Comments received on poems by satishverma
Who did not die?
L. B. Mek said:
\'Dearth said mercy.\'
\'Right to kill was not religion.\'
\'What can be the last wish
of a stone buried in the grave\'..
(Amen!
dear Poet
Amen!)
insightful, commentary
with unerringly, arrowed precision
thank you for choosing to share: Guru!
July 29th, 2021 04:20
L. B. Mek said:
\'Dearth said mercy.\'
\'Right to kill was not religion.\'
\'What can be the last wish
of a stone buried in the grave\'..
(Amen!
dear Poet
Amen!)
insightful, commentary
with unerringly, arrowed precision
thank you for choosing to share: Guru!
July 29th, 2021 04:20
Your God, My God
L. B. Mek said:
\'There
were no scars. Who washed them?\'..
that element of forgetfulness
we encourage and nurture
to enable our survival, knowing
its very existence - insures
our cyclical suffering, can never cease
and will never - relent
for as long as we look up to the clouds
to judge our glaring mirrored truth\'s
of wilfully pathetic: self-loathing - ignorance...
(a questioning write
I couldn\'t help
but try and scribble a reply)
thank you! Guru
July 27th, 2021 04:42
L. B. Mek said:
\'There
were no scars. Who washed them?\'..
that element of forgetfulness
we encourage and nurture
to enable our survival, knowing
its very existence - insures
our cyclical suffering, can never cease
and will never - relent
for as long as we look up to the clouds
to judge our glaring mirrored truth\'s
of wilfully pathetic: self-loathing - ignorance...
(a questioning write
I couldn\'t help
but try and scribble a reply)
thank you! Guru
July 27th, 2021 04:42
The Other World
L. B. Mek said:
\'and so silently, I let
the grudgingly inevitable, unfold: before me
knowing; regretting
will soon, be all that keeps me - company...\'
(another wonderful poem, Guru!
thanks you for sharing and inspiring
my little scribbled reply)
July 26th, 2021 05:46
L. B. Mek said:
\'and so silently, I let
the grudgingly inevitable, unfold: before me
knowing; regretting
will soon, be all that keeps me - company...\'
(another wonderful poem, Guru!
thanks you for sharing and inspiring
my little scribbled reply)
July 26th, 2021 05:46
Sleeptalking
L. B. Mek said:
\'who lives beyond himself?
Where is the truth? The poem says in me.\'
words to contemplate, deeply
thank you, Guru
July 23rd, 2021 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
\'who lives beyond himself?
Where is the truth? The poem says in me.\'
words to contemplate, deeply
thank you, Guru
July 23rd, 2021 05:09
My Knowledge Was Raw
L. B. Mek said:
\'Truth comes back when we are on fire.\'
another great line, from a wonderful poem
thank you, Guru
July 22nd, 2021 03:30
L. B. Mek said:
\'Truth comes back when we are on fire.\'
another great line, from a wonderful poem
thank you, Guru
July 22nd, 2021 03:30
Show Me Your Lines
L. B. Mek said:
\'The blood dries up
in the veins.
and the memory pricks
the ocean.\'
if my poetic journey ends
with me having written a single line
as profound as the ones I highlighted
it would have all been worth it...
thanks for choosing to share
your poetic genius, Guru!
July 16th, 2021 04:56
L. B. Mek said:
\'The blood dries up
in the veins.
and the memory pricks
the ocean.\'
if my poetic journey ends
with me having written a single line
as profound as the ones I highlighted
it would have all been worth it...
thanks for choosing to share
your poetic genius, Guru!
July 16th, 2021 04:56
Time Kills You
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
(only - for me, its not the Time
that does us harm
its our needlessly cynical ability
to procrastinate
and waste, our very gift: of breath)
July 13th, 2021 05:37
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
(only - for me, its not the Time
that does us harm
its our needlessly cynical ability
to procrastinate
and waste, our very gift: of breath)
July 13th, 2021 05:37
The Epicenter Trembles
Laura🌻 said:
Satishverma,
Yes indeed…
where will we
‘keep the cadavers known
and unknown?’
Laura🌻
July 10th, 2021 19:31
Laura🌻 said:
Satishverma,
Yes indeed…
where will we
‘keep the cadavers known
and unknown?’
Laura🌻
July 10th, 2021 19:31
Myth Of Golden Love
L. B. Mek said:
\'The earth needs a pause
to think about life studies.
But Buddha sleeps.
A Sylvia Plath takes turn. You want
to bloom anger against
the opioid sleep in sun.\'
pure poetic Genius! in my humble opinion
I read and learn: Guru
July 8th, 2021 05:03
L. B. Mek said:
\'The earth needs a pause
to think about life studies.
But Buddha sleeps.
A Sylvia Plath takes turn. You want
to bloom anger against
the opioid sleep in sun.\'
pure poetic Genius! in my humble opinion
I read and learn: Guru
July 8th, 2021 05:03
Who Was The Winner?
L. B. Mek said:
\'Spring bursts after encounter with nuances.
Fumbling from poem to
poem. I would not find the meaning of
pain of bleeding pen.\'
Amen!
July 6th, 2021 03:35
L. B. Mek said:
\'Spring bursts after encounter with nuances.
Fumbling from poem to
poem. I would not find the meaning of
pain of bleeding pen.\'
Amen!
July 6th, 2021 03:35
Pain Is Flowering
L. B. Mek said:
\'Trying to solve the puzzles
of life.\'
\'Critique will give the judgement.\'
\'Why did you look back?
Would you like to sleep under the stones?\'
\'Invent a truth like a lie\'.
\'Is it not you morphed cloud of
lips in fusion of love and stings?\'
\'The heart of a fig tree says
it with flowers.\'
July 2nd, 2021 04:21
L. B. Mek said:
\'Trying to solve the puzzles
of life.\'
\'Critique will give the judgement.\'
\'Why did you look back?
Would you like to sleep under the stones?\'
\'Invent a truth like a lie\'.
\'Is it not you morphed cloud of
lips in fusion of love and stings?\'
\'The heart of a fig tree says
it with flowers.\'
July 2nd, 2021 04:21
Out Of The Question
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful!
I imagine if I wasn\'t such an ignorant fool
and had even a small grasp
of the contextual elements in your write
this would probably be
something truly profound to read..
still, for what little portion I gleaned
I thank you, Guru!
July 1st, 2021 04:22
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful!
I imagine if I wasn\'t such an ignorant fool
and had even a small grasp
of the contextual elements in your write
this would probably be
something truly profound to read..
still, for what little portion I gleaned
I thank you, Guru!
July 1st, 2021 04:22
Turn Off The Lights
Laura🌻 said:
satishverma,
An extraordinarily rich write from an extraordinary poet!
Laura🌻
June 25th, 2021 21:59
Laura🌻 said:
satishverma,
An extraordinarily rich write from an extraordinary poet!
Laura🌻
June 25th, 2021 21:59
Nightfall
L. B. Mek said:
(such a brilliant poem: Guru;
forgive me, I just had to try and respond
however inadequate my words may read
aside - your poetic genius)..
those symbolic Bilberries of yearned-for, modest perfection
do indeed stain our legacies
churn our guts, till our eyes: glare Green
and somewhere in that mirage of our shadow\'s shed
we awaken, a small sprouting of hope
accustomed to aiming low, for being planted
in a world with diminishing light: to begin with...
June 25th, 2021 05:44
L. B. Mek said:
(such a brilliant poem: Guru;
forgive me, I just had to try and respond
however inadequate my words may read
aside - your poetic genius)..
those symbolic Bilberries of yearned-for, modest perfection
do indeed stain our legacies
churn our guts, till our eyes: glare Green
and somewhere in that mirage of our shadow\'s shed
we awaken, a small sprouting of hope
accustomed to aiming low, for being planted
in a world with diminishing light: to begin with...
June 25th, 2021 05:44
Poetry Vs Poverty
Andy Hunter said:
A very philosophical write. Well written with a strong message
June 22nd, 2021 13:08
Andy Hunter said:
A very philosophical write. Well written with a strong message
June 22nd, 2021 13:08
Poetry Vs Poverty
L. B. Mek said:
traversing straight, is a fine - trait
its just, they bequeathed us a path
so narrow: we lack, scope - enough
to envision a future
beyond, that abundantly incessant strife
foreshadowing, our every step...
June 22nd, 2021 04:07
L. B. Mek said:
traversing straight, is a fine - trait
its just, they bequeathed us a path
so narrow: we lack, scope - enough
to envision a future
beyond, that abundantly incessant strife
foreshadowing, our every step...
June 22nd, 2021 04:07
The Compass Failed
L. B. Mek said:
directionless we may find ourselves
momentarily
now and then, but pathless
is a state we can never be
whilst we yet: draw breath...
for even in our mind\'s
this life we traverse, is endless
in its variety and scope;
its only ourselves, that limit
our possibilities horizon\'s
by squinting needlessly
instead of trusting, in our ability...
June 21st, 2021 05:43
L. B. Mek said:
directionless we may find ourselves
momentarily
now and then, but pathless
is a state we can never be
whilst we yet: draw breath...
for even in our mind\'s
this life we traverse, is endless
in its variety and scope;
its only ourselves, that limit
our possibilities horizon\'s
by squinting needlessly
instead of trusting, in our ability...
June 21st, 2021 05:43
Do Not Throw The Moon
iAli said:
Good writing, but I don\'t get the nomenclature 😅
June 20th, 2021 08:42
iAli said:
Good writing, but I don\'t get the nomenclature 😅
June 20th, 2021 08:42
Is This Futurism?
L. B. Mek said:
yep, so few know
that \'the wasteland\' was partly inspired
by the miserable divorce, T. S. Elliot, experienced..
\'Ignited\': Indeed...!
(but its Peaches, he dared: not mangoes) lol
June 18th, 2021 03:37
L. B. Mek said:
yep, so few know
that \'the wasteland\' was partly inspired
by the miserable divorce, T. S. Elliot, experienced..
\'Ignited\': Indeed...!
(but its Peaches, he dared: not mangoes) lol
June 18th, 2021 03:37
Someone Falls In The Feet
L. B. Mek said:
because Love, stings
and yet, even one-eyed
we simply: can\'t resist...
another brilliant poem, Guru
as ever, I read and learn
thank you!
June 17th, 2021 05:28
L. B. Mek said:
because Love, stings
and yet, even one-eyed
we simply: can\'t resist...
another brilliant poem, Guru
as ever, I read and learn
thank you!
June 17th, 2021 05:28
A Game Within A Game
Blue Poet said:
\"All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream\" - E. A. Poe
June 16th, 2021 00:41
Blue Poet said:
\"All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream\" - E. A. Poe
June 16th, 2021 00:41
Holy Vision
Saxon Crow said:
Satish i have to say your poems are VERY deep and i have trouble swimming to the bottom. But they are captivating
June 13th, 2021 02:02
Saxon Crow said:
Satish i have to say your poems are VERY deep and i have trouble swimming to the bottom. But they are captivating
June 13th, 2021 02:02
Dying Is Easy
L. B. Mek said:
\'Dying Is Easy
When identity fails
you become human.\'
and that:
is why, nihilism
is such an easy sell...
June 11th, 2021 04:40
L. B. Mek said:
\'Dying Is Easy
When identity fails
you become human.\'
and that:
is why, nihilism
is such an easy sell...
June 11th, 2021 04:40
The Virgin Blood
L. B. Mek said:
limitless, in your searching scope
for unearthing your truth..
I read and learn, Guru
thanks for choosing to share your brilliance
June 10th, 2021 02:47
L. B. Mek said:
limitless, in your searching scope
for unearthing your truth..
I read and learn, Guru
thanks for choosing to share your brilliance
June 10th, 2021 02:47
The Stones Are Coming
L. B. Mek said:
\'There
was no afterword after the kill.\'
or satisfaction
after the stoning, instead
a new trend sprouted
and a new quest started
for that new target, imbued
with absolution\'s: mirage gate\'s...
(thank you for sharing, Guru)
June 8th, 2021 06:05
L. B. Mek said:
\'There
was no afterword after the kill.\'
or satisfaction
after the stoning, instead
a new trend sprouted
and a new quest started
for that new target, imbued
with absolution\'s: mirage gate\'s...
(thank you for sharing, Guru)
June 8th, 2021 06:05
Who was unseen?
L. B. Mek said:
\'I start trembling in the unchanged heart.
I want the proximity of the flame.\'
\'Let some light burn.\'
\'I prepare myself for a violent break.
And again start moving away from myself.\'
\'The ingenuity betrays.\'
wow!
what a comprehensive and succinct distillation
of that moonlit anxiety, we all harbour.
Brilliant!
June 4th, 2021 05:11
L. B. Mek said:
\'I start trembling in the unchanged heart.
I want the proximity of the flame.\'
\'Let some light burn.\'
\'I prepare myself for a violent break.
And again start moving away from myself.\'
\'The ingenuity betrays.\'
wow!
what a comprehensive and succinct distillation
of that moonlit anxiety, we all harbour.
Brilliant!
June 4th, 2021 05:11
Dark Skinned Love
L. B. Mek said:
\'Yes it was my vengeance. \'
\'The wisdom kills.\'
\'Peel of the tangerine.\'
\'Small words scream.\'
\'Look- where I have come.\'
\'I want to see how much the moon bleeds.\'
\'How far was the center?\'
\'Lots of smoke.\'
\'Winter will not go.\'
\'Will you ever dance in a triangle?\'
\'Will wear the ochre color.\'
\'Dark Skinned Love\'
\'Winter will not go.\'
June 3rd, 2021 04:57
L. B. Mek said:
\'Yes it was my vengeance. \'
\'The wisdom kills.\'
\'Peel of the tangerine.\'
\'Small words scream.\'
\'Look- where I have come.\'
\'I want to see how much the moon bleeds.\'
\'How far was the center?\'
\'Lots of smoke.\'
\'Winter will not go.\'
\'Will you ever dance in a triangle?\'
\'Will wear the ochre color.\'
\'Dark Skinned Love\'
\'Winter will not go.\'
June 3rd, 2021 04:57
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