Comments received on poems by satishverma



Looking Around
L. B. Mek said:

reads like an elongated haiku, or a budding renga (it will make a good start for a fusion poem),
intuitive and free: like the nature it depicts

September 10th, 2020 02:32

One Moonless Night
L. B. Mek said:

wonderful image of the solitude that invades us at times, in those bleak hours of a troublesome night

September 7th, 2020 03:42

Some Royality?
MelissaJA said:

beautiful

September 1st, 2020 21:39

Morning Landscape
L. B. Mek said:

wonderful!
I wish I wasn\'t as ignorant of some of the context you were alluding to, I imagine the read would have been that much more profound

August 27th, 2020 02:45

Life\'s Pilgrimage
FineB said:

Hello Satishverma,

A superb ✍ write.

Life is indeed a journey.

Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB

August 14th, 2020 13:49

Life\'s Pilgrimage
FineB said:

Hello Satishverma,

A superb ✍ write.

Life is indeed a journey.

Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB

August 14th, 2020 13:49

Reaching Out
RiverJordan said:

Don\'t stop writing! I should take my own advice lol

August 14th, 2020 11:29

Of Unknown Roots
A passing lyric said:

I love your poems!
I get lost in your words.

August 12th, 2020 01:15

My Penance
RiverJordan said:

Yikes

July 30th, 2020 19:35

In Yellow Moon
DianeKey6 said:

i am still gaining confidence in commenting as an early experience upset me but i want to say this had going off in different directions and really got me thinking. a challenging poem i find so much more interesting. Diane

July 16th, 2020 04:15

Snow Flurries
jarcher54 said:

Lovely and painful... I felt like I knew where you were going from the first line. Yet it was a shock nonetheless.

July 15th, 2020 23:16

Drunk Like Black Stones
PoeticBiscuit said:

The way you put words together is a masterpiece within itself.

July 7th, 2020 20:56

Enactor
jarcher54 said:

So many ways of responding to poetry... I will remember this one, being mauled by a raging tiger. Yes, we\'ve all been shaken like a helpless prey by the right poem, or the art of poesy in the right hands... Countee Cullen, Yeats, Blake, Sappho, Anne Carson... and sometimes a humble community poet on MPS!

July 5th, 2020 19:47

Strange Privacy
Laura🌻 said:

How many more
will have to die?

June 20th, 2020 19:35

Being Grateful
Laura🌻 said:

Powerful indeed!

May 26th, 2020 21:02

Seed Money
WildMoonChild said:

Loved this

May 19th, 2020 22:59

Tolerance
whisperingquill said:

beautiful piece...philosophically splendid

April 5th, 2020 10:30

September Woes
anonymousblue said:

Beautiful and colorful!

March 24th, 2020 03:12

Recuperating
tundrol said:

Interesting. But I have problems making the connections.

March 20th, 2020 10:35

In This Age
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

vanymore...very n8ve work as always..ialways..it Stounds me that you seldom go a single dat without posting..

March 1st, 2020 06:37

This Happened
Seek said:

The climb to one\'s final abode; how intriguing! Most ordinary mortals like me see the journey to the final abode as a descent. Profound write.

February 9th, 2020 07:59

This Happened
Daydream Believer said:

I really enjoyed your words on grief and the journey it can take you on. A wonderful write

February 9th, 2020 04:27

Remembering Pythagoras
FineB said:

Hello Satish,

A good write. Thank you.

Keep writing
FineB

January 17th, 2020 07:15

Like The Flames
AlitaOpal said:

An amazing write 🌹Thank you

January 9th, 2020 20:00

For Intensive Eyes
Nemo said:

Not a book of defeat, but the book where u tried and tried till you were the best.
Great piece 👍

January 1st, 2020 00:33

Made On Earth
Aislinn Wilson said:

I love your unorthodox line breaks.

November 5th, 2019 22:24

Subject To Arguments
RiverJordan said:

You are natural

October 26th, 2019 21:11

Subject To Arguments
Laura🌻 said:

Satis,

A brilliant piece!

~Laura~

October 26th, 2019 20:56

Fantasies And Myths
Thoughts In Time said:

Invisible yet visible...energies destroyed and shortened by incorrect choices ..dying to self and flesh is needed for healing ...choices ...makes one think 🌹

October 9th, 2019 08:42

The Dirty Beliefs
Alta H Mabin said:

Absolutely beautifully written.

September 28th, 2019 12:39



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