Comments received on poems by thatsilentgirl
Prayer
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL HAIKU FAE ~ Thanks for praying ! Whisper a prayer in the Morning ~ at Noon and the Evening ~ to keep your heart in tune ~ AMEN. Yours BRIAN
July 29th, 2016 04:33
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL HAIKU FAE ~ Thanks for praying ! Whisper a prayer in the Morning ~ at Noon and the Evening ~ to keep your heart in tune ~ AMEN. Yours BRIAN
July 29th, 2016 04:33
Better Woman
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIUFL FAE ~ Same as yours ~ All my MUM wants (and your MUM) is for us to grow up to be spiritually pure and a good role model ~ not only for our MUM but also for GOD ~ AMEN ~ We are Soul Mates ! Your Friend BRIAN
July 29th, 2016 04:28
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIUFL FAE ~ Same as yours ~ All my MUM wants (and your MUM) is for us to grow up to be spiritually pure and a good role model ~ not only for our MUM but also for GOD ~ AMEN ~ We are Soul Mates ! Your Friend BRIAN
July 29th, 2016 04:28
The Greatest Love of All
Zephyr46 said:
This is very moving. Clearly, it is written straight-from-the-heart. Such raw feeling has to be genuine. The writer is a tower of strength in her faith. Thanks, Pat
July 27th, 2016 20:06
Zephyr46 said:
This is very moving. Clearly, it is written straight-from-the-heart. Such raw feeling has to be genuine. The writer is a tower of strength in her faith. Thanks, Pat
July 27th, 2016 20:06
Her Nightmare
elphaba993 said:
This is really good, and very relatable! Great job!
July 26th, 2016 09:13
elphaba993 said:
This is really good, and very relatable! Great job!
July 26th, 2016 09:13
Her Nightmare
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks TSG for a very moving and challenging poem ! I have had many experiences in my 33 years so I ALWAYS try to encourage and empathise. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ BRIAN
July 26th, 2016 03:33
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks TSG for a very moving and challenging poem ! I have had many experiences in my 33 years so I ALWAYS try to encourage and empathise. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ BRIAN
July 26th, 2016 03:33
Brother
Dandylion said:
awww....I can relate to this because I have a brother too:) Loved this.
July 25th, 2016 01:02
Dandylion said:
awww....I can relate to this because I have a brother too:) Loved this.
July 25th, 2016 01:02
His Beauty
rrodriguez said:
Very poetic; classically written. I liked the flow. Your will find your prince.
July 24th, 2016 15:55
rrodriguez said:
Very poetic; classically written. I liked the flow. Your will find your prince.
July 24th, 2016 15:55
His Beauty
Rosethebrokenhearted said:
So, this is it.
I am not the only one who has fallen under the curse of the "Blonde and Blue"
I get this, I feel this; every second, of every moment of the day that rages on. Thank you for sharing about your blue eyed, blonde haired daydream.
~RTBH
July 24th, 2016 04:10
Rosethebrokenhearted said:
So, this is it.
I am not the only one who has fallen under the curse of the "Blonde and Blue"
I get this, I feel this; every second, of every moment of the day that rages on. Thank you for sharing about your blue eyed, blonde haired daydream.
~RTBH
July 24th, 2016 04:10
His Beauty
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks TSG for a beautifully presented and penned poem ! The subject "Love out of reach" is an experience we all share ! It is natural for Men to yearn after Princesses and for Ladies to hope their prince will come. In the UK we have lovely Princesses and Desirable Princes. I'm still single ~ but i would love to be a married Dad and consequently in my search for a Perfect Partner (like you) I aim high. Science calls it"The Selfish Gene" I call it "Love's Ambition". Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
July 24th, 2016 03:16
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks TSG for a beautifully presented and penned poem ! The subject "Love out of reach" is an experience we all share ! It is natural for Men to yearn after Princesses and for Ladies to hope their prince will come. In the UK we have lovely Princesses and Desirable Princes. I'm still single ~ but i would love to be a married Dad and consequently in my search for a Perfect Partner (like you) I aim high. Science calls it"The Selfish Gene" I call it "Love's Ambition". Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
July 24th, 2016 03:16
Death
willyweed said:
I agree don't worry about it!
LIVE! good message! write on! ww
July 23rd, 2016 12:37
willyweed said:
I agree don't worry about it!
LIVE! good message! write on! ww
July 23rd, 2016 12:37
Death
rrodriguez said:
So true. Last Saturday a week ago my brother was so happy, but Monday he was found dead. Live can be so fragile. Your poem is poignant and on point. Well structure to render its message straight. Congrats, you have a great poem here.
July 23rd, 2016 08:42
rrodriguez said:
So true. Last Saturday a week ago my brother was so happy, but Monday he was found dead. Live can be so fragile. Your poem is poignant and on point. Well structure to render its message straight. Congrats, you have a great poem here.
July 23rd, 2016 08:42
Crossing the Road
rrodriguez said:
Cross now the moment warrants it. Nice poem.
July 21st, 2016 13:34
rrodriguez said:
Cross now the moment warrants it. Nice poem.
July 21st, 2016 13:34
Learn to Smile
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FAE ~ Yes I read all you wrote ~ with my own two eyes ~ and enjoyed it. I love ANIME too ~ you could have added an Anime Girl or Boy to your first poem. Loved the elegant structure of your poem the pulsating rhyme and rhythm which gave it great FLOW ~ Lovely to read ~ powerful to recite a real poem. Loved the subject "Learning to smile through pain" an important lesson for each of us in all ages and stages of our lives. We should all count our Blessings then we would smile more and grumble less. If all Teenagers had your philosophy our Schools and Colleges (I work in a College) would be much much happier. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ more please ~ BRIAN
July 19th, 2016 01:33
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FAE ~ Yes I read all you wrote ~ with my own two eyes ~ and enjoyed it. I love ANIME too ~ you could have added an Anime Girl or Boy to your first poem. Loved the elegant structure of your poem the pulsating rhyme and rhythm which gave it great FLOW ~ Lovely to read ~ powerful to recite a real poem. Loved the subject "Learning to smile through pain" an important lesson for each of us in all ages and stages of our lives. We should all count our Blessings then we would smile more and grumble less. If all Teenagers had your philosophy our Schools and Colleges (I work in a College) would be much much happier. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ more please ~ BRIAN
July 19th, 2016 01:33
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