Comments received on poems by Aiswarya Girish



The Secret Weapon
Poetic Licence said:

Wonderful write healing with love, some beautiful lines, pleasure to read

August 7th, 2025 13:30

The Secret Weapon
sorenbarrett said:

A fanciful metaphor that works well with some great lines. Stitching a broken heart with love is a good one. Well done

August 7th, 2025 12:56

The moon without stars
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely write, rejection can be so hard to except and heal from, it is nice to see putting those feelings and emotions on paper has help start the healing process, nicely expressed and written

August 5th, 2025 13:59

The moon without stars
sorenbarrett said:

We all need something or someone and rejection can be hard to accept. A sad poem well written

August 5th, 2025 13:56

The moon without stars
peto said:

It may have been all you could do then
Now however you have turned it around
Beautiful meaningful and hopefully cathartic
The more you write the more you will heal
Keep em coming

August 5th, 2025 13:33

Sugar-Coated Thorns
Poetic Licence said:

A nicely expressed write of rejection, hurt, loss and the pain it caused now turning to anger and regret, wanting to be left alone to be free from the pain, a wonderful write

August 4th, 2025 12:30

Sugar-Coated Thorns
peto said:

\"Let me fly away from you \"
I wouldn\'t be asking permission
A really painful write
I can\'t help think it\'s true as these feelings come from one who knows
\"Reborn from the ashes \"
Shows your strength and resolve
Keep em coming
Great writing

August 4th, 2025 12:05

Sugar-Coated Thorns
sorenbarrett said:

Feelings of betrayal, rejection and loss turned to anger and regret. A need for freedom from the hurt. Nicely worded

August 4th, 2025 12:05

Sugar-Coated Thorns
RSM0812 said:

This depicts heart ache and betrayel nicely. The imagery is fantastic and i like the rhyme scheme throughout. Great job.

August 4th, 2025 11:54

My Spring
rrodriguez said:

New beginnings; that\'s great! Lively poem. I enjoyed reading it it\'s message.

August 3rd, 2025 05:22

My Spring
sorenbarrett said:

Wonderful a message to oneself of change and the desire for it to stay. Loved it

August 2nd, 2025 13:19

My Spring
Poetic Licence said:

A wonderful write of the healing process has begun and the confidence is coming back, nicely expressed and written

August 2nd, 2025 12:53

My Spring
peto said:

Welcome Aiswarya
Great debut
Looking forward to reading more from you

August 2nd, 2025 12:40

My Spring
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

welcome, and well written

August 2nd, 2025 12:35