Comments received on poems by Daniel
My Son
WriteBeLight said:
It is a beautiful message from a Dad who is forever impacted by the birth of his child. Very well written.
December 13th, 2016 06:08
WriteBeLight said:
It is a beautiful message from a Dad who is forever impacted by the birth of his child. Very well written.
December 13th, 2016 06:08
Far beyond our grasp
WriteBeLight said:
Makes me feel like that saying the definition of crazy is repeating the same thing over and over expecting a different result. Bad habits are really hard to break. Good job!
December 12th, 2016 06:34
WriteBeLight said:
Makes me feel like that saying the definition of crazy is repeating the same thing over and over expecting a different result. Bad habits are really hard to break. Good job!
December 12th, 2016 06:34
Winter
SabreLi said:
Your description of the changing seasons is worded very well, and I appreciate how you spare a thought and bring a message for those less fortunate over Christmas time. I love the pictures you paint with your words. Nice work, Daniel :D xx
December 11th, 2016 08:06
SabreLi said:
Your description of the changing seasons is worded very well, and I appreciate how you spare a thought and bring a message for those less fortunate over Christmas time. I love the pictures you paint with your words. Nice work, Daniel :D xx
December 11th, 2016 08:06
THE REMOTE!
Augustus said:
Miss my kids. They reset all the digital clocks after the electricity goes off. Nicely done.
December 10th, 2016 23:06
Augustus said:
Miss my kids. They reset all the digital clocks after the electricity goes off. Nicely done.
December 10th, 2016 23:06
THE REMOTE!
WriteBeLight said:
I relate to this and all technology! Nice description of the dilemma.
December 10th, 2016 07:19
WriteBeLight said:
I relate to this and all technology! Nice description of the dilemma.
December 10th, 2016 07:19
THE REMOTE!
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing DANIEL ~ BUT ~ The GOOD BOOK did warn us ~ Psalm 8 v 2 \"Out of the fingers of BABES & SUCKLINGS comes forth REMOTE CONTROL ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN
December 10th, 2016 02:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing DANIEL ~ BUT ~ The GOOD BOOK did warn us ~ Psalm 8 v 2 \"Out of the fingers of BABES & SUCKLINGS comes forth REMOTE CONTROL ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN
December 10th, 2016 02:32
Old man in a modern world
Augustus said:
It is different and not the same. Those who are younger will not understand. Well said.
December 9th, 2016 12:51
Augustus said:
It is different and not the same. Those who are younger will not understand. Well said.
December 9th, 2016 12:51
Old man in a modern world
WriteBeLight said:
That is a great poem Daniel. I remember when cell phones came in a bag and cost over $1,000 each. I also remember having to bring your film to be developed. Technology is a tool and should not be abused. But, everyone deals with it in their own way. Really good job.
December 9th, 2016 11:06
WriteBeLight said:
That is a great poem Daniel. I remember when cell phones came in a bag and cost over $1,000 each. I also remember having to bring your film to be developed. Technology is a tool and should not be abused. But, everyone deals with it in their own way. Really good job.
December 9th, 2016 11:06
Old man in a modern world
Tony36 said:
To many people know how to exist online, but do not know how to do so person to person, or in the real life. Very sad state these people are in. Great write
December 9th, 2016 09:30
Tony36 said:
To many people know how to exist online, but do not know how to do so person to person, or in the real life. Very sad state these people are in. Great write
December 9th, 2016 09:30
Old man in a modern world
Quemis said:
People said the same thing when newspapers became a huge thing. Im not even joking it was a real thing that happened. People complained for years about how printed paper media was destroying our interconnectedness.
Alas, the opposite is true. We are more connected then ever, at least in my opinion.
I think that the ones who get lost, who\'s relationships degrade because of this amazing technology are the ones you don\'t want to be involved with anyway.
I think it shows us who people are.
Like I said, just an opinion of mine.
Fun bounce to your poem though. : )
December 9th, 2016 01:43
Quemis said:
People said the same thing when newspapers became a huge thing. Im not even joking it was a real thing that happened. People complained for years about how printed paper media was destroying our interconnectedness.
Alas, the opposite is true. We are more connected then ever, at least in my opinion.
I think that the ones who get lost, who\'s relationships degrade because of this amazing technology are the ones you don\'t want to be involved with anyway.
I think it shows us who people are.
Like I said, just an opinion of mine.
Fun bounce to your poem though. : )
December 9th, 2016 01:43
Invisible beauty
Augustus said:
When I lived close to the desert I was surprised to hear so often how beautiful it was. My eyes were closed. Very nice.
December 8th, 2016 12:33
Augustus said:
When I lived close to the desert I was surprised to hear so often how beautiful it was. My eyes were closed. Very nice.
December 8th, 2016 12:33
Till we meet again
notapoet said:
Very poignant write my friend, I enjoyed it very much, the emotion you were able to invoke in this piece was amazing... NP
December 7th, 2016 18:28
notapoet said:
Very poignant write my friend, I enjoyed it very much, the emotion you were able to invoke in this piece was amazing... NP
December 7th, 2016 18:28
Opening doors
Christina8 said:
A great poem with a very real question. The stinging blast of a winter storm currently, honestly.
December 4th, 2016 20:44
Christina8 said:
A great poem with a very real question. The stinging blast of a winter storm currently, honestly.
December 4th, 2016 20:44
Opening doors
Elegant_Style said:
a cute write with a very real question!! I have to say my door opened to a bit of both
December 4th, 2016 20:36
Elegant_Style said:
a cute write with a very real question!! I have to say my door opened to a bit of both
December 4th, 2016 20:36
Acceptance
SabreLi said:
I love this one Daniel, one of my favourite\'s of yours. Very pertinent in current society and true of the social attitude of the day. It\'s good that some of us can see through the charade and better still that you produce work like this about it! Thank you for this piece :) xx
December 4th, 2016 14:39
SabreLi said:
I love this one Daniel, one of my favourite\'s of yours. Very pertinent in current society and true of the social attitude of the day. It\'s good that some of us can see through the charade and better still that you produce work like this about it! Thank you for this piece :) xx
December 4th, 2016 14:39
Acceptance
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yes reality show, could relate to that line in this awesome poem well rhymed and super to read. Reminds of the shakespearean quote that we r all actors and this world a stage. Kudos for the poetry,.
U r most welcome to comment under my latest poem too . I\'m quite a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere or got sth from it until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.
December 2nd, 2016 08:01
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yes reality show, could relate to that line in this awesome poem well rhymed and super to read. Reminds of the shakespearean quote that we r all actors and this world a stage. Kudos for the poetry,.
U r most welcome to comment under my latest poem too . I\'m quite a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere or got sth from it until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.
December 2nd, 2016 08:01
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