Comments received on poems by SilverXball
Autism... Proving youre right brother
lysistrata said:
You kinda lost me with the 'use' of autism,but I like your dialogue,your genuine 'voice'.
Brought memories of my history with my brother: On Saturday,I was standing next to him on the co driver's dear,while smoking a JOSE L.PIEDRA and he wad picking the music....Never imagined doing this when I was a teenager...People change.
August 1st, 2016 09:52
lysistrata said:
You kinda lost me with the 'use' of autism,but I like your dialogue,your genuine 'voice'.
Brought memories of my history with my brother: On Saturday,I was standing next to him on the co driver's dear,while smoking a JOSE L.PIEDRA and he wad picking the music....Never imagined doing this when I was a teenager...People change.
August 1st, 2016 09:52
Don\'t change me, I\'m me
Zackery said:
Feelings express threw open souls. This is a good write.
August 1st, 2016 01:22
Zackery said:
Feelings express threw open souls. This is a good write.
August 1st, 2016 01:22
Second glance
lysistrata said:
I am afraid only today I gave a first glance at your poems.
They are decent,with good rhythm but dealing with similar themes?!
Autobiographical? Keep writing..
July 18th, 2016 08:17
lysistrata said:
I am afraid only today I gave a first glance at your poems.
They are decent,with good rhythm but dealing with similar themes?!
Autobiographical? Keep writing..
July 18th, 2016 08:17
Second glance
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Nicely presented Fable ~ SILVER _ thanks for sharing. I would give you a "second glance" because you're worth it. Yours BRIAN
July 18th, 2016 05:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Nicely presented Fable ~ SILVER _ thanks for sharing. I would give you a "second glance" because you're worth it. Yours BRIAN
July 18th, 2016 05:11
For the lost
AlitaOpal said:
At a point in my life this is what I had gone through inside of myself..
It struck some emotional chords, I can honestly say that Life has truly humbled me on so many levels..
Beautiful piece 💐💐💐
July 16th, 2016 14:48
AlitaOpal said:
At a point in my life this is what I had gone through inside of myself..
It struck some emotional chords, I can honestly say that Life has truly humbled me on so many levels..
Beautiful piece 💐💐💐
July 16th, 2016 14:48
Fighting angels
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI SILVER ~ As I go through live I meet many "Fallen Angels" From the Sky ~ the Deep ~ the Flame and the Earth. But ~ as you emphasise ~ they are still ANGELS ! They dust themselves down and continue to fight against evil and to right wrongs ! Great poem in structure and subject ~ thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
July 12th, 2016 13:56
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI SILVER ~ As I go through live I meet many "Fallen Angels" From the Sky ~ the Deep ~ the Flame and the Earth. But ~ as you emphasise ~ they are still ANGELS ! They dust themselves down and continue to fight against evil and to right wrongs ! Great poem in structure and subject ~ thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
July 12th, 2016 13:56
Maybe gone
willyweed said:
sometimes a man wants to know that he still has it. And goes searching for the very thing he has right in front of him. "Love" I may be mistaken but it sounds like a family break up? you will survive, don't carry other people's burdens.
you stated your story quite well! ww
July 6th, 2016 09:05
willyweed said:
sometimes a man wants to know that he still has it. And goes searching for the very thing he has right in front of him. "Love" I may be mistaken but it sounds like a family break up? you will survive, don't carry other people's burdens.
you stated your story quite well! ww
July 6th, 2016 09:05
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