Comments received on poems by Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice
Angels Among Us
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is tender and honest…light and shadow both carried in your lines. Beautifully done, Petra. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 28th, 2025 16:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is tender and honest…light and shadow both carried in your lines. Beautifully done, Petra. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 28th, 2025 16:42
Angels Among Us
Friendship said:
The poem explores the duality of human nature, illustrating that angels, or those who provide kindness and guidance, can exist in both light and darkness. It emphasizes that everyone can embody angelic qualities, regardless of their circumstances or flaws.
September 28th, 2025 14:27
Friendship said:
The poem explores the duality of human nature, illustrating that angels, or those who provide kindness and guidance, can exist in both light and darkness. It emphasizes that everyone can embody angelic qualities, regardless of their circumstances or flaws.
September 28th, 2025 14:27
Angels Among Us
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write. As I see it we are all fallen angels some fallen further than others. Nicely written
September 28th, 2025 09:40
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write. As I see it we are all fallen angels some fallen further than others. Nicely written
September 28th, 2025 09:40
The Pretty Pea
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Petra, this is soft, playful, and warm all at once. The pea bonding at the table, the childhood reluctance, the grown-up longing...you took the simplest image and made it lasting. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 27th, 2025 07:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Petra, this is soft, playful, and warm all at once. The pea bonding at the table, the childhood reluctance, the grown-up longing...you took the simplest image and made it lasting. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 27th, 2025 07:47
The Pretty Pea
sorenbarrett said:
And so it is with words as well. Some of the sweet poetry I heard as a child was not appreciated until I grew older but now they are treasures. Lovely and very well done Petra.
September 27th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
And so it is with words as well. Some of the sweet poetry I heard as a child was not appreciated until I grew older but now they are treasures. Lovely and very well done Petra.
September 27th, 2025 04:20
Echoes and Empty Spaces
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Petra, this is scarred yet unbroken. The quiet echoes, the silence chosen for breath, the confession of not being perfect...all of it comes together as strength in its truest form. Honest, vulnerable, and beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 26th, 2025 09:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Petra, this is scarred yet unbroken. The quiet echoes, the silence chosen for breath, the confession of not being perfect...all of it comes together as strength in its truest form. Honest, vulnerable, and beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 26th, 2025 09:03
Echoes and Empty Spaces
Goldfinch60 said:
You are yourself as we all are Petra. I have a philosophy in life \"If you don\'t like what you see in me that is not my problem, it is yours.\"
Andy
September 26th, 2025 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
You are yourself as we all are Petra. I have a philosophy in life \"If you don\'t like what you see in me that is not my problem, it is yours.\"
Andy
September 26th, 2025 01:39
Cactus
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt like holding something sharp in one hand and soft in the other…I’ve known that mix of hurt and surprise beauty too, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Excellent!
September 25th, 2025 16:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt like holding something sharp in one hand and soft in the other…I’ve known that mix of hurt and surprise beauty too, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Excellent!
September 25th, 2025 16:07
Echoes and Empty Spaces
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write where life is not to be understood but lived. It is enough to understand oneself. A lovely write
September 25th, 2025 13:50
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write where life is not to be understood but lived. It is enough to understand oneself. A lovely write
September 25th, 2025 13:50
Echoes and Empty Spaces
Bragee said:
life is full of self-paced lessons. Take your time.
September 25th, 2025 13:28
Bragee said:
life is full of self-paced lessons. Take your time.
September 25th, 2025 13:28
Cactus
sorenbarrett said:
What I see within the plant is a metaphor for infatuation where walking too near pulls one into the prickles that you do not notice until later. The beauty of flowers equal to the beauty that entices with passion while under is the prickles of a relationship when the passion passes. Very nicely written a fave
September 24th, 2025 16:26
sorenbarrett said:
What I see within the plant is a metaphor for infatuation where walking too near pulls one into the prickles that you do not notice until later. The beauty of flowers equal to the beauty that entices with passion while under is the prickles of a relationship when the passion passes. Very nicely written a fave
September 24th, 2025 16:26
White Car
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Petra, this caught me hard…the plainness of “White car, white car.” folds into unease, and it lingers like a signal. Ordinary becomes mysterious, tender becomes fearful, and I’m left holding my breath right beside you. Stunning work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
September 24th, 2025 07:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Petra, this caught me hard…the plainness of “White car, white car.” folds into unease, and it lingers like a signal. Ordinary becomes mysterious, tender becomes fearful, and I’m left holding my breath right beside you. Stunning work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
September 24th, 2025 07:08
White Car
Paul Bell said:
I\'m thinking the devil incarnate.
Why do sensible people pop into their cars and become \'\'Rambo.\'\'
September 23rd, 2025 14:04
Paul Bell said:
I\'m thinking the devil incarnate.
Why do sensible people pop into their cars and become \'\'Rambo.\'\'
September 23rd, 2025 14:04
White Car
sorenbarrett said:
A thought provoking poem that leaves the reader questioning what else white could mean.
September 23rd, 2025 10:12
sorenbarrett said:
A thought provoking poem that leaves the reader questioning what else white could mean.
September 23rd, 2025 10:12
Beloved & Enough
Paul Bell said:
Not enough love out there, and that maybe the problem with the world.
World dove day called for.
September 23rd, 2025 05:17
Paul Bell said:
Not enough love out there, and that maybe the problem with the world.
World dove day called for.
September 23rd, 2025 05:17
Beloved & Enough
Goldfinch60 said:
I have real love and all is wonderful Petra.
Andy
September 23rd, 2025 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
I have real love and all is wonderful Petra.
Andy
September 23rd, 2025 01:23
Beloved & Enough
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Petra, this is tender and steady, the dove image gives the poem its calm motion, and your clean lines fold doubt into quiet faith. It’s simple, faithful, and true. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 22nd, 2025 20:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Petra, this is tender and steady, the dove image gives the poem its calm motion, and your clean lines fold doubt into quiet faith. It’s simple, faithful, and true. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 22nd, 2025 20:59
Beloved & Enough
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that declare what might be expected of it. Nicely written
September 22nd, 2025 17:24
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that declare what might be expected of it. Nicely written
September 22nd, 2025 17:24
A Rose for You
Goldfinch60 said:
None of us are perfect Petra but once we have found the love of our lives, as I have done, that love cures all.
Andy
September 22nd, 2025 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
None of us are perfect Petra but once we have found the love of our lives, as I have done, that love cures all.
Andy
September 22nd, 2025 01:10
A Rose for You
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Petra, this is honest and sharp. You frame love as growth...needing daily care, carrying both beauty and defense. That final turn, once picked it’s done, refuses sentimentality and makes the metaphor ring true. It’s not about perfection, but about respect for what’s alive. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 21st, 2025 18:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Petra, this is honest and sharp. You frame love as growth...needing daily care, carrying both beauty and defense. That final turn, once picked it’s done, refuses sentimentality and makes the metaphor ring true. It’s not about perfection, but about respect for what’s alive. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 21st, 2025 18:37
A Rose for You
sorenbarrett said:
A fair warning and full disclosure given in a poem. Loved it
September 21st, 2025 05:12
sorenbarrett said:
A fair warning and full disclosure given in a poem. Loved it
September 21st, 2025 05:12
Behind Closed Doors
Goldfinch60 said:
Those closed doors can bring wonder to our lives when we open them Petra.
Andy
September 21st, 2025 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Those closed doors can bring wonder to our lives when we open them Petra.
Andy
September 21st, 2025 01:14
When the Clock Strikes 12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I’ve known that same tension between fear of being unseen and the hope of love enduring. You’ve woven that feeling beautifully into the Cinderella motif. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done and a fave!
September 20th, 2025 19:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I’ve known that same tension between fear of being unseen and the hope of love enduring. You’ve woven that feeling beautifully into the Cinderella motif. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done and a fave!
September 20th, 2025 19:07
Behind Closed Doors
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Petra, this glows with such hope. The missed stops and lost moments feel heavy, but then you turn it...“better was waiting right behind the door.” That single shift reframes everything, from loss to gift, from despair to grace. Uplifting and true, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 20th, 2025 19:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Petra, this glows with such hope. The missed stops and lost moments feel heavy, but then you turn it...“better was waiting right behind the door.” That single shift reframes everything, from loss to gift, from despair to grace. Uplifting and true, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 20th, 2025 19:06
Behind Closed Doors
Friendship said:
The poem \"Behind Closed Doors\" revolves around the notion of missed opportunities and the potential for new beginnings. It emphasizes that while we may feel regret for what we\'ve missed, there are often better things awaiting us if we remain open to new experiences.
September 20th, 2025 14:56
Friendship said:
The poem \"Behind Closed Doors\" revolves around the notion of missed opportunities and the potential for new beginnings. It emphasizes that while we may feel regret for what we\'ve missed, there are often better things awaiting us if we remain open to new experiences.
September 20th, 2025 14:56
Behind Closed Doors
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the meaning of this write. A poem of faith and belief that in itself changes one\'s life. To believe that all works out for the best frees one from fear. A wonderful belief
September 20th, 2025 13:22
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the meaning of this write. A poem of faith and belief that in itself changes one\'s life. To believe that all works out for the best frees one from fear. A wonderful belief
September 20th, 2025 13:22
When the Clock Strikes 12
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love always grow Petra even if the clock stops.
Andy
September 20th, 2025 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love always grow Petra even if the clock stops.
Andy
September 20th, 2025 01:55
When the Clock Strikes 12
sorenbarrett said:
The Cinderella story in poem and a lovely write at that. Expectations, worries, hopes all based on what happens in relationships. Loved it
September 19th, 2025 13:36
sorenbarrett said:
The Cinderella story in poem and a lovely write at that. Expectations, worries, hopes all based on what happens in relationships. Loved it
September 19th, 2025 13:36
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