Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm
Benighted
Tom Dylan said:
An intriguing poem with some great images. I can almost smell that pizza. And the last line just nailed it.
March 25th, 2024 10:41
Tom Dylan said:
An intriguing poem with some great images. I can almost smell that pizza. And the last line just nailed it.
March 25th, 2024 10:41
Blues Poem #17 (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:
The Blue Front Cafe is the original Blues Juke Joint in Bentonia Miss.
I was there on my motorcycle with my harp in my pocket in 1969.
Thanks for reading ...
March 20th, 2024 09:56
Kurt Philip Behm said:
The Blue Front Cafe is the original Blues Juke Joint in Bentonia Miss.
I was there on my motorcycle with my harp in my pocket in 1969.
Thanks for reading ...
March 20th, 2024 09:56
Blues Poem #17 (+1)
Tom Dylan said:
Yeah, I find this a captivating little poem. I was wondering what the cafe and the date refers to also? Cheers, Tom.
March 20th, 2024 09:08
Tom Dylan said:
Yeah, I find this a captivating little poem. I was wondering what the cafe and the date refers to also? Cheers, Tom.
March 20th, 2024 09:08
Weeding The Garden
Cassie58 said:
What a very beautiful thought. Planting love in fallow fields. Weeded of all hate. What a wonderful world we would have Kurt. Meaningful brevity. Lifts the soul.
March 13th, 2024 10:56
Cassie58 said:
What a very beautiful thought. Planting love in fallow fields. Weeded of all hate. What a wonderful world we would have Kurt. Meaningful brevity. Lifts the soul.
March 13th, 2024 10:56
What Would I Say
Doggerel Dave said:
I remember the year of my 62nd birthday, the age my father died...I am now 82. There is far too much I can relate to here, impossible to provide, even if I could, in the space I have. I\'ll just leave with a thanks, Kurt.
March 4th, 2024 16:18
Doggerel Dave said:
I remember the year of my 62nd birthday, the age my father died...I am now 82. There is far too much I can relate to here, impossible to provide, even if I could, in the space I have. I\'ll just leave with a thanks, Kurt.
March 4th, 2024 16:18
Morning Rain
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks H, always appreciative when you read.
March 3rd, 2024 18:37
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks H, always appreciative when you read.
March 3rd, 2024 18:37
Thinkful Wishing
David Wakeling said:
I ask these questions about God every day.I never get an answer.Thoughtful poem
February 29th, 2024 14:58
David Wakeling said:
I ask these questions about God every day.I never get an answer.Thoughtful poem
February 29th, 2024 14:58
Present Unwrapped
Cassie58 said:
Four fine poems, containing much wisdom. Present unwrapped is my favourite. You are a talented writer Kurt.
February 27th, 2024 10:32
Cassie58 said:
Four fine poems, containing much wisdom. Present unwrapped is my favourite. You are a talented writer Kurt.
February 27th, 2024 10:32
Casting Off The Bow Line
Cassie58 said:
Each one of these three poems is a little gem. I enjoyed reading them all. Thank you for sharing them.
February 24th, 2024 23:46
Cassie58 said:
Each one of these three poems is a little gem. I enjoyed reading them all. Thank you for sharing them.
February 24th, 2024 23:46
My Advice To Poets (+2)
Hey! said:
This is amazing/ wonderful. It really shows what you mean.
January 30th, 2024 06:38
Hey! said:
This is amazing/ wonderful. It really shows what you mean.
January 30th, 2024 06:38
My Advice To Poets (+2)
Doggerel Dave said:
\' The First Cut ...\' does it for me. No message, then form, rhythm, wonderful metaphors and the rest are all for naught.
January 29th, 2024 00:15
Doggerel Dave said:
\' The First Cut ...\' does it for me. No message, then form, rhythm, wonderful metaphors and the rest are all for naught.
January 29th, 2024 00:15
Kill Shot (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:
I’m honored by your comments. Thanks so much.
January 26th, 2024 22:12
Kurt Philip Behm said:
I’m honored by your comments. Thanks so much.
January 26th, 2024 22:12
Kill Shot (+1)
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Kill shot” by Kurt Philip Behm
“When Freedom itself becomes politicized that — is the death of America”
This says that freedom should remain outside the realm of politics and should not be something that is toyed around by politics.
“Letting up provides the tightest grip.” This might seem paradoxical at first sight, but it is still full of wisdom and reality. By coiling yourself around something or somebody, you are in fact imprisoning and limiting yourself. The tighter you exert your control, the more you tie yourself down and the more you lose control over the other guy or situation. By letting up, you gain your own freedom and this in turn increases your power. “Bien vu,” as we say in French.
“Creating space for credence to stick.” The more you get involved and the closer you get, the narrower becomes your perspective. The tighter control you exert, the more you tie yourself down. You must move back in every sense of the term in order to see the larger picture and to acquire objectivity. Giving space also increases your credibility and keeps your mind clear. Others, too, need space and don’t want to be stifled down.
“Room to wander room to grow.” You cannot grow by tying yourself down. To improve, to grow, you need space, in more sense than one. “The greatest step is that out of doors.” Quoted in : Sam Phillips : \"3000 proverbs.\" New Delhi : Goodwill Publishing House, c 2017. Full acknowledgements are made to the authors, publishers and rights-holders. Others cannot grow or progress if they are kept tied down.
Great, impressive, down-to-earth philosophy here, Kurt… You have been on this site for eight years and you have about 2121 poems to your credit… Soman Ragavan. 27 January, 2024.
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January 26th, 2024 21:24
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Kill shot” by Kurt Philip Behm
“When Freedom itself becomes politicized that — is the death of America”
This says that freedom should remain outside the realm of politics and should not be something that is toyed around by politics.
“Letting up provides the tightest grip.” This might seem paradoxical at first sight, but it is still full of wisdom and reality. By coiling yourself around something or somebody, you are in fact imprisoning and limiting yourself. The tighter you exert your control, the more you tie yourself down and the more you lose control over the other guy or situation. By letting up, you gain your own freedom and this in turn increases your power. “Bien vu,” as we say in French.
“Creating space for credence to stick.” The more you get involved and the closer you get, the narrower becomes your perspective. The tighter control you exert, the more you tie yourself down. You must move back in every sense of the term in order to see the larger picture and to acquire objectivity. Giving space also increases your credibility and keeps your mind clear. Others, too, need space and don’t want to be stifled down.
“Room to wander room to grow.” You cannot grow by tying yourself down. To improve, to grow, you need space, in more sense than one. “The greatest step is that out of doors.” Quoted in : Sam Phillips : \"3000 proverbs.\" New Delhi : Goodwill Publishing House, c 2017. Full acknowledgements are made to the authors, publishers and rights-holders. Others cannot grow or progress if they are kept tied down.
Great, impressive, down-to-earth philosophy here, Kurt… You have been on this site for eight years and you have about 2121 poems to your credit… Soman Ragavan. 27 January, 2024.
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January 26th, 2024 21:24
Awaiting The Dark (+1)
Cassie58 said:
What a night! Visually stimulating. Your short stanzas have both great rhythm and rhyme.
Nice work, both poems.
January 24th, 2024 16:59
Cassie58 said:
What a night! Visually stimulating. Your short stanzas have both great rhythm and rhyme.
Nice work, both poems.
January 24th, 2024 16:59
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