Comments received on poems by Daniel
Free to soar
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Im not sure if this denotes the freedom of the hereafter but I enjoy thinking it does and how the carpe diem people wish to imprison us(like u put it so nicely) in the here and now\' like theres no eternal life to come. U write in an awesome style, convincing and powerful. Yes poet lets dream of and wirk for the next world. This poem is rare n unique. Kudos.
So nice to read from u again. Hope u will too my latest
March 8th, 2017 13:43
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Im not sure if this denotes the freedom of the hereafter but I enjoy thinking it does and how the carpe diem people wish to imprison us(like u put it so nicely) in the here and now\' like theres no eternal life to come. U write in an awesome style, convincing and powerful. Yes poet lets dream of and wirk for the next world. This poem is rare n unique. Kudos.
So nice to read from u again. Hope u will too my latest
March 8th, 2017 13:43
Man Flu
AlitaOpal said:
Brilliant poem, it\'s insightful and funny at the same time at how man-flu is deemed the worse kind (according to my big brother 😂) I\'m going to read your poem to him..
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January 26th, 2017 04:10
AlitaOpal said:
Brilliant poem, it\'s insightful and funny at the same time at how man-flu is deemed the worse kind (according to my big brother 😂) I\'m going to read your poem to him..
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January 26th, 2017 04:10
Free to soar
Christina8 said:
This is an enjoyable read. We can\'t ever lose sight of our dreams, even for others. Great poem!--Christina
January 12th, 2017 13:25
Christina8 said:
This is an enjoyable read. We can\'t ever lose sight of our dreams, even for others. Great poem!--Christina
January 12th, 2017 13:25
Free to soar
willyweed said:
neatly sums it up for me
Daniel this one I love it I spend a lot of time up there in the clouds. BRAVO!
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January 12th, 2017 10:05
willyweed said:
neatly sums it up for me
Daniel this one I love it I spend a lot of time up there in the clouds. BRAVO!
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January 12th, 2017 10:05
Free to soar
WriteBeLight said:
A lot of times it is the ones we hold so close who try to stomp on our dreams. Gotta keep moving forward!
January 12th, 2017 09:00
WriteBeLight said:
A lot of times it is the ones we hold so close who try to stomp on our dreams. Gotta keep moving forward!
January 12th, 2017 09:00
vive la difference
P.H.Rose said:
Oh!! Daniel this is
So bloody good..
I absolutely love it
It\'s bang on as we
Would say in the Uk.
Well bloody done sir!!!
January 11th, 2017 16:31
P.H.Rose said:
Oh!! Daniel this is
So bloody good..
I absolutely love it
It\'s bang on as we
Would say in the Uk.
Well bloody done sir!!!
January 11th, 2017 16:31
Man Flu
Quemis said:
This to me has the best rhythm out of any of your last four or five pieces.
I like it!
I would personally not have included the word \"that\" in the second line of the third stanza, but again, that\'s just me.
January 11th, 2017 15:31
Quemis said:
This to me has the best rhythm out of any of your last four or five pieces.
I like it!
I would personally not have included the word \"that\" in the second line of the third stanza, but again, that\'s just me.
January 11th, 2017 15:31
vive la difference
Quemis said:
Great idea, although I feel like there was some slightly different word choices you could have used to line up the syllables slightly better.
However, the whole point of your piece is that we all interpret things differently, and value different things.
So, on that note,
Great job yet again! : )
January 11th, 2017 15:26
Quemis said:
Great idea, although I feel like there was some slightly different word choices you could have used to line up the syllables slightly better.
However, the whole point of your piece is that we all interpret things differently, and value different things.
So, on that note,
Great job yet again! : )
January 11th, 2017 15:26
vive la difference
Christina8 said:
Wonderfully written and expressed! Christina
January 11th, 2017 11:33
Christina8 said:
Wonderfully written and expressed! Christina
January 11th, 2017 11:33
vive la difference
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BRILLIANT DANIEL ! A timely reminder that in essence although we look at the same scenario ~ we all see it differently ~ some through ROSE TINTED Glasses (that\'s me !) and others through a GLASS DARKLY ! We all hear the same message from TV etc ~ but we all interpret it differently according to our situation ! How dull if we were all the same ! VIVE LA DIFFERENCE ! Please check my SNOWDROPS POEM ~ Thanks BRIAN
January 11th, 2017 05:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BRILLIANT DANIEL ! A timely reminder that in essence although we look at the same scenario ~ we all see it differently ~ some through ROSE TINTED Glasses (that\'s me !) and others through a GLASS DARKLY ! We all hear the same message from TV etc ~ but we all interpret it differently according to our situation ! How dull if we were all the same ! VIVE LA DIFFERENCE ! Please check my SNOWDROPS POEM ~ Thanks BRIAN
January 11th, 2017 05:47
Life\'s miracle
notapoet said:
Beautifully penned! Brilliant work Daniel a real pleasure to read.
January 10th, 2017 19:44
notapoet said:
Beautifully penned! Brilliant work Daniel a real pleasure to read.
January 10th, 2017 19:44
Life\'s miracle
Christina8 said:
A very touching and beautiful poem! Bravo!-Christina
January 10th, 2017 13:19
Christina8 said:
A very touching and beautiful poem! Bravo!-Christina
January 10th, 2017 13:19
Life\'s miracle
WriteBeLight said:
Love the poem, in particular, the last four lines!
January 10th, 2017 06:27
WriteBeLight said:
Love the poem, in particular, the last four lines!
January 10th, 2017 06:27
The demon in my dreams
willyweed said:
Another work of wonder/your are a craftsmen Sir!
January 9th, 2017 10:27
willyweed said:
Another work of wonder/your are a craftsmen Sir!
January 9th, 2017 10:27
The demon in my dreams
P.H.Rose said:
Very very good
I love it..
My kind of poem
Well done Daniel
January 9th, 2017 04:56
P.H.Rose said:
Very very good
I love it..
My kind of poem
Well done Daniel
January 9th, 2017 04:56
The demon in my dreams
Augustus said:
The metaphor could fit a number of demons some real or imagined. Nice.
January 9th, 2017 00:37
Augustus said:
The metaphor could fit a number of demons some real or imagined. Nice.
January 9th, 2017 00:37
Man Flu
Augustus said:
Awh, poor baby. I\'ll fix you a hot toddy. Nicely done.
January 8th, 2017 17:36
Augustus said:
Awh, poor baby. I\'ll fix you a hot toddy. Nicely done.
January 8th, 2017 17:36
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