Comments received on poems by willyweed
Mother; I remain
MendedFences27 said:
The bad seed, the black sheep, the one who turns out bad: the mother\'s premonition, the gallows and the death, and the possibility of life after. Sounds biblical, or at least supernatural. Nice structure to the poem, how you broke it up. Great images, especially \"Mother\'s House.\" Good one. - Phil A.
March 3rd, 2017 21:46
MendedFences27 said:
The bad seed, the black sheep, the one who turns out bad: the mother\'s premonition, the gallows and the death, and the possibility of life after. Sounds biblical, or at least supernatural. Nice structure to the poem, how you broke it up. Great images, especially \"Mother\'s House.\" Good one. - Phil A.
March 3rd, 2017 21:46
Mother; I remain
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a great write and will read it again.
March 3rd, 2017 14:07
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a great write and will read it again.
March 3rd, 2017 14:07
Mother; I remain
Augustus said:
It appears you are saying that at birth the mother believed this child will come to no good. I love the construction from different perspectives.
March 3rd, 2017 14:06
Augustus said:
It appears you are saying that at birth the mother believed this child will come to no good. I love the construction from different perspectives.
March 3rd, 2017 14:06
Mother; I remain
Michael Edwards said:
Good and sad - do like the way you have formatted it.
March 3rd, 2017 13:55
Michael Edwards said:
Good and sad - do like the way you have formatted it.
March 3rd, 2017 13:55
Mother; I remain
rrodriguez said:
Very interesting write, the rhyme is awesome and nice.
March 3rd, 2017 13:54
rrodriguez said:
Very interesting write, the rhyme is awesome and nice.
March 3rd, 2017 13:54
Mother; I remain
WriteBeLight said:
I feel a very deep sorrow after reading this poem WW. Excellent poetry, albeit, very sad.
March 3rd, 2017 13:33
WriteBeLight said:
I feel a very deep sorrow after reading this poem WW. Excellent poetry, albeit, very sad.
March 3rd, 2017 13:33
death was a lady
willyweed said:
Augustus:
Well we can\'t have every thing we want but I have you Augustus and that is good enough for me. I intend to hang tomorrow so see you at the public hangings tomorrow 11:00am sharp. ww
March 2nd, 2017 13:56
willyweed said:
Augustus:
Well we can\'t have every thing we want but I have you Augustus and that is good enough for me. I intend to hang tomorrow so see you at the public hangings tomorrow 11:00am sharp. ww
March 2nd, 2017 13:56
death was a lady
MendedFences27 said:
Death is almost always portrayed as either a shadowy figure or a horrible monster, rarely, if ever, as a beautiful woman.What an imaginative twist to the final scene, and then to postpone the ultimate meeting is absolutely brilliant. Great creativity. - Phil A.
March 2nd, 2017 13:19
MendedFences27 said:
Death is almost always portrayed as either a shadowy figure or a horrible monster, rarely, if ever, as a beautiful woman.What an imaginative twist to the final scene, and then to postpone the ultimate meeting is absolutely brilliant. Great creativity. - Phil A.
March 2nd, 2017 13:19
death was a lady
WriteBeLight said:
Great job WW. Reminds me of the Movie of the Week movie \"Death Takes A Holiday.\" Great idea and great work from you as always. I would say when we all see you have posted a poem, we are dying to read them? HaHa
March 2nd, 2017 12:51
WriteBeLight said:
Great job WW. Reminds me of the Movie of the Week movie \"Death Takes A Holiday.\" Great idea and great work from you as always. I would say when we all see you have posted a poem, we are dying to read them? HaHa
March 2nd, 2017 12:51
death was a lady
Augustus said:
I half expected her to put an ice pick through your heart at any moment. Thanks for sparing your life. Hmmn, something to look forward to. Great write!
March 2nd, 2017 12:19
Augustus said:
I half expected her to put an ice pick through your heart at any moment. Thanks for sparing your life. Hmmn, something to look forward to. Great write!
March 2nd, 2017 12:19
death was a lady
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. I hope that you meet her eventually but not for many years as you have too much writing to do first.
March 2nd, 2017 08:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. I hope that you meet her eventually but not for many years as you have too much writing to do first.
March 2nd, 2017 08:52
dance with my shadow
MendedFences27 said:
Time to lighten the load before you go overboard. Deep six the clutter of the past, and hoist sail for happier times. somewhere there is an island, where you can be unknown and yet accepted, where the Sun always shines and your spirit soars. When you find it, send us the location. - Phil A.
March 1st, 2017 21:31
MendedFences27 said:
Time to lighten the load before you go overboard. Deep six the clutter of the past, and hoist sail for happier times. somewhere there is an island, where you can be unknown and yet accepted, where the Sun always shines and your spirit soars. When you find it, send us the location. - Phil A.
March 1st, 2017 21:31
dance with my shadow
Augustus said:
So much said in a positive, reflective way. You damn good!
March 1st, 2017 19:09
Augustus said:
So much said in a positive, reflective way. You damn good!
March 1st, 2017 19:09
dance with my shadow
Jooles said:
Nice write and very true...can\'t Change what you\'ve done only what you can do
March 1st, 2017 16:53
Jooles said:
Nice write and very true...can\'t Change what you\'ve done only what you can do
March 1st, 2017 16:53
dance with my shadow
TylerHathaway said:
I love it\'s simplistic yet honest lighthearted ness. . Good piece
March 1st, 2017 14:37
TylerHathaway said:
I love it\'s simplistic yet honest lighthearted ness. . Good piece
March 1st, 2017 14:37
dance with my shadow
willyweed said:
Well not at you plus you said we where friends yesterday? you still remember me Kevin From Bath home of the Wales outside O lundom Great England ? I still LU Plus did you find an apartment for me yet ? ww in the home of the piss poor voters of the whole world? let me know pls hurry now I be waiting right here by the staue of liberagy?
March 1st, 2017 12:43
willyweed said:
Well not at you plus you said we where friends yesterday? you still remember me Kevin From Bath home of the Wales outside O lundom Great England ? I still LU Plus did you find an apartment for me yet ? ww in the home of the piss poor voters of the whole world? let me know pls hurry now I be waiting right here by the staue of liberagy?
March 1st, 2017 12:43
dance with my shadow
kevin browne said:
smokin\' and tokin\' all the way. super poem ww. you\'re not that mad after all..!
March 1st, 2017 12:29
kevin browne said:
smokin\' and tokin\' all the way. super poem ww. you\'re not that mad after all..!
March 1st, 2017 12:29
dance with my shadow
Michael Edwards said:
Great stuff - so nice and positive - good \'un Willy.
March 1st, 2017 11:37
Michael Edwards said:
Great stuff - so nice and positive - good \'un Willy.
March 1st, 2017 11:37
dance with my shadow
notapoet said:
Another great write WW, a pleasure to read.
March 1st, 2017 10:22
notapoet said:
Another great write WW, a pleasure to read.
March 1st, 2017 10:22
dance with my shadow
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, never look back or go back, go forward towards the light.
March 1st, 2017 08:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, never look back or go back, go forward towards the light.
March 1st, 2017 08:54
dance with my shadow
WriteBeLight said:
Yea! But that crap in the rear view mirror and see it get smaller, smaller and smaller, until it disappears from view. Then look ahead! I do not want you to hit anything as you drive on! This is great poetry WW!
March 1st, 2017 05:51
WriteBeLight said:
Yea! But that crap in the rear view mirror and see it get smaller, smaller and smaller, until it disappears from view. Then look ahead! I do not want you to hit anything as you drive on! This is great poetry WW!
March 1st, 2017 05:51
Somewhere on the five
WriteBeLight said:
Must have been quite the Angel you saw there on the road, to have put the experience down so very well. Thanks for writing and posting it. Really great WW!
February 28th, 2017 12:34
WriteBeLight said:
Must have been quite the Angel you saw there on the road, to have put the experience down so very well. Thanks for writing and posting it. Really great WW!
February 28th, 2017 12:34
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