Comments received on poems by Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice
Breathe
orchidee said:
Good write FE. Now my problem is that I need to breathe, as I held my breath for 24 hours one day. I did it, btu didn\'t feel well afterwards - eh?? Oh, It\'s nutty! lol.
September 8th, 2025 02:24
orchidee said:
Good write FE. Now my problem is that I need to breathe, as I held my breath for 24 hours one day. I did it, btu didn\'t feel well afterwards - eh?? Oh, It\'s nutty! lol.
September 8th, 2025 02:24
Breathe
rebellion_in_sanity said:
This is a poem which...well says something which haunted me for a long time. Breathe or to exolode? How much nonsense is nonsense enough?
Who knows?
Nicely done 👍✅
September 7th, 2025 09:50
rebellion_in_sanity said:
This is a poem which...well says something which haunted me for a long time. Breathe or to exolode? How much nonsense is nonsense enough?
Who knows?
Nicely done 👍✅
September 7th, 2025 09:50
Breathe
rebellion_in_sanity said:
This is a poem which...well says something which haunted me for a long time. Breathe or to exolode? How much nonsense is nonsense enough?
Who knows?
Nicely done 👍✅
September 7th, 2025 09:50
rebellion_in_sanity said:
This is a poem which...well says something which haunted me for a long time. Breathe or to exolode? How much nonsense is nonsense enough?
Who knows?
Nicely done 👍✅
September 7th, 2025 09:50
I Love You
Soman Ragavan said:
One can feel the sincerity in these words that come from the heart. It shows the magic that love can work on an individual. Love is something selfless, it does not ask for anything in return. Thus in this poem there is not one thing that you have asked in return. You give all... The reader must be touched with this...
September 7th, 2025 06:12
Soman Ragavan said:
One can feel the sincerity in these words that come from the heart. It shows the magic that love can work on an individual. Love is something selfless, it does not ask for anything in return. Thus in this poem there is not one thing that you have asked in return. You give all... The reader must be touched with this...
September 7th, 2025 06:12
Breathe
sorenbarrett said:
So simple yet so useful and meaningful the advice given is golden in this poem. It is said so lovely in such a peaceful form and it feels like the breathing as I read it. Wonderful and a fave
September 7th, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
So simple yet so useful and meaningful the advice given is golden in this poem. It is said so lovely in such a peaceful form and it feels like the breathing as I read it. Wonderful and a fave
September 7th, 2025 04:57
Lord, Fix Me
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of injury and is a call for help. Nicely8 written
September 6th, 2025 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of injury and is a call for help. Nicely8 written
September 6th, 2025 04:04
I Love You
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Petra, I could have written this for my partner.
Andy
September 6th, 2025 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Petra, I could have written this for my partner.
Andy
September 6th, 2025 01:20
I Love You
sorenbarrett said:
Told in many ways love of another expressed in poetic verse
September 5th, 2025 09:36
sorenbarrett said:
Told in many ways love of another expressed in poetic verse
September 5th, 2025 09:36
One Day
Goldfinch60 said:
Such very true words Petra, our children are our lives.
Andy
September 5th, 2025 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Such very true words Petra, our children are our lives.
Andy
September 5th, 2025 01:06
One Day
sorenbarrett said:
Dedication and sacrifice often pay off in the end. A lovely poem of knowing this.
September 4th, 2025 09:07
sorenbarrett said:
Dedication and sacrifice often pay off in the end. A lovely poem of knowing this.
September 4th, 2025 09:07
Day One
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about faith and its need. Well constructed it lays down the foundation then adds verse by verse to achieve the final message which is left inferred. More powerful that way
September 3rd, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about faith and its need. Well constructed it lays down the foundation then adds verse by verse to achieve the final message which is left inferred. More powerful that way
September 3rd, 2025 04:40
Footsteps in the Night
sorenbarrett said:
Mysterious this poem speaks of the past but doesn\'t tell what it is. Nicely written
September 2nd, 2025 19:30
sorenbarrett said:
Mysterious this poem speaks of the past but doesn\'t tell what it is. Nicely written
September 2nd, 2025 19:30
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