Comments received on poems by mohammad ali
Grieve It Not
David Wakeling said:
Wow a powerful verse.Very inspiring message.The cadence is very clever as well.
June 7th, 2026 00:15
David Wakeling said:
Wow a powerful verse.Very inspiring message.The cadence is very clever as well.
June 7th, 2026 00:15
Grieve It Not
sorenbarrett said:
Historic, religious significance and poetic what more could be asked for
June 6th, 2026 13:52
sorenbarrett said:
Historic, religious significance and poetic what more could be asked for
June 6th, 2026 13:52
Vow-Breaking
sorenbarrett said:
I love the meter, format and rhyme of this poem along with its rhythm. So nicely done it is refreshing to hear something different than the common and for that a fave
June 5th, 2026 08:44
sorenbarrett said:
I love the meter, format and rhyme of this poem along with its rhythm. So nicely done it is refreshing to hear something different than the common and for that a fave
June 5th, 2026 08:44
Dominant Death
sorenbarrett said:
Death will take us all victim and thief very nicely written
June 3rd, 2026 08:44
sorenbarrett said:
Death will take us all victim and thief very nicely written
June 3rd, 2026 08:44
The Wise and Love
sorenbarrett said:
This short write requires a good deal of thought. Nicely done
May 27th, 2026 12:22
sorenbarrett said:
This short write requires a good deal of thought. Nicely done
May 27th, 2026 12:22
Patience and Triumph
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly worded this poem speaks more than appears on the surface. Well done
May 26th, 2026 09:30
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly worded this poem speaks more than appears on the surface. Well done
May 26th, 2026 09:30
Grass and Flower
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely said a poem of aging and death. Well done and a fave
May 24th, 2026 19:02
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely said a poem of aging and death. Well done and a fave
May 24th, 2026 19:02
Time, The Potter
mohammad ali said:
My dear friend! How is it now? Meaningful with a proper rhyme rhythm? All the words of the original poem are included; just the final phrase of \'as fate\' for the sake of rhyme.
A cup is body, wit would say, \"Well-done!\"
A hundred kisses sure on brow to run
So kindly; Time—the potter—would create
So fine the cup and knocks it down as fate.
A cup is body, wit would say, \"Well-done!\"
A hundred kisses sure on brow to run
So kindly; Time—the potter—would create
So fine the cup and knocks it down as fate.
May 23rd, 2026 10:21
mohammad ali said:
My dear friend! How is it now? Meaningful with a proper rhyme rhythm? All the words of the original poem are included; just the final phrase of \'as fate\' for the sake of rhyme.
A cup is body, wit would say, \"Well-done!\"
A hundred kisses sure on brow to run
So kindly; Time—the potter—would create
So fine the cup and knocks it down as fate.
A cup is body, wit would say, \"Well-done!\"
A hundred kisses sure on brow to run
So kindly; Time—the potter—would create
So fine the cup and knocks it down as fate.
May 23rd, 2026 10:21
Time, The Potter
sorenbarrett said:
The breakdown of the last run of words where the meter can be seen emphasizing each word. Translation is a most difficult thing in poetry I have tried it and always something is lost. Very nice Mohammad
May 23rd, 2026 07:03
sorenbarrett said:
The breakdown of the last run of words where the meter can be seen emphasizing each word. Translation is a most difficult thing in poetry I have tried it and always something is lost. Very nice Mohammad
May 23rd, 2026 07:03
Human Essence
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem about a wonderful myth. Lovely
May 22nd, 2026 19:23
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem about a wonderful myth. Lovely
May 22nd, 2026 19:23
Palace, A Ruin, Hunting, Hunted
sorenbarrett said:
A scholarly work that is beyond my expertise but certainly seems to add meaning to what was less meaningful in translation. Very nicely done
May 20th, 2026 10:40
sorenbarrett said:
A scholarly work that is beyond my expertise but certainly seems to add meaning to what was less meaningful in translation. Very nicely done
May 20th, 2026 10:40
Vice and Virtue
sorenbarrett said:
Strongly stated and a most important message. Well written
May 19th, 2026 08:33
sorenbarrett said:
Strongly stated and a most important message. Well written
May 19th, 2026 08:33
