Comments received on poems by isituorme
Secret garden
L. B. Mek said:
\'The lawn is brown it holds a frown
It’s etched across its face
It’s looking back on fonder times
That will not be replaced
The soil is cracked it’s life force gone
Potential all bereft
The promise of future life it’s seems
Got up and left\'..
well written, thanks for sharing
January 11th, 2022 07:58
L. B. Mek said:
\'The lawn is brown it holds a frown
It’s etched across its face
It’s looking back on fonder times
That will not be replaced
The soil is cracked it’s life force gone
Potential all bereft
The promise of future life it’s seems
Got up and left\'..
well written, thanks for sharing
January 11th, 2022 07:58
Isityouorme
L. B. Mek said:
\'I say the thing I really mean
but you still live there in the dream
the past solutions I can\'t change
but I\'m here on another day
Compare me not to who\'ve you lost
but look now to what you\'ve got
I\'m here with you my arms held wide
You shoot me down with hidden pride\'..
these lines say it all, what a great read dear poet,
I certainly can relate your worded frustration at trying to engage with someone wholly and them being too calloused and bruised from past disappointment\'s to be able to decipher: the veracity of my intentions..
March 11th, 2021 06:21
L. B. Mek said:
\'I say the thing I really mean
but you still live there in the dream
the past solutions I can\'t change
but I\'m here on another day
Compare me not to who\'ve you lost
but look now to what you\'ve got
I\'m here with you my arms held wide
You shoot me down with hidden pride\'..
these lines say it all, what a great read dear poet,
I certainly can relate your worded frustration at trying to engage with someone wholly and them being too calloused and bruised from past disappointment\'s to be able to decipher: the veracity of my intentions..
March 11th, 2021 06:21
Isityouorme
Doggerel Dave said:
I normally pass straight over unrequited love/misery poetry, but for reasons unknown to me I flicked back and sampled a couple of your back catalogue. Two things evident: you do utilize diverse subject matter in your poetry AND you haven’t been here for a very long time. So hope to see more of you now, but not the misery love stuff – It’s (unfortunately) a crowded field here.
March 10th, 2021 17:38
Doggerel Dave said:
I normally pass straight over unrequited love/misery poetry, but for reasons unknown to me I flicked back and sampled a couple of your back catalogue. Two things evident: you do utilize diverse subject matter in your poetry AND you haven’t been here for a very long time. So hope to see more of you now, but not the misery love stuff – It’s (unfortunately) a crowded field here.
March 10th, 2021 17:38
Sitting in the waiting room
isituorme said:
Thanks for commenting, I had this the other night only to be told they didn\'t have results so could I come back ,and it ended with the doc saying this place is s---t at the top of his voice in front of everyone ,would have made a good comedy scratch ,have a great weekend x
December 17th, 2016 07:09
isituorme said:
Thanks for commenting, I had this the other night only to be told they didn\'t have results so could I come back ,and it ended with the doc saying this place is s---t at the top of his voice in front of everyone ,would have made a good comedy scratch ,have a great weekend x
December 17th, 2016 07:09
Sitting in the waiting room
WriteBeLight said:
Ha..Ha! Perfect poem depicting how badly patients are treated in the waiting room. When that happened to my kids, while waiting with me, I would get up and get in the face of the receptionist. It always worked as my poor kid was suffering, waiting to see the Doc. Good job!
December 17th, 2016 05:15
WriteBeLight said:
Ha..Ha! Perfect poem depicting how badly patients are treated in the waiting room. When that happened to my kids, while waiting with me, I would get up and get in the face of the receptionist. It always worked as my poor kid was suffering, waiting to see the Doc. Good job!
December 17th, 2016 05:15
The who
SabreLi said:
You are quite right to being attention to such a prominent issue, whether this time of year or any other time. There are people who are homeless through their own acts or omissions; and then there are those who are there through no fault of their own such as war vets who had nothing to come back to. Very good rhythm and rhyme; potent message, a great write! xx
December 16th, 2016 09:18
SabreLi said:
You are quite right to being attention to such a prominent issue, whether this time of year or any other time. There are people who are homeless through their own acts or omissions; and then there are those who are there through no fault of their own such as war vets who had nothing to come back to. Very good rhythm and rhyme; potent message, a great write! xx
December 16th, 2016 09:18
The fright
SabreLi said:
Such a fabulous description of hell! I love it; the way you describe not only the visuals; but the sounds and smells as well really bring realism to the table. Great work! xx
December 15th, 2016 09:56
SabreLi said:
Such a fabulous description of hell! I love it; the way you describe not only the visuals; but the sounds and smells as well really bring realism to the table. Great work! xx
December 15th, 2016 09:56
Mans best friend
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ISITU ~ for a great doggy poem ! Full of rhyme & rhythm I can just visualise him lolloping along ! Reminds me of a Lab I one had ~ a boys best friend indeed ! Excellent and so true to canine life ~ Thanks for sharing ~ Sadly only a tropical fish tanbk now I'm stuck in a flat ! BRIAN
July 21st, 2016 09:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ISITU ~ for a great doggy poem ! Full of rhyme & rhythm I can just visualise him lolloping along ! Reminds me of a Lab I one had ~ a boys best friend indeed ! Excellent and so true to canine life ~ Thanks for sharing ~ Sadly only a tropical fish tanbk now I'm stuck in a flat ! BRIAN
July 21st, 2016 09:51
Tears
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANK YOU ISITU ~ For a very sensitive poem on the horrific massacre in NICE (France). Nice is a beautiful resort on the Riviera and the last place on Earth where on would expect "massacre by motor" just as planes were used in 911. There is no peace ~ there is no protection ~ we are all in peril from our neighbours ~ who can we trust ? Your opening and closing stanzas are very very haunting ! The songs of pain they reach up high # For those who were not meant to die # Again tears fall down from the sky ....... ! Thanks for caring ~ Yours BRIAN
July 15th, 2016 17:06
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANK YOU ISITU ~ For a very sensitive poem on the horrific massacre in NICE (France). Nice is a beautiful resort on the Riviera and the last place on Earth where on would expect "massacre by motor" just as planes were used in 911. There is no peace ~ there is no protection ~ we are all in peril from our neighbours ~ who can we trust ? Your opening and closing stanzas are very very haunting ! The songs of pain they reach up high # For those who were not meant to die # Again tears fall down from the sky ....... ! Thanks for caring ~ Yours BRIAN
July 15th, 2016 17:06
The London tube
Daniel said:
As a commuter I related instantly to your poem, great write!
July 15th, 2016 04:35
Daniel said:
As a commuter I related instantly to your poem, great write!
July 15th, 2016 04:35
The London tube
AlitaOpal said:
I know about transport for London 😉
Very chaotic especially during rush hour.. Just remember questioning life while having to commute to work..
I enjoyed it 💐💐💐
July 14th, 2016 08:16
AlitaOpal said:
I know about transport for London 😉
Very chaotic especially during rush hour.. Just remember questioning life while having to commute to work..
I enjoyed it 💐💐💐
July 14th, 2016 08:16
The London tube
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS ISITU ~ I OFTEN GO TO LONDON ~ and if I want to get from A (Acton Central) to B (Barbican) the Tube gets me there efficiently ~ economically and effectively. It is the World's No. 1 Tube System. However as you say "All Human Life is there". Every class colour culture cross-section and more close up and personal than a dance floor ~ especially at "rush hour". I regularly fall in love on the tube ~ but alas only between stops ~ because the Tube is Middle Earth and we are all transitory Hobbits. Your BRIAN
July 14th, 2016 07:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS ISITU ~ I OFTEN GO TO LONDON ~ and if I want to get from A (Acton Central) to B (Barbican) the Tube gets me there efficiently ~ economically and effectively. It is the World's No. 1 Tube System. However as you say "All Human Life is there". Every class colour culture cross-section and more close up and personal than a dance floor ~ especially at "rush hour". I regularly fall in love on the tube ~ but alas only between stops ~ because the Tube is Middle Earth and we are all transitory Hobbits. Your BRIAN
July 14th, 2016 07:22
Long dark tunnel
AlitaOpal said:
For if they don't and the change soon arrives..
Then tell me what good are these guns and knives..
It's not about rules nor is it about needing protection..
But true freedom, through love and unity for our liberation..
Your poem speaks volumes, you just inspired me to write a piece..
Thank you, I really like this one
👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾💐💐💐
July 11th, 2016 17:44
AlitaOpal said:
For if they don't and the change soon arrives..
Then tell me what good are these guns and knives..
It's not about rules nor is it about needing protection..
But true freedom, through love and unity for our liberation..
Your poem speaks volumes, you just inspired me to write a piece..
Thank you, I really like this one
👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾💐💐💐
July 11th, 2016 17:44
The bullshit
AlitaOpal said:
I'm without judgement, sometimes the only thing you can be is true to yourself however harsh it may be..
I've been there 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
💐💐💐
July 11th, 2016 17:34
AlitaOpal said:
I'm without judgement, sometimes the only thing you can be is true to yourself however harsh it may be..
I've been there 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
💐💐💐
July 11th, 2016 17:34
Tea time
lysistrata said:
Gosh Isituorme,
Have you ever heard of the word "Omertà"?
How on earth did you get to join a gang?!
I know,I know...
You wished upon a Star!!
L./Nûñnë'hï
June 16th, 2016 08:33
lysistrata said:
Gosh Isituorme,
Have you ever heard of the word "Omertà"?
How on earth did you get to join a gang?!
I know,I know...
You wished upon a Star!!
L./Nûñnë'hï
June 16th, 2016 08:33
Morning
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing a perfect "Fantasies of the Night Poem". The noises of the real world - postmen - milkmen - dustmen bring us back from Dream World into time & sense ! Most nights I sleep on my own - perfect opportunity to fantasise. I can empathise 'cos I meet them too - Knights - Damsels (usually in some form of distress !) - Talking clocks and the ubiquitous Flying Horse ! That was just last night. Howling dogs are the last straw - the mystic spell is broken ! I too - wash - shave and prepare for work ! I work in a College so (even in the day) I do meet Knights - lots of Damsels (most in distress) and of course Talking Clocks announcing the end of each period ! I am sure your Office is much less surreal ! Thanks fir sharing - it opened my mind ! Yours BRIAN
June 12th, 2016 11:06
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing a perfect "Fantasies of the Night Poem". The noises of the real world - postmen - milkmen - dustmen bring us back from Dream World into time & sense ! Most nights I sleep on my own - perfect opportunity to fantasise. I can empathise 'cos I meet them too - Knights - Damsels (usually in some form of distress !) - Talking clocks and the ubiquitous Flying Horse ! That was just last night. Howling dogs are the last straw - the mystic spell is broken ! I too - wash - shave and prepare for work ! I work in a College so (even in the day) I do meet Knights - lots of Damsels (most in distress) and of course Talking Clocks announcing the end of each period ! I am sure your Office is much less surreal ! Thanks fir sharing - it opened my mind ! Yours BRIAN
June 12th, 2016 11:06
