Comments received on poems by satishverma
Why Do I Suffer?
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, beautiful ending of a vibe I could feel right down to my soul.
Thanks for letting it go!
January 6th, 2021 01:53
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, beautiful ending of a vibe I could feel right down to my soul.
Thanks for letting it go!
January 6th, 2021 01:53
Repentance
Amon said:
Feathers carrying the wages of sins to fly after my lips taste.
So I will just let it go
January 2nd, 2021 03:32
Amon said:
Feathers carrying the wages of sins to fly after my lips taste.
So I will just let it go
January 2nd, 2021 03:32
Without Ceremony
L. B. Mek said:
\'What a thrill -
My thumb instead of an onion.
The top quite gone
Except for a sort of hinge\'
wrote Sylvia in her \'Cut\'
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-22437
and your words too:
cut, straight through me at first read,
seeped - deep within at second read
and forced me to click that favourite icon on third read...
thanks for sharing your unquestionable talent dear Poet
December 31st, 2020 06:24
L. B. Mek said:
\'What a thrill -
My thumb instead of an onion.
The top quite gone
Except for a sort of hinge\'
wrote Sylvia in her \'Cut\'
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-22437
and your words too:
cut, straight through me at first read,
seeped - deep within at second read
and forced me to click that favourite icon on third read...
thanks for sharing your unquestionable talent dear Poet
December 31st, 2020 06:24
Becoming Strangers
L. B. Mek said:
and behold: you can write again... lol
Happy holidays dear Poet
December 24th, 2020 06:16
L. B. Mek said:
and behold: you can write again... lol
Happy holidays dear Poet
December 24th, 2020 06:16
The Avenger
L. B. Mek said:
so layered I could write an SA for each line...
thought provoking, with crisp vivid imagery,
good write, as always
December 10th, 2020 04:04
L. B. Mek said:
so layered I could write an SA for each line...
thought provoking, with crisp vivid imagery,
good write, as always
December 10th, 2020 04:04
Thinking Loud
MelissaJA said:
I like this, but especially love the last two stanzas.
December 9th, 2020 22:57
MelissaJA said:
I like this, but especially love the last two stanzas.
December 9th, 2020 22:57
Some Halters
RDS said:
You write of universal mystery in such lovely poetry. It reflects the mysterious cosmos nicely and leads me to dreams, sensing deep connectedness and contemplation. Thanks for inspiration satishverma!
J
November 30th, 2020 15:37
RDS said:
You write of universal mystery in such lovely poetry. It reflects the mysterious cosmos nicely and leads me to dreams, sensing deep connectedness and contemplation. Thanks for inspiration satishverma!
J
November 30th, 2020 15:37
Contours Of Pain
RDS said:
Satishverma thank you for a searching inquiry through verse. Your words, always houghtful (though I might not comment on all) leave me hoping for a conclusion I know can never come. Really well done.
J
November 25th, 2020 15:59
RDS said:
Satishverma thank you for a searching inquiry through verse. Your words, always houghtful (though I might not comment on all) leave me hoping for a conclusion I know can never come. Really well done.
J
November 25th, 2020 15:59
Under The Lens
L. B. Mek said:
I shall just repeat \'just wow\' from now on, I lack the vocabulary to praise your art befittingly:
\'Syntax was
beautiful, not the abstract
of the hidden truth. You
resign to become a unique!
Helpless in my integrity
I don\'t forgive me, when
I forget my enemy.
And start thievery.\'
November 24th, 2020 04:56
L. B. Mek said:
I shall just repeat \'just wow\' from now on, I lack the vocabulary to praise your art befittingly:
\'Syntax was
beautiful, not the abstract
of the hidden truth. You
resign to become a unique!
Helpless in my integrity
I don\'t forgive me, when
I forget my enemy.
And start thievery.\'
November 24th, 2020 04:56
Retracing My Steps
L. B. Mek said:
just wow!
wish I had a modicum of your talent
November 23rd, 2020 04:46
L. B. Mek said:
just wow!
wish I had a modicum of your talent
November 23rd, 2020 04:46
An Ecopoem
L. B. Mek said:
\'Beneath moonlight
dark tears of stones flow.
Someday the mountains will cry
and the snow burns.\'
hauntingly vivid, good and timely write
November 23rd, 2020 03:34
L. B. Mek said:
\'Beneath moonlight
dark tears of stones flow.
Someday the mountains will cry
and the snow burns.\'
hauntingly vivid, good and timely write
November 23rd, 2020 03:34
An Ocean Speaks
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful! just that title alone is worth the entry fee, but then you go-on to weave this jaggedly tentative - yet gripping song, calling out for something whilst musing its virtues:
\'On my tongue and
skin, your salt burns.\'
\'Unbroken thorns
will not give up. Catching your sleeves
they will beg you to come back.\'
November 20th, 2020 04:50
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful! just that title alone is worth the entry fee, but then you go-on to weave this jaggedly tentative - yet gripping song, calling out for something whilst musing its virtues:
\'On my tongue and
skin, your salt burns.\'
\'Unbroken thorns
will not give up. Catching your sleeves
they will beg you to come back.\'
November 20th, 2020 04:50
An Ocean Speaks
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Good Morning SATISH ~ Thanks for an excllent & intriguing Poem ! 71% of the Earths Surface are covered by the OCEANS and they are all intimately connected by the WATER CYCLE ! Once the OCEANS were formed LIFE on Earth could begin ~ AMEN The ambient Temperature on the Earths Surface is now 16C. It is that that keeps the Oceans Liquid and a great reservoir of WATER to sustain all LIFE ON EARTH 24/7 !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Angela & Brian ! ! !
November 20th, 2020 00:02
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Good Morning SATISH ~ Thanks for an excllent & intriguing Poem ! 71% of the Earths Surface are covered by the OCEANS and they are all intimately connected by the WATER CYCLE ! Once the OCEANS were formed LIFE on Earth could begin ~ AMEN The ambient Temperature on the Earths Surface is now 16C. It is that that keeps the Oceans Liquid and a great reservoir of WATER to sustain all LIFE ON EARTH 24/7 !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Angela & Brian ! ! !
November 20th, 2020 00:02
Bumpy Ride
L. B. Mek said:
\'Vibrations start when in
storm two dark caves meet in
jungle of irreverent words.\'
\'I will keep on prodding
your stooping shoulders
to stand erect.
Nothing else will count.\'
just Brilliant!
November 12th, 2020 05:17
L. B. Mek said:
\'Vibrations start when in
storm two dark caves meet in
jungle of irreverent words.\'
\'I will keep on prodding
your stooping shoulders
to stand erect.
Nothing else will count.\'
just Brilliant!
November 12th, 2020 05:17
What Else I Will Do
Ugwu Erochukwu Shedrach said:
Well written, enjoyed the rhythm & flow.
November 3rd, 2020 07:24
Ugwu Erochukwu Shedrach said:
Well written, enjoyed the rhythm & flow.
November 3rd, 2020 07:24
Catching Myself
L. B. Mek said:
\'The craft of harvesting
will not stand the acid test.
What do you see when
there is good sunset?
Still combustible
a cinder gives off flames
inside you and inner silence
becomes bold.
In between the sentences,
the pause betrays the balance.
You cannot decipher―
the code of sacrifice.\'
Brilliant!
October 26th, 2020 03:08
L. B. Mek said:
\'The craft of harvesting
will not stand the acid test.
What do you see when
there is good sunset?
Still combustible
a cinder gives off flames
inside you and inner silence
becomes bold.
In between the sentences,
the pause betrays the balance.
You cannot decipher―
the code of sacrifice.\'
Brilliant!
October 26th, 2020 03:08
An Electric Affair
L. B. Mek said:
brilliant!
I will admit, I read your write\'s hoping to learn as much as to enjoy,
\'Guru\' - I humbly thank you
October 22nd, 2020 04:05
L. B. Mek said:
brilliant!
I will admit, I read your write\'s hoping to learn as much as to enjoy,
\'Guru\' - I humbly thank you
October 22nd, 2020 04:05
On Cobbled Trail
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful take: wording the empowering \'attitude\' in the term \'owning one\'s own destiny\'
October 6th, 2020 03:15
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful take: wording the empowering \'attitude\' in the term \'owning one\'s own destiny\'
October 6th, 2020 03:15
A Bird Song
Laura🌻 said:
An extraordinary write!
Thank you for sharing.
September 26th, 2020 19:59
Laura🌻 said:
An extraordinary write!
Thank you for sharing.
September 26th, 2020 19:59
Death Of An Angel
L. B. Mek said:
Wow! Such a refined write, yet effortlessly simple to connect with, a beautifully excavated dedication
September 22nd, 2020 04:42
L. B. Mek said:
Wow! Such a refined write, yet effortlessly simple to connect with, a beautifully excavated dedication
September 22nd, 2020 04:42
Looking Around
L. B. Mek said:
reads like an elongated haiku, or a budding renga (it will make a good start for a fusion poem),
intuitive and free: like the nature it depicts
September 10th, 2020 02:32
L. B. Mek said:
reads like an elongated haiku, or a budding renga (it will make a good start for a fusion poem),
intuitive and free: like the nature it depicts
September 10th, 2020 02:32
One Moonless Night
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful image of the solitude that invades us at times, in those bleak hours of a troublesome night
September 7th, 2020 03:42
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful image of the solitude that invades us at times, in those bleak hours of a troublesome night
September 7th, 2020 03:42
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