Comments received on poems by SilverXball



Lilac Tree
tepo said:

Meant to mention
Especially last 2 lines
Super stuff

October 8th, 2019 15:08

Lilac Tree
tepo said:

Loved this write

October 8th, 2019 02:48

Fall in Love with being Alive
dusk arising said:

100% already there. Great sentiment in your writing today

September 18th, 2019 23:39

A different story
tepo said:

Excellent writing

August 24th, 2019 07:32

i fell in love with
Dark_Shadow said:

Wow. this describes what love truly is- knowing the other for what they are and not judging on the basis of appearance. It\'s such an honest piece. Well done!

August 13th, 2019 06:45

Eternally
tepo said:

This is golden Silverxball
Fantastic read

July 26th, 2019 17:39

Just a Waste
psychofemale said:

enjoyed the read because i have been there. thanks for sharing and letting us know we aren\'t alone

February 6th, 2019 20:05

Determine Our Path
dusk arising said:

The river of life.
I really like this analogy. Lifes current takes us interesting places, teaches us, rewards us, robs us, challenges us.

January 23rd, 2019 14:19

First Crush
SilverXball said:

Tried a different rhythm!

December 21st, 2018 05:35

I hate myself, I love myself
ella said:

wow, this is powerful


November 7th, 2018 22:33

Curtain of Tears
vanabba3 said:

Beautiful but sad. Knowing someone is there for us is encouraging, it means someone other than ourselves cares. Nice job!

October 10th, 2018 14:00

Gamophopia
Ansel said:

I like it. Good job.

October 5th, 2018 12:18

A Trigger
Diction283 said:

😁

September 28th, 2018 01:26

Things can get better...
Nicholas Browning said:

Sup. Friendly neighborhood Spider-man here. Just came across this, gotta say it\'s pretty good. The words used match up with the theme, and it doesn\'t stray too far from the emotions the writer is projecting. I even bet that if you were to organize the structure into stanzas, or strictly altered the text to one side of the page that it would be even more of a better read. But hey, I\'m not here to tell you that I\'m ungrateful. I am here to tell you, \"Good job.\"

September 11th, 2018 06:08

Buried secrets
clareuk said:

Wow.

August 20th, 2018 01:07

a child\'s love
little dove said:

i like this. it is a lovely little poem. I had a boy of four call me pretty a while ago he was my nephew he also was very sincere about it I felt. kids can be lovely sometimes

July 23rd, 2018 00:44

Insomniac mind
dusk arising said:

Aaaaah but does insomnia inspire the poetic mind??? You could be sleeping and dreaming instead of composing such eloquently presented work.
Dont do that sleeping thing...we wanna see more poetry. Good stuff.


July 20th, 2018 00:53

Insomniac mind
Poetic Dan said:

Wow, this was fantastically sad the eneding was superb. Words are just words to help us explain what we mean because holy shit would I be swearing with no fucking sleep also I feel clean words can\'t be used to talk about the crap we see.

I\'ll sit with my mind focused hoping you get some sleep.

Thank you for sharing

July 19th, 2018 13:24

Dirty Canvas
Heartwriter said:

I agree. You added color all over. Nice

July 7th, 2018 06:12

A Trigger
Ravenssongbird said:

Yes. This is very sad. I\'m so sorry. 😞

June 24th, 2018 23:57

Lovelorn Sea
SilverXball said:

At the ocean right now :/

June 9th, 2018 14:41

Buried secrets
Shadowbox15 said:

This is precisely the reason I write poetry. Because paper can handle my darkest truths and keep it secret.

June 2nd, 2018 13:47

Buried secrets
Candlewitch said:

it just goes to show, that some people cannot handle the truth...an excellent expression of your emotions!

*hugs, Cat

June 2nd, 2018 12:06

Buried secrets
Evie.36 said:

I love this

June 2nd, 2018 10:32

The Only Reason
Dgrace1994 said:

Wow, I love this

May 7th, 2018 03:01

Telling My Story
yellowrose said:

sorry you feel this way. this is a very good poem, some good expression

May 7th, 2018 02:36

The Only Reason
onepauly said:

quit fooling around and feed your dog. I thought of suicide many times. if I was going to do it. I would have.when you reach the fine line you think differently.

April 29th, 2018 15:14

The Only Reason
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Nice to read!

April 29th, 2018 10:56

Angels Were Never Meant to Fall
Rosette1206 said:

absolutely beautiful

April 13th, 2018 08:46

Angels Were Never Meant to Fall
Nicholas Browning said:

Love sometimes is worth the sin, indeed. Well done.

April 13th, 2018 03:49

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