Comments received on poems by ViolenceEndeavour



It’s only beginning! When?
sorenbarrett said:

This poem reflects acceptance of the situation the way it is despite desire that it be better. Nicely composed with rhyme and good flow.

January 11th, 2026 03:45

Earth #2
A Dying Hero of the Past said:

nice!

January 11th, 2026 00:47

Good morning sun!
sorenbarrett said:

Reaching for the unreachable comes through in this poem of hope. Well done

January 5th, 2026 21:12

When will you learn?
A Dying Hero of the Past said:

nice wording!

January 2nd, 2026 18:16

When will you learn?
sorenbarrett said:

Reception of flashy attempts to attract are taken as just that nothing more than glitz. Well done

January 2nd, 2026 17:05

Whats No?
A Dying Hero of the Past said:

very nicely written : )

January 2nd, 2026 12:54

Regret
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of learning from experience and carrying on. Nicely done

December 31st, 2025 19:23

Whats No?
sorenbarrett said:

This sounds like one is being attacked, and assuming a defensive position. Nicely written.

December 29th, 2025 14:10

Whats No?
Friendship said:

Well worded,a very sad poem, the poet seems to grapple with the complexities of consent and emotional turmoil, questioning whether validation from another person can truly negate their own feelings of upset and helplessness.

December 29th, 2025 12:05

Earth #2
sorenbarrett said:

Everything is beautiful when one is in love. A lovely poem

November 21st, 2025 17:18

Earth #1
Mutley Ravishes said:

No one here gets out alive!

November 18th, 2025 21:34

That\'s not me.
sorenbarrett said:

A poem stating not only that the author is different that others but that they are not sure who they are themselves. Well written

November 17th, 2025 16:05

Feelings.
sorenbarrett said:

Welcome to MPS a most interesting poem of expectations and experiences and how the two interphase. Nicely done

November 16th, 2025 20:06