Darkness Above
Augustus said:

Flows well for me until "not very fun."

September 14th, 2016 11:22

Breaking The Rules
Tony36 said:

Really enjoyed it, great write

September 13th, 2016 12:05

Thoughts Of You
Augustus said:

Would love to be a recipient of such. Delicate, playful, pleasing and meaningful.

September 12th, 2016 17:40

Thoughts Of You
lovedud said:

Read it over again several times. Very soothing and beautiful. Good read.

September 12th, 2016 09:15

Wind
Jeff said:

Great write...you certainly have a way with words...nice job

September 10th, 2016 14:07

Witches Brew
Augustus said:

I enjoyed this a lot. My only comment is about the last line. The reader is pretty sure this is about 'alcohol'. Would using another word leave it more ambiguous, more alluring? Just a thought.

September 9th, 2016 18:57

\"Things\"
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

September 8th, 2016 14:08

Feast Or Famine
lovedud said:

Amazing; captures an indescribable feeling.

September 7th, 2016 22:43

Feast Or Famine
dmr90 said:

I am digging this writing. Outstanding use of words. Keep on writing !

September 7th, 2016 09:40

Tortured Soul
Jeff said:

Wow...i really like this one...you are definitely talented..great write

September 6th, 2016 08:51

If Only I Were a Flower
Jeff said:

This is a very good poem ...i love the words you used...great job

September 4th, 2016 15:31

If Only I Were a Flower
rrodriguez said:

This poem is so expressive. So sullen, but full of passion for a lost love. I've written some like this one, and the can be very deep in thought and dripping with emotion. Excellent!

September 4th, 2016 11:12

Blinded By The Light
Tony36 said:

Awesome, Awesome write

September 2nd, 2016 08:41

Out of the Mist
P.X. Vexxus said:

Very nice. I love how you describe the importance of this person over your entire existence. Well written.

September 1st, 2016 20:27

Passion Fruit
Tony36 said:

Love it awesome write

August 31st, 2016 12:22