Comments received on poems by Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice
The Heart’s Spark
Goldfinch60 said:
That spark will always be there to ignite when our loved ones appear Petra.
Andy
September 19th, 2025 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
That spark will always be there to ignite when our loved ones appear Petra.
Andy
September 19th, 2025 00:56
The Heart’s Spark
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Petra, this one glows with both ache and hope. The heart flickers like a candle, dwelling in the dark only to restart stronger. Gentle yet powerful, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 18th, 2025 18:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Petra, this one glows with both ache and hope. The heart flickers like a candle, dwelling in the dark only to restart stronger. Gentle yet powerful, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 18th, 2025 18:09
The Heart’s Spark
Paul Bell said:
Amazing little organ, the heart.
It can be big, broken, repaired over and over again.
Often wonder if it could speak, would it say, god not again.
September 18th, 2025 14:55
Paul Bell said:
Amazing little organ, the heart.
It can be big, broken, repaired over and over again.
Often wonder if it could speak, would it say, god not again.
September 18th, 2025 14:55
The Heart’s Spark
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love and how the embers of it lie in wait to be ignited with reunion. Most lovely
September 18th, 2025 08:19
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love and how the embers of it lie in wait to be ignited with reunion. Most lovely
September 18th, 2025 08:19
A Thousand Miles
Goldfinch60 said:
He will always be there for you Petra no matter how many miles you go.
Andy
September 18th, 2025 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
He will always be there for you Petra no matter how many miles you go.
Andy
September 18th, 2025 01:50
The Choice and Chances of Change.
gray0328 said:
We can choose to make changes but that only works if they are implemented. Well done Petra
September 17th, 2025 21:24
gray0328 said:
We can choose to make changes but that only works if they are implemented. Well done Petra
September 17th, 2025 21:24
Breathe
gray0328 said:
I have to remind myself to breathe sometimes so this poem hit home. Well done Petra
September 17th, 2025 21:22
gray0328 said:
I have to remind myself to breathe sometimes so this poem hit home. Well done Petra
September 17th, 2025 21:22
A Thousand Miles
Anmol Sinha said:
Your poem reminded me about T.S.Eliot
Nice job
September 17th, 2025 19:57
Anmol Sinha said:
Your poem reminded me about T.S.Eliot
Nice job
September 17th, 2025 19:57
A Thousand Miles
Teddy.15 said:
This is how I feel in the summer, lovely title and a lovely read. 🌹
September 17th, 2025 14:07
Teddy.15 said:
This is how I feel in the summer, lovely title and a lovely read. 🌹
September 17th, 2025 14:07
A Thousand Miles
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, reading this felt like being right there ...the sun, the crowd, the sudden fear, the smile that closed the moment. You’ve carried the small details into something powerful. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 17th, 2025 11:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, reading this felt like being right there ...the sun, the crowd, the sudden fear, the smile that closed the moment. You’ve carried the small details into something powerful. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 17th, 2025 11:14
A Thousand Miles
sorenbarrett said:
I take this as an expression of time as seen in the miles. So much in so short. A lovely write
September 17th, 2025 10:55
sorenbarrett said:
I take this as an expression of time as seen in the miles. So much in so short. A lovely write
September 17th, 2025 10:55
The Enchanted Flower
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is charming and strong, Petra…the repeated flower imagery grows into empowerment and myth, making it both tender and powerful. Grateful you shared this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 16th, 2025 15:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is charming and strong, Petra…the repeated flower imagery grows into empowerment and myth, making it both tender and powerful. Grateful you shared this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 16th, 2025 15:38
The Enchanted Flower
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of empowerment with floral images nicely done.
September 16th, 2025 10:59
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of empowerment with floral images nicely done.
September 16th, 2025 10:59
Hi & Bye
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Simply loved the defiance. I always was foolhardy enough to challenge the challanger. Somehow I feel the same spirit here.
September 16th, 2025 08:39
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Simply loved the defiance. I always was foolhardy enough to challenge the challanger. Somehow I feel the same spirit here.
September 16th, 2025 08:39
Back At It Again
NafisaSB said:
a lovely and clever peace straight from the forlorn heart.
good work
September 16th, 2025 00:53
NafisaSB said:
a lovely and clever peace straight from the forlorn heart.
good work
September 16th, 2025 00:53
Hi & Bye
Paul Bell said:
No manuals on parenthood, you grasp, you rasp, and then its past.
You can only do your best.
September 15th, 2025 17:22
Paul Bell said:
No manuals on parenthood, you grasp, you rasp, and then its past.
You can only do your best.
September 15th, 2025 17:22
Hi & Bye
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful piece. The repetition of “I earned that shit” anchors it with raw strength…pain is here, but so is the refusal to let go. Fierce and unyielding, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 15th, 2025 12:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful piece. The repetition of “I earned that shit” anchors it with raw strength…pain is here, but so is the refusal to let go. Fierce and unyielding, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 15th, 2025 12:36
Painting the Perfect Picture
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is beautifully done…the pencil and pen imagery grounds the whole reflection. It’s personal and universal at once, that pull between erasing and owning our marks. Quietly powerful. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 15th, 2025 12:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is beautifully done…the pencil and pen imagery grounds the whole reflection. It’s personal and universal at once, that pull between erasing and owning our marks. Quietly powerful. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 15th, 2025 12:32
Painting the Perfect Picture
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Beautifully expressed
September 15th, 2025 09:28
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Beautifully expressed
September 15th, 2025 09:28
Hi & Bye
Bella Shepard said:
A wonderful poem of deeply felt reflection. Good work!
September 15th, 2025 07:49
Bella Shepard said:
A wonderful poem of deeply felt reflection. Good work!
September 15th, 2025 07:49
Hi & Bye
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem serves as an exploration of the struggle with loss and their resolve to reclaim their identity and experiences. It reflects on the challenges of parenthood and the desire for deeper connection, making a powerful statement about resilience and self-ownership.
September 15th, 2025 07:36
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem serves as an exploration of the struggle with loss and their resolve to reclaim their identity and experiences. It reflects on the challenges of parenthood and the desire for deeper connection, making a powerful statement about resilience and self-ownership.
September 15th, 2025 07:36
Hi & Bye
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful reflection upon achievement and how it can be deferred, deterred, demeaned but never dismissed by oneself. A lovely write.
September 15th, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful reflection upon achievement and how it can be deferred, deterred, demeaned but never dismissed by oneself. A lovely write.
September 15th, 2025 04:42
Painting the Perfect Picture
Fred1794 said:
Nice ! I am a big fan of drawing with pen - I have learnt to trust myself in doing so. What were your thoughts whilst writing this? :)))
September 14th, 2025 19:24
Fred1794 said:
Nice ! I am a big fan of drawing with pen - I have learnt to trust myself in doing so. What were your thoughts whilst writing this? :)))
September 14th, 2025 19:24
Painting the Perfect Picture
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic description of the process itself. Nicely done
September 14th, 2025 19:24
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic description of the process itself. Nicely done
September 14th, 2025 19:24
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