Comments received on poems by Caveman
Time’s Estranged
sorenbarrett said:
Here is a write of how one sees their life and time pass. seeing one\'s past is one thing one\'s future another. This poem presents both in an all encompassing vision. Nicely done
September 25th, 2026 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
Here is a write of how one sees their life and time pass. seeing one\'s past is one thing one\'s future another. This poem presents both in an all encompassing vision. Nicely done
September 25th, 2026 04:45
Time’s Estranged
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Caveman, this one stopped me. That sense of having already died somehow and still being here afterward is unsettling as hell. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 24th, 2026 23:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Caveman, this one stopped me. That sense of having already died somehow and still being here afterward is unsettling as hell. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 24th, 2026 23:31
Stone
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well hell, Caveman...I won’t walk across gravel quite so casually after this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 20th, 2026 18:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well hell, Caveman...I won’t walk across gravel quite so casually after this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 20th, 2026 18:09
Stone
sorenbarrett said:
As small and ordinary as we are we each have a place that makes up the greater whole. Nicely written
September 20th, 2026 11:19
sorenbarrett said:
As small and ordinary as we are we each have a place that makes up the greater whole. Nicely written
September 20th, 2026 11:19
Thoughts of a tree
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Okay, Caveman...now you’ve got me wondering what the trees outside my window think about all of us running around like idiots. 😂 Loved this, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 19th, 2026 15:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Okay, Caveman...now you’ve got me wondering what the trees outside my window think about all of us running around like idiots. 😂 Loved this, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 19th, 2026 15:03
Thoughts of a tree
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderfully worked as a metaphor. Nicely done
September 19th, 2026 10:54
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderfully worked as a metaphor. Nicely done
September 19th, 2026 10:54
When the timbers gave way
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That “ant stuck in a forever hurricane” image is wild, Caveman...I keep thinking about it...an image not soon to be forgotten. Engaging peice. my friend, as always.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 18th, 2026 10:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That “ant stuck in a forever hurricane” image is wild, Caveman...I keep thinking about it...an image not soon to be forgotten. Engaging peice. my friend, as always.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 18th, 2026 10:03
When the timbers gave way
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely metaphor that speaks to thoughts held back and the force of a rupture in the dam that leaves one peaceful and calm in the end.
September 18th, 2026 09:06
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely metaphor that speaks to thoughts held back and the force of a rupture in the dam that leaves one peaceful and calm in the end.
September 18th, 2026 09:06
When the timbers gave way
Paul Bell said:
Yes, sometimes we just have to wait, and although it seems an eternity all is good in the end.
September 18th, 2026 09:03
Paul Bell said:
Yes, sometimes we just have to wait, and although it seems an eternity all is good in the end.
September 18th, 2026 09:03
A simple lesson learned through grief
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Caveman, this fucking hurt. That realization arrived too late to change what happened, but not too late to change who you are...there is tremendous love and regret in this. Powerful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 17th, 2026 10:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Caveman, this fucking hurt. That realization arrived too late to change what happened, but not too late to change who you are...there is tremendous love and regret in this. Powerful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 17th, 2026 10:38
Fire within
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Caveman, this hurt to read...the speaker sees every consequence coming and still wants the release. That is painfully human and brutally honest. Powerful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 17th, 2026 10:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Caveman, this hurt to read...the speaker sees every consequence coming and still wants the release. That is painfully human and brutally honest. Powerful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 17th, 2026 10:09
A simple lesson learned through grief
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely message sent in personification that feels real. Lovely a fave
September 17th, 2026 09:43
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely message sent in personification that feels real. Lovely a fave
September 17th, 2026 09:43
A birds eye view
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Caveman, what a charming shift in perspective. The little guardian claims the feeding ground while gradually accepting the strange giants who keep it flourishing. Delightful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 16th, 2026 15:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Caveman, what a charming shift in perspective. The little guardian claims the feeding ground while gradually accepting the strange giants who keep it flourishing. Delightful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 16th, 2026 15:02
Fire within
sorenbarrett said:
Embers still alive pose treats when the conditions are right. Nicely done
September 16th, 2026 10:32
sorenbarrett said:
Embers still alive pose treats when the conditions are right. Nicely done
September 16th, 2026 10:32
A birds eye view
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks of strange friends that distances one from the human world. Well written
September 15th, 2026 10:53
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks of strange friends that distances one from the human world. Well written
September 15th, 2026 10:53
An empty shell
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a beautifully contemplative haiku, my friend. The life has departed, but its fragile evidence remains fixed in place, turning transformation into memorial. Excellent work, Caveman. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 14th, 2026 11:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a beautifully contemplative haiku, my friend. The life has departed, but its fragile evidence remains fixed in place, turning transformation into memorial. Excellent work, Caveman. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 14th, 2026 11:27
The realization of me
sorenbarrett said:
A fish story, a catch, nicely told this poem speaks of freeing oneself from one\'s own net. Nicely done
September 13th, 2026 10:37
sorenbarrett said:
A fish story, a catch, nicely told this poem speaks of freeing oneself from one\'s own net. Nicely done
September 13th, 2026 10:37
