Comments received on poems by thatsilentgirl
The Woman I\'ve Become
sally said:
Such a good writing, your words touched heart, well done dear !
March 8th, 2022 09:56
sally said:
Such a good writing, your words touched heart, well done dear !
March 8th, 2022 09:56
Wishes
Goldfinch60 said:
If he does not see you he is not worth it. When the right one comes to you you will know.
September 4th, 2018 00:09
Goldfinch60 said:
If he does not see you he is not worth it. When the right one comes to you you will know.
September 4th, 2018 00:09
Don\'t Pull the Trigger
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
My God...WE MUST BE ON THE SAME WAVELENGTH...THIS TAKES ME THERE, HUN...AYE YI YI...BEING SINGLE HAS BEEN GREAT BUT ENOUGH IS ENOUGH..READING STUFF LIKE THIS REMINDS USOF WHAT NOT TO DO NEXT TIME...THERE IS ALWAYS A. EXT TIME BUT IT WONT COME UNTIL WE CAN SOMEHOW MANAGE TO LET GO COMPLETELY...IT IS SUCH A WILD CONTRAST WITH MEN AND WHAT THEY DO TO US...READ MY POEM \"Bastards\"....it\'s on page one or two at the beginning of my manuscript which is posted here...I think u can relate as well..anyway, hope you aren\'t still in a dark place ...it will get better...and like I said, u know what NOT TO DO.....B E L I E V E XXXOOO
August 4th, 2018 07:43
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
My God...WE MUST BE ON THE SAME WAVELENGTH...THIS TAKES ME THERE, HUN...AYE YI YI...BEING SINGLE HAS BEEN GREAT BUT ENOUGH IS ENOUGH..READING STUFF LIKE THIS REMINDS USOF WHAT NOT TO DO NEXT TIME...THERE IS ALWAYS A. EXT TIME BUT IT WONT COME UNTIL WE CAN SOMEHOW MANAGE TO LET GO COMPLETELY...IT IS SUCH A WILD CONTRAST WITH MEN AND WHAT THEY DO TO US...READ MY POEM \"Bastards\"....it\'s on page one or two at the beginning of my manuscript which is posted here...I think u can relate as well..anyway, hope you aren\'t still in a dark place ...it will get better...and like I said, u know what NOT TO DO.....B E L I E V E XXXOOO
August 4th, 2018 07:43
My First Love
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write. That first love is always special and will never be forgotten but when the right person comes for you you will know and your life will be wonderful. Keep moving forward.
April 28th, 2018 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write. That first love is always special and will never be forgotten but when the right person comes for you you will know and your life will be wonderful. Keep moving forward.
April 28th, 2018 00:18
Other Girls
brianna jean zeiger said:
i can totally feel this emotion. i went through a break up and i felt the same exact way. keep writing! this was great and relatable to me and probably to many others!
March 9th, 2018 07:56
brianna jean zeiger said:
i can totally feel this emotion. i went through a break up and i felt the same exact way. keep writing! this was great and relatable to me and probably to many others!
March 9th, 2018 07:56
Just A Girl In Love
Accidental Poet said:
Only Love can make you think like that. Enjoy it.
March 6th, 2018 18:51
Accidental Poet said:
Only Love can make you think like that. Enjoy it.
March 6th, 2018 18:51
I Hate That I Love You
Lorna said:
He\'s just a butterfly catcher...... you\'ll find a much better one.........
March 5th, 2018 06:13
Lorna said:
He\'s just a butterfly catcher...... you\'ll find a much better one.........
March 5th, 2018 06:13
You Were Never Mine
Lorna said:
A hard lesson to accept and so well captured.........
March 5th, 2018 06:10
Lorna said:
A hard lesson to accept and so well captured.........
March 5th, 2018 06:10
The Woman I\'ve Become
A. F. Naturaliy said:
This is an awesome poem! I completely relate. ^^ It\'s hard growing up with hate being fed to you with a spoon.
March 4th, 2018 22:43
A. F. Naturaliy said:
This is an awesome poem! I completely relate. ^^ It\'s hard growing up with hate being fed to you with a spoon.
March 4th, 2018 22:43
You Were Never Mine
A. F. Naturaliy said:
Amazing poem! I love how short and simple it is, but also how vague it can be.
March 4th, 2018 22:40
A. F. Naturaliy said:
Amazing poem! I love how short and simple it is, but also how vague it can be.
March 4th, 2018 22:40
What Are You Telling Me?
Caring dove said:
these lines stood out , for me . a strong expression of overwhelming feeling and pain
Feeling like there\'s a brick on my chest,
I\'m dying of this emptiness,
boys are certainly confusing, i don\'t understand them lol
March 3rd, 2018 04:23
Caring dove said:
these lines stood out , for me . a strong expression of overwhelming feeling and pain
Feeling like there\'s a brick on my chest,
I\'m dying of this emptiness,
boys are certainly confusing, i don\'t understand them lol
March 3rd, 2018 04:23
The Woman I\'ve Become
Jamie said:
This is inspiring, thank you for the woman you have become!
February 23rd, 2018 10:06
Jamie said:
This is inspiring, thank you for the woman you have become!
February 23rd, 2018 10:06
Forever Is a Long Time....
orchidee said:
A fine write. Erm, how long exactly will forever be then?! heehee.
February 23rd, 2018 02:48
orchidee said:
A fine write. Erm, how long exactly will forever be then?! heehee.
February 23rd, 2018 02:48
Forever Is a Long Time....
Jamie said:
This is the perfect place to vent, cause you vent like a poet, and we understand and appreciate it!
February 23rd, 2018 02:46
Jamie said:
This is the perfect place to vent, cause you vent like a poet, and we understand and appreciate it!
February 23rd, 2018 02:46
Forever Is a Long Time....
Adam Shirley said:
I can feel every emotion in this poem, well written, well done.
February 23rd, 2018 02:16
Adam Shirley said:
I can feel every emotion in this poem, well written, well done.
February 23rd, 2018 02:16
Fantasy
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
You captured emotion that I think we all can relate to...very nice work..
August 18th, 2016 16:53
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
You captured emotion that I think we all can relate to...very nice work..
August 18th, 2016 16:53
Fantasy
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL FANTASY ~ FAE ~ and one we all share Male & Female. As you so poignantly indicate your Person of Desire is out of reach ~ out of touch ~ out of range. Love the poem ~ elegant angst ! Thanks for sharing ~ I can empathise with you ~ Yours BRIAN
August 18th, 2016 04:43
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL FANTASY ~ FAE ~ and one we all share Male & Female. As you so poignantly indicate your Person of Desire is out of reach ~ out of touch ~ out of range. Love the poem ~ elegant angst ! Thanks for sharing ~ I can empathise with you ~ Yours BRIAN
August 18th, 2016 04:43
True Love
willyweed said:
nice and as Buddy Holly said
True Love waits. much enjoyed! ww
August 6th, 2016 21:30
willyweed said:
nice and as Buddy Holly said
True Love waits. much enjoyed! ww
August 6th, 2016 21:30
The Woman I\'ve Become
Solitary Sandpiper said:
Something I've said before is that I very much like poems that could begin with "Once upon a time," if you wanted them to. This is your story, beautifully told, with a happy ending and a good lesson. I also appreciate that you've remained close to your family, even though you have made better choices, because to not cast off the love of your family because you disagree with them completely illustrates how much you have grown.
August 2nd, 2016 21:00
Solitary Sandpiper said:
Something I've said before is that I very much like poems that could begin with "Once upon a time," if you wanted them to. This is your story, beautifully told, with a happy ending and a good lesson. I also appreciate that you've remained close to your family, even though you have made better choices, because to not cast off the love of your family because you disagree with them completely illustrates how much you have grown.
August 2nd, 2016 21:00
The Woman I\'ve Become
rrodriguez said:
This is really good writing! Congrats!
August 2nd, 2016 19:51
rrodriguez said:
This is really good writing! Congrats!
August 2nd, 2016 19:51
The Woman I\'ve Become
abpoet18 said:
My lord , that is amazingly well written and honest artistry, I can't imagine being told to hate anyone, you're truly talented.
August 2nd, 2016 19:21
abpoet18 said:
My lord , that is amazingly well written and honest artistry, I can't imagine being told to hate anyone, you're truly talented.
August 2nd, 2016 19:21
Sweetness
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks TSG ~ Wonderful experience ~ beautiful poem ! I love Babies too and love your description ~ "Covered in sweetness " Also I love the way you foresaw the future in that tiny "bundle of joy" in your arms. Just imagine what it must be lik to be a Mum or (for me) a Dad ! The potential in each neonate is infinite another MOZART or another MARIE CURIE ~ who knows. This is why abortion or the killing of a Child (at any age) is so so horrendous ! Thanks for sharing and caring ~ BRIAN
August 1st, 2016 10:25
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks TSG ~ Wonderful experience ~ beautiful poem ! I love Babies too and love your description ~ "Covered in sweetness " Also I love the way you foresaw the future in that tiny "bundle of joy" in your arms. Just imagine what it must be lik to be a Mum or (for me) a Dad ! The potential in each neonate is infinite another MOZART or another MARIE CURIE ~ who knows. This is why abortion or the killing of a Child (at any age) is so so horrendous ! Thanks for sharing and caring ~ BRIAN
August 1st, 2016 10:25
Sweetness
willyweed said:
yes to bad we can't stay that way innocent/without bias great poem you pen! ww
August 1st, 2016 08:38
willyweed said:
yes to bad we can't stay that way innocent/without bias great poem you pen! ww
August 1st, 2016 08:38
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