Comments received on poems by notapoet
Passion Fruit
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
VERY 18+ NAP ~ I loved it ! I have written poems about every sense being satisfied in making love. Passion Fruit ~ your poem did not disappoint ! Sense ~ Scent ~ Savour ~ Sight ~ Sound ~ Sensuous fruit of passion. Thanks for sharing ! Please check my poem YOU ARE SPECIAL ~ Thanks BRIAN
August 31st, 2016 11:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
VERY 18+ NAP ~ I loved it ! I have written poems about every sense being satisfied in making love. Passion Fruit ~ your poem did not disappoint ! Sense ~ Scent ~ Savour ~ Sight ~ Sound ~ Sensuous fruit of passion. Thanks for sharing ! Please check my poem YOU ARE SPECIAL ~ Thanks BRIAN
August 31st, 2016 11:27
How Time Flies
willyweed said:
yes I sometimes wonder why everyone rushes to the red light at the corner. your poem is very well stated and constructed! a joy to read. ww
August 26th, 2016 19:31
willyweed said:
yes I sometimes wonder why everyone rushes to the red light at the corner. your poem is very well stated and constructed! a joy to read. ww
August 26th, 2016 19:31
Eternal Flame
daniel dawes said:
Wow, really liked it. To be honest your love brought a tear to my eye. Thanks for sharing a lovely message.
August 25th, 2016 08:28
daniel dawes said:
Wow, really liked it. To be honest your love brought a tear to my eye. Thanks for sharing a lovely message.
August 25th, 2016 08:28
Doing Time
daniel dawes said:
Amazing. loved it and the flow......my kind of poem. Thanks for sharing.
August 24th, 2016 07:58
daniel dawes said:
Amazing. loved it and the flow......my kind of poem. Thanks for sharing.
August 24th, 2016 07:58
Nightmare
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANK YOU NAP ~ For sharing a very eleantly written poem ona vry taboo subject INCEST. As you imply it is the worst crime we can commit and it is against GOD himself # BRIAN ~ Please check my Fusion Poem ~ MY FAVORITE DRINK !
August 23rd, 2016 08:14
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANK YOU NAP ~ For sharing a very eleantly written poem ona vry taboo subject INCEST. As you imply it is the worst crime we can commit and it is against GOD himself # BRIAN ~ Please check my Fusion Poem ~ MY FAVORITE DRINK !
August 23rd, 2016 08:14
Love is a Battlefield
Rosethebrokenhearted said:
There is a great message in this, with an excellent flow. Thank you for your time.
~RTBH
August 23rd, 2016 04:47
Rosethebrokenhearted said:
There is a great message in this, with an excellent flow. Thank you for your time.
~RTBH
August 23rd, 2016 04:47
Love is a Battlefield
lysistrata said:
"This emotional war we fight
Is brutal and tough
But as hard as some fight
It is never enough"
Very Well written.Try to change one of the 2 "fight" and I am a bit trouble by your 'conclusion'?!
"So make sure you don’t leave them
In the hands of loves fools…."
Have you never been a love fool?!!
August 22nd, 2016 23:55
lysistrata said:
"This emotional war we fight
Is brutal and tough
But as hard as some fight
It is never enough"
Very Well written.Try to change one of the 2 "fight" and I am a bit trouble by your 'conclusion'?!
"So make sure you don’t leave them
In the hands of loves fools…."
Have you never been a love fool?!!
August 22nd, 2016 23:55
Love is a Battlefield
Ljones84 said:
I like it alot it is very well writtened
August 22nd, 2016 20:18
Ljones84 said:
I like it alot it is very well writtened
August 22nd, 2016 20:18
Love is a Battlefield
willyweed said:
great message in this well done poem! ww
August 22nd, 2016 19:15
willyweed said:
great message in this well done poem! ww
August 22nd, 2016 19:15
Alone On The Corner
Meghan_star said:
" Are the voices in my head. Distorting my concept of reality." Love this line.
August 20th, 2016 18:09
Meghan_star said:
" Are the voices in my head. Distorting my concept of reality." Love this line.
August 20th, 2016 18:09
Alone On The Corner
Meghan_star said:
This was very insightful, it really spoke to me.
August 20th, 2016 18:07
Meghan_star said:
This was very insightful, it really spoke to me.
August 20th, 2016 18:07
Unto Thyself Be True
Rosethebrokenhearted said:
This is a very beautiful piece.
Thank you for a great read!
~RTBH
August 16th, 2016 09:33
Rosethebrokenhearted said:
This is a very beautiful piece.
Thank you for a great read!
~RTBH
August 16th, 2016 09:33
Love’s child
willyweed said:
the miracle of life , nice work
good form and flow! a joy to read. wwl
August 12th, 2016 18:01
willyweed said:
the miracle of life , nice work
good form and flow! a joy to read. wwl
August 12th, 2016 18:01
An Angel’s Maiden Flight
willyweed said:
I like this it moves like water over a rock ...smooth, good rhyme good construct and good message! ww
July 28th, 2016 17:32
willyweed said:
I like this it moves like water over a rock ...smooth, good rhyme good construct and good message! ww
July 28th, 2016 17:32
An Angel’s Maiden Flight
mhpoet said:
This is an amazing piece of work! I enjoyed it!
July 28th, 2016 12:42
mhpoet said:
This is an amazing piece of work! I enjoyed it!
July 28th, 2016 12:42
Left For Dead
willyweed said:
This one is very good! it has it all flow structure wicked good rhyme.
I salute you! ww
July 24th, 2016 14:19
willyweed said:
This one is very good! it has it all flow structure wicked good rhyme.
I salute you! ww
July 24th, 2016 14:19
Tortured By Love
Rosethebrokenhearted said:
This has been the first poem I've read, of someone else's that has brought tears to my eyes, for the first time in 3 years. Thank you.
~RTBH
July 24th, 2016 04:17
Rosethebrokenhearted said:
This has been the first poem I've read, of someone else's that has brought tears to my eyes, for the first time in 3 years. Thank you.
~RTBH
July 24th, 2016 04:17
Why Do I Fight
AlitaOpal said:
I had a strange dream where I was running away from someone or something.. The faster I ran I felt it catching up.. As I ran faster ahead of me was a familiar figure running too.. As I drew closer and touched the person ahead, I awoken.. Upon awakening I realised that I was both the person running after and away from myself and your poem really did put my dream into perspective..
Amazing piece 🌹🌹🌹
July 22nd, 2016 17:16
AlitaOpal said:
I had a strange dream where I was running away from someone or something.. The faster I ran I felt it catching up.. As I ran faster ahead of me was a familiar figure running too.. As I drew closer and touched the person ahead, I awoken.. Upon awakening I realised that I was both the person running after and away from myself and your poem really did put my dream into perspective..
Amazing piece 🌹🌹🌹
July 22nd, 2016 17:16
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