Comments received on poems by Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice
White Car
Paul Bell said:
I\'m thinking the devil incarnate.
Why do sensible people pop into their cars and become \'\'Rambo.\'\'
September 23rd, 2025 14:04
Paul Bell said:
I\'m thinking the devil incarnate.
Why do sensible people pop into their cars and become \'\'Rambo.\'\'
September 23rd, 2025 14:04
White Car
sorenbarrett said:
A thought provoking poem that leaves the reader questioning what else white could mean.
September 23rd, 2025 10:12
sorenbarrett said:
A thought provoking poem that leaves the reader questioning what else white could mean.
September 23rd, 2025 10:12
Beloved & Enough
Paul Bell said:
Not enough love out there, and that maybe the problem with the world.
World dove day called for.
September 23rd, 2025 05:17
Paul Bell said:
Not enough love out there, and that maybe the problem with the world.
World dove day called for.
September 23rd, 2025 05:17
Beloved & Enough
Goldfinch60 said:
I have real love and all is wonderful Petra.
Andy
September 23rd, 2025 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
I have real love and all is wonderful Petra.
Andy
September 23rd, 2025 01:23
Beloved & Enough
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Petra, this is tender and steady, the dove image gives the poem its calm motion, and your clean lines fold doubt into quiet faith. It’s simple, faithful, and true. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 22nd, 2025 20:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Petra, this is tender and steady, the dove image gives the poem its calm motion, and your clean lines fold doubt into quiet faith. It’s simple, faithful, and true. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 22nd, 2025 20:59
Beloved & Enough
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that declare what might be expected of it. Nicely written
September 22nd, 2025 17:24
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that declare what might be expected of it. Nicely written
September 22nd, 2025 17:24
A Rose for You
Goldfinch60 said:
None of us are perfect Petra but once we have found the love of our lives, as I have done, that love cures all.
Andy
September 22nd, 2025 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
None of us are perfect Petra but once we have found the love of our lives, as I have done, that love cures all.
Andy
September 22nd, 2025 01:10
A Rose for You
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Petra, this is honest and sharp. You frame love as growth...needing daily care, carrying both beauty and defense. That final turn, once picked it’s done, refuses sentimentality and makes the metaphor ring true. It’s not about perfection, but about respect for what’s alive. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 21st, 2025 18:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Petra, this is honest and sharp. You frame love as growth...needing daily care, carrying both beauty and defense. That final turn, once picked it’s done, refuses sentimentality and makes the metaphor ring true. It’s not about perfection, but about respect for what’s alive. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 21st, 2025 18:37
A Rose for You
sorenbarrett said:
A fair warning and full disclosure given in a poem. Loved it
September 21st, 2025 05:12
sorenbarrett said:
A fair warning and full disclosure given in a poem. Loved it
September 21st, 2025 05:12
Behind Closed Doors
Goldfinch60 said:
Those closed doors can bring wonder to our lives when we open them Petra.
Andy
September 21st, 2025 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Those closed doors can bring wonder to our lives when we open them Petra.
Andy
September 21st, 2025 01:14
When the Clock Strikes 12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I’ve known that same tension between fear of being unseen and the hope of love enduring. You’ve woven that feeling beautifully into the Cinderella motif. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done and a fave!
September 20th, 2025 19:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I’ve known that same tension between fear of being unseen and the hope of love enduring. You’ve woven that feeling beautifully into the Cinderella motif. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done and a fave!
September 20th, 2025 19:07
Behind Closed Doors
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Petra, this glows with such hope. The missed stops and lost moments feel heavy, but then you turn it...“better was waiting right behind the door.” That single shift reframes everything, from loss to gift, from despair to grace. Uplifting and true, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 20th, 2025 19:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Petra, this glows with such hope. The missed stops and lost moments feel heavy, but then you turn it...“better was waiting right behind the door.” That single shift reframes everything, from loss to gift, from despair to grace. Uplifting and true, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 20th, 2025 19:06
Behind Closed Doors
Friendship said:
The poem \"Behind Closed Doors\" revolves around the notion of missed opportunities and the potential for new beginnings. It emphasizes that while we may feel regret for what we\'ve missed, there are often better things awaiting us if we remain open to new experiences.
September 20th, 2025 14:56
Friendship said:
The poem \"Behind Closed Doors\" revolves around the notion of missed opportunities and the potential for new beginnings. It emphasizes that while we may feel regret for what we\'ve missed, there are often better things awaiting us if we remain open to new experiences.
September 20th, 2025 14:56
Behind Closed Doors
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the meaning of this write. A poem of faith and belief that in itself changes one\'s life. To believe that all works out for the best frees one from fear. A wonderful belief
September 20th, 2025 13:22
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the meaning of this write. A poem of faith and belief that in itself changes one\'s life. To believe that all works out for the best frees one from fear. A wonderful belief
September 20th, 2025 13:22
When the Clock Strikes 12
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love always grow Petra even if the clock stops.
Andy
September 20th, 2025 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love always grow Petra even if the clock stops.
Andy
September 20th, 2025 01:55
When the Clock Strikes 12
sorenbarrett said:
The Cinderella story in poem and a lovely write at that. Expectations, worries, hopes all based on what happens in relationships. Loved it
September 19th, 2025 13:36
sorenbarrett said:
The Cinderella story in poem and a lovely write at that. Expectations, worries, hopes all based on what happens in relationships. Loved it
September 19th, 2025 13:36
The Heart’s Spark
Goldfinch60 said:
That spark will always be there to ignite when our loved ones appear Petra.
Andy
September 19th, 2025 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
That spark will always be there to ignite when our loved ones appear Petra.
Andy
September 19th, 2025 00:56
The Heart’s Spark
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Petra, this one glows with both ache and hope. The heart flickers like a candle, dwelling in the dark only to restart stronger. Gentle yet powerful, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 18th, 2025 18:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Petra, this one glows with both ache and hope. The heart flickers like a candle, dwelling in the dark only to restart stronger. Gentle yet powerful, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 18th, 2025 18:09
The Heart’s Spark
Paul Bell said:
Amazing little organ, the heart.
It can be big, broken, repaired over and over again.
Often wonder if it could speak, would it say, god not again.
September 18th, 2025 14:55
Paul Bell said:
Amazing little organ, the heart.
It can be big, broken, repaired over and over again.
Often wonder if it could speak, would it say, god not again.
September 18th, 2025 14:55
The Heart’s Spark
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love and how the embers of it lie in wait to be ignited with reunion. Most lovely
September 18th, 2025 08:19
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love and how the embers of it lie in wait to be ignited with reunion. Most lovely
September 18th, 2025 08:19
A Thousand Miles
Goldfinch60 said:
He will always be there for you Petra no matter how many miles you go.
Andy
September 18th, 2025 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
He will always be there for you Petra no matter how many miles you go.
Andy
September 18th, 2025 01:50
The Choice and Chances of Change.
gray0328 said:
We can choose to make changes but that only works if they are implemented. Well done Petra
September 17th, 2025 21:24
gray0328 said:
We can choose to make changes but that only works if they are implemented. Well done Petra
September 17th, 2025 21:24
Breathe
gray0328 said:
I have to remind myself to breathe sometimes so this poem hit home. Well done Petra
September 17th, 2025 21:22
gray0328 said:
I have to remind myself to breathe sometimes so this poem hit home. Well done Petra
September 17th, 2025 21:22
A Thousand Miles
Anmol Sinha said:
Your poem reminded me about T.S.Eliot
Nice job
September 17th, 2025 19:57
Anmol Sinha said:
Your poem reminded me about T.S.Eliot
Nice job
September 17th, 2025 19:57
A Thousand Miles
Teddy.15 said:
This is how I feel in the summer, lovely title and a lovely read. 🌹
September 17th, 2025 14:07
Teddy.15 said:
This is how I feel in the summer, lovely title and a lovely read. 🌹
September 17th, 2025 14:07
A Thousand Miles
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, reading this felt like being right there ...the sun, the crowd, the sudden fear, the smile that closed the moment. You’ve carried the small details into something powerful. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 17th, 2025 11:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, reading this felt like being right there ...the sun, the crowd, the sudden fear, the smile that closed the moment. You’ve carried the small details into something powerful. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 17th, 2025 11:14
A Thousand Miles
sorenbarrett said:
I take this as an expression of time as seen in the miles. So much in so short. A lovely write
September 17th, 2025 10:55
sorenbarrett said:
I take this as an expression of time as seen in the miles. So much in so short. A lovely write
September 17th, 2025 10:55
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