Comments received on poems by satishverma
Holy Script
L. B. Mek said:
I am but a feeble wannabe, masking his fallible nature of discontent within scribbled words of meagre worth,
although my saving grace lies in excavating wisdom\'s pearls that such as you choose to share, within your ink woven solace, of poetic genius..
March 5th, 2021 05:15
L. B. Mek said:
I am but a feeble wannabe, masking his fallible nature of discontent within scribbled words of meagre worth,
although my saving grace lies in excavating wisdom\'s pearls that such as you choose to share, within your ink woven solace, of poetic genius..
March 5th, 2021 05:15
Mercy Kills
L. B. Mek said:
\'I am just me now. No frills.
All my desires shed, taking
off the appendages, becoming
bald like moon.
No more four-letter words.
Jawline widens by pressing the
teeth. The warriors had become rapists―
joining the gang of losers.
Planet was changing.\'
your words made me think of Hirsi Ali\'s brave new book, covering a complex and triggering topic..
(my apologies: if me - associating your words with her work is disagreeable to you in any way dear poet, I meant no disrespect, sincerely)
March 4th, 2021 05:59
L. B. Mek said:
\'I am just me now. No frills.
All my desires shed, taking
off the appendages, becoming
bald like moon.
No more four-letter words.
Jawline widens by pressing the
teeth. The warriors had become rapists―
joining the gang of losers.
Planet was changing.\'
your words made me think of Hirsi Ali\'s brave new book, covering a complex and triggering topic..
(my apologies: if me - associating your words with her work is disagreeable to you in any way dear poet, I meant no disrespect, sincerely)
March 4th, 2021 05:59
Thinking Deep
L. B. Mek said:
\'Nihilism was not
mine. You had forced
the sweet tongue in me.\'
contagion - this neediness to commune with other\'s, subjecting ourselves
to their poisonous does of self-hate
as-if, we hadn\'t baggage aplenty
to poison others with..
another great write, thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply
March 4th, 2021 04:21
L. B. Mek said:
\'Nihilism was not
mine. You had forced
the sweet tongue in me.\'
contagion - this neediness to commune with other\'s, subjecting ourselves
to their poisonous does of self-hate
as-if, we hadn\'t baggage aplenty
to poison others with..
another great write, thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply
March 4th, 2021 04:21
Encasement
L. B. Mek said:
\'In this lonely sky,
no songbirds are flying.
Only stars are killing each other.
I am burning my fingers again.\'..
yet again... \'just, wow!\'
March 1st, 2021 06:11
L. B. Mek said:
\'In this lonely sky,
no songbirds are flying.
Only stars are killing each other.
I am burning my fingers again.\'..
yet again... \'just, wow!\'
March 1st, 2021 06:11
Overtaken By Shadows
L. B. Mek said:
just wow!
I can\'t help but feel so inadequate, when being a witness to so much talent, lol
thank you, for choosing to share: Guru!
February 26th, 2021 06:14
L. B. Mek said:
just wow!
I can\'t help but feel so inadequate, when being a witness to so much talent, lol
thank you, for choosing to share: Guru!
February 26th, 2021 06:14
Moonwhite
WriteRaw said:
To be discarded alone is a crime. This was a great read. I loved the flow of the poem.
February 25th, 2021 16:03
WriteRaw said:
To be discarded alone is a crime. This was a great read. I loved the flow of the poem.
February 25th, 2021 16:03
Nothing To Mend
L. B. Mek said:
thank you, for choosing to share your unquestionable talent dear poet or guru: to me..
just wow!
February 19th, 2021 06:18
L. B. Mek said:
thank you, for choosing to share your unquestionable talent dear poet or guru: to me..
just wow!
February 19th, 2021 06:18
Nothing To Mend
AlitaOpal said:
How beautiful, I truly enjoyed your master piece 🌹
February 18th, 2021 19:44
AlitaOpal said:
How beautiful, I truly enjoyed your master piece 🌹
February 18th, 2021 19:44
Terror In Air
L. B. Mek said:
haunting..
demonstrates such a gift for realism, painted - poetically graceful, within purposed words of vivid imagination
February 18th, 2021 06:08
L. B. Mek said:
haunting..
demonstrates such a gift for realism, painted - poetically graceful, within purposed words of vivid imagination
February 18th, 2021 06:08
Drifting In Dust Storm
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, a large part of loss is in acceptance..
while we strive to keep their memory\'s crystallised - froze,
we must equally admit they are no longer fingertip - close
February 16th, 2021 06:50
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, a large part of loss is in acceptance..
while we strive to keep their memory\'s crystallised - froze,
we must equally admit they are no longer fingertip - close
February 16th, 2021 06:50
You Had The Answer
L. B. Mek said:
tempered, yet still, worded undeniably beautiful in both imagery and meaning...
thank you for sharing
February 15th, 2021 06:07
L. B. Mek said:
tempered, yet still, worded undeniably beautiful in both imagery and meaning...
thank you for sharing
February 15th, 2021 06:07
The Celestial Affair
L. B. Mek said:
what a warming last two lines,
though admittedly you lost me at the mention of a second moon, but like my clarity - since, it to: \'never materializes\' maybe that\'s a good sign.. lol
(forgive my self-indulgent tendencies)
February 11th, 2021 05:33
L. B. Mek said:
what a warming last two lines,
though admittedly you lost me at the mention of a second moon, but like my clarity - since, it to: \'never materializes\' maybe that\'s a good sign.. lol
(forgive my self-indulgent tendencies)
February 11th, 2021 05:33
Freaking Gods
L. B. Mek said:
\'Between Adam and Eve,
there was a poison on the
arrows tip.
Hand care, making
honey without the queen.
You cannot make a fist
without a thumb.\'
just Wow, Brilliant!
February 11th, 2021 04:36
L. B. Mek said:
\'Between Adam and Eve,
there was a poison on the
arrows tip.
Hand care, making
honey without the queen.
You cannot make a fist
without a thumb.\'
just Wow, Brilliant!
February 11th, 2021 04:36
Behind The Whispers
Trenz Pruca said:
Thank you. Thought-provoking and enjoyable.
February 4th, 2021 16:27
Trenz Pruca said:
Thank you. Thought-provoking and enjoyable.
February 4th, 2021 16:27
In My Vernacular
L. B. Mek said:
oh Guru of my Poetic dreams, once more you share your guiding work\'s of wisdom, freely and distilled/worded accessible enough, so even the likes of me can understand...
what a gift you wield dear Poet, thank you!
February 2nd, 2021 05:22
L. B. Mek said:
oh Guru of my Poetic dreams, once more you share your guiding work\'s of wisdom, freely and distilled/worded accessible enough, so even the likes of me can understand...
what a gift you wield dear Poet, thank you!
February 2nd, 2021 05:22
An Equal - Armed Cross
L. B. Mek said:
to you, a mere throwaway scribble this may be,
to me: a write of majestic Poetry, with unflinchingly vivid details from a survivor\'s unfaltering song
of insightful self-commentary...
Brilliant!
thanks for sharing
January 25th, 2021 06:59
L. B. Mek said:
to you, a mere throwaway scribble this may be,
to me: a write of majestic Poetry, with unflinchingly vivid details from a survivor\'s unfaltering song
of insightful self-commentary...
Brilliant!
thanks for sharing
January 25th, 2021 06:59
Unmatched
L. B. Mek said:
\'Let the traffic grow between
give and take. You can deceive
yourself by forgetting to
perceive the rainbow dreams.\'
wow, brilliant lines
January 14th, 2021 07:21
L. B. Mek said:
\'Let the traffic grow between
give and take. You can deceive
yourself by forgetting to
perceive the rainbow dreams.\'
wow, brilliant lines
January 14th, 2021 07:21
Between The Veils
L. B. Mek said:
\'Someone lives in your eyes unseen.\',
indeed, so apparent and true when pointed out
yet, so seemingly impossible to identify - when searched for: on our own...
a wonderful write, Happy New Year dear Poet
January 8th, 2021 05:20
L. B. Mek said:
\'Someone lives in your eyes unseen.\',
indeed, so apparent and true when pointed out
yet, so seemingly impossible to identify - when searched for: on our own...
a wonderful write, Happy New Year dear Poet
January 8th, 2021 05:20
Why Do I Suffer?
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, beautiful ending of a vibe I could feel right down to my soul.
Thanks for letting it go!
January 6th, 2021 01:53
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, beautiful ending of a vibe I could feel right down to my soul.
Thanks for letting it go!
January 6th, 2021 01:53
Repentance
Amon said:
Feathers carrying the wages of sins to fly after my lips taste.
So I will just let it go
January 2nd, 2021 03:32
Amon said:
Feathers carrying the wages of sins to fly after my lips taste.
So I will just let it go
January 2nd, 2021 03:32
Without Ceremony
L. B. Mek said:
\'What a thrill -
My thumb instead of an onion.
The top quite gone
Except for a sort of hinge\'
wrote Sylvia in her \'Cut\'
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-22437
and your words too:
cut, straight through me at first read,
seeped - deep within at second read
and forced me to click that favourite icon on third read...
thanks for sharing your unquestionable talent dear Poet
December 31st, 2020 06:24
L. B. Mek said:
\'What a thrill -
My thumb instead of an onion.
The top quite gone
Except for a sort of hinge\'
wrote Sylvia in her \'Cut\'
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-22437
and your words too:
cut, straight through me at first read,
seeped - deep within at second read
and forced me to click that favourite icon on third read...
thanks for sharing your unquestionable talent dear Poet
December 31st, 2020 06:24
Becoming Strangers
L. B. Mek said:
and behold: you can write again... lol
Happy holidays dear Poet
December 24th, 2020 06:16
L. B. Mek said:
and behold: you can write again... lol
Happy holidays dear Poet
December 24th, 2020 06:16
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