Comments received on poems by satishverma
Small Mercies
L. B. Mek said:
yup, I too despair
commentary poetry at its insightful best,
\'congratulatory smokes\' indeed
March 18th, 2021 04:02
L. B. Mek said:
yup, I too despair
commentary poetry at its insightful best,
\'congratulatory smokes\' indeed
March 18th, 2021 04:02
Call Of Unseen
L. B. Mek said:
(forgive me, I was just trying to decipher the sentiment\'s or messages in your write with my below response, let me apologise in advance for making any misrepresentation of your intentions)..
if \'clouds\' represent misguiding featherweight thought\'s,
and the inherited \'river of bloodied\' consequence that demands its pound of \'futile flesh\' is revenge,
then the \'plurality\' I assume resembles the multiple response one may have to the bequeathed reality they exist within,
ultimately: citing the \'hummingbirds\' gentile nature for restraint and patience, that encompasses every ideal and belief claiming to respect life,
as a dam:
against the proliferate nature for the cyclical culture of ignorance for our reactionary actions, inevitable consequences
March 16th, 2021 05:07
L. B. Mek said:
(forgive me, I was just trying to decipher the sentiment\'s or messages in your write with my below response, let me apologise in advance for making any misrepresentation of your intentions)..
if \'clouds\' represent misguiding featherweight thought\'s,
and the inherited \'river of bloodied\' consequence that demands its pound of \'futile flesh\' is revenge,
then the \'plurality\' I assume resembles the multiple response one may have to the bequeathed reality they exist within,
ultimately: citing the \'hummingbirds\' gentile nature for restraint and patience, that encompasses every ideal and belief claiming to respect life,
as a dam:
against the proliferate nature for the cyclical culture of ignorance for our reactionary actions, inevitable consequences
March 16th, 2021 05:07
A Ghost Dream
L. B. Mek said:
\'a tale of relationship\'s discourse between our perceived course of life and that fate - waiting, to trip us off-course and on to the track that\'s just right, for us..
important to acknowledge all the participants when we remember disagreements, one side
seldom has all the answers\'..
a great read! (sorry if I\'ve misinterpreted your words dear poet)
March 12th, 2021 06:29
L. B. Mek said:
\'a tale of relationship\'s discourse between our perceived course of life and that fate - waiting, to trip us off-course and on to the track that\'s just right, for us..
important to acknowledge all the participants when we remember disagreements, one side
seldom has all the answers\'..
a great read! (sorry if I\'ve misinterpreted your words dear poet)
March 12th, 2021 06:29
Precarity
L. B. Mek said:
such emotive words, worded to engage and search with deliberate intent, nudging
your self-questioning thought\'s into our dulled moments, enticing
us to take a second, and while considering the maze that is your poem, discover
answers to our labyrinthic perspective of self-worth..
who dares to stare at that winking moon, when its moonlight glares and bares our shadowed thought\'s, aside our fearful dreams: within our inadequacy\'s, tears..
a great write!
March 11th, 2021 05:03
L. B. Mek said:
such emotive words, worded to engage and search with deliberate intent, nudging
your self-questioning thought\'s into our dulled moments, enticing
us to take a second, and while considering the maze that is your poem, discover
answers to our labyrinthic perspective of self-worth..
who dares to stare at that winking moon, when its moonlight glares and bares our shadowed thought\'s, aside our fearful dreams: within our inadequacy\'s, tears..
a great write!
March 11th, 2021 05:03
Untitled Oneness
L. B. Mek said:
\'I start with a blank
page, unwritten― but
worth reading.\'
if that ain\'t just a perfect depiction of a poet\'s relationship with every new beginning..
March 8th, 2021 05:56
L. B. Mek said:
\'I start with a blank
page, unwritten― but
worth reading.\'
if that ain\'t just a perfect depiction of a poet\'s relationship with every new beginning..
March 8th, 2021 05:56
Holy Script
Brimelow said:
This one is really interesting satishverma, because it gives me a feeling, honestly of anguish more than anything, but honestly your true emotion in writing this is a mystery to me, and that mystery is enjoyable.
March 5th, 2021 21:58
Brimelow said:
This one is really interesting satishverma, because it gives me a feeling, honestly of anguish more than anything, but honestly your true emotion in writing this is a mystery to me, and that mystery is enjoyable.
March 5th, 2021 21:58
Holy Script
L. B. Mek said:
I am but a feeble wannabe, masking his fallible nature of discontent within scribbled words of meagre worth,
although my saving grace lies in excavating wisdom\'s pearls that such as you choose to share, within your ink woven solace, of poetic genius..
March 5th, 2021 05:15
L. B. Mek said:
I am but a feeble wannabe, masking his fallible nature of discontent within scribbled words of meagre worth,
although my saving grace lies in excavating wisdom\'s pearls that such as you choose to share, within your ink woven solace, of poetic genius..
March 5th, 2021 05:15
Mercy Kills
L. B. Mek said:
\'I am just me now. No frills.
All my desires shed, taking
off the appendages, becoming
bald like moon.
No more four-letter words.
Jawline widens by pressing the
teeth. The warriors had become rapists―
joining the gang of losers.
Planet was changing.\'
your words made me think of Hirsi Ali\'s brave new book, covering a complex and triggering topic..
(my apologies: if me - associating your words with her work is disagreeable to you in any way dear poet, I meant no disrespect, sincerely)
March 4th, 2021 05:59
L. B. Mek said:
\'I am just me now. No frills.
All my desires shed, taking
off the appendages, becoming
bald like moon.
No more four-letter words.
Jawline widens by pressing the
teeth. The warriors had become rapists―
joining the gang of losers.
Planet was changing.\'
your words made me think of Hirsi Ali\'s brave new book, covering a complex and triggering topic..
(my apologies: if me - associating your words with her work is disagreeable to you in any way dear poet, I meant no disrespect, sincerely)
March 4th, 2021 05:59
Thinking Deep
L. B. Mek said:
\'Nihilism was not
mine. You had forced
the sweet tongue in me.\'
contagion - this neediness to commune with other\'s, subjecting ourselves
to their poisonous does of self-hate
as-if, we hadn\'t baggage aplenty
to poison others with..
another great write, thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply
March 4th, 2021 04:21
L. B. Mek said:
\'Nihilism was not
mine. You had forced
the sweet tongue in me.\'
contagion - this neediness to commune with other\'s, subjecting ourselves
to their poisonous does of self-hate
as-if, we hadn\'t baggage aplenty
to poison others with..
another great write, thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply
March 4th, 2021 04:21
Encasement
L. B. Mek said:
\'In this lonely sky,
no songbirds are flying.
Only stars are killing each other.
I am burning my fingers again.\'..
yet again... \'just, wow!\'
March 1st, 2021 06:11
L. B. Mek said:
\'In this lonely sky,
no songbirds are flying.
Only stars are killing each other.
I am burning my fingers again.\'..
yet again... \'just, wow!\'
March 1st, 2021 06:11
Overtaken By Shadows
L. B. Mek said:
just wow!
I can\'t help but feel so inadequate, when being a witness to so much talent, lol
thank you, for choosing to share: Guru!
February 26th, 2021 06:14
L. B. Mek said:
just wow!
I can\'t help but feel so inadequate, when being a witness to so much talent, lol
thank you, for choosing to share: Guru!
February 26th, 2021 06:14
Moonwhite
WriteRaw said:
To be discarded alone is a crime. This was a great read. I loved the flow of the poem.
February 25th, 2021 16:03
WriteRaw said:
To be discarded alone is a crime. This was a great read. I loved the flow of the poem.
February 25th, 2021 16:03
Nothing To Mend
L. B. Mek said:
thank you, for choosing to share your unquestionable talent dear poet or guru: to me..
just wow!
February 19th, 2021 06:18
L. B. Mek said:
thank you, for choosing to share your unquestionable talent dear poet or guru: to me..
just wow!
February 19th, 2021 06:18
Nothing To Mend
AlitaOpal said:
How beautiful, I truly enjoyed your master piece 🌹
February 18th, 2021 19:44
AlitaOpal said:
How beautiful, I truly enjoyed your master piece 🌹
February 18th, 2021 19:44
Terror In Air
L. B. Mek said:
haunting..
demonstrates such a gift for realism, painted - poetically graceful, within purposed words of vivid imagination
February 18th, 2021 06:08
L. B. Mek said:
haunting..
demonstrates such a gift for realism, painted - poetically graceful, within purposed words of vivid imagination
February 18th, 2021 06:08
Drifting In Dust Storm
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, a large part of loss is in acceptance..
while we strive to keep their memory\'s crystallised - froze,
we must equally admit they are no longer fingertip - close
February 16th, 2021 06:50
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, a large part of loss is in acceptance..
while we strive to keep their memory\'s crystallised - froze,
we must equally admit they are no longer fingertip - close
February 16th, 2021 06:50
You Had The Answer
L. B. Mek said:
tempered, yet still, worded undeniably beautiful in both imagery and meaning...
thank you for sharing
February 15th, 2021 06:07
L. B. Mek said:
tempered, yet still, worded undeniably beautiful in both imagery and meaning...
thank you for sharing
February 15th, 2021 06:07
The Celestial Affair
L. B. Mek said:
what a warming last two lines,
though admittedly you lost me at the mention of a second moon, but like my clarity - since, it to: \'never materializes\' maybe that\'s a good sign.. lol
(forgive my self-indulgent tendencies)
February 11th, 2021 05:33
L. B. Mek said:
what a warming last two lines,
though admittedly you lost me at the mention of a second moon, but like my clarity - since, it to: \'never materializes\' maybe that\'s a good sign.. lol
(forgive my self-indulgent tendencies)
February 11th, 2021 05:33
Freaking Gods
L. B. Mek said:
\'Between Adam and Eve,
there was a poison on the
arrows tip.
Hand care, making
honey without the queen.
You cannot make a fist
without a thumb.\'
just Wow, Brilliant!
February 11th, 2021 04:36
L. B. Mek said:
\'Between Adam and Eve,
there was a poison on the
arrows tip.
Hand care, making
honey without the queen.
You cannot make a fist
without a thumb.\'
just Wow, Brilliant!
February 11th, 2021 04:36
Behind The Whispers
Trenz Pruca said:
Thank you. Thought-provoking and enjoyable.
February 4th, 2021 16:27
Trenz Pruca said:
Thank you. Thought-provoking and enjoyable.
February 4th, 2021 16:27
In My Vernacular
L. B. Mek said:
oh Guru of my Poetic dreams, once more you share your guiding work\'s of wisdom, freely and distilled/worded accessible enough, so even the likes of me can understand...
what a gift you wield dear Poet, thank you!
February 2nd, 2021 05:22
L. B. Mek said:
oh Guru of my Poetic dreams, once more you share your guiding work\'s of wisdom, freely and distilled/worded accessible enough, so even the likes of me can understand...
what a gift you wield dear Poet, thank you!
February 2nd, 2021 05:22
An Equal - Armed Cross
L. B. Mek said:
to you, a mere throwaway scribble this may be,
to me: a write of majestic Poetry, with unflinchingly vivid details from a survivor\'s unfaltering song
of insightful self-commentary...
Brilliant!
thanks for sharing
January 25th, 2021 06:59
L. B. Mek said:
to you, a mere throwaway scribble this may be,
to me: a write of majestic Poetry, with unflinchingly vivid details from a survivor\'s unfaltering song
of insightful self-commentary...
Brilliant!
thanks for sharing
January 25th, 2021 06:59
Unmatched
L. B. Mek said:
\'Let the traffic grow between
give and take. You can deceive
yourself by forgetting to
perceive the rainbow dreams.\'
wow, brilliant lines
January 14th, 2021 07:21
L. B. Mek said:
\'Let the traffic grow between
give and take. You can deceive
yourself by forgetting to
perceive the rainbow dreams.\'
wow, brilliant lines
January 14th, 2021 07:21
Between The Veils
L. B. Mek said:
\'Someone lives in your eyes unseen.\',
indeed, so apparent and true when pointed out
yet, so seemingly impossible to identify - when searched for: on our own...
a wonderful write, Happy New Year dear Poet
January 8th, 2021 05:20
L. B. Mek said:
\'Someone lives in your eyes unseen.\',
indeed, so apparent and true when pointed out
yet, so seemingly impossible to identify - when searched for: on our own...
a wonderful write, Happy New Year dear Poet
January 8th, 2021 05:20
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