Comments received on poems by satishverma
From Thoughts To Thoughts
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!!!
I read and learn: Guru
(the First Poet, was the first born
with the gift of sentient thought;
the First, Poem: is yet to be written)
\'in my humble opinion\'
(\'Do not avail
the sedition in this poor land.
Wheat color of the temples
want to follow
the burning sun, to take away
our differences.
The legacy of the moon
does not want
to flood the meanings.
A breathless call
was from white sky,
who was the first poet
of this wobbly world?\')
who indeed...
I doubt we\'ll find out,
even after we\'ve crossed
that six feet, divide
October 18th, 2021 05:34
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!!!
I read and learn: Guru
(the First Poet, was the first born
with the gift of sentient thought;
the First, Poem: is yet to be written)
\'in my humble opinion\'
(\'Do not avail
the sedition in this poor land.
Wheat color of the temples
want to follow
the burning sun, to take away
our differences.
The legacy of the moon
does not want
to flood the meanings.
A breathless call
was from white sky,
who was the first poet
of this wobbly world?\')
who indeed...
I doubt we\'ll find out,
even after we\'ve crossed
that six feet, divide
October 18th, 2021 05:34
My Religion Sinks
L. B. Mek said:
lol
wrath, how addictive
your bitter taste on my tongue
that scarlet decoration of anger\'s, bitten lip;
I shall dismiss your existence
by dedicating my poetry to you,
I shall refute your influence
by counting-out my syllables to your name,
Sylvia was broken
and Nietzsche, announced our collective blasphemy - early...
So, I ask \'you\'? (that\'s a generic you)
and So, fckn what?
What exactly has changed?
What\'s \'gotten beta\'?
What does it matter if you
\'Worship\'
a misinterpreted Deity,
a progressively corrupted Science
or that Nihilistic Atheism?
What, does it all matter
when all we\'re doing is making up
new excuses
just to distract from the fallibility in our own Nature\'s reflections?
Fck, stereotypes
Fck, all the idolised - idols
Fck, the new Awakening \'wokeness\'
based on old texts and rusted philosophies
Keep your capitalism and your communism..
We should all build our own ships, for our own communities
and sail the rivers we Choose,
Leave the sea for those poetic \'Sharks\'...!
October 14th, 2021 04:47
L. B. Mek said:
lol
wrath, how addictive
your bitter taste on my tongue
that scarlet decoration of anger\'s, bitten lip;
I shall dismiss your existence
by dedicating my poetry to you,
I shall refute your influence
by counting-out my syllables to your name,
Sylvia was broken
and Nietzsche, announced our collective blasphemy - early...
So, I ask \'you\'? (that\'s a generic you)
and So, fckn what?
What exactly has changed?
What\'s \'gotten beta\'?
What does it matter if you
\'Worship\'
a misinterpreted Deity,
a progressively corrupted Science
or that Nihilistic Atheism?
What, does it all matter
when all we\'re doing is making up
new excuses
just to distract from the fallibility in our own Nature\'s reflections?
Fck, stereotypes
Fck, all the idolised - idols
Fck, the new Awakening \'wokeness\'
based on old texts and rusted philosophies
Keep your capitalism and your communism..
We should all build our own ships, for our own communities
and sail the rivers we Choose,
Leave the sea for those poetic \'Sharks\'...!
October 14th, 2021 04:47
I Select Limited
L. B. Mek said:
digging to learn form other\'s mistakes
maybe?
to insure we no longer repeat them, unknowingly
maybe?..
insightful words as-ever, thanks for sharing
October 12th, 2021 04:27
L. B. Mek said:
digging to learn form other\'s mistakes
maybe?
to insure we no longer repeat them, unknowingly
maybe?..
insightful words as-ever, thanks for sharing
October 12th, 2021 04:27
Not My Philosophy
L. B. Mek said:
\'How not to die
after becoming wiser than god.\'
and this is why I cling to humility!
so such notions will never present themselves to me...
that \'God complex\': of Entitlement
where All, is True
if you Will it - so: Tyrannically
as part
of your Warped sense of reality...
October 11th, 2021 05:27
L. B. Mek said:
\'How not to die
after becoming wiser than god.\'
and this is why I cling to humility!
so such notions will never present themselves to me...
that \'God complex\': of Entitlement
where All, is True
if you Will it - so: Tyrannically
as part
of your Warped sense of reality...
October 11th, 2021 05:27
Ash In Eyes
L. B. Mek said:
\'Do you
think a triangle of love can be made?\'
sometimes, and Yet
mostly I look up
at the round Moon
and the round Sun
and the round Planets above us,
thinking
maybe, All - is Cyclical by design;
this Earth that moves beneath our very feet, hurtling
yet gripped in-place
a looping status of miraged Space
freedom - on a gravitational leash...
but then
isn\'t the inevitability within hierarchal pyramids,
that, which subjugates humanity into a cycle of self sabotage,
Every generation;
from ideology to logic, faith to science,
Love to Nihilism..
there\'s a seemingly endless need in our conceptualisation of the Universe
to insure, just like Our finite experience of existence
every Idea we contemplate, must first
be imbued with that Fallible capacity to self destruct, to End
to acquire a necessary, Death
because, that\'s all we know
and Everything: we Fear...!
September 30th, 2021 04:02
L. B. Mek said:
\'Do you
think a triangle of love can be made?\'
sometimes, and Yet
mostly I look up
at the round Moon
and the round Sun
and the round Planets above us,
thinking
maybe, All - is Cyclical by design;
this Earth that moves beneath our very feet, hurtling
yet gripped in-place
a looping status of miraged Space
freedom - on a gravitational leash...
but then
isn\'t the inevitability within hierarchal pyramids,
that, which subjugates humanity into a cycle of self sabotage,
Every generation;
from ideology to logic, faith to science,
Love to Nihilism..
there\'s a seemingly endless need in our conceptualisation of the Universe
to insure, just like Our finite experience of existence
every Idea we contemplate, must first
be imbued with that Fallible capacity to self destruct, to End
to acquire a necessary, Death
because, that\'s all we know
and Everything: we Fear...!
September 30th, 2021 04:02
You Know How To Bleed
L. B. Mek said:
\'It is not possible to remain
human. Primitiveness rules. Rivers
of heart have started drying up.\'
(but luckily, those foolish few - like me
are still naïve enough, to dream
our fallible dreams, of humility\'s: Unity)
thank you for sharing,
I read and learn, Guru!
September 27th, 2021 05:58
L. B. Mek said:
\'It is not possible to remain
human. Primitiveness rules. Rivers
of heart have started drying up.\'
(but luckily, those foolish few - like me
are still naïve enough, to dream
our fallible dreams, of humility\'s: Unity)
thank you for sharing,
I read and learn, Guru!
September 27th, 2021 05:58
Extraordinary
L. B. Mek said:
I too, have met that ghost
and a part of me
survived, to warn others
about that, which asks
for you to invest: everything
for a chance, of accumulating
a random, Something
from Fate\'s reward
of far-too-often, Nothing..
to warn them, Awake
I\'ve plastered my fingertips, numb
and ink my words, scarlet
so as they resonate...
September 23rd, 2021 04:50
L. B. Mek said:
I too, have met that ghost
and a part of me
survived, to warn others
about that, which asks
for you to invest: everything
for a chance, of accumulating
a random, Something
from Fate\'s reward
of far-too-often, Nothing..
to warn them, Awake
I\'ve plastered my fingertips, numb
and ink my words, scarlet
so as they resonate...
September 23rd, 2021 04:50
God, What is Your Real Name?
L. B. Mek said:
\'Suffering\' be thy name
for that is the God
that visits us, the most...
\'Life is all the sweeter for the suffering\', some say
while I, Beg:
let me sample Life without it, and I promise
you\'ll never find me lamenting, for the boredom of my peaceful existence...!
September 21st, 2021 05:03
L. B. Mek said:
\'Suffering\' be thy name
for that is the God
that visits us, the most...
\'Life is all the sweeter for the suffering\', some say
while I, Beg:
let me sample Life without it, and I promise
you\'ll never find me lamenting, for the boredom of my peaceful existence...!
September 21st, 2021 05:03
My Precious Jewel
L. B. Mek said:
millenniums later, and it still
clings to all that revolves
on our individualised interpretations, of Sappho\'s: Love...
intriguing as always
thank you, Guru
September 20th, 2021 06:40
L. B. Mek said:
millenniums later, and it still
clings to all that revolves
on our individualised interpretations, of Sappho\'s: Love...
intriguing as always
thank you, Guru
September 20th, 2021 06:40
Some Questions No Answers
L. B. Mek said:
\'You were walking under the
dim light of fireflies to burn the sky.\'
such vivid imagery, utilised to its most potent capacity..
another great \'searching\' poem to add to your vast collection, thanks for choosing to share, Guru!
September 14th, 2021 03:59
L. B. Mek said:
\'You were walking under the
dim light of fireflies to burn the sky.\'
such vivid imagery, utilised to its most potent capacity..
another great \'searching\' poem to add to your vast collection, thanks for choosing to share, Guru!
September 14th, 2021 03:59
Two Small Eyes
L. B. Mek said:
much better than that \'Tyger, tyger\' poem
the world loves endlessly
in my humble, although controversial opinion lol
as-ever, I read and learn: Guru!
(a hedgehog
for a fugitive God
amongst the snakes, swarming
this tiger poetry, we
painstakingly, rhyme scarlet
with every syllable
we, shamefully hide in the white
of our write\'s\'...)
September 13th, 2021 06:23
L. B. Mek said:
much better than that \'Tyger, tyger\' poem
the world loves endlessly
in my humble, although controversial opinion lol
as-ever, I read and learn: Guru!
(a hedgehog
for a fugitive God
amongst the snakes, swarming
this tiger poetry, we
painstakingly, rhyme scarlet
with every syllable
we, shamefully hide in the white
of our write\'s\'...)
September 13th, 2021 06:23
Two Small Eyes
Laura🌻 said:
Satishverma,
To our dismay, “the neighbourhood of snakes” will always be there.
Laura🌻
September 12th, 2021 19:00
Laura🌻 said:
Satishverma,
To our dismay, “the neighbourhood of snakes” will always be there.
Laura🌻
September 12th, 2021 19:00
Waves
Laura🌻 said:
Satishverma,
Yes indeed…
Earth does have
‘many enemies waiting’
to pounce and inflict pain upon the complacent and vulnerable.
Laura🌻
September 12th, 2021 00:04
Laura🌻 said:
Satishverma,
Yes indeed…
Earth does have
‘many enemies waiting’
to pounce and inflict pain upon the complacent and vulnerable.
Laura🌻
September 12th, 2021 00:04
I See In Dark
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'The innocence will not
break. Moral sense will not rise. I want
to bring the leopards of love.\'
that solitude of self love, an appreciation of self worth, to encompass your island of enlightenment, knowing
not a lot of others, will invest the time to reach your level of awareness, so silence is your chosen merciful response...
as always, I read and learn, thank you: Guru!
(even if by example alone, you lead us thirsty fish, to glean that pool of water - in that abundant dessert of modernity\'s: wilful ignorance)
September 10th, 2021 04:34
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'The innocence will not
break. Moral sense will not rise. I want
to bring the leopards of love.\'
that solitude of self love, an appreciation of self worth, to encompass your island of enlightenment, knowing
not a lot of others, will invest the time to reach your level of awareness, so silence is your chosen merciful response...
as always, I read and learn, thank you: Guru!
(even if by example alone, you lead us thirsty fish, to glean that pool of water - in that abundant dessert of modernity\'s: wilful ignorance)
September 10th, 2021 04:34
I See In Dark
James Michael said:
Great stuff, still can’t figure out what you mean. Are you a guru? You’ll never respond. Cool-ass dude!
September 10th, 2021 00:07
James Michael said:
Great stuff, still can’t figure out what you mean. Are you a guru? You’ll never respond. Cool-ass dude!
September 10th, 2021 00:07
Immaculate
L. B. Mek said:
I\'ve read an alarming amount of nihilistic write\'s this morning
glorifying life\'s ending? and your poetry
is the answer I wish they could all comprehend
to see how futile it is, to waste life
assuming nothingness is better, when every road we turn
and each step, we climb
shows us greener fields, further from reach and a lilting path
to a sheer drop, to something even more horrific
than our laments, keeping us awake all night...!
\'how to reach out and help, anyone
when life is devalued, with each propaganda: warped breath
and, our very own safety cocoon society
convinces us, is all: that\'s left of future\'s: hope...?\'
September 6th, 2021 05:57
L. B. Mek said:
I\'ve read an alarming amount of nihilistic write\'s this morning
glorifying life\'s ending? and your poetry
is the answer I wish they could all comprehend
to see how futile it is, to waste life
assuming nothingness is better, when every road we turn
and each step, we climb
shows us greener fields, further from reach and a lilting path
to a sheer drop, to something even more horrific
than our laments, keeping us awake all night...!
\'how to reach out and help, anyone
when life is devalued, with each propaganda: warped breath
and, our very own safety cocoon society
convinces us, is all: that\'s left of future\'s: hope...?\'
September 6th, 2021 05:57
A Virgin Grieves
L. B. Mek said:
drink your sacred herb
and breathe easy, knowing
all is: as all can be
however sobering, a depiction
that may be, of our reality...
Thank you! Guru
September 2nd, 2021 03:51
L. B. Mek said:
drink your sacred herb
and breathe easy, knowing
all is: as all can be
however sobering, a depiction
that may be, of our reality...
Thank you! Guru
September 2nd, 2021 03:51
The Fabulous Dream
L. B. Mek said:
\'I am sad. This world
is too much. I can not read
the unreadable. Poems will kill.
The believers die under
a canopy. After the war, the religions
fail to save humanity.\'
if our civilisation ever, learns
to appreciate genius like yours
whilst, you still draw breath..
we\'ll have evolved, enough
to warrant our hope
for survival and empathetically humane: growth...
I read and learn: Guru!
thank you
August 31st, 2021 05:25
L. B. Mek said:
\'I am sad. This world
is too much. I can not read
the unreadable. Poems will kill.
The believers die under
a canopy. After the war, the religions
fail to save humanity.\'
if our civilisation ever, learns
to appreciate genius like yours
whilst, you still draw breath..
we\'ll have evolved, enough
to warrant our hope
for survival and empathetically humane: growth...
I read and learn: Guru!
thank you
August 31st, 2021 05:25
Mythical Thoughts
L. B. Mek said:
I doubt you ever read my scribbles
but for some crazy reason, your words below
elucidate the inspiration for the feeble effort, I posted today:
\'Love stings.
And fog covers, the aura
of falling leaves― green
yellow and red. I survive
the quake.
A tiff burns the fingers.
I will not hold the pen.
The blank paper shivers.
Who will write the
wet poem?\'
(thank you! Guru)
August 27th, 2021 04:38
L. B. Mek said:
I doubt you ever read my scribbles
but for some crazy reason, your words below
elucidate the inspiration for the feeble effort, I posted today:
\'Love stings.
And fog covers, the aura
of falling leaves― green
yellow and red. I survive
the quake.
A tiff burns the fingers.
I will not hold the pen.
The blank paper shivers.
Who will write the
wet poem?\'
(thank you! Guru)
August 27th, 2021 04:38
Soldiers In Line
L. B. Mek said:
they\'re swimming in their shared tears of regret, dear Poet
one regretting it foolishness, in blind belief
the other, its foolish capitulation in the face
of all-things: Greed!
thank you, for sharing your profound wisdom: Guru
August 24th, 2021 05:53
L. B. Mek said:
they\'re swimming in their shared tears of regret, dear Poet
one regretting it foolishness, in blind belief
the other, its foolish capitulation in the face
of all-things: Greed!
thank you, for sharing your profound wisdom: Guru
August 24th, 2021 05:53
What A Cut
L. B. Mek said:
what a worthy dedication
to one of my all-time favourite poets,
I read and learn, Guru
thank you!
August 19th, 2021 04:12
L. B. Mek said:
what a worthy dedication
to one of my all-time favourite poets,
I read and learn, Guru
thank you!
August 19th, 2021 04:12
What A Cut
Laura🌻 said:
satishverma,
Ready to be free…
Ready to be me…
Ready to be thee.
Laura🌻
August 19th, 2021 01:31
Laura🌻 said:
satishverma,
Ready to be free…
Ready to be me…
Ready to be thee.
Laura🌻
August 19th, 2021 01:31
A Cup of Hemlock
L. B. Mek said:
imagine, what we could achieve
if we utilised half the energy we wasted
hating and belittling, those we oppose
for simply having a different perspective
that literally, has no impact on our own lives?
How absurd, when you realise
barely 10 to 20 percent of Earth is inhabited
and we\'re all head down busily, elbowing a path
through societies \'narrow minded\' settlements...
modernity\'s narrow minded self observed, ignorance
cultivating
another generation of mind warped, submissive sheep\'s...
August 17th, 2021 04:26
L. B. Mek said:
imagine, what we could achieve
if we utilised half the energy we wasted
hating and belittling, those we oppose
for simply having a different perspective
that literally, has no impact on our own lives?
How absurd, when you realise
barely 10 to 20 percent of Earth is inhabited
and we\'re all head down busily, elbowing a path
through societies \'narrow minded\' settlements...
modernity\'s narrow minded self observed, ignorance
cultivating
another generation of mind warped, submissive sheep\'s...
August 17th, 2021 04:26
When Dew Weeps
L. B. Mek said:
\'The moon was sleeveless.
It drops a hint.
You cannot blame the tree.\'
we blame roots
we blame nature
we blame choices
till, we realise for our maths to work
there must first
be a value to existence, for us to lament
otherwise, we\'re just wasting time
multiplying null by sans
whilst dreaming, of moonwalking our regrets..
(as insightful, as ever
thank you, Guru)
August 13th, 2021 04:45
L. B. Mek said:
\'The moon was sleeveless.
It drops a hint.
You cannot blame the tree.\'
we blame roots
we blame nature
we blame choices
till, we realise for our maths to work
there must first
be a value to existence, for us to lament
otherwise, we\'re just wasting time
multiplying null by sans
whilst dreaming, of moonwalking our regrets..
(as insightful, as ever
thank you, Guru)
August 13th, 2021 04:45
Golden Birds Are Falling
L. B. Mek said:
\'The silver barge cannot stand
in the cyclone-unheard..Collect the
handsome corpses of them who wanted to live.\'
wonderfully impactive, finale
such a sobering read
thank you, Guru
August 9th, 2021 05:03
L. B. Mek said:
\'The silver barge cannot stand
in the cyclone-unheard..Collect the
handsome corpses of them who wanted to live.\'
wonderfully impactive, finale
such a sobering read
thank you, Guru
August 9th, 2021 05:03
How to say salaam?
L. B. Mek said:
from Muse, by Anna Akhmatova
What just means liberty, or youth, or approbation,
When compared with the gentle piper\'s tread?
And she came in, threw out the mantle\'s edges,
Declined to me with a sincere heed.
I say to her, \"Did you dictate the Pages
Of Hell to Dante?\"
(and so, I too ask you: Guru
Do you dictate, your Visionary pages
akin to Grecian Oracle: truth\'s...?)
August 5th, 2021 04:10
L. B. Mek said:
from Muse, by Anna Akhmatova
What just means liberty, or youth, or approbation,
When compared with the gentle piper\'s tread?
And she came in, threw out the mantle\'s edges,
Declined to me with a sincere heed.
I say to her, \"Did you dictate the Pages
Of Hell to Dante?\"
(and so, I too ask you: Guru
Do you dictate, your Visionary pages
akin to Grecian Oracle: truth\'s...?)
August 5th, 2021 04:10
A Bone Quits
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
you\'re digging the Ruins
of cloud-bricked Empire, now
the mere sands of our shoreline, afterthought\'s
you\'re searching for ideological Deity\'s
imbued, with Morality\'s wafer-thin bedrocks
now belittled, to a mere fragment
of our despairingly cyclical: dreamless reality..
\'antiquities: to be, or not - to be...\'
warped
in-to modernity\'s:
to believe, or
nihilistically: yearn-for - endlessly...!\'
(profoundly insightful
as-ever: Guru
thank you)
August 2nd, 2021 04:54
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
you\'re digging the Ruins
of cloud-bricked Empire, now
the mere sands of our shoreline, afterthought\'s
you\'re searching for ideological Deity\'s
imbued, with Morality\'s wafer-thin bedrocks
now belittled, to a mere fragment
of our despairingly cyclical: dreamless reality..
\'antiquities: to be, or not - to be...\'
warped
in-to modernity\'s:
to believe, or
nihilistically: yearn-for - endlessly...!\'
(profoundly insightful
as-ever: Guru
thank you)
August 2nd, 2021 04:54
Tormenting Dreams
L. B. Mek said:
\'The collected suicide
of the nightingales have given the worry.\'
\'my poems are
working crossing the pains.\'
\'The tulips have started
talking. Why the blood spots are appearing?\'
\'Humankind is becoming
rare.\'
(sheer Brilliance, as ever: Guru
please forgive my rude rearranging
of your masterly lines)
July 30th, 2021 04:51
L. B. Mek said:
\'The collected suicide
of the nightingales have given the worry.\'
\'my poems are
working crossing the pains.\'
\'The tulips have started
talking. Why the blood spots are appearing?\'
\'Humankind is becoming
rare.\'
(sheer Brilliance, as ever: Guru
please forgive my rude rearranging
of your masterly lines)
July 30th, 2021 04:51
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