Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm
Half Life
L. B. Mek said:
\'the future loses two\'
that\'s the problem
with the infinity in humanity\'s
incomprehension..
every factoid, is a thought away
from its future, as debunked theory
and so
our future, is an endless
Autumn, of assumption leaves
decaying
in the gaze, of belated realisation\'s
progress...
(just such a thought provoking write, Kurt
I couldn\'t help but try and scribble
a little poetic reply..
thank you!)
April 8th, 2022 04:11
L. B. Mek said:
\'the future loses two\'
that\'s the problem
with the infinity in humanity\'s
incomprehension..
every factoid, is a thought away
from its future, as debunked theory
and so
our future, is an endless
Autumn, of assumption leaves
decaying
in the gaze, of belated realisation\'s
progress...
(just such a thought provoking write, Kurt
I couldn\'t help but try and scribble
a little poetic reply..
thank you!)
April 8th, 2022 04:11
Half Life
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
You are super at penning *compendious and powerful writings.
āHalf Lifeā is a perfect example.
I suppose weāre not the only ones agingā¦so is time.
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
P.S.ā *compendious is one of my favorite words I learned when I was learning the English language. I thought it was appropriate to use it in my comment to your poem.
April 8th, 2022 00:37
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
You are super at penning *compendious and powerful writings.
āHalf Lifeā is a perfect example.
I suppose weāre not the only ones agingā¦so is time.
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
P.S.ā *compendious is one of my favorite words I learned when I was learning the English language. I thought it was appropriate to use it in my comment to your poem.
April 8th, 2022 00:37
Spearpoint
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
I love and admire your ability to express yourself via your āDreamsleepā.
I like to call them
āgolden nuggetsāā¦
powerful, poignant and succinctā¦as in this reminder of what is happening at the present time. Serving oneself at the expense of others is destructive and unconscionable.
Lauraš»
April 2nd, 2022 08:15
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
I love and admire your ability to express yourself via your āDreamsleepā.
I like to call them
āgolden nuggetsāā¦
powerful, poignant and succinctā¦as in this reminder of what is happening at the present time. Serving oneself at the expense of others is destructive and unconscionable.
Lauraš»
April 2nd, 2022 08:15
The 8th Deadly Sin
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks Laura. I can\'t imagine my poem would offer much solace.
Kurt
March 31st, 2022 22:30
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks Laura. I can\'t imagine my poem would offer much solace.
Kurt
March 31st, 2022 22:30
The 8th Deadly Sin
Bella Shepard said:
This 8th deadly sin is the one that robs the soul, and you\'ve presented this so poignantly. I love the power an depth of your writing.
March 31st, 2022 13:03
Bella Shepard said:
This 8th deadly sin is the one that robs the soul, and you\'ve presented this so poignantly. I love the power an depth of your writing.
March 31st, 2022 13:03
The 8th Deadly Sin
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Your ability to write is phenomenal. This vivid and heartbreaking poem has just made me think of my momās good friend. Sheās a mom who lost her son in the manner by which youāve so uncannily penned. Sheās still suffering and ridden with guilt. One day Iāll be able to share your amazing poem with herā¦perhaps at a memorial. I donāt think sheās ready for it yet.
Thank you for sharing your gift.
Lauraš»
March 31st, 2022 10:13
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Your ability to write is phenomenal. This vivid and heartbreaking poem has just made me think of my momās good friend. Sheās a mom who lost her son in the manner by which youāve so uncannily penned. Sheās still suffering and ridden with guilt. One day Iāll be able to share your amazing poem with herā¦perhaps at a memorial. I donāt think sheās ready for it yet.
Thank you for sharing your gift.
Lauraš»
March 31st, 2022 10:13
The 8th Deadly Sin
Rocky Lagou said:
Astounding. Your words never fail to impress. A truly engaging and interesting read and I like your take on this \"8th deadly sin.\"
March 31st, 2022 09:48
Rocky Lagou said:
Astounding. Your words never fail to impress. A truly engaging and interesting read and I like your take on this \"8th deadly sin.\"
March 31st, 2022 09:48
Something More
L. B. Mek said:
that\'s a brave poet, indeed
nor a mere wannabe, like I
(my words
like most of us, I fear
are diluted in ink
one shade of me, the rest
of those dreams I wish
to sift, free
from my confused, enjambment
scribbles..)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
March 31st, 2022 04:01
L. B. Mek said:
that\'s a brave poet, indeed
nor a mere wannabe, like I
(my words
like most of us, I fear
are diluted in ink
one shade of me, the rest
of those dreams I wish
to sift, free
from my confused, enjambment
scribbles..)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
March 31st, 2022 04:01
Something More
Lauraš» said:
Kurt
Wowā¦a very powerful āDreamsleepā.
A poetās sacrifices will not be in vain. Their poems will live and keep them aliveā¦they will never die. Once their seeds are planted, they will germinate and continue to grow. We will remember their bravery.
Thank you for sharing, my dear Poet.
Lauraš»
March 31st, 2022 00:11
Lauraš» said:
Kurt
Wowā¦a very powerful āDreamsleepā.
A poetās sacrifices will not be in vain. Their poems will live and keep them aliveā¦they will never die. Once their seeds are planted, they will germinate and continue to grow. We will remember their bravery.
Thank you for sharing, my dear Poet.
Lauraš»
March 31st, 2022 00:11
Drowning In Gray (+1)
Crowns4Christ said:
Sounds like life all wrapped up in eleven words, nice
March 29th, 2022 10:38
Crowns4Christ said:
Sounds like life all wrapped up in eleven words, nice
March 29th, 2022 10:38
Song Of The Swans
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks Rocky. Mission accomplished!
Kurt
March 28th, 2022 13:03
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks Rocky. Mission accomplished!
Kurt
March 28th, 2022 13:03
Song Of The Swans
Rocky Lagou said:
Great imagery and I love this sensation your poem is giving me.
March 28th, 2022 12:45
Rocky Lagou said:
Great imagery and I love this sensation your poem is giving me.
March 28th, 2022 12:45
Song Of The Swans
Kinsey Peterson said:
I really love this poem Mr. Behm. It is really touching. Good job!!
March 28th, 2022 10:08
Kinsey Peterson said:
I really love this poem Mr. Behm. It is really touching. Good job!!
March 28th, 2022 10:08
Song Of The Swans
Christina8 said:
this is a really moving poem. Great job Kurt! Always enjoy reading your poems.
March 28th, 2022 10:04
Christina8 said:
this is a really moving poem. Great job Kurt! Always enjoy reading your poems.
March 28th, 2022 10:04
The Welcoming Song (+1)
Crowns4Christ said:
These are so beautiful, I can hear the cherubs sing their song is so serene,
I can feel the peace in the Heavenly place,
Just as I can see the unblemished beauty of their innocent face
March 27th, 2022 22:12
Crowns4Christ said:
These are so beautiful, I can hear the cherubs sing their song is so serene,
I can feel the peace in the Heavenly place,
Just as I can see the unblemished beauty of their innocent face
March 27th, 2022 22:12
The Welcoming Song (+1)
Christina8 said:
This evokes such strong imagery. Loved this poem!
March 27th, 2022 10:21
Christina8 said:
This evokes such strong imagery. Loved this poem!
March 27th, 2022 10:21
Iron John (+1)
rrodriguez said:
There is inertia in our circumstances, but conviction does not accept idleness. As to avarice, indeed, chasing the last baton. Perhaps this is Putin\'s malice. Thank you for your deep thought poems.
March 25th, 2022 12:35
rrodriguez said:
There is inertia in our circumstances, but conviction does not accept idleness. As to avarice, indeed, chasing the last baton. Perhaps this is Putin\'s malice. Thank you for your deep thought poems.
March 25th, 2022 12:35
Humbly I Pray (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
āWhere wishes live to hope again
āif I can just believeā
As I finished my sixth round of the second cycle, I do believe and hopeā¦again!
Thank you for sharing these two relatable poems from your ā(1st Book Of Prayers May, 2019)ā.
I read your two great poems today. I reflected upon themā¦and now I acknowledge them with my comments while āHumbly I Prayā. Perfect ending to my day.šš»
Lauraš»
March 24th, 2022 20:11
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
āWhere wishes live to hope again
āif I can just believeā
As I finished my sixth round of the second cycle, I do believe and hopeā¦again!
Thank you for sharing these two relatable poems from your ā(1st Book Of Prayers May, 2019)ā.
I read your two great poems today. I reflected upon themā¦and now I acknowledge them with my comments while āHumbly I Prayā. Perfect ending to my day.šš»
Lauraš»
March 24th, 2022 20:11
Humbly I Pray (+1)
Crowns4Christ said:
We all have to walk through some hell and suffering to truly find God and peace,thus, Salvation
Great piece
March 24th, 2022 19:05
Crowns4Christ said:
We all have to walk through some hell and suffering to truly find God and peace,thus, Salvation
Great piece
March 24th, 2022 19:05
The Summit
Bella Shepard said:
Wonderful thought provoking poem. The more I read, the more I\'m challenged to climb to a higher plane of understanding. Thank you!
March 23rd, 2022 14:20
Bella Shepard said:
Wonderful thought provoking poem. The more I read, the more I\'m challenged to climb to a higher plane of understanding. Thank you!
March 23rd, 2022 14:20
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