. I\'ve re-read it several times and it is superb. Sad yes and heart rending but the writing is superb.
Great work AJ

January 28th, 2018 13:04

Just a thought on the heart
Elizabethan Sea said:

What a beautiful message. I hadn\'t thought about it that way, since the heart can also lead us into danger sometimes. It doesn\'t reason like our mind and sometimes follows whims that don\'t pan out. But it is true, it never stops as long as we live. Our \"heart\" and spirit keep us forging ahead, loving, fighting for life, truth and our beliefs. Our \"heart\" stays loyal and true and even gives us intuitive hints at times. So we must not underestimate that power of ours to love and passionately push ahead.

December 27th, 2017 19:59

Pass Mark
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 17th, 2017 10:34

Pass Mark
Nicholas Browning said:

Amen.

August 17th, 2017 07:08

Paralysed with fear
Duenna Leya said:

I\'ve been to this world of fear. I chose not to take permanent residence, but it took a long time to come back from it. Good write, very deep.

August 14th, 2017 23:38

Michaelmas
Louis Gibbs said:

Your lovely poem envisions a lovely place for us, AJ. Nice work!

August 12th, 2017 19:13

Confession
Gary Edward Geraci said:

The double negatives were a bit distracting for me but I guess one \'can\'t not\' discount the power of grace to lead one out of the fog (I must confess)! Wait a minute....what am I saying here?

June 28th, 2017 21:34

Confession
FredPeyer said:

I really like how you use double negatives, making them positives.

June 28th, 2017 20:11

Confession
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing AJ ~ very true to all our experiences ! All us SILVER plated people dream of a GOLD plated Partner and the COPPER plated dream of a SILVER one ! Experience has taught me that as a Silver Plated Knife (YANG) I am happiest in a cutlery box with a Silver Plated Fork (YIN) ~ I might be tempted to look down on COPPER and I know GOLD would look down on me ! This concept of LIKE with LIKE for maximum compatibility is implied in your very elegant Poem ~ Yours BRIAN (UK). Please check my DEJA VU Poem and my FUSIONS ~ Thanks B

June 28th, 2017 19:27

Angel Boy
Louis Gibbs said:

Sounds like this object of your admiration is well worth pursuing. Good write, AJ!

June 27th, 2017 17:12

Angel Boy
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS FRIEND ~ for a challenging Poem with a touch of the SUPERNATURAL > If we are Spiritually Aware (as you are) we all have ANGELS in our lives ! In my experience they challenge me ~ BUT ~ thy also Bless me. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my Developing FUSION on ANIMALS ~ Thanks B.

June 27th, 2017 16:45

Shockwaves
thisuniqueisusername said:

This reminds me of my struggle with PTSD. Well written. Thank you.

May 13th, 2017 13:21

Words
Frank Prem said:

Yep. Words it is. Nothing and everything.

May 2nd, 2017 02:38

Tough Girl
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write.

April 7th, 2017 00:48

Tough Girl
Jooles said:

Love the opening verses. ..good wee poem

April 6th, 2017 12:30

Parallels
orchidee said:

A fine write.

March 5th, 2017 11:05

Grace
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write.

March 4th, 2017 02:21

Grace
Tony36 said:

Great write

March 3rd, 2017 15:39

First Steps
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write.

February 26th, 2017 13:20

First Steps
Fay Slimm said:

Those final two lines did it for me AJ - - a fine verse of reasons why first steps are vital. Well done.

February 26th, 2017 09:39

Through the Looking Glass
Tony36 said:

Wonderfully written and expressed Great write

February 16th, 2017 09:01

Through the Looking Glass
Fay Slimm said:

An engaging verse of well written reflection and questions we all think of asking. Great read

February 16th, 2017 06:24

A Crusade
MendedFences27 said:

I\'ve always said, \"The world would be a beautiful place if it were not for people.\"
Justice is not innocent. People are innocent in the eyes of the law. Religion is not guilty, some of its people are.
Take people out of the equation and this place is paradise. Oh yeah, that\'s what it was before people arrived. A stirring piece. - Phil A.

February 15th, 2017 21:05

Institutionalised
Tony36 said:

Great write

February 13th, 2017 09:43

Institutionalised
BeckyJo said:

Interesting poem! Keep writing. Your good.

February 13th, 2017 07:00

Institutionalised
P.X. Vexxus said:

Great write!

February 13th, 2017 05:17

View(s)
Zwitterion said:

This was nice to read.

December 20th, 2016 20:22

16
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

I love you as I never loved before # Since first I met you on the village green # Come to me ere my dream of love is o'er # I love you as I loved you # when you were sweet # when you were sweet sixteen ! O yes I remember it well - Thanks for sharing - BRIAN

April 23rd, 2016 08:05

Spring
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HI AMETHYST (LOVELY GEM STONE - LOVELY NAME) Welcome to MPS - nice site. Love you poem and I empathize ! Spring should be bursting with life but sometimes it is so soporific - just like a COMA ! BRIAN

April 22nd, 2016 13:41

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