Comments received on poems by SilverXball



Isn\'t life staged?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HI SILVER ~ SHAKESPEARE WROTE \"All of life\'s a stage ~ and we people merely players\" To some extent he was correct. We are born in certain place ~ in a certain time (Historical Period) MALE or FEMALE (which plays a big part in our role !) and with our character (to some extent) conditioned by our natural parents DNA. No HUMANS are born EQUAL we are all born different ~ I am ENGLISH (by conditioning) and you are AMERICAN ~ and that would be obvious to anyone meeting us for the first time. The roles we play are conditioned by time ~ IQ ~ opportunity etc. However in the 21st C in the USA and the UK we have a great degree of freedom to play different roles and evn to forsake our roots ~ even AMISH TEENS get that choice. As HUMANS we have great potential and it is up to us to try to make the best of who we are (Racially) ~ where we are (Geographically) and when we are (Historically). We all have an inner Animal ~ I like to think of myself as a BEAR ~ but a TEDDY BEAR and not a GRIZZLY BEAR ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.

May 28th, 2017 09:43

What It Means To Me
Rajkumar said:

Nicely expressed silver..

May 27th, 2017 12:22

Suicide
SadInterior said:

This was one of my favorites of yours because I relate to it so much, your a very good poet and If you ever need to talk with someone actually your age, don\'t be scared to message me. Well, till next time friend.


Your friend - Hannah/VI

April 16th, 2017 02:46

Suicide
Goldfinch60 said:

You have plenty of time to come through this and be happy. Good emotive write.

March 21st, 2017 02:12

Achoo!
mammyo3 said:

I know that feeling it does seem to slow down time when you are ill, get better soon.

February 4th, 2017 17:39

Achoo!
Tony36 said:

Great write

February 4th, 2017 08:38

Being naive
Tony36 said:

Wonderfully written

January 31st, 2017 14:04

A burden
Phoenix8523 said:

Wishing I were someone who could wear my scars as badges. Wonderfully written! -- phoenix

January 6th, 2017 19:06

A burden
Tony36 said:

Awesome

January 6th, 2017 18:49

A burden
willyweed said:

Bravo!

January 6th, 2017 16:54

A burden
Dford1 said:

You are no longer a wallflower--your words have emerged.

January 6th, 2017 16:10

Drip, drop
Francesco said:

Wonderful write! I enjoyed reading this!

January 6th, 2017 06:22

Judging
Phoenix8523 said:

Excellent insight into this human instinct. -- phoenix

January 5th, 2017 20:03

Condescension
Quemis said:

Family stuff like this is so, so hard.

Stay brave and creative. Vigilant passion can save lives.

December 10th, 2016 01:45

All for you
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks SILVER ~ For a challenging poem ! I have a Sister soI can empathise ! If she met you she would more than empathise with you ~ Brothers and Sisters are from different planets ! Hugs ~ BRIAN

December 9th, 2016 15:53

Condescension
Daniel said:

Wow, simply wow!

November 30th, 2016 17:02

Condescension
SabreLi said:

I am also going through some issues with my brother at the minute so I can relate. The pain is magnified profoundly because it is family; the very people you expect to support and love you through thick and thin. I hope the situation gets better for you; because if you can\'t count on family... Please keep writing, and keep your chin up :) xx

November 30th, 2016 15:52

Condescension
willyweed said:

very well done, perfect rhyme and meter. I salute you! peace ww

November 30th, 2016 15:46

Condescension
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

This is very heartfelt...and very sad...it brought tears to my eyes...nice work though, for sure..

November 30th, 2016 14:44

Give it straight
Tony36 said:

Great write

October 4th, 2016 17:38

The Birds of War
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

Typo or NOT, this was brilliantly written and very reakistic. Unique,,very unique..

September 2nd, 2016 01:02

The Birds of War
SilverXball said:

Sorry! typo in the last line

September 1st, 2016 17:17

Gone right
Tony36 said:

Sometimes we never know what happened. Like Brian I have been on both ends. Great write

August 20th, 2016 07:29

Gone right
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks SILVER for a beautifully written poem (full of rhyme nd rhythm) but with a very sad sad content. There are always two sides (I've been on both) to an ended love affair. One (usually just walks away) the other (like you) lies bleeding and broken. My experience tells me its not the end ~ you are young beautiful and I am praying you will live and love again. Thanks for sharing I trust you found writing it cathartic. Thinking of you and praying for you. ~ Yours BRIAN

August 20th, 2016 05:05

Glassy green eyes
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Love this poem SILVER ~ Boys don't have dollies (only living ones) ! My Sister had lots many of them ethnic. Even though she's married now with little girls of her own ~ she still hangs on to her Doll Collection. Your poem is beautifully crafted ~ rhyming couplets ~ easy to read and recite. Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN

August 11th, 2016 03:06

Wandering
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing SILVER ~ A well structured poem with a sad content. What we all need is a LOVE SAT NAV to steer us through the highways of LIFE and stop us wandering off the path of true love ~ BRIAN

August 7th, 2016 16:51

My grandfather
So So Bad Official said:

I Just started crying while reading this it is beautiful great job.. keep it up the good work.

August 5th, 2016 00:24

Drip, drop
So So Bad Official said:

Well done.

August 5th, 2016 00:21

Drip, drop
lysistrata said:

I like the poem and his subject,but NOT the title.😏

August 4th, 2016 10:07

Drip, drop
shaunemc said:

I feel the rain is pain. Things you have gone through, I relate to this imensly.

August 4th, 2016 08:37

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