Comments received on poems by notapoet
Why Do I Fight
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Really nice. My favorite lines ...
"As promise wields hopes hammer
And pounds it to dust"
Kurt
July 22nd, 2016 12:44
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Really nice. My favorite lines ...
"As promise wields hopes hammer
And pounds it to dust"
Kurt
July 22nd, 2016 12:44
Why Do I Fight
rrodriguez said:
Darkness is the absence of light, so your fight is victories because you're in the light. Nicely written!
July 22nd, 2016 11:36
rrodriguez said:
Darkness is the absence of light, so your fight is victories because you're in the light. Nicely written!
July 22nd, 2016 11:36
Adam’s Apple
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Brilliant piece...you wrote about a lot of things that I do ...and your writing style is similar to my own ...
July 22nd, 2016 10:07
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Brilliant piece...you wrote about a lot of things that I do ...and your writing style is similar to my own ...
July 22nd, 2016 10:07
Adam’s Apple
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Wonderful poem. My favorite stanza.....
"I have waited patiently
For your uncontrollable urge
To feast upon my agony
And devour my shame"
July 21st, 2016 20:51
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Wonderful poem. My favorite stanza.....
"I have waited patiently
For your uncontrollable urge
To feast upon my agony
And devour my shame"
July 21st, 2016 20:51
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