Comments received on poems by satishverma
Show Me Your Lines
L. B. Mek said:
\'The blood dries up
in the veins.
and the memory pricks
the ocean.\'
if my poetic journey ends
with me having written a single line
as profound as the ones I highlighted
it would have all been worth it...
thanks for choosing to share
your poetic genius, Guru!
July 16th, 2021 04:56
L. B. Mek said:
\'The blood dries up
in the veins.
and the memory pricks
the ocean.\'
if my poetic journey ends
with me having written a single line
as profound as the ones I highlighted
it would have all been worth it...
thanks for choosing to share
your poetic genius, Guru!
July 16th, 2021 04:56
Time Kills You
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
(only - for me, its not the Time
that does us harm
its our needlessly cynical ability
to procrastinate
and waste, our very gift: of breath)
July 13th, 2021 05:37
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
(only - for me, its not the Time
that does us harm
its our needlessly cynical ability
to procrastinate
and waste, our very gift: of breath)
July 13th, 2021 05:37
The Epicenter Trembles
Laura🌻 said:
Satishverma,
Yes indeed…
where will we
‘keep the cadavers known
and unknown?’
Laura🌻
July 10th, 2021 19:31
Laura🌻 said:
Satishverma,
Yes indeed…
where will we
‘keep the cadavers known
and unknown?’
Laura🌻
July 10th, 2021 19:31
Myth Of Golden Love
L. B. Mek said:
\'The earth needs a pause
to think about life studies.
But Buddha sleeps.
A Sylvia Plath takes turn. You want
to bloom anger against
the opioid sleep in sun.\'
pure poetic Genius! in my humble opinion
I read and learn: Guru
July 8th, 2021 05:03
L. B. Mek said:
\'The earth needs a pause
to think about life studies.
But Buddha sleeps.
A Sylvia Plath takes turn. You want
to bloom anger against
the opioid sleep in sun.\'
pure poetic Genius! in my humble opinion
I read and learn: Guru
July 8th, 2021 05:03
Who Was The Winner?
L. B. Mek said:
\'Spring bursts after encounter with nuances.
Fumbling from poem to
poem. I would not find the meaning of
pain of bleeding pen.\'
Amen!
July 6th, 2021 03:35
L. B. Mek said:
\'Spring bursts after encounter with nuances.
Fumbling from poem to
poem. I would not find the meaning of
pain of bleeding pen.\'
Amen!
July 6th, 2021 03:35
Pain Is Flowering
L. B. Mek said:
\'Trying to solve the puzzles
of life.\'
\'Critique will give the judgement.\'
\'Why did you look back?
Would you like to sleep under the stones?\'
\'Invent a truth like a lie\'.
\'Is it not you morphed cloud of
lips in fusion of love and stings?\'
\'The heart of a fig tree says
it with flowers.\'
July 2nd, 2021 04:21
L. B. Mek said:
\'Trying to solve the puzzles
of life.\'
\'Critique will give the judgement.\'
\'Why did you look back?
Would you like to sleep under the stones?\'
\'Invent a truth like a lie\'.
\'Is it not you morphed cloud of
lips in fusion of love and stings?\'
\'The heart of a fig tree says
it with flowers.\'
July 2nd, 2021 04:21
Out Of The Question
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful!
I imagine if I wasn\'t such an ignorant fool
and had even a small grasp
of the contextual elements in your write
this would probably be
something truly profound to read..
still, for what little portion I gleaned
I thank you, Guru!
July 1st, 2021 04:22
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful!
I imagine if I wasn\'t such an ignorant fool
and had even a small grasp
of the contextual elements in your write
this would probably be
something truly profound to read..
still, for what little portion I gleaned
I thank you, Guru!
July 1st, 2021 04:22
Turn Off The Lights
Laura🌻 said:
satishverma,
An extraordinarily rich write from an extraordinary poet!
Laura🌻
June 25th, 2021 21:59
Laura🌻 said:
satishverma,
An extraordinarily rich write from an extraordinary poet!
Laura🌻
June 25th, 2021 21:59
Nightfall
L. B. Mek said:
(such a brilliant poem: Guru;
forgive me, I just had to try and respond
however inadequate my words may read
aside - your poetic genius)..
those symbolic Bilberries of yearned-for, modest perfection
do indeed stain our legacies
churn our guts, till our eyes: glare Green
and somewhere in that mirage of our shadow\'s shed
we awaken, a small sprouting of hope
accustomed to aiming low, for being planted
in a world with diminishing light: to begin with...
June 25th, 2021 05:44
L. B. Mek said:
(such a brilliant poem: Guru;
forgive me, I just had to try and respond
however inadequate my words may read
aside - your poetic genius)..
those symbolic Bilberries of yearned-for, modest perfection
do indeed stain our legacies
churn our guts, till our eyes: glare Green
and somewhere in that mirage of our shadow\'s shed
we awaken, a small sprouting of hope
accustomed to aiming low, for being planted
in a world with diminishing light: to begin with...
June 25th, 2021 05:44
Poetry Vs Poverty
Andy Hunter said:
A very philosophical write. Well written with a strong message
June 22nd, 2021 13:08
Andy Hunter said:
A very philosophical write. Well written with a strong message
June 22nd, 2021 13:08
Poetry Vs Poverty
L. B. Mek said:
traversing straight, is a fine - trait
its just, they bequeathed us a path
so narrow: we lack, scope - enough
to envision a future
beyond, that abundantly incessant strife
foreshadowing, our every step...
June 22nd, 2021 04:07
L. B. Mek said:
traversing straight, is a fine - trait
its just, they bequeathed us a path
so narrow: we lack, scope - enough
to envision a future
beyond, that abundantly incessant strife
foreshadowing, our every step...
June 22nd, 2021 04:07
The Compass Failed
L. B. Mek said:
directionless we may find ourselves
momentarily
now and then, but pathless
is a state we can never be
whilst we yet: draw breath...
for even in our mind\'s
this life we traverse, is endless
in its variety and scope;
its only ourselves, that limit
our possibilities horizon\'s
by squinting needlessly
instead of trusting, in our ability...
June 21st, 2021 05:43
L. B. Mek said:
directionless we may find ourselves
momentarily
now and then, but pathless
is a state we can never be
whilst we yet: draw breath...
for even in our mind\'s
this life we traverse, is endless
in its variety and scope;
its only ourselves, that limit
our possibilities horizon\'s
by squinting needlessly
instead of trusting, in our ability...
June 21st, 2021 05:43
Do Not Throw The Moon
iAli said:
Good writing, but I don\'t get the nomenclature 😅
June 20th, 2021 08:42
iAli said:
Good writing, but I don\'t get the nomenclature 😅
June 20th, 2021 08:42
Is This Futurism?
L. B. Mek said:
yep, so few know
that \'the wasteland\' was partly inspired
by the miserable divorce, T. S. Elliot, experienced..
\'Ignited\': Indeed...!
(but its Peaches, he dared: not mangoes) lol
June 18th, 2021 03:37
L. B. Mek said:
yep, so few know
that \'the wasteland\' was partly inspired
by the miserable divorce, T. S. Elliot, experienced..
\'Ignited\': Indeed...!
(but its Peaches, he dared: not mangoes) lol
June 18th, 2021 03:37
Someone Falls In The Feet
L. B. Mek said:
because Love, stings
and yet, even one-eyed
we simply: can\'t resist...
another brilliant poem, Guru
as ever, I read and learn
thank you!
June 17th, 2021 05:28
L. B. Mek said:
because Love, stings
and yet, even one-eyed
we simply: can\'t resist...
another brilliant poem, Guru
as ever, I read and learn
thank you!
June 17th, 2021 05:28
A Game Within A Game
Blue Poet said:
\"All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream\" - E. A. Poe
June 16th, 2021 00:41
Blue Poet said:
\"All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream\" - E. A. Poe
June 16th, 2021 00:41
Holy Vision
Saxon Crow said:
Satish i have to say your poems are VERY deep and i have trouble swimming to the bottom. But they are captivating
June 13th, 2021 02:02
Saxon Crow said:
Satish i have to say your poems are VERY deep and i have trouble swimming to the bottom. But they are captivating
June 13th, 2021 02:02
Dying Is Easy
L. B. Mek said:
\'Dying Is Easy
When identity fails
you become human.\'
and that:
is why, nihilism
is such an easy sell...
June 11th, 2021 04:40
L. B. Mek said:
\'Dying Is Easy
When identity fails
you become human.\'
and that:
is why, nihilism
is such an easy sell...
June 11th, 2021 04:40
The Virgin Blood
L. B. Mek said:
limitless, in your searching scope
for unearthing your truth..
I read and learn, Guru
thanks for choosing to share your brilliance
June 10th, 2021 02:47
L. B. Mek said:
limitless, in your searching scope
for unearthing your truth..
I read and learn, Guru
thanks for choosing to share your brilliance
June 10th, 2021 02:47
The Stones Are Coming
L. B. Mek said:
\'There
was no afterword after the kill.\'
or satisfaction
after the stoning, instead
a new trend sprouted
and a new quest started
for that new target, imbued
with absolution\'s: mirage gate\'s...
(thank you for sharing, Guru)
June 8th, 2021 06:05
L. B. Mek said:
\'There
was no afterword after the kill.\'
or satisfaction
after the stoning, instead
a new trend sprouted
and a new quest started
for that new target, imbued
with absolution\'s: mirage gate\'s...
(thank you for sharing, Guru)
June 8th, 2021 06:05
Who was unseen?
L. B. Mek said:
\'I start trembling in the unchanged heart.
I want the proximity of the flame.\'
\'Let some light burn.\'
\'I prepare myself for a violent break.
And again start moving away from myself.\'
\'The ingenuity betrays.\'
wow!
what a comprehensive and succinct distillation
of that moonlit anxiety, we all harbour.
Brilliant!
June 4th, 2021 05:11
L. B. Mek said:
\'I start trembling in the unchanged heart.
I want the proximity of the flame.\'
\'Let some light burn.\'
\'I prepare myself for a violent break.
And again start moving away from myself.\'
\'The ingenuity betrays.\'
wow!
what a comprehensive and succinct distillation
of that moonlit anxiety, we all harbour.
Brilliant!
June 4th, 2021 05:11
Dark Skinned Love
L. B. Mek said:
\'Yes it was my vengeance. \'
\'The wisdom kills.\'
\'Peel of the tangerine.\'
\'Small words scream.\'
\'Look- where I have come.\'
\'I want to see how much the moon bleeds.\'
\'How far was the center?\'
\'Lots of smoke.\'
\'Winter will not go.\'
\'Will you ever dance in a triangle?\'
\'Will wear the ochre color.\'
\'Dark Skinned Love\'
\'Winter will not go.\'
June 3rd, 2021 04:57
L. B. Mek said:
\'Yes it was my vengeance. \'
\'The wisdom kills.\'
\'Peel of the tangerine.\'
\'Small words scream.\'
\'Look- where I have come.\'
\'I want to see how much the moon bleeds.\'
\'How far was the center?\'
\'Lots of smoke.\'
\'Winter will not go.\'
\'Will you ever dance in a triangle?\'
\'Will wear the ochre color.\'
\'Dark Skinned Love\'
\'Winter will not go.\'
June 3rd, 2021 04:57
Flawless Genocide
L. B. Mek said:
what a harrowingly - grim, title
and yet, so despairingly relatable...
May 27th, 2021 04:46
L. B. Mek said:
what a harrowingly - grim, title
and yet, so despairingly relatable...
May 27th, 2021 04:46
Mythical Thoughts
L. B. Mek said:
\'dark in equinox,
confuses the waiting
dawn.
Love stings.
And fog covers, the aura
of falling leaves\'..
I read and learn: Guru!
thanks for choosing to share, dear Poet
May 24th, 2021 06:20
L. B. Mek said:
\'dark in equinox,
confuses the waiting
dawn.
Love stings.
And fog covers, the aura
of falling leaves\'..
I read and learn: Guru!
thanks for choosing to share, dear Poet
May 24th, 2021 06:20
Unmasked Tulips
L. B. Mek said:
\'Why disquieting
under
the water.
It is not the shipwreck. We
are swimming
to find the depth of love.\'
Guru, your words
need to be enshrined somewhere
so all of time can reflect and acknowledge
such a distilled account, of humanity\'s
most self-destructive: trait
those festering poisons that lurk, beneath our skin
in our shallow rivers of tainted blood, \'veined-glory\'
from the divisive oxygen of intolerance and hate
we\'ve been force-fed, since birth....!
May 21st, 2021 03:59
L. B. Mek said:
\'Why disquieting
under
the water.
It is not the shipwreck. We
are swimming
to find the depth of love.\'
Guru, your words
need to be enshrined somewhere
so all of time can reflect and acknowledge
such a distilled account, of humanity\'s
most self-destructive: trait
those festering poisons that lurk, beneath our skin
in our shallow rivers of tainted blood, \'veined-glory\'
from the divisive oxygen of intolerance and hate
we\'ve been force-fed, since birth....!
May 21st, 2021 03:59
No Casabianca
L. B. Mek said:
\'The otherness of uncertainty
Yes it is true. In an
aquarium the golden fish eats the
dying fish,
what laughing hyenas eat?
like man eats the man.
The legacy keeps a watch
a miracle, the night will dance.\'
May 20th, 2021 05:06
L. B. Mek said:
\'The otherness of uncertainty
Yes it is true. In an
aquarium the golden fish eats the
dying fish,
what laughing hyenas eat?
like man eats the man.
The legacy keeps a watch
a miracle, the night will dance.\'
May 20th, 2021 05:06
Litany For None
L. B. Mek said:
more bleak, in tone dear Guru
but no less profound in its Poetic brevity
so acutely you\'ve worded, these layers of insight
like Trenz Pruca commented, it needs to be read
a few times, just to identify the signposts
to its meaningful, worth..
thanks for sharing
May 17th, 2021 06:56
L. B. Mek said:
more bleak, in tone dear Guru
but no less profound in its Poetic brevity
so acutely you\'ve worded, these layers of insight
like Trenz Pruca commented, it needs to be read
a few times, just to identify the signposts
to its meaningful, worth..
thanks for sharing
May 17th, 2021 06:56
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