Comments received on poems by notapoet
Feast Or Famine
dmr90 said:
I am digging this writing. Outstanding use of words. Keep on writing !
September 7th, 2016 09:40
dmr90 said:
I am digging this writing. Outstanding use of words. Keep on writing !
September 7th, 2016 09:40
Tortured Soul
P.X. Vexxus said:
This poem is nice. No rhyme scheme, but it didnt need one.
September 6th, 2016 17:20
P.X. Vexxus said:
This poem is nice. No rhyme scheme, but it didnt need one.
September 6th, 2016 17:20
Tortured Soul
Jeff said:
Wow...i really like this one...you are definitely talented..great write
September 6th, 2016 08:51
Jeff said:
Wow...i really like this one...you are definitely talented..great write
September 6th, 2016 08:51
If Only I Were a Flower
Jeff said:
This is a very good poem ...i love the words you used...great job
September 4th, 2016 15:31
Jeff said:
This is a very good poem ...i love the words you used...great job
September 4th, 2016 15:31
If Only I Were a Flower
rrodriguez said:
This poem is so expressive. So sullen, but full of passion for a lost love. I've written some like this one, and the can be very deep in thought and dripping with emotion. Excellent!
September 4th, 2016 11:12
rrodriguez said:
This poem is so expressive. So sullen, but full of passion for a lost love. I've written some like this one, and the can be very deep in thought and dripping with emotion. Excellent!
September 4th, 2016 11:12
Out of the Mist
P.X. Vexxus said:
Very nice. I love how you describe the importance of this person over your entire existence. Well written.
September 1st, 2016 20:27
P.X. Vexxus said:
Very nice. I love how you describe the importance of this person over your entire existence. Well written.
September 1st, 2016 20:27
Passion Fruit
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
VERY 18+ NAP ~ I loved it ! I have written poems about every sense being satisfied in making love. Passion Fruit ~ your poem did not disappoint ! Sense ~ Scent ~ Savour ~ Sight ~ Sound ~ Sensuous fruit of passion. Thanks for sharing ! Please check my poem YOU ARE SPECIAL ~ Thanks BRIAN
August 31st, 2016 11:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
VERY 18+ NAP ~ I loved it ! I have written poems about every sense being satisfied in making love. Passion Fruit ~ your poem did not disappoint ! Sense ~ Scent ~ Savour ~ Sight ~ Sound ~ Sensuous fruit of passion. Thanks for sharing ! Please check my poem YOU ARE SPECIAL ~ Thanks BRIAN
August 31st, 2016 11:27
How Time Flies
willyweed said:
yes I sometimes wonder why everyone rushes to the red light at the corner. your poem is very well stated and constructed! a joy to read. ww
August 26th, 2016 19:31
willyweed said:
yes I sometimes wonder why everyone rushes to the red light at the corner. your poem is very well stated and constructed! a joy to read. ww
August 26th, 2016 19:31
Eternal Flame
daniel dawes said:
Wow, really liked it. To be honest your love brought a tear to my eye. Thanks for sharing a lovely message.
August 25th, 2016 08:28
daniel dawes said:
Wow, really liked it. To be honest your love brought a tear to my eye. Thanks for sharing a lovely message.
August 25th, 2016 08:28
Doing Time
daniel dawes said:
Amazing. loved it and the flow......my kind of poem. Thanks for sharing.
August 24th, 2016 07:58
daniel dawes said:
Amazing. loved it and the flow......my kind of poem. Thanks for sharing.
August 24th, 2016 07:58
Nightmare
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANK YOU NAP ~ For sharing a very eleantly written poem ona vry taboo subject INCEST. As you imply it is the worst crime we can commit and it is against GOD himself # BRIAN ~ Please check my Fusion Poem ~ MY FAVORITE DRINK !
August 23rd, 2016 08:14
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANK YOU NAP ~ For sharing a very eleantly written poem ona vry taboo subject INCEST. As you imply it is the worst crime we can commit and it is against GOD himself # BRIAN ~ Please check my Fusion Poem ~ MY FAVORITE DRINK !
August 23rd, 2016 08:14
Love is a Battlefield
Rosethebrokenhearted said:
There is a great message in this, with an excellent flow. Thank you for your time.
~RTBH
August 23rd, 2016 04:47
Rosethebrokenhearted said:
There is a great message in this, with an excellent flow. Thank you for your time.
~RTBH
August 23rd, 2016 04:47
Love is a Battlefield
lysistrata said:
"This emotional war we fight
Is brutal and tough
But as hard as some fight
It is never enough"
Very Well written.Try to change one of the 2 "fight" and I am a bit trouble by your 'conclusion'?!
"So make sure you don’t leave them
In the hands of loves fools…."
Have you never been a love fool?!!
August 22nd, 2016 23:55
lysistrata said:
"This emotional war we fight
Is brutal and tough
But as hard as some fight
It is never enough"
Very Well written.Try to change one of the 2 "fight" and I am a bit trouble by your 'conclusion'?!
"So make sure you don’t leave them
In the hands of loves fools…."
Have you never been a love fool?!!
August 22nd, 2016 23:55
Love is a Battlefield
Ljones84 said:
I like it alot it is very well writtened
August 22nd, 2016 20:18
Ljones84 said:
I like it alot it is very well writtened
August 22nd, 2016 20:18
Love is a Battlefield
willyweed said:
great message in this well done poem! ww
August 22nd, 2016 19:15
willyweed said:
great message in this well done poem! ww
August 22nd, 2016 19:15
Alone On The Corner
Meghan_star said:
" Are the voices in my head. Distorting my concept of reality." Love this line.
August 20th, 2016 18:09
Meghan_star said:
" Are the voices in my head. Distorting my concept of reality." Love this line.
August 20th, 2016 18:09
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