Comments received on poems by Daniel
As I lay amongst the tall grass
WriteBeLight said:
Nothing better than getting a chance for peace and quiet and to reflect on one\'s life. Very pleasant poem Daniel!
January 3rd, 2017 12:32
WriteBeLight said:
Nothing better than getting a chance for peace and quiet and to reflect on one\'s life. Very pleasant poem Daniel!
January 3rd, 2017 12:32
As I lay amongst the tall grass
Augustus said:
I have worn the mask my whole life. It is difficult to be real. There is something special about laying in the grass. Enjoyed.
January 3rd, 2017 10:23
Augustus said:
I have worn the mask my whole life. It is difficult to be real. There is something special about laying in the grass. Enjoyed.
January 3rd, 2017 10:23
As I lay amongst the tall grass
Tony36 said:
Great write, growing up on a farm I used to lay among the tall grass often
January 3rd, 2017 09:52
Tony36 said:
Great write, growing up on a farm I used to lay among the tall grass often
January 3rd, 2017 09:52
As I lay amongst the tall grass
Deebs said:
Daniel you created a nice flow I really enjoyed I hate the mask but I never put it down long enough to collect dust TFS.
January 3rd, 2017 00:47
Deebs said:
Daniel you created a nice flow I really enjoyed I hate the mask but I never put it down long enough to collect dust TFS.
January 3rd, 2017 00:47
The beauty at our gate
notapoet said:
Really enjoyed reading this awesome piece Daniel, great message and equally great write.
December 27th, 2016 18:49
notapoet said:
Really enjoyed reading this awesome piece Daniel, great message and equally great write.
December 27th, 2016 18:49
The beauty at our gate
Augustus said:
I sense that this poem has 2 parts, one for the non-believer and another for the believer. This is a struggle for many.
December 27th, 2016 11:27
Augustus said:
I sense that this poem has 2 parts, one for the non-believer and another for the believer. This is a struggle for many.
December 27th, 2016 11:27
The beauty at our gate
WriteBeLight said:
Very well done Daniel. We do ignore the good in our lives that we already have right at hand. Very thought-provoking piece...:)
December 27th, 2016 08:02
WriteBeLight said:
Very well done Daniel. We do ignore the good in our lives that we already have right at hand. Very thought-provoking piece...:)
December 27th, 2016 08:02
The walls we build
WriteBeLight said:
I really like this poem, in particular first four lines. Very true and insightful, Daniel.
December 26th, 2016 07:25
WriteBeLight said:
I really like this poem, in particular first four lines. Very true and insightful, Daniel.
December 26th, 2016 07:25
The walls we build
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS DANIEL ~ For reminding us about WALLS ! Sure they Protect but they also Divide as did the Berlin Wall ~ til GOD blew it down. A Friend of mine was there and said it just toppled brick by brick and no one intervened. TRUMP the HUMP wants to build a 2000 MILE WALL ~ 10 foot high between MEXICO and the US ! There are 350 million LEGAL crossings each year ~ and TRUMP thinks twice as many illegal ! The biggest joke last year was ~ MEXICO IS GOING TO PAY FOR THE WALL ~ HO HO HO ! If it was not for the Hispanics the USA would be more miserable than Hillary ! 2017 should be a YEAR for tearing down the Walls of greed ~ pride ~ discrimination ~ party politics and prejudice ! Thanks for caring BRIAN
December 26th, 2016 05:54
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS DANIEL ~ For reminding us about WALLS ! Sure they Protect but they also Divide as did the Berlin Wall ~ til GOD blew it down. A Friend of mine was there and said it just toppled brick by brick and no one intervened. TRUMP the HUMP wants to build a 2000 MILE WALL ~ 10 foot high between MEXICO and the US ! There are 350 million LEGAL crossings each year ~ and TRUMP thinks twice as many illegal ! The biggest joke last year was ~ MEXICO IS GOING TO PAY FOR THE WALL ~ HO HO HO ! If it was not for the Hispanics the USA would be more miserable than Hillary ! 2017 should be a YEAR for tearing down the Walls of greed ~ pride ~ discrimination ~ party politics and prejudice ! Thanks for caring BRIAN
December 26th, 2016 05:54
Merry Christmas
willyweed said:
GOD bless us everyone. Merry Christmas and thank you for the gift of poem and hope. peace ww
December 24th, 2016 10:33
willyweed said:
GOD bless us everyone. Merry Christmas and thank you for the gift of poem and hope. peace ww
December 24th, 2016 10:33
Merry Christmas
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks DANIEL we ned some \"classic poetry\" on MPS ! Four perfect quatrains with balanced rhyme (xaxa xbxb etc) and rhythm ! BUT ~ not only perfect STRUCTURE ~ but perfect SUBJECT as well. At CHRISTMAS the gulf between the have\'s and the have not\'s is wider than ever. Some Families spending thousands while others (in the UK) have to go to the FOOD BANK for basics. We can all do something to help ~ we can all do more. Thanks for caring BRIAN. Please check my poms ~ Thanks B
December 24th, 2016 10:04
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks DANIEL we ned some \"classic poetry\" on MPS ! Four perfect quatrains with balanced rhyme (xaxa xbxb etc) and rhythm ! BUT ~ not only perfect STRUCTURE ~ but perfect SUBJECT as well. At CHRISTMAS the gulf between the have\'s and the have not\'s is wider than ever. Some Families spending thousands while others (in the UK) have to go to the FOOD BANK for basics. We can all do something to help ~ we can all do more. Thanks for caring BRIAN. Please check my poms ~ Thanks B
December 24th, 2016 10:04
Merry Christmas
WriteBeLight said:
Perfect poetic prayer, Daniel. Thanks so much for all you have written. Looking forward to seeing more of your talent! Merry Christmas to you too!
December 24th, 2016 04:57
WriteBeLight said:
Perfect poetic prayer, Daniel. Thanks so much for all you have written. Looking forward to seeing more of your talent! Merry Christmas to you too!
December 24th, 2016 04:57
Merry Christmas
Christina8 said:
What a beautiful poem! Merry Christmas to you as well!
December 24th, 2016 02:08
Christina8 said:
What a beautiful poem! Merry Christmas to you as well!
December 24th, 2016 02:08
water on rocks
TaylorLaane said:
This is inspirational, I like the metaphor
December 23rd, 2016 22:34
TaylorLaane said:
This is inspirational, I like the metaphor
December 23rd, 2016 22:34
The one night stand
willyweed said:
wonderful insight Daniel those fleeing moments that last an eternity.
brilliant poem!
December 23rd, 2016 13:22
willyweed said:
wonderful insight Daniel those fleeing moments that last an eternity.
brilliant poem!
December 23rd, 2016 13:22
The one night stand
Augustus said:
You see and bring beauty to something often thought of as immoral, dirty or soiled in some way. Nicely done.
December 23rd, 2016 11:55
Augustus said:
You see and bring beauty to something often thought of as immoral, dirty or soiled in some way. Nicely done.
December 23rd, 2016 11:55
The one night stand
notapoet said:
Beautifully crafted piece of poetry here my friend, really enjoyed the read.
December 23rd, 2016 11:26
notapoet said:
Beautifully crafted piece of poetry here my friend, really enjoyed the read.
December 23rd, 2016 11:26
The one night stand
WriteBeLight said:
This reminds me of two people who were stuck by chance together and enjoyed each other\'s company, knowing it was only for a short time. Great thoughts in the poem, Daniel.
December 23rd, 2016 05:43
WriteBeLight said:
This reminds me of two people who were stuck by chance together and enjoyed each other\'s company, knowing it was only for a short time. Great thoughts in the poem, Daniel.
December 23rd, 2016 05:43
The one night stand
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing DANIEL ! ONS\'s can (surprisingly) be something special that stays in our subconscious for ever. But because ONS\'s have no beginning or end they are forever ephemeral and always remain transient ! Please check my poems ~ Thanks BRIAN.
December 23rd, 2016 05:01
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing DANIEL ! ONS\'s can (surprisingly) be something special that stays in our subconscious for ever. But because ONS\'s have no beginning or end they are forever ephemeral and always remain transient ! Please check my poems ~ Thanks BRIAN.
December 23rd, 2016 05:01
How will you remember me
Daniel said:
Very nicely put SabreLi, as you say all our experiences add colour and texture to our lives. Tank you for your great comment
December 22nd, 2016 22:09
Daniel said:
Very nicely put SabreLi, as you say all our experiences add colour and texture to our lives. Tank you for your great comment
December 22nd, 2016 22:09
How will you remember me
SabreLi said:
A great reminiscent piece Daniel, in the end we all lead colourful lives and to be remembered for the colour, not the shades of black, white and grey, is what makes us unique in the hearts and minds of those we hold dear. Rainbows are far more beautiful than storm clouds; but without the rain the rainbow would not exist! xx
December 22nd, 2016 16:07
SabreLi said:
A great reminiscent piece Daniel, in the end we all lead colourful lives and to be remembered for the colour, not the shades of black, white and grey, is what makes us unique in the hearts and minds of those we hold dear. Rainbows are far more beautiful than storm clouds; but without the rain the rainbow would not exist! xx
December 22nd, 2016 16:07
Memories of last night
Augustus said:
Imprisoned by your shame perhaps. Nicely done.
December 22nd, 2016 16:03
Augustus said:
Imprisoned by your shame perhaps. Nicely done.
December 22nd, 2016 16:03
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