Comments received on poems by Daniel
Memories of last night
willyweed said:
This is interesting, sounds like a serious hangover to me? well done.ww
December 22nd, 2016 10:30
willyweed said:
This is interesting, sounds like a serious hangover to me? well done.ww
December 22nd, 2016 10:30
Memories of last night
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Very nice work..it could mean so many things...enjoyed
December 22nd, 2016 07:12
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Very nice work..it could mean so many things...enjoyed
December 22nd, 2016 07:12
Memories of last night
WriteBeLight said:
I can relate to this poem. I try to improve myself everyday, because I know there is always room to do so.
December 22nd, 2016 04:59
WriteBeLight said:
I can relate to this poem. I try to improve myself everyday, because I know there is always room to do so.
December 22nd, 2016 04:59
How will you remember me
Augustus said:
Today being a loving father and husband is terrific. Nicely done.
December 21st, 2016 14:32
Augustus said:
Today being a loving father and husband is terrific. Nicely done.
December 21st, 2016 14:32
This picture you propose
willyweed said:
in a word Daniel (fear)
nice structure and insight as per usual! ww
December 20th, 2016 10:20
willyweed said:
in a word Daniel (fear)
nice structure and insight as per usual! ww
December 20th, 2016 10:20
This picture you propose
Daniel said:
Unfortunately there are a lot of people out there that fit that description. thanks for your great comment WBL!
December 20th, 2016 06:45
Daniel said:
Unfortunately there are a lot of people out there that fit that description. thanks for your great comment WBL!
December 20th, 2016 06:45
This picture you propose
WriteBeLight said:
Funny. I have experienced, recently, a similar situation regarding someone with a closed mind. In their mind, they think they are right and do not see the forest for the trees. And, it could be they are just intimidated. I believe the latter in my situation as I could tell by body language as well I was not going to get through to this person. Great poem about personality.
December 20th, 2016 05:19
WriteBeLight said:
Funny. I have experienced, recently, a similar situation regarding someone with a closed mind. In their mind, they think they are right and do not see the forest for the trees. And, it could be they are just intimidated. I believe the latter in my situation as I could tell by body language as well I was not going to get through to this person. Great poem about personality.
December 20th, 2016 05:19
Mirror mirror on the wall
Christina8 said:
You are right that people look in mirrors and only see what they choose. If they have low self esteem they may feel ugly or another person may feel beautiful. But this poem is beautiful. Great job!
December 19th, 2016 21:17
Christina8 said:
You are right that people look in mirrors and only see what they choose. If they have low self esteem they may feel ugly or another person may feel beautiful. But this poem is beautiful. Great job!
December 19th, 2016 21:17
Mirror mirror on the wall
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
And what you see a D feel is what you project to the outside world..I enjoyed this piece...short and sweet and to the point..
December 19th, 2016 16:40
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
And what you see a D feel is what you project to the outside world..I enjoyed this piece...short and sweet and to the point..
December 19th, 2016 16:40
Mirror mirror on the wall
WriteBeLight said:
That reminds me of the picture of the kitten who sees a lion in the mirror. Very nice idea and well written.
December 19th, 2016 06:14
WriteBeLight said:
That reminds me of the picture of the kitten who sees a lion in the mirror. Very nice idea and well written.
December 19th, 2016 06:14
The lady in the trees
Augustus said:
What a neat story so cleverly presented.
December 18th, 2016 11:53
Augustus said:
What a neat story so cleverly presented.
December 18th, 2016 11:53
The lady in the trees
WriteBeLight said:
A story of a mysterious rescue! And, the guardian angel is an excellent interpretation. Very nice work.
December 18th, 2016 08:50
WriteBeLight said:
A story of a mysterious rescue! And, the guardian angel is an excellent interpretation. Very nice work.
December 18th, 2016 08:50
The lady in the trees
SabreLi said:
A great piece depicting the guardian angel (but which can be interpreted in various ways) - a life saving, strength giving, hope restoring work which is a pleasure to read. Long live the lady in the trees! Xx
December 18th, 2016 08:18
SabreLi said:
A great piece depicting the guardian angel (but which can be interpreted in various ways) - a life saving, strength giving, hope restoring work which is a pleasure to read. Long live the lady in the trees! Xx
December 18th, 2016 08:18
The farmer or the farm
WriteBeLight said:
The poem made me feel powerless over and fearful of Mother Nature. Different and well put.
December 17th, 2016 04:57
WriteBeLight said:
The poem made me feel powerless over and fearful of Mother Nature. Different and well put.
December 17th, 2016 04:57
My Son
myinnervoice said:
I remember holding my son for the first time...I was more overwhelmed and unsure of what i was to this little guy. By the time my secound rolled around i knew what my daughter would mean to me and i have to say this conveys that feeling in an amazing way. Thank you for sharing.
December 17th, 2016 01:19
myinnervoice said:
I remember holding my son for the first time...I was more overwhelmed and unsure of what i was to this little guy. By the time my secound rolled around i knew what my daughter would mean to me and i have to say this conveys that feeling in an amazing way. Thank you for sharing.
December 17th, 2016 01:19
The farmer or the farm
XxRaavenSairasxX said:
Interesting point of view, I like it. Very well written.
December 17th, 2016 00:27
XxRaavenSairasxX said:
Interesting point of view, I like it. Very well written.
December 17th, 2016 00:27
No angels here
Augustus said:
That has always been a bitter pill to swallow. We can always come up with others who deserved to die. Well done.
December 16th, 2016 13:05
Augustus said:
That has always been a bitter pill to swallow. We can always come up with others who deserved to die. Well done.
December 16th, 2016 13:05
No angels here
WriteBeLight said:
Excellent. Sometimes there just are no words to say appropriate enough to comfort when loss is experienced. Your poem understands this.
December 16th, 2016 06:35
WriteBeLight said:
Excellent. Sometimes there just are no words to say appropriate enough to comfort when loss is experienced. Your poem understands this.
December 16th, 2016 06:35
No angels here
Zwitterion said:
Very good Daniel---keep writing on pain. This is the stuff of life.
December 16th, 2016 05:15
Zwitterion said:
Very good Daniel---keep writing on pain. This is the stuff of life.
December 16th, 2016 05:15
No angels here
Faith_01 said:
This is heart breaking :( but the poetry is put together
December 16th, 2016 03:39
Faith_01 said:
This is heart breaking :( but the poetry is put together
December 16th, 2016 03:39
My Son
SabreLi said:
What a beautiful piece! Your immense pride as a father explodes through these powerful verses, and your son would be proud to read them! Great job! xx
December 15th, 2016 09:15
SabreLi said:
What a beautiful piece! Your immense pride as a father explodes through these powerful verses, and your son would be proud to read them! Great job! xx
December 15th, 2016 09:15
water on rocks
Quemis said:
No offence to anyone, but I find it hard on this website to find too much that is even slightly profound.
Congrats on being in the 1%
Keep it up!
December 14th, 2016 13:44
Quemis said:
No offence to anyone, but I find it hard on this website to find too much that is even slightly profound.
Congrats on being in the 1%
Keep it up!
December 14th, 2016 13:44
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