Comments received on poems by Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice
A Thousand Miles
sorenbarrett said:
I take this as an expression of time as seen in the miles. So much in so short. A lovely write
September 17th, 2025 10:55
sorenbarrett said:
I take this as an expression of time as seen in the miles. So much in so short. A lovely write
September 17th, 2025 10:55
The Enchanted Flower
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is charming and strong, Petra…the repeated flower imagery grows into empowerment and myth, making it both tender and powerful. Grateful you shared this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 16th, 2025 15:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is charming and strong, Petra…the repeated flower imagery grows into empowerment and myth, making it both tender and powerful. Grateful you shared this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 16th, 2025 15:38
The Enchanted Flower
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of empowerment with floral images nicely done.
September 16th, 2025 10:59
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of empowerment with floral images nicely done.
September 16th, 2025 10:59
Hi & Bye
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Simply loved the defiance. I always was foolhardy enough to challenge the challanger. Somehow I feel the same spirit here.
September 16th, 2025 08:39
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Simply loved the defiance. I always was foolhardy enough to challenge the challanger. Somehow I feel the same spirit here.
September 16th, 2025 08:39
Back At It Again
NafisaSB said:
a lovely and clever peace straight from the forlorn heart.
good work
September 16th, 2025 00:53
NafisaSB said:
a lovely and clever peace straight from the forlorn heart.
good work
September 16th, 2025 00:53
Hi & Bye
Paul Bell said:
No manuals on parenthood, you grasp, you rasp, and then its past.
You can only do your best.
September 15th, 2025 17:22
Paul Bell said:
No manuals on parenthood, you grasp, you rasp, and then its past.
You can only do your best.
September 15th, 2025 17:22
Hi & Bye
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful piece. The repetition of “I earned that shit” anchors it with raw strength…pain is here, but so is the refusal to let go. Fierce and unyielding, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 15th, 2025 12:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful piece. The repetition of “I earned that shit” anchors it with raw strength…pain is here, but so is the refusal to let go. Fierce and unyielding, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 15th, 2025 12:36
Painting the Perfect Picture
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is beautifully done…the pencil and pen imagery grounds the whole reflection. It’s personal and universal at once, that pull between erasing and owning our marks. Quietly powerful. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 15th, 2025 12:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is beautifully done…the pencil and pen imagery grounds the whole reflection. It’s personal and universal at once, that pull between erasing and owning our marks. Quietly powerful. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 15th, 2025 12:32
Painting the Perfect Picture
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Beautifully expressed
September 15th, 2025 09:28
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Beautifully expressed
September 15th, 2025 09:28
Hi & Bye
Bella Shepard said:
A wonderful poem of deeply felt reflection. Good work!
September 15th, 2025 07:49
Bella Shepard said:
A wonderful poem of deeply felt reflection. Good work!
September 15th, 2025 07:49
Hi & Bye
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem serves as an exploration of the struggle with loss and their resolve to reclaim their identity and experiences. It reflects on the challenges of parenthood and the desire for deeper connection, making a powerful statement about resilience and self-ownership.
September 15th, 2025 07:36
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem serves as an exploration of the struggle with loss and their resolve to reclaim their identity and experiences. It reflects on the challenges of parenthood and the desire for deeper connection, making a powerful statement about resilience and self-ownership.
September 15th, 2025 07:36
Hi & Bye
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful reflection upon achievement and how it can be deferred, deterred, demeaned but never dismissed by oneself. A lovely write.
September 15th, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful reflection upon achievement and how it can be deferred, deterred, demeaned but never dismissed by oneself. A lovely write.
September 15th, 2025 04:42
Painting the Perfect Picture
Fred1794 said:
Nice ! I am a big fan of drawing with pen - I have learnt to trust myself in doing so. What were your thoughts whilst writing this? :)))
September 14th, 2025 19:24
Fred1794 said:
Nice ! I am a big fan of drawing with pen - I have learnt to trust myself in doing so. What were your thoughts whilst writing this? :)))
September 14th, 2025 19:24
Painting the Perfect Picture
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic description of the process itself. Nicely done
September 14th, 2025 19:24
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic description of the process itself. Nicely done
September 14th, 2025 19:24
Little Prince
Thoughtless said:
Quite parental, unless I misunderstand. Nice!
September 14th, 2025 07:33
Thoughtless said:
Quite parental, unless I misunderstand. Nice!
September 14th, 2025 07:33
Little Prince
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Petra, this piece glows with affection...playful rhymes, pet names, and a refrain that feels like love spoken aloud. Gentle and endearing. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 14th, 2025 01:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Petra, this piece glows with affection...playful rhymes, pet names, and a refrain that feels like love spoken aloud. Gentle and endearing. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 14th, 2025 01:06
Little Prince
sorenbarrett said:
Childlike in its innocence it does convince with simple rhyme a feeling sublime. A wonderful feeling taking me back to childhood. Thank you for sharing
September 13th, 2025 06:59
sorenbarrett said:
Childlike in its innocence it does convince with simple rhyme a feeling sublime. A wonderful feeling taking me back to childhood. Thank you for sharing
September 13th, 2025 06:59
Back At It Again
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Poem with deep feelings. Nicely expressed. Loved it.
September 12th, 2025 11:37
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Poem with deep feelings. Nicely expressed. Loved it.
September 12th, 2025 11:37
Back At It Again
Teddy.15 said:
Sound like marriage lol great language and I have to say I prefer to stay in silence when there is need. 🌹
September 12th, 2025 11:36
Teddy.15 said:
Sound like marriage lol great language and I have to say I prefer to stay in silence when there is need. 🌹
September 12th, 2025 11:36
Back At It Again
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, reading this felt like those moments when you’re face-to-face with someone, yet completely shut out. That hurt of being pulled in but never answered is painfully real here. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ A fave!
September 12th, 2025 09:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, reading this felt like those moments when you’re face-to-face with someone, yet completely shut out. That hurt of being pulled in but never answered is painfully real here. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ A fave!
September 12th, 2025 09:45
Back At It Again
sorenbarrett said:
The repeated phrase gives power to this poem\'s theme. Clever rewording of words within what would otherwise be repetitive but are cleverly woven into other lines that leave the same feeling. Nicely done
September 12th, 2025 09:43
sorenbarrett said:
The repeated phrase gives power to this poem\'s theme. Clever rewording of words within what would otherwise be repetitive but are cleverly woven into other lines that leave the same feeling. Nicely done
September 12th, 2025 09:43
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