Comments received on poems by willyweed
House Of Sin
Augustus said:
Riveting, suspenseful, classic, easily readable with a nice rhyme. Loved it!
February 19th, 2017 15:50
Augustus said:
Riveting, suspenseful, classic, easily readable with a nice rhyme. Loved it!
February 19th, 2017 15:50
House Of Sin
Michael Edwards said:
This held for every word - what a great write Willy
February 19th, 2017 14:57
Michael Edwards said:
This held for every word - what a great write Willy
February 19th, 2017 14:57
I found her on a rainbow
willyweed said:
And here I stand corrected I thought I lost you as a reader for good and would never heard for you again as the last of my poems that you read or at least comment you said I am almost to afraid to comment on this poem and now I para ... phase as you slowly loose you mind and then as now you were right? There is some half truths in this and the poem I posted way to early get any reation early for no one read or cared to comment on a writer named willyweed for they thought I was ether to stoned from smoking weed or to high to think straight my first dozen posts or so and I put my best a work forward first I got all of this many people & comments ( comment O some) well I quit the weeds years ago and also quit my gardening for lack of interest of growing a garden just so all I could pull and throw away the only thing ever to grow in a my garden WEEDS the name of my favorite pen was willy I I combined my favorite pet pen with by most dreaded & failed hobby gardening and here I must say you where right in your assessment then as now I feel my grip on sanity getting tighter and my hope of tomorrow is I will it be just a little, just as you of me then I was just waiting for the bus for nutsville just they say of a marine one a nut always a nut I was so sorry Of what I might say to you how you never said a cross word about any bodys work but the as now you concern for me not you and my concern was then and is now for you ? this is a strange world we live it , And I still say sane or not All we all ever need is love and con cern is and offshoot born of love for human being Thank for your concern you were gone but never forgotten my good
friend and more then fair lady thank for not giving up totally on me stronger day by day one day soon tatally sane WW
February 19th, 2017 14:12
willyweed said:
And here I stand corrected I thought I lost you as a reader for good and would never heard for you again as the last of my poems that you read or at least comment you said I am almost to afraid to comment on this poem and now I para ... phase as you slowly loose you mind and then as now you were right? There is some half truths in this and the poem I posted way to early get any reation early for no one read or cared to comment on a writer named willyweed for they thought I was ether to stoned from smoking weed or to high to think straight my first dozen posts or so and I put my best a work forward first I got all of this many people & comments ( comment O some) well I quit the weeds years ago and also quit my gardening for lack of interest of growing a garden just so all I could pull and throw away the only thing ever to grow in a my garden WEEDS the name of my favorite pen was willy I I combined my favorite pet pen with by most dreaded & failed hobby gardening and here I must say you where right in your assessment then as now I feel my grip on sanity getting tighter and my hope of tomorrow is I will it be just a little, just as you of me then I was just waiting for the bus for nutsville just they say of a marine one a nut always a nut I was so sorry Of what I might say to you how you never said a cross word about any bodys work but the as now you concern for me not you and my concern was then and is now for you ? this is a strange world we live it , And I still say sane or not All we all ever need is love and con cern is and offshoot born of love for human being Thank for your concern you were gone but never forgotten my good
friend and more then fair lady thank for not giving up totally on me stronger day by day one day soon tatally sane WW
February 19th, 2017 14:12
I found her on a rainbow
Christina8 said:
Wonderful write! I am glad this was only a dream, but you expressed yourself so well. Again, very nice poem!--Christina
February 19th, 2017 13:04
Christina8 said:
Wonderful write! I am glad this was only a dream, but you expressed yourself so well. Again, very nice poem!--Christina
February 19th, 2017 13:04
I found her on a rainbow
willyweed said:
Oh write be light so vivid it was this dream I got and dressed And then too k a hot shower as the soaked through my one and only suit so its also my best suit as I get ready to go to pay my last respect I do it even if the dead is a stranger ( I love dress up that much in my one and only so I call it my best suit) PS it about here I realize in my haste I forgot to remember just like last time (h dang it all ) to shower first and then dress so I left the house all wet and a shivering so hard that my knees were knocking so hard That should at least go and see if someone was knocking at my front door so thank you the read and comment but please excuse me I must go and answer the door good day Mad dam I must answer my door!
February 19th, 2017 06:54
willyweed said:
Oh write be light so vivid it was this dream I got and dressed And then too k a hot shower as the soaked through my one and only suit so its also my best suit as I get ready to go to pay my last respect I do it even if the dead is a stranger ( I love dress up that much in my one and only so I call it my best suit) PS it about here I realize in my haste I forgot to remember just like last time (h dang it all ) to shower first and then dress so I left the house all wet and a shivering so hard that my knees were knocking so hard That should at least go and see if someone was knocking at my front door so thank you the read and comment but please excuse me I must go and answer the door good day Mad dam I must answer my door!
February 19th, 2017 06:54
I found her on a rainbow
WriteBeLight said:
I can see how you feel more alive after a dream like that WW. Great you could express it the way you do here.
February 19th, 2017 06:17
WriteBeLight said:
I can see how you feel more alive after a dream like that WW. Great you could express it the way you do here.
February 19th, 2017 06:17
I found her on a rainbow
willyweed said:
Thank you Kevin If it didn\'t kill me I know this poem made me stronger!
And I must thank you for understanding it but you didn\'t just do that you said it was a pretty cool write! I must respond and my work may appear cool but only to the most sophisticated & very cool reader and would be you No? WW says yes indeed peace through ww
February 19th, 2017 05:25
willyweed said:
Thank you Kevin If it didn\'t kill me I know this poem made me stronger!
And I must thank you for understanding it but you didn\'t just do that you said it was a pretty cool write! I must respond and my work may appear cool but only to the most sophisticated & very cool reader and would be you No? WW says yes indeed peace through ww
February 19th, 2017 05:25
I found her on a rainbow
kevin browne said:
a very inflicting dream. glad you woke up from it. a pretty cool write WillyWeed.
February 19th, 2017 00:34
kevin browne said:
a very inflicting dream. glad you woke up from it. a pretty cool write WillyWeed.
February 19th, 2017 00:34
Valentine’s Day 1-2-3
WriteBeLight said:
Wow! You should write for Hallmark. They might have to start a new section, though....excellent work Willy. I really mean it!
February 15th, 2017 13:21
WriteBeLight said:
Wow! You should write for Hallmark. They might have to start a new section, though....excellent work Willy. I really mean it!
February 15th, 2017 13:21
Valentine’s Day 1-2-3
Augustus said:
Wounded lion\'s rage. Wow. Surprising. Hugs.
February 15th, 2017 12:51
Augustus said:
Wounded lion\'s rage. Wow. Surprising. Hugs.
February 15th, 2017 12:51
I’m going back to Normal (and I cant there from here ])
Augustus said:
Sounds like you and daughter have great relationship. This is not traditional and I don\'t know what you had wished for but you seem to be making the best of it. Hugs.
February 13th, 2017 12:00
Augustus said:
Sounds like you and daughter have great relationship. This is not traditional and I don\'t know what you had wished for but you seem to be making the best of it. Hugs.
February 13th, 2017 12:00
I’m going back to Normal (and I cant there from here ])
WriteBeLight said:
Great Job!
February 12th, 2017 03:31
WriteBeLight said:
Great Job!
February 12th, 2017 03:31
I’m going back to Normal (and I cant there from here ])
Augustus said:
Way to go ww. Hope your daughter finds true love. Hugs.
February 11th, 2017 21:14
Augustus said:
Way to go ww. Hope your daughter finds true love. Hugs.
February 11th, 2017 21:14
late one night (early in summer)
Augustus said:
Nice transport. Nice poem. Mine was a 57 Pontiac. Hang in there ww. Hugs.
February 10th, 2017 17:17
Augustus said:
Nice transport. Nice poem. Mine was a 57 Pontiac. Hang in there ww. Hugs.
February 10th, 2017 17:17
late one night (early in summer)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks WILLY ~ Cars are Cars but a White & Blue \'57 Chevy is pure HAVANA ! Pleased you have been given a clean Bill of Health ! Yours Brian
February 10th, 2017 17:16
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks WILLY ~ Cars are Cars but a White & Blue \'57 Chevy is pure HAVANA ! Pleased you have been given a clean Bill of Health ! Yours Brian
February 10th, 2017 17:16
late one night (early in summer)
WriteBeLight said:
Very fun and clever poem WW. So glad about the news posted in the Author\'s Note :)
February 10th, 2017 16:48
WriteBeLight said:
Very fun and clever poem WW. So glad about the news posted in the Author\'s Note :)
February 10th, 2017 16:48
late one night (early in summer)
kevin browne said:
you\'re crazy but genius..!
February 10th, 2017 15:45
kevin browne said:
you\'re crazy but genius..!
February 10th, 2017 15:45
oh King o fKings
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Take heed WILLY ~ GOD has promised ~ even though we are ofttimes foolish ~ He will be with us ~ not only in WAR ~ but also in PEACE ~ AMEN BRIAN ~ Please add a PRESIDENT to my new FUSION ~ Thanks B
February 7th, 2017 11:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Take heed WILLY ~ GOD has promised ~ even though we are ofttimes foolish ~ He will be with us ~ not only in WAR ~ but also in PEACE ~ AMEN BRIAN ~ Please add a PRESIDENT to my new FUSION ~ Thanks B
February 7th, 2017 11:23
oh King o fKings
Corey said:
Good morning Willyweed, Sometimes we are too focused on all the action of war, we lose sight that we\'re winning and how. I enjoyed your poem. Great write!
February 7th, 2017 08:28
Corey said:
Good morning Willyweed, Sometimes we are too focused on all the action of war, we lose sight that we\'re winning and how. I enjoyed your poem. Great write!
February 7th, 2017 08:28
oh King o fKings
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m in the UK and up early - great write Willy
February 7th, 2017 03:11
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m in the UK and up early - great write Willy
February 7th, 2017 03:11
oh King o fKings
willyweed said:
What are you doing up so late? Thank you TopKat!
February 7th, 2017 02:59
willyweed said:
What are you doing up so late? Thank you TopKat!
February 7th, 2017 02:59
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