Comments received on poems by Cindy
Being a human
sorenbarrett said:
Rules, commands, laws conformity and expectations all within this poem. Nicely done
May 3rd, 2026 11:35
sorenbarrett said:
Rules, commands, laws conformity and expectations all within this poem. Nicely done
May 3rd, 2026 11:35
Being a human
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem explores the tension between the notion of being a “functional” human and the loss of vitality, individuality, and joy in the pursuit of productivity.
May 3rd, 2026 09:12
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem explores the tension between the notion of being a “functional” human and the loss of vitality, individuality, and joy in the pursuit of productivity.
May 3rd, 2026 09:12
To be loved by a writer
Lorenz said:
A writer\'s Words of love are moths that get lost at dawn...
May 1st, 2026 10:57
Lorenz said:
A writer\'s Words of love are moths that get lost at dawn...
May 1st, 2026 10:57
To be loved by a writer
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed it is true and such an honor is to be cherished. Well written
May 1st, 2026 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed it is true and such an honor is to be cherished. Well written
May 1st, 2026 04:07
Trials
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of success that is questioned as to how it occurred whether by effort, talent, or something else nicely written
April 29th, 2026 17:28
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of success that is questioned as to how it occurred whether by effort, talent, or something else nicely written
April 29th, 2026 17:28
Light and dark entwined
sorenbarrett said:
Most beautiful wording in rhyme I particularly loved the last line
April 25th, 2026 10:27
sorenbarrett said:
Most beautiful wording in rhyme I particularly loved the last line
April 25th, 2026 10:27
I Tried to Hate Nature
sorenbarrett said:
This is a sad write about self esteem. Well done
April 19th, 2026 19:53
sorenbarrett said:
This is a sad write about self esteem. Well done
April 19th, 2026 19:53
Knock, knock it said
sorenbarrett said:
Here is fear and pain well expressed with some good lines. Nicely done in rhyme
April 16th, 2026 21:23
sorenbarrett said:
Here is fear and pain well expressed with some good lines. Nicely done in rhyme
April 16th, 2026 21:23
Knock, knock it said
Doggerel Dave said:
Doesn\'t sound like a happy place to me. I hope you can resolve either alone or with professional help, the mental state you are in.
April 16th, 2026 18:09
Doggerel Dave said:
Doesn\'t sound like a happy place to me. I hope you can resolve either alone or with professional help, the mental state you are in.
April 16th, 2026 18:09
Twinkle twinkle little star
sorenbarrett said:
This a variation on the famous verse expands the meaning
April 15th, 2026 15:34
sorenbarrett said:
This a variation on the famous verse expands the meaning
April 15th, 2026 15:34
Being myself
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting perspective of a different me old and new changed but the same. Well done
April 14th, 2026 13:06
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting perspective of a different me old and new changed but the same. Well done
April 14th, 2026 13:06
The Truth
Katie B. said:
We want the truth, the whole truth, and nothing but the truth. Well done.
April 13th, 2026 14:45
Katie B. said:
We want the truth, the whole truth, and nothing but the truth. Well done.
April 13th, 2026 14:45
The Truth
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that holds truth to be universal and unchanging well written
April 13th, 2026 14:34
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that holds truth to be universal and unchanging well written
April 13th, 2026 14:34
The Truth
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem revolves around the concept of truth and perception. It emphasizes that truth is subjective, shaped by individual experiences and perspectives.
April 13th, 2026 08:52
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem revolves around the concept of truth and perception. It emphasizes that truth is subjective, shaped by individual experiences and perspectives.
April 13th, 2026 08:52
What makes a person, a person?
2781 said:
What\'s in a name? It could be deeper revelation...but what makes us who we are? That\'s about our actions.
April 13th, 2026 07:36
2781 said:
What\'s in a name? It could be deeper revelation...but what makes us who we are? That\'s about our actions.
April 13th, 2026 07:36
What makes a person, a person?
DeadRose said:
I think the idea of consciousness, or the ability to think about things actively to make decisions, makes a person a person.
we can certainly be defined by a name. or a label (labelling theory is quite fascinating!). this can sometimes feel too limiting. or feel not fitting enough.
so the question is tricky, and its one many have been trying to explain away for centuries. thus I pose a question in return, does this act of inquiry make us human?
April 12th, 2026 21:50
DeadRose said:
I think the idea of consciousness, or the ability to think about things actively to make decisions, makes a person a person.
we can certainly be defined by a name. or a label (labelling theory is quite fascinating!). this can sometimes feel too limiting. or feel not fitting enough.
so the question is tricky, and its one many have been trying to explain away for centuries. thus I pose a question in return, does this act of inquiry make us human?
April 12th, 2026 21:50
What makes a person, a person?
sorenbarrett said:
Simplicity is letters expressed. Well written
April 12th, 2026 12:09
sorenbarrett said:
Simplicity is letters expressed. Well written
April 12th, 2026 12:09
I\'m your Shadow
sorenbarrett said:
This was quite a list today Kurt of diverse topics. A group of very nice compositions.
April 12th, 2026 12:07
sorenbarrett said:
This was quite a list today Kurt of diverse topics. A group of very nice compositions.
April 12th, 2026 12:07
That\'s what they said
sorenbarrett said:
War leaves little to be proud of and little to live for. Both sides losers. Nicely written
April 11th, 2026 08:10
sorenbarrett said:
War leaves little to be proud of and little to live for. Both sides losers. Nicely written
April 11th, 2026 08:10
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