Comments received on poems by Iris Lynn
Threadbare Light
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful in a quiet way. Very nicely written
October 16th, 2025 09:49
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful in a quiet way. Very nicely written
October 16th, 2025 09:49
Infernal Devotion
sorenbarrett said:
Darkly romantic in a most sensual manner. Nicely worded and rhymed.
October 14th, 2025 16:11
sorenbarrett said:
Darkly romantic in a most sensual manner. Nicely worded and rhymed.
October 14th, 2025 16:11
The Pale Guest
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write that feels like something I would strive to write. It felt so familiar that I could not help but give it a fave. The only change I would have made is instead of unthroned I would have said dethroned but this may well have been intended to show the contempt for rigid accepted words.
October 13th, 2025 11:36
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write that feels like something I would strive to write. It felt so familiar that I could not help but give it a fave. The only change I would have made is instead of unthroned I would have said dethroned but this may well have been intended to show the contempt for rigid accepted words.
October 13th, 2025 11:36
The Pale Guest
Paul Bell said:
The more you worry, the more chance it is going to happen, and when it happens, the more chance you told yourself so.
Mind you, 99% never happens. In saying that, that 1% could.
October 13th, 2025 11:26
Paul Bell said:
The more you worry, the more chance it is going to happen, and when it happens, the more chance you told yourself so.
Mind you, 99% never happens. In saying that, that 1% could.
October 13th, 2025 11:26
Torrential Memory
Poetic Licence said:
Very well written and expressed poem pain, sadness and internal unrest as the storm is building,
October 10th, 2025 16:03
Poetic Licence said:
Very well written and expressed poem pain, sadness and internal unrest as the storm is building,
October 10th, 2025 16:03
Torrential Memory
Paul Bell said:
This is a sad one.
Pain running all the way through it to the end.
October 10th, 2025 11:13
Paul Bell said:
This is a sad one.
Pain running all the way through it to the end.
October 10th, 2025 11:13
Torrential Memory
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of unrest and an internal storm in this poem of a relationship. Well written
October 10th, 2025 09:12
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of unrest and an internal storm in this poem of a relationship. Well written
October 10th, 2025 09:12
A Hymn of Dawn on Broken Wings
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful rhyme and meter to this image filled poem short. Loved it
October 7th, 2025 18:15
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful rhyme and meter to this image filled poem short. Loved it
October 7th, 2025 18:15
A Lust Of Intimacy
NafisaSB said:
i like the rhyme and rhythm here - fall so naturally in place : enjoyed it
October 7th, 2025 03:10
NafisaSB said:
i like the rhyme and rhythm here - fall so naturally in place : enjoyed it
October 7th, 2025 03:10
Whispers Beneath The Veil
sorenbarrett said:
I think I know this guy, many call him dark but that is not all bad. Have written about him before and yes that kiss is what we have all been waiting for.
October 5th, 2025 12:47
sorenbarrett said:
I think I know this guy, many call him dark but that is not all bad. Have written about him before and yes that kiss is what we have all been waiting for.
October 5th, 2025 12:47
Shadow Bound
sorenbarrett said:
One might take the shadow as one\'s thoughts or companion. A lovely write.
October 4th, 2025 12:22
sorenbarrett said:
One might take the shadow as one\'s thoughts or companion. A lovely write.
October 4th, 2025 12:22
Soul Storm
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images of nature in a poetic metaphor of emotion. Nicely written
October 3rd, 2025 15:05
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images of nature in a poetic metaphor of emotion. Nicely written
October 3rd, 2025 15:05
Whispers of Music
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully said a thought that comes coincidentally close to a thought in my poem today. Funny how stars align sometimes. Loved the topic as well as your grace in saying it. Very well done.
October 2nd, 2025 12:52
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully said a thought that comes coincidentally close to a thought in my poem today. Funny how stars align sometimes. Loved the topic as well as your grace in saying it. Very well done.
October 2nd, 2025 12:52
Graveyard of Suns
TommyDingo said:
Thats a great poem! Some brilliant verses in that \"time folds inward like a dying flame\"! being my favourite great poetry.
October 1st, 2025 07:20
TommyDingo said:
Thats a great poem! Some brilliant verses in that \"time folds inward like a dying flame\"! being my favourite great poetry.
October 1st, 2025 07:20
Graveyard of Suns
sorenbarrett said:
A feel of dimed darkness from the start this poem carries a sense of melancholy and sadness, dream like it wanders toward its end. Very nicely done
October 1st, 2025 07:09
sorenbarrett said:
A feel of dimed darkness from the start this poem carries a sense of melancholy and sadness, dream like it wanders toward its end. Very nicely done
October 1st, 2025 07:09
A Lust Of Intimacy
Paul Bell said:
Temptation and lust, lust and temptation.
Don\'t they just follow each other in perfect harmony.
September 30th, 2025 15:35
Paul Bell said:
Temptation and lust, lust and temptation.
Don\'t they just follow each other in perfect harmony.
September 30th, 2025 15:35
A Lust Of Intimacy
lunarchloedip said:
\"a touch that hums beneath the bone\" love it
September 30th, 2025 12:55
lunarchloedip said:
\"a touch that hums beneath the bone\" love it
September 30th, 2025 12:55
The Opposing Mind
cellinic said:
A very nice, wise and sincere write, revealing a good blend of emotional and mental life! best wishes,
September 30th, 2025 07:52
cellinic said:
A very nice, wise and sincere write, revealing a good blend of emotional and mental life! best wishes,
September 30th, 2025 07:52
A Lust Of Intimacy
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! A poem contrary to modern thought where passion is all that\'s sought. Very nicely written with good rhyme as well. A fave
September 30th, 2025 07:42
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! A poem contrary to modern thought where passion is all that\'s sought. Very nicely written with good rhyme as well. A fave
September 30th, 2025 07:42
The Opposing Mind
sorenbarrett said:
Logic and emotion often seem opposites but really should be seen as good friends that argue a lot. A poem nicely written
September 29th, 2025 14:23
sorenbarrett said:
Logic and emotion often seem opposites but really should be seen as good friends that argue a lot. A poem nicely written
September 29th, 2025 14:23
