Comments received on poems by Daniel
Servitude
willyweed said:
herd mentality I suppose,
sad but true for most. your poem is well written as usual. clever and smart! ww
December 1st, 2016 10:39
willyweed said:
herd mentality I suppose,
sad but true for most. your poem is well written as usual. clever and smart! ww
December 1st, 2016 10:39
Servitude
WriteBeLight said:
Some direction is good and others I can do without. I like it!
December 1st, 2016 09:57
WriteBeLight said:
Some direction is good and others I can do without. I like it!
December 1st, 2016 09:57
The abyss
SabreLi said:
I love this piece - as I love most things dark - but you really paint a plethora of images here. From the \'hallowed wings\' of the angels right through to the demons\' \'acid kiss\' - would love to read more! Excellent work! :D Xx
November 30th, 2016 18:29
SabreLi said:
I love this piece - as I love most things dark - but you really paint a plethora of images here. From the \'hallowed wings\' of the angels right through to the demons\' \'acid kiss\' - would love to read more! Excellent work! :D Xx
November 30th, 2016 18:29
The stars
SabreLi said:
It\'s short length serves to emphasise the meaning behind the words. Such a lovely verse with a glimmer of hope despite the darkness xx
November 30th, 2016 15:41
SabreLi said:
It\'s short length serves to emphasise the meaning behind the words. Such a lovely verse with a glimmer of hope despite the darkness xx
November 30th, 2016 15:41
The scars within
willyweed said:
you said it all with just 8 great lines. ww
November 29th, 2016 19:58
willyweed said:
you said it all with just 8 great lines. ww
November 29th, 2016 19:58
The scars within
Augustus said:
This poem calls for a look within and an understanding of the chaos in our world today all in 8 succinctly written lines using every day words. Very, very nice.
November 29th, 2016 18:32
Augustus said:
This poem calls for a look within and an understanding of the chaos in our world today all in 8 succinctly written lines using every day words. Very, very nice.
November 29th, 2016 18:32
SNAKE OIL
Christina8 said:
Very nice poem. I agree that there are times when you don\'t have to walk into an edifice to seek forgiveness. Just asking forgiveness from the person you have wronged is what you need. Thanks for sharing.
November 26th, 2016 12:31
Christina8 said:
Very nice poem. I agree that there are times when you don\'t have to walk into an edifice to seek forgiveness. Just asking forgiveness from the person you have wronged is what you need. Thanks for sharing.
November 26th, 2016 12:31
Revolution
willyweed said:
first I love this piece you pen. second revolutions happen and three bravo! ww
July 17th, 2016 20:32
willyweed said:
first I love this piece you pen. second revolutions happen and three bravo! ww
July 17th, 2016 20:32
Revolution
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
REVOLUTIONS are like LOVE ~ Sometime good ~ sometimes bad ~ sometimes cosi cosi ~ BUT ~ always expensive ! Take note of Turkey ~ and think twice before you revolt ! Yours BRIAN
July 17th, 2016 09:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
REVOLUTIONS are like LOVE ~ Sometime good ~ sometimes bad ~ sometimes cosi cosi ~ BUT ~ always expensive ! Take note of Turkey ~ and think twice before you revolt ! Yours BRIAN
July 17th, 2016 09:59
The abyss
willyweed said:
very well thought out and crafted but you already know that. good food for thought you serve! I'm liking it.! peace ww
July 15th, 2016 19:54
willyweed said:
very well thought out and crafted but you already know that. good food for thought you serve! I'm liking it.! peace ww
July 15th, 2016 19:54
The abyss
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
You strike both a negative and a positive note in this ABYSSMAL poem! Britain facing BREXIT ~ France another suicide disaster (84 killed in Nice) ~ The threat of TRUMP looming over the USA and mayhem here there and everywhere So (as you say) let us welcome the DEMONS and kill them with kindness. If you fall into the ABYSS ~ that is the end physically. Don't let the Demons (Satan & his Angels) push you over the edge ~ challenge them with love (an alkaline kiss ?) and they will "depart from you for a season !" Thanks for sharing BRIAN
July 15th, 2016 04:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
You strike both a negative and a positive note in this ABYSSMAL poem! Britain facing BREXIT ~ France another suicide disaster (84 killed in Nice) ~ The threat of TRUMP looming over the USA and mayhem here there and everywhere So (as you say) let us welcome the DEMONS and kill them with kindness. If you fall into the ABYSS ~ that is the end physically. Don't let the Demons (Satan & his Angels) push you over the edge ~ challenge them with love (an alkaline kiss ?) and they will "depart from you for a season !" Thanks for sharing BRIAN
July 15th, 2016 04:15
The 2am kebab
lysistrata said:
That was a delicious suprise,Daniel.
You are invited next week to a birthday party,where we are going to have and donner kebab,among other mediterranean recopes...Wait till you eat ekmek kataif that I make... You swim to Italy and back again.
July 13th, 2016 15:27
lysistrata said:
That was a delicious suprise,Daniel.
You are invited next week to a birthday party,where we are going to have and donner kebab,among other mediterranean recopes...Wait till you eat ekmek kataif that I make... You swim to Italy and back again.
July 13th, 2016 15:27
The 2am kebab
willyweed said:
another very well crafted piece.
But alas I've never had one of those bad boys...and now I'll starving? ww
July 13th, 2016 11:42
willyweed said:
another very well crafted piece.
But alas I've never had one of those bad boys...and now I'll starving? ww
July 13th, 2016 11:42
The 2am kebab
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks DANIEL ~ Lovely poem on an even more lovely subject ! The later the hour ~ the better the taste ! JOHN
July 13th, 2016 10:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks DANIEL ~ Lovely poem on an even more lovely subject ! The later the hour ~ the better the taste ! JOHN
July 13th, 2016 10:48
Hindsight
willyweed said:
hind sight is 20/20 so some say.
life is a lesson and we should always look back and reflect. another well crafted work. ww
July 12th, 2016 07:18
willyweed said:
hind sight is 20/20 so some say.
life is a lesson and we should always look back and reflect. another well crafted work. ww
July 12th, 2016 07:18
Hindsight
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing DANIEL and the truth enshrined in your well penned poem ! This is my experience too of life and love ! My eyes only see the superficial but my heart sees the truth in my own heart and the hearts of others. Yours BRIAN
July 12th, 2016 05:01
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing DANIEL and the truth enshrined in your well penned poem ! This is my experience too of life and love ! My eyes only see the superficial but my heart sees the truth in my own heart and the hearts of others. Yours BRIAN
July 12th, 2016 05:01
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