Comments received on poems by HerTime
Rocks, chains and pains
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a rap beat and flow as it speaks of forgiveness. Nicely written
March 23rd, 2026 03:36
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a rap beat and flow as it speaks of forgiveness. Nicely written
March 23rd, 2026 03:36
The shattered globe
sorenbarrett said:
So well worded in most poetic style this poem says it all from metaphor to good rhyme it tells of a boundary set. Nicely done a fave
March 21st, 2026 09:57
sorenbarrett said:
So well worded in most poetic style this poem says it all from metaphor to good rhyme it tells of a boundary set. Nicely done a fave
March 21st, 2026 09:57
Ruin my life.
sorenbarrett said:
There is a call for self immolation in this poem a suicidal cry that says one is ready for the consequences of a bad choice. Well written
March 20th, 2026 14:06
sorenbarrett said:
There is a call for self immolation in this poem a suicidal cry that says one is ready for the consequences of a bad choice. Well written
March 20th, 2026 14:06
To love or not to love
sorenbarrett said:
Great metaphor in this poem of seasons and temperature as well as new love and the timidity to reach out. Well done
March 19th, 2026 13:15
sorenbarrett said:
Great metaphor in this poem of seasons and temperature as well as new love and the timidity to reach out. Well done
March 19th, 2026 13:15
Pink
sorenbarrett said:
Pink a calming color used in quiet rooms and also a color used in my daughter\'s room when she was young. A wonderful write of reflection and development that has a tinge of nostalgia attached. Well done
March 17th, 2026 03:08
sorenbarrett said:
Pink a calming color used in quiet rooms and also a color used in my daughter\'s room when she was young. A wonderful write of reflection and development that has a tinge of nostalgia attached. Well done
March 17th, 2026 03:08
First Competition
sorenbarrett said:
This may be metaphorical or literal. Life is a sport the same as bull riding or rugby or ice hocky all can lead to aching bones. Nicely done
March 15th, 2026 19:41
sorenbarrett said:
This may be metaphorical or literal. Life is a sport the same as bull riding or rugby or ice hocky all can lead to aching bones. Nicely done
March 15th, 2026 19:41
To my Mama ❤️
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tribute to a mother done in poetic form it calls out as a homage to motherhood. Well done
March 12th, 2026 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tribute to a mother done in poetic form it calls out as a homage to motherhood. Well done
March 12th, 2026 04:04
A snake?
Doggerel Dave said:
Quite lost as to how a snake (\'Green scales and a cold stare\') relates to \'woman’s history\' unless there\'s an oblique \'analogy\' being drawn between the green snake and a male\'s erect penis (ripe red and rampant could work here - not mine, but poetically it has some alliterative properties......).
March 10th, 2026 06:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Quite lost as to how a snake (\'Green scales and a cold stare\') relates to \'woman’s history\' unless there\'s an oblique \'analogy\' being drawn between the green snake and a male\'s erect penis (ripe red and rampant could work here - not mine, but poetically it has some alliterative properties......).
March 10th, 2026 06:13
A snake?
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting analogy nicely written. My experience is that a snake will run rather than fight unless it feels cornered or surprised and so it is with most people.
March 10th, 2026 03:34
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting analogy nicely written. My experience is that a snake will run rather than fight unless it feels cornered or surprised and so it is with most people.
March 10th, 2026 03:34
When spring is here
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to be a farewell and wish well for them but also a message the they are always present in mind. Nicely done
March 4th, 2026 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to be a farewell and wish well for them but also a message the they are always present in mind. Nicely done
March 4th, 2026 04:55
Uncle Sam
sorenbarrett said:
Sad but so true he has not aged well. A political poem with teeth that have grown sharper and not fallen out. A strong write with a bite. and a fave
February 28th, 2026 21:04
sorenbarrett said:
Sad but so true he has not aged well. A political poem with teeth that have grown sharper and not fallen out. A strong write with a bite. and a fave
February 28th, 2026 21:04
I’m young
sorenbarrett said:
Emotions run purer in those not adulterated by age and learning. A most interesting write about love.
February 26th, 2026 19:21
sorenbarrett said:
Emotions run purer in those not adulterated by age and learning. A most interesting write about love.
February 26th, 2026 19:21
Fake
sorenbarrett said:
This is a bit heavy with threat and death of a fly a metaphor for the feeling of a person. Well done
February 25th, 2026 16:38
sorenbarrett said:
This is a bit heavy with threat and death of a fly a metaphor for the feeling of a person. Well done
February 25th, 2026 16:38
Where do you call home?
marissa said:
i resonate to this,it feels almost as if you’re describing how loneliness feels when you’re with a group of people.
February 18th, 2026 17:31
marissa said:
i resonate to this,it feels almost as if you’re describing how loneliness feels when you’re with a group of people.
February 18th, 2026 17:31
Was loving me so hard for you?
sorenbarrett said:
Perceptions and expectations make up so much of a relationship Nicely written
February 17th, 2026 20:00
sorenbarrett said:
Perceptions and expectations make up so much of a relationship Nicely written
February 17th, 2026 20:00
