Comments received on poems by willyweed
Queen for a day
willyweed said:
My good and Loyal subject you shall be called to the service of your Queen for there is where thee shall be and never anywhere in between, I must thee my loyal subject...mmmm what was the subject? oh yeah now I remember tarry not about the ale house for drunken solderer\'s of the royal plumbing .... scratch that ? not one is allowed to be drunk on duty, I am not on duty today but tomorrow when I return I will arrest you my self for you are becoming a royal pain in thy good queens Arse, so till then behave and thank you for your kind note. plus I love you no matter whats the matter. Your Queen and royal lover queeny as you call me as a term in in prison... what no I mean endearment yes ...now get up off your knees and get out...please plus I still ILU. ww
February 25th, 2017 07:29
willyweed said:
My good and Loyal subject you shall be called to the service of your Queen for there is where thee shall be and never anywhere in between, I must thee my loyal subject...mmmm what was the subject? oh yeah now I remember tarry not about the ale house for drunken solderer\'s of the royal plumbing .... scratch that ? not one is allowed to be drunk on duty, I am not on duty today but tomorrow when I return I will arrest you my self for you are becoming a royal pain in thy good queens Arse, so till then behave and thank you for your kind note. plus I love you no matter whats the matter. Your Queen and royal lover queeny as you call me as a term in in prison... what no I mean endearment yes ...now get up off your knees and get out...please plus I still ILU. ww
February 25th, 2017 07:29
Queen for a day
Augustus said:
Your Ladyship, your wish is my command. I feel privileged to be in your realm and my heart aches that you are in despair. I am skilled in pistol, long bow and sword. You may reach me at the Boars Head Inn where I am known as the Prince of Darkness. Fare thee well me Lady.
February 24th, 2017 21:23
Augustus said:
Your Ladyship, your wish is my command. I feel privileged to be in your realm and my heart aches that you are in despair. I am skilled in pistol, long bow and sword. You may reach me at the Boars Head Inn where I am known as the Prince of Darkness. Fare thee well me Lady.
February 24th, 2017 21:23
Queen for a day
willyweed said:
yes and funny as hell too? how you doin\'? Ole\' mate?
February 24th, 2017 17:48
willyweed said:
yes and funny as hell too? how you doin\'? Ole\' mate?
February 24th, 2017 17:48
Queen for a day
Christina8 said:
I hear you, this is a very good write. I wish impeachment was on the way. I like how you wrote in the comments that you were fake news anyway....lol
February 24th, 2017 14:03
Christina8 said:
I hear you, this is a very good write. I wish impeachment was on the way. I like how you wrote in the comments that you were fake news anyway....lol
February 24th, 2017 14:03
Queen for a day
WriteBeLight said:
Yes. Be careful what you wish for as you might just get it. :)
February 24th, 2017 13:00
WriteBeLight said:
Yes. Be careful what you wish for as you might just get it. :)
February 24th, 2017 13:00
Queen for a day
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Like Brian I would like to be a King for a day and try and do some good in the world.
February 24th, 2017 12:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Like Brian I would like to be a King for a day and try and do some good in the world.
February 24th, 2017 12:26
Queen for a day
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
The older we get WILLY he madder we get ~ I am sure you know that by now ! I don\'t want to be a QUEEN (too much flak !) but I would love to be KING (of the UK) but ~ for ever and a day ! Thanks for a quazi ode ~ BRIAN
February 24th, 2017 11:16
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
The older we get WILLY he madder we get ~ I am sure you know that by now ! I don\'t want to be a QUEEN (too much flak !) but I would love to be KING (of the UK) but ~ for ever and a day ! Thanks for a quazi ode ~ BRIAN
February 24th, 2017 11:16
I don\'t know ? (What you were told?)
Augustus said:
By all over I believed it was your intent. It was very well put together. The trying to make sense was consistent. Then you added :\"And I knowing nothing
of what I say
And didn’t you start
this conversation anyway?\" which I thought was clever.
February 23rd, 2017 23:08
Augustus said:
By all over I believed it was your intent. It was very well put together. The trying to make sense was consistent. Then you added :\"And I knowing nothing
of what I say
And didn’t you start
this conversation anyway?\" which I thought was clever.
February 23rd, 2017 23:08
I don\'t know ? (What you were told?)
Augustus said:
Love the way this goes all over the place. Cheers.
February 23rd, 2017 19:28
Augustus said:
Love the way this goes all over the place. Cheers.
February 23rd, 2017 19:28
I don\'t know ? (What you were told?)
WG7 said:
You\'re lucky they don\'t talk back. An animal talked back to me once and I freaked though I see things and hear things that aren\'t there so that\'s probably the reason. This is a great poem. I love it.
February 23rd, 2017 14:47
WG7 said:
You\'re lucky they don\'t talk back. An animal talked back to me once and I freaked though I see things and hear things that aren\'t there so that\'s probably the reason. This is a great poem. I love it.
February 23rd, 2017 14:47
I don\'t know ? (What you were told?)
WriteBeLight said:
I think the animals are smiling.
February 23rd, 2017 12:20
WriteBeLight said:
I think the animals are smiling.
February 23rd, 2017 12:20
American psycho
Tony36 said:
Great write. I guess I\'m with you on the phsyco path of life
February 22nd, 2017 17:13
Tony36 said:
Great write. I guess I\'m with you on the phsyco path of life
February 22nd, 2017 17:13
American psycho
Augustus said:
I have not had the cajones to write something like this. Love it. Way out over the top. Certainly a psycho killer. I have to plan my own. Let me see- strangle, knives? Acid? Ice shards? Kudos.
February 22nd, 2017 14:32
Augustus said:
I have not had the cajones to write something like this. Love it. Way out over the top. Certainly a psycho killer. I have to plan my own. Let me see- strangle, knives? Acid? Ice shards? Kudos.
February 22nd, 2017 14:32
American psycho
lost-but-not-broken17 said:
Damn... this reminds me of a comic book I read. I\'d love to read more of your stuff
February 22nd, 2017 14:20
lost-but-not-broken17 said:
Damn... this reminds me of a comic book I read. I\'d love to read more of your stuff
February 22nd, 2017 14:20
You may be strange (but love may be stranger)
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed Great write. Sometimes love is the strangest of them all
February 21st, 2017 08:52
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed Great write. Sometimes love is the strangest of them all
February 21st, 2017 08:52
You may be strange (but love may be stranger)
WriteBeLight said:
Lovely song WW. I can just see you singing as you wrote this :)
February 21st, 2017 07:11
WriteBeLight said:
Lovely song WW. I can just see you singing as you wrote this :)
February 21st, 2017 07:11
House Of Sin
Augustus said:
To tell the truth it has been a long time since I read Poe. But your comment makes me want to revisit him. I generally keep my responses short. Partly because I am writing on an iPad with the key board on the screen. Fingers don\'t fly like on a desktop keyboard. I was flattered by the lengthy reply you wrote, and the \"elite poet friend\" is over the top. Sounds like you have suffered from PTSD. Glad the VA was able to help you. I don\'t know where you live but I have heard there some good programs in Texas for vets. I was lucky to spend Nam state side. Warm regards.
February 20th, 2017 21:28
Augustus said:
To tell the truth it has been a long time since I read Poe. But your comment makes me want to revisit him. I generally keep my responses short. Partly because I am writing on an iPad with the key board on the screen. Fingers don\'t fly like on a desktop keyboard. I was flattered by the lengthy reply you wrote, and the \"elite poet friend\" is over the top. Sounds like you have suffered from PTSD. Glad the VA was able to help you. I don\'t know where you live but I have heard there some good programs in Texas for vets. I was lucky to spend Nam state side. Warm regards.
February 20th, 2017 21:28
3 good rhymes without one good reason
P.H.Rose said:
Love it.....
Short but sweet..
February 20th, 2017 19:00
P.H.Rose said:
Love it.....
Short but sweet..
February 20th, 2017 19:00
3 good rhymes without one good reason
willyweed said:
yes you are right I hate that fucking tune aswell I would not shit in our new most fucked pres mess kit either that would that would be way over the Line But would love to hang him in publish for treason and and take his breath away by being tripper of the trap door on floor as long they do itsand hes gone good for megood enough for me
February 20th, 2017 12:12
willyweed said:
yes you are right I hate that fucking tune aswell I would not shit in our new most fucked pres mess kit either that would that would be way over the Line But would love to hang him in publish for treason and and take his breath away by being tripper of the trap door on floor as long they do itsand hes gone good for megood enough for me
February 20th, 2017 12:12
3 good rhymes without one good reason
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI WILLY ~ Sounds like TRUMP the CHUMP to me ~ OK Thanks for the challenge ~ send my $50 prize in a plain envelope ~ Yours BRIAN Please check my Poem ~ Thanks B
February 20th, 2017 11:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI WILLY ~ Sounds like TRUMP the CHUMP to me ~ OK Thanks for the challenge ~ send my $50 prize in a plain envelope ~ Yours BRIAN Please check my Poem ~ Thanks B
February 20th, 2017 11:59
3 good rhymes without one good reason
Tony36 said:
Great write WW. Like the duck
February 20th, 2017 09:22
Tony36 said:
Great write WW. Like the duck
February 20th, 2017 09:22
House Of Sin
WriteBeLight said:
Very excellent WW. Great advice as well. Scary and exciting and rewarding at the end.
February 20th, 2017 07:48
WriteBeLight said:
Very excellent WW. Great advice as well. Scary and exciting and rewarding at the end.
February 20th, 2017 07:48
3 good rhymes without one good reason
WriteBeLight said:
What the devil? Very entertaining. Great cartoon.
February 20th, 2017 07:14
WriteBeLight said:
What the devil? Very entertaining. Great cartoon.
February 20th, 2017 07:14
House Of Sin
willyweed said:
I have been To heaven but never tried to kill my self I too have walked through the valley of of death 3 times once in Vietnam where war once raged but peace for the moment reins now
once in the wars between good and evil or some call it the war between heaven and hell
first time I killed many demons the army from the dark side a just low rank commander leading only a squard of 15 very brave natural born killers of demons and once as hand picked commander of invasion force all good men to invade angels and humans I command angel and humans a mixed squared hand by me for the combats nerves of steel both in wars of good V evil War monger wars here on our blue planet incited for by and for love money before GOD! I love life I have for good humans beings a found true love an now for =7 grand kids 16 to 4 yrs all who all know what over looking one and accept ing one lie can do+ a lot of bad shit walks throught the gap
February 19th, 2017 20:58
willyweed said:
I have been To heaven but never tried to kill my self I too have walked through the valley of of death 3 times once in Vietnam where war once raged but peace for the moment reins now
once in the wars between good and evil or some call it the war between heaven and hell
first time I killed many demons the army from the dark side a just low rank commander leading only a squard of 15 very brave natural born killers of demons and once as hand picked commander of invasion force all good men to invade angels and humans I command angel and humans a mixed squared hand by me for the combats nerves of steel both in wars of good V evil War monger wars here on our blue planet incited for by and for love money before GOD! I love life I have for good humans beings a found true love an now for =7 grand kids 16 to 4 yrs all who all know what over looking one and accept ing one lie can do+ a lot of bad shit walks throught the gap
February 19th, 2017 20:58
House Of Sin
Christina8 said:
Impressive poem, ww! Powerful from beginning to end.
February 19th, 2017 19:38
Christina8 said:
Impressive poem, ww! Powerful from beginning to end.
February 19th, 2017 19:38
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