Comments received on poems by notapoet



Why Do I Fight
AlitaOpal said:

I had a strange dream where I was running away from someone or something.. The faster I ran I felt it catching up.. As I ran faster ahead of me was a familiar figure running too.. As I drew closer and touched the person ahead, I awoken.. Upon awakening I realised that I was both the person running after and away from myself and your poem really did put my dream into perspective..
Amazing piece 🌹🌹🌹

July 22nd, 2016 17:16

Why Do I Fight
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Really nice. My favorite lines ...

"As promise wields hopes hammer
And pounds it to dust"

Kurt




July 22nd, 2016 12:44

Why Do I Fight
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

July 22nd, 2016 12:26

Why Do I Fight
rrodriguez said:

Darkness is the absence of light, so your fight is victories because you're in the light. Nicely written!

July 22nd, 2016 11:36

Adam’s Apple
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

Brilliant piece...you wrote about a lot of things that I do ...and your writing style is similar to my own ...

July 22nd, 2016 10:07

Adam’s Apple
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Wonderful poem. My favorite stanza.....

"I have waited patiently
For your uncontrollable urge
To feast upon my agony
And devour my shame"




July 21st, 2016 20:51

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