Comments received on poems by Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice



I Am Going to Be Great
Goldfinch60 said:

Keep going Petra, your wonderful life is ahead.

Andy

November 2nd, 2025 02:19

I Am Going to Be Great
sorenbarrett said:

A vey positive look at one\'s capabilities and possibilities. Well done

November 1st, 2025 17:42

Flowing Forward
NafisaSB said:

i like the words \'no one wants the past recycled\' -yes it\'s always best to move on, and you have explained it in brevity, and yet so well

October 14th, 2025 23:47

Flowing Forward
2781 said:

As it says, \"there\'s nothing new under the sun.\"
But here\'s to a bright future.

October 14th, 2025 07:27

Flowing Forward
spilleronsheet said:

Its strength test your writing, a beautiful transformation your penning…wonderful dear poet

October 11th, 2025 15:38

Flowing Forward
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Petra, this moves with calm strength...the voice of someone who’s been through the cycle and still chooses to move forward. A lovely piece of quiet determination. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

October 9th, 2025 19:54

Flowing Forward
Friendship said:

Your poem revolves around the notion of personal growth and the importance of learning from the past to create a better future. It emphasizes that while history may repeat itself, individuals have the power to change their direction and flow forward.

October 9th, 2025 13:52

Flowing Forward
sorenbarrett said:

Well put in good rhyme a message that is felt we do not like to focus on what can not be changed but upon what we have control over. Nicely put in this poem.

October 9th, 2025 03:58

Flowing Forward
Goldfinch60 said:

True words Petra, never go back.

Andy

October 9th, 2025 01:18

Courageous Woman
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good words Petra, there are very strong women out there.

Andy

October 8th, 2025 01:14

Incurable
NafisaSB said:

this cry for cure - hope its heeded, before it\'s too late for so many who are afflicted. .and no one needs to migrate to get cured

October 8th, 2025 00:56

Courageous Woman
Friendship said:

Well written, your poem celebrates the strength, resilience, and bravery of women who stand up for themselves and others in the face of adversity. It emphasizes the importance of courage in speaking out and taking action, even when faced with powerful opposition.

October 7th, 2025 19:50

Courageous Woman
sorenbarrett said:

Homage to brave women that stand up for themselves and have the grit to be what they are. Well worded

October 7th, 2025 16:40

Masterpiece in Motion
Goldfinch60 said:

May that masterpiece be always with you Petra.

Andy

October 6th, 2025 01:23

Masterpiece in Motion
sorenbarrett said:

Carpe diem make the most out of each moment

October 5th, 2025 16:12

One Year Older
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Petra, this glows with yearning and faith…the climb, the rise, the self-belief breaking through the doubt. You made hope sound brave again and that rocks. So do you, my friend! Happy Sunday! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

October 5th, 2025 07:51

One Year Older
sorenbarrett said:

A recognition of growth and anticipation of what is to come. An expectation of progress and hope for greatness all expressed in this poem. Very nicely done Petra

October 5th, 2025 04:00

Incurable
Keyara S Trotman said:

This is a beautiful written out poem. You’ve expressed a deep urgency for healing, and more. This is painful and heartbreaking yet you’ve managed to pull through as you’ve written so much words that express exactly what you’ve been feeling, needless to say this is giving strength that which you need it and you have received it. It’s all written as it is. 🥂✨🙏🏼.

October 3rd, 2025 03:48

Incurable
Goldfinch60 said:

We all need to keep going Petra, never give up.

Andy

October 3rd, 2025 01:53

Incurable
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Petra, this is deeply moving...pain and resilience woven together. “Migraines force migration” and the cry for healing resonate far beyond the page. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

October 2nd, 2025 16:55

Incurable
sorenbarrett said:

There are feelings of wanting to get beyond and help but being pulled back by what is in place. Frustration and desire paired. Nicely written

October 2nd, 2025 08:11

Heaven
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words Petra may their lives become full of wonder.

Andy

October 2nd, 2025 01:18

Heaven
sorenbarrett said:

This poem, a play on word meaning and an allegory as well. Nicely written

October 1st, 2025 20:38

Ice and Snowflakes ❄️
Goldfinch60 said:

May you skate into the beauty and wonder of your life Petra.

Andy

October 1st, 2025 01:08

Ice and Snowflakes ❄️
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This shines, Petra...snowflakes, crystal glow, the breathless leap of a triple jump. Skating here becomes a metaphor for reclaiming worth and grace. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

September 30th, 2025 18:09

Ice and Snowflakes ❄️
sorenbarrett said:

How many of us dream of things beyond our grasp and then we must move on with our day. A most lovely write that encompasses so much.

September 30th, 2025 09:02

Fire & Smoke
Friendship said:

The poem \"Fire and Smoke\" revolves around the devastating effects of pollution or toxic environments on human health and well-being. The subject matter focuses on the speaker\'s struggle with the consequences of exposure to harmful substances, reflecting a sense of despair and frustration over the lack of concern from society regarding this issue.

September 29th, 2025 15:33

Fire & Smoke
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This piece sears…the fire, the poison, the suffocation, and the belated concern that stings even more. It’s raw testimony, equal parts lament and accusation. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

September 29th, 2025 15:19

Fire & Smoke
sorenbarrett said:

Precautions taken too late. A sad story of demise due to lack of care. Whether one\'s own or those around them all the same. A good write.

September 29th, 2025 12:50

Angels Among Us
Goldfinch60 said:

Angels are always there in our lives Petra.

Andy

September 29th, 2025 01:15

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