Comments received on poems by noahguernot
Le Cerf blanc
sorenbarrett said:
There but for the grace of god go I comes to mind. Nicely written it is mystical and romantic in a serene way. Nicely done
September 1st, 2026 08:14
sorenbarrett said:
There but for the grace of god go I comes to mind. Nicely written it is mystical and romantic in a serene way. Nicely done
September 1st, 2026 08:14
Gas Station Runaway Girl
sorenbarrett said:
A most intriguing tale woven in animals for people a surreal feel. Nicely done
August 31st, 2026 07:05
sorenbarrett said:
A most intriguing tale woven in animals for people a surreal feel. Nicely done
August 31st, 2026 07:05
Flyin\' home
sorenbarrett said:
Although this paints a vivid real picture I can not but feel it is metaphoric. Well written
August 30th, 2026 10:36
sorenbarrett said:
Although this paints a vivid real picture I can not but feel it is metaphoric. Well written
August 30th, 2026 10:36
Morphine Lover
sorenbarrett said:
Memory may or not be merciful. Well written
August 29th, 2026 16:54
sorenbarrett said:
Memory may or not be merciful. Well written
August 29th, 2026 16:54
A blue house in the Appalachians
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write that speaks of dreams of a heavenly place. All my life I too dreamed of such a place and now live in it. Well done
August 28th, 2026 08:50
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write that speaks of dreams of a heavenly place. All my life I too dreamed of such a place and now live in it. Well done
August 28th, 2026 08:50
Whisky-Bar\'s dilemma
sorenbarrett said:
The onset of the effects of alcohol and its breaking of barriers and then revulsion. Well written
August 27th, 2026 09:03
sorenbarrett said:
The onset of the effects of alcohol and its breaking of barriers and then revulsion. Well written
August 27th, 2026 09:03
The woods have not forgotten you
sorenbarrett said:
The stag symbol of masculinity, strength and nobility a spiritual connection with nature. Well written
August 25th, 2026 13:14
sorenbarrett said:
The stag symbol of masculinity, strength and nobility a spiritual connection with nature. Well written
August 25th, 2026 13:14
About getting into Jenny\'s room
Fränz Müller said:
This called to mind someone I once knew. Was there for a painful part of their life and then one day they were just gone. All that’s left are the memories, and not many of them are good, but I hold onto them all that same, and wonder where they are from time to time.
August 24th, 2026 21:06
Fränz Müller said:
This called to mind someone I once knew. Was there for a painful part of their life and then one day they were just gone. All that’s left are the memories, and not many of them are good, but I hold onto them all that same, and wonder where they are from time to time.
August 24th, 2026 21:06
About getting into Jenny\'s room
sorenbarrett said:
A story of friendship and of shared secrets that have an ugly flavor. Sad
August 24th, 2026 06:49
sorenbarrett said:
A story of friendship and of shared secrets that have an ugly flavor. Sad
August 24th, 2026 06:49
Our Lady of the Pomegranate / Madonna della melagrana
sorenbarrett said:
Foreshadowing or premonitions cast in violent items where the blood red seeds and the knife do not bode well. A haunting poem of life itself born care free it becomes more dangerous with age. A wonderful and very deep write.
August 22nd, 2026 11:58
sorenbarrett said:
Foreshadowing or premonitions cast in violent items where the blood red seeds and the knife do not bode well. A haunting poem of life itself born care free it becomes more dangerous with age. A wonderful and very deep write.
August 22nd, 2026 11:58
Nightime Crash
sorenbarrett said:
Here the poem turns from real to surreal in a two legged stag. An accident from a deer in the road I could well understand but it becomes supernatural with the advent of the stag and the evil that pulls it back into the shadows. Well written
August 21st, 2026 15:48
sorenbarrett said:
Here the poem turns from real to surreal in a two legged stag. An accident from a deer in the road I could well understand but it becomes supernatural with the advent of the stag and the evil that pulls it back into the shadows. Well written
August 21st, 2026 15:48
Lottie\'s dress-up game !
sorenbarrett said:
A little girls diversion and fun pretending to be someone else. Well done
August 20th, 2026 16:04
sorenbarrett said:
A little girls diversion and fun pretending to be someone else. Well done
August 20th, 2026 16:04
Le Cerf nous rattrape
sorenbarrett said:
Fear searches for strength to reassure it finding it, it relaxes in its arms but anxiety is always around and although it can not be seen by others it is felt and rather than panic it would rather parish. All personified the poem reads as a folktale or myth. Nicely done
August 19th, 2026 09:29
sorenbarrett said:
Fear searches for strength to reassure it finding it, it relaxes in its arms but anxiety is always around and although it can not be seen by others it is felt and rather than panic it would rather parish. All personified the poem reads as a folktale or myth. Nicely done
August 19th, 2026 09:29
Concernant Barbara Donagahn
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of recognized loss and a choice that does not sound desired. Well done
August 18th, 2026 10:55
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of recognized loss and a choice that does not sound desired. Well done
August 18th, 2026 10:55
Going fishing on Monster Lake
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last line that leaves the doubt and the ambiguity in the language makes the story better. Is it only the narrator and fisherman that will eat tonight referring to only one of us meaning between narrator and thing in the water or only one at all being the narrator with them planning to eat the fisherman. Well done.
August 17th, 2026 11:13
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last line that leaves the doubt and the ambiguity in the language makes the story better. Is it only the narrator and fisherman that will eat tonight referring to only one of us meaning between narrator and thing in the water or only one at all being the narrator with them planning to eat the fisherman. Well done.
August 17th, 2026 11:13
Rehab return
sorenbarrett said:
A dream to awaken to a nightmare of emptiness. Well done
August 16th, 2026 11:46
sorenbarrett said:
A dream to awaken to a nightmare of emptiness. Well done
August 16th, 2026 11:46
Man of Georgia
sorenbarrett said:
It is those that feel themselves worthless that make the best companions. Well written
August 15th, 2026 11:46
sorenbarrett said:
It is those that feel themselves worthless that make the best companions. Well written
August 15th, 2026 11:46
Alpine murder
sorenbarrett said:
A threatening poem with a dark ending. Nicely said
August 14th, 2026 13:56
sorenbarrett said:
A threatening poem with a dark ending. Nicely said
August 14th, 2026 13:56
Wild Horses killing
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal for sure this write jumped from one image to another without shifting scenes. Well written it was haunting.
August 13th, 2026 18:16
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal for sure this write jumped from one image to another without shifting scenes. Well written it was haunting.
August 13th, 2026 18:16
Angel of Mud
sorenbarrett said:
You can pretend to be what another wants but you will always be you. A lovely write
August 10th, 2026 16:29
sorenbarrett said:
You can pretend to be what another wants but you will always be you. A lovely write
August 10th, 2026 16:29
Giulia\'s teeth
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write of an obsession turned fetish. Well written
August 9th, 2026 12:56
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write of an obsession turned fetish. Well written
August 9th, 2026 12:56
Ouranos comes down the hills
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read in vernacular and nicely measured in its wording. Lovely
July 26th, 2026 05:17
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read in vernacular and nicely measured in its wording. Lovely
July 26th, 2026 05:17
Une nuit dans la Cabane du Chasseur
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem of wilderness sex in nature savage and wild but as it should be untainted by civilization and an over preoccupation with hygiene. Raw and romantic in a natural way.
July 25th, 2026 14:46
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem of wilderness sex in nature savage and wild but as it should be untainted by civilization and an over preoccupation with hygiene. Raw and romantic in a natural way.
July 25th, 2026 14:46
