Comments received on poems by satishverma



The Avenger
L. B. Mek said:

so layered I could write an SA for each line...
thought provoking, with crisp vivid imagery,
good write, as always

December 10th, 2020 04:04

Thinking Loud
MelissaJA said:

I like this, but especially love the last two stanzas.

December 9th, 2020 22:57

Some Halters
RDS said:

You write of universal mystery in such lovely poetry. It reflects the mysterious cosmos nicely and leads me to dreams, sensing deep connectedness and contemplation. Thanks for inspiration satishverma!
J

November 30th, 2020 15:37

Contours Of Pain
RDS said:

Satishverma thank you for a searching inquiry through verse. Your words, always houghtful (though I might not comment on all) leave me hoping for a conclusion I know can never come. Really well done.
J

November 25th, 2020 15:59

Under The Lens
L. B. Mek said:

I shall just repeat \'just wow\' from now on, I lack the vocabulary to praise your art befittingly:
\'Syntax was
beautiful, not the abstract
of the hidden truth. You
resign to become a unique!

Helpless in my integrity
I don\'t forgive me, when
I forget my enemy.
And start thievery.\'

November 24th, 2020 04:56

Retracing My Steps
L. B. Mek said:

just wow!
wish I had a modicum of your talent

November 23rd, 2020 04:46

An Ecopoem
L. B. Mek said:

\'Beneath moonlight
dark tears of stones flow.
Someday the mountains will cry
and the snow burns.\'
hauntingly vivid, good and timely write

November 23rd, 2020 03:34

An Ocean Speaks
L. B. Mek said:

wonderful! just that title alone is worth the entry fee, but then you go-on to weave this jaggedly tentative - yet gripping song, calling out for something whilst musing its virtues:
\'On my tongue and
skin, your salt burns.\'
\'Unbroken thorns
will not give up. Catching your sleeves
they will beg you to come back.\'

November 20th, 2020 04:50

An Ocean Speaks
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE ~ Good Morning SATISH ~ Thanks for an excllent & intriguing Poem ! 71% of the Earths Surface are covered by the OCEANS and they are all intimately connected by the WATER CYCLE ! Once the OCEANS were formed LIFE on Earth could begin ~ AMEN The ambient Temperature on the Earths Surface is now 16C. It is that that keeps the Oceans Liquid and a great reservoir of WATER to sustain all LIFE ON EARTH 24/7 !

Blessings & Peace & Love
Angela & Brian ! ! !

November 20th, 2020 00:02

Bumpy Ride
L. B. Mek said:

\'Vibrations start when in
storm two dark caves meet in
jungle of irreverent words.\'

\'I will keep on prodding
your stooping shoulders
to stand erect.

Nothing else will count.\'
just Brilliant!


November 12th, 2020 05:17

What Else I Will Do
Ugwu Erochukwu Shedrach said:

Well written, enjoyed the rhythm & flow.

November 3rd, 2020 07:24

Catching Myself
L. B. Mek said:

\'The craft of harvesting
will not stand the acid test.
What do you see when
there is good sunset?

Still combustible
a cinder gives off flames
inside you and inner silence
becomes bold.

In between the sentences,
the pause betrays the balance.
You cannot decipher―
the code of sacrifice.\'

Brilliant!

October 26th, 2020 03:08

An Electric Affair
L. B. Mek said:

brilliant!
I will admit, I read your write\'s hoping to learn as much as to enjoy,
\'Guru\' - I humbly thank you

October 22nd, 2020 04:05

On Cobbled Trail
L. B. Mek said:

a wonderful take: wording the empowering \'attitude\' in the term \'owning one\'s own destiny\'

October 6th, 2020 03:15

Learning From Each Other
Trenz Pruca said:

I like this poem very much.

October 2nd, 2020 14:33

A Bird Song
Laura🌻 said:

An extraordinary write!
Thank you for sharing.

September 26th, 2020 19:59

Death Of An Angel
L. B. Mek said:

Wow! Such a refined write, yet effortlessly simple to connect with, a beautifully excavated dedication

September 22nd, 2020 04:42

An Unasked Eulogy
Trenz Pruca said:

Another great poem. Thank you.

September 21st, 2020 13:17

Old Instincts
Trenz Pruca said:

Love it

September 11th, 2020 21:16

Looking Around
Trenz Pruca said:

I liked it.

September 10th, 2020 14:17

Looking Around
L. B. Mek said:

reads like an elongated haiku, or a budding renga (it will make a good start for a fusion poem),
intuitive and free: like the nature it depicts

September 10th, 2020 02:32

One Moonless Night
L. B. Mek said:

wonderful image of the solitude that invades us at times, in those bleak hours of a troublesome night

September 7th, 2020 03:42

Some Royality?
MelissaJA said:

beautiful

September 1st, 2020 21:39

Morning Landscape
L. B. Mek said:

wonderful!
I wish I wasn\'t as ignorant of some of the context you were alluding to, I imagine the read would have been that much more profound

August 27th, 2020 02:45

Life\'s Pilgrimage
FineB said:

Hello Satishverma,

A superb ✍ write.

Life is indeed a journey.

Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB

August 14th, 2020 13:49

Life\'s Pilgrimage
FineB said:

Hello Satishverma,

A superb ✍ write.

Life is indeed a journey.

Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB

August 14th, 2020 13:49

Reaching Out
RiverJordan said:

Don\'t stop writing! I should take my own advice lol

August 14th, 2020 11:29

Of Unknown Roots
A passing lyric said:

I love your poems!
I get lost in your words.

August 12th, 2020 01:15

My Penance
RiverJordan said:

Yikes

July 30th, 2020 19:35

In Yellow Moon
DianeKey6 said:

i am still gaining confidence in commenting as an early experience upset me but i want to say this had going off in different directions and really got me thinking. a challenging poem i find so much more interesting. Diane

July 16th, 2020 04:15

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