Comments received on poems by Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice
Back At It Again
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Poem with deep feelings. Nicely expressed. Loved it.
September 12th, 2025 11:37
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Poem with deep feelings. Nicely expressed. Loved it.
September 12th, 2025 11:37
Back At It Again
Teddy.15 said:
Sound like marriage lol great language and I have to say I prefer to stay in silence when there is need. 🌹
September 12th, 2025 11:36
Teddy.15 said:
Sound like marriage lol great language and I have to say I prefer to stay in silence when there is need. 🌹
September 12th, 2025 11:36
Back At It Again
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, reading this felt like those moments when you’re face-to-face with someone, yet completely shut out. That hurt of being pulled in but never answered is painfully real here. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ A fave!
September 12th, 2025 09:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, reading this felt like those moments when you’re face-to-face with someone, yet completely shut out. That hurt of being pulled in but never answered is painfully real here. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ A fave!
September 12th, 2025 09:45
Back At It Again
sorenbarrett said:
The repeated phrase gives power to this poem\'s theme. Clever rewording of words within what would otherwise be repetitive but are cleverly woven into other lines that leave the same feeling. Nicely done
September 12th, 2025 09:43
sorenbarrett said:
The repeated phrase gives power to this poem\'s theme. Clever rewording of words within what would otherwise be repetitive but are cleverly woven into other lines that leave the same feeling. Nicely done
September 12th, 2025 09:43
Snapshot Of Us
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Petra, beautifully written…snap by snap, waves, light, laughter...all framed in memory. It’s tender, bright, and lasting, a perfect picture in words. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 11th, 2025 21:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Petra, beautifully written…snap by snap, waves, light, laughter...all framed in memory. It’s tender, bright, and lasting, a perfect picture in words. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 11th, 2025 21:03
Snapshot Of Us
sorenbarrett said:
Pictures, memories frozen in time. A poem of what was, could be, wishes of the past framed. Nicely done
September 11th, 2025 10:00
sorenbarrett said:
Pictures, memories frozen in time. A poem of what was, could be, wishes of the past framed. Nicely done
September 11th, 2025 10:00
Breathe
NafisaSB said:
fantastic advice set out so beautifully in poetic form, thanks for sharing
September 11th, 2025 00:49
NafisaSB said:
fantastic advice set out so beautifully in poetic form, thanks for sharing
September 11th, 2025 00:49
The Choice and Chances of Change.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent write, my friend! That reflection...“change is born from choices made, but what if those choices are not entirely our own”....is what struck me most. You’ve framed the tension perfectly. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 10th, 2025 18:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent write, my friend! That reflection...“change is born from choices made, but what if those choices are not entirely our own”....is what struck me most. You’ve framed the tension perfectly. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 10th, 2025 18:46
The Choice and Chances of Change.
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic question versed well. Make what changes you can and the rest will come with time. A lovely write
September 10th, 2025 11:02
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic question versed well. Make what changes you can and the rest will come with time. A lovely write
September 10th, 2025 11:02
He is a Star
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Fina,
A powerful portrayal of a powerful fellow; how a mother would hail her son as he matures into all that is good, honest and strong in the strength of faith, love and survival. Excellent!
Kind regards,
Tony.
September 9th, 2025 10:22
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Fina,
A powerful portrayal of a powerful fellow; how a mother would hail her son as he matures into all that is good, honest and strong in the strength of faith, love and survival. Excellent!
Kind regards,
Tony.
September 9th, 2025 10:22
He is a Star
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes, Petra…I’ve known people whose light keeps burning no matter the shadows thrown at them. Your words honor that spirit beautifully. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Very well done!
September 9th, 2025 09:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes, Petra…I’ve known people whose light keeps burning no matter the shadows thrown at them. Your words honor that spirit beautifully. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Very well done!
September 9th, 2025 09:22
Stay Glowed Up
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Petra, this radiates encouragement…the rhythm pushes forward like a mantra to keep shining no matter what. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Excellent!
September 9th, 2025 09:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Petra, this radiates encouragement…the rhythm pushes forward like a mantra to keep shining no matter what. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Excellent!
September 9th, 2025 09:21
Breathe
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Another fave! That volcano image is what struck me most, Petra. It’s such a vivid reminder of how silence can build until it erupts. Strongly done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 9th, 2025 09:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Another fave! That volcano image is what struck me most, Petra. It’s such a vivid reminder of how silence can build until it erupts. Strongly done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 9th, 2025 09:20
Lord, Fix Me
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I\'ve been here and have prayed this. Powerful, Petra! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 9th, 2025 09:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I\'ve been here and have prayed this. Powerful, Petra! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 9th, 2025 09:19
I Love You
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Petra, beautifully written…each image widens the horizon until love covers all...sky, rain, earth, even ashes. It’s eternal, intimate, and deeply moving. Wonderfully done.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 9th, 2025 09:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Petra, beautifully written…each image widens the horizon until love covers all...sky, rain, earth, even ashes. It’s eternal, intimate, and deeply moving. Wonderfully done.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 9th, 2025 09:18
One Day
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Really glad you found me, my friend, because in turn I am glad I have now found you. Powerful piece. That final turn...“this one is for my son”...is what stays with me, Petra. It grounds the whole piece in love that endures. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 9th, 2025 09:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Really glad you found me, my friend, because in turn I am glad I have now found you. Powerful piece. That final turn...“this one is for my son”...is what stays with me, Petra. It grounds the whole piece in love that endures. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 9th, 2025 09:17
Day One
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Petra, yes…I’ve been in that place of trying, crying, and reaching for faith. You caught that fragile tension between hope lost and hope still reaching. Powerful. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
September 9th, 2025 09:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Petra, yes…I’ve been in that place of trying, crying, and reaching for faith. You caught that fragile tension between hope lost and hope still reaching. Powerful. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
September 9th, 2025 09:12
Footsteps in the Night
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Petra, this hit me with suspense…the pounding heart, the frozen moment. It feels like fear and recognition colliding all at once. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done and a fave!
September 9th, 2025 09:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Petra, this hit me with suspense…the pounding heart, the frozen moment. It feels like fear and recognition colliding all at once. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done and a fave!
September 9th, 2025 09:11
He is a Star
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of tribute to one that has focus and confidence in what they do. Lovely
September 9th, 2025 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of tribute to one that has focus and confidence in what they do. Lovely
September 9th, 2025 08:43
Stay Glowed Up
Goldfinch60 said:
We must always keep going Petra and will win in the end.
Andy
September 9th, 2025 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
We must always keep going Petra and will win in the end.
Andy
September 9th, 2025 01:20
Stay Glowed Up
Teddy.15 said:
I think us women can do anything when we have our minds set and steady. 🌹
September 8th, 2025 13:00
Teddy.15 said:
I think us women can do anything when we have our minds set and steady. 🌹
September 8th, 2025 13:00
Stay Glowed Up
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that is inspirational to keep people going. Nicely written and motivational
September 8th, 2025 09:06
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that is inspirational to keep people going. Nicely written and motivational
September 8th, 2025 09:06
Breathe
orchidee said:
Good write FE. Now my problem is that I need to breathe, as I held my breath for 24 hours one day. I did it, btu didn\'t feel well afterwards - eh?? Oh, It\'s nutty! lol.
September 8th, 2025 02:24
orchidee said:
Good write FE. Now my problem is that I need to breathe, as I held my breath for 24 hours one day. I did it, btu didn\'t feel well afterwards - eh?? Oh, It\'s nutty! lol.
September 8th, 2025 02:24
Breathe
rebellion_in_sanity said:
This is a poem which...well says something which haunted me for a long time. Breathe or to exolode? How much nonsense is nonsense enough?
Who knows?
Nicely done 👍✅
September 7th, 2025 09:50
rebellion_in_sanity said:
This is a poem which...well says something which haunted me for a long time. Breathe or to exolode? How much nonsense is nonsense enough?
Who knows?
Nicely done 👍✅
September 7th, 2025 09:50
Breathe
rebellion_in_sanity said:
This is a poem which...well says something which haunted me for a long time. Breathe or to exolode? How much nonsense is nonsense enough?
Who knows?
Nicely done 👍✅
September 7th, 2025 09:50
rebellion_in_sanity said:
This is a poem which...well says something which haunted me for a long time. Breathe or to exolode? How much nonsense is nonsense enough?
Who knows?
Nicely done 👍✅
September 7th, 2025 09:50
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