Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm
Going Home
Lauraš» said:
Kurt.
ā¢ āGoing Homeā is
hitting home.
Certainly not welcoming death at this time, but I do like these scripted words,
ābut befriending its shadow
whose blanket I wear
in this carrying windā
I can almost feel the warmth of that āblanketā.
Thank you for having masterfully scripted a poem thatās so relatable. Something that only a master of the art can do.
Lauraš»
January 19th, 2022 16:44
Lauraš» said:
Kurt.
ā¢ āGoing Homeā is
hitting home.
Certainly not welcoming death at this time, but I do like these scripted words,
ābut befriending its shadow
whose blanket I wear
in this carrying windā
I can almost feel the warmth of that āblanketā.
Thank you for having masterfully scripted a poem thatās so relatable. Something that only a master of the art can do.
Lauraš»
January 19th, 2022 16:44
Riptide
L. B. Mek said:
\'Riptide: of life...\'
just a beautifully worded song
of life\'s
Sea of majesty and poetic demise..
(Let us, ride high then
upon those waves, of fate
and seek our shelters
in those hillside\'s, of sand
for as long
as they gift us, that most
perishable of virtues:
Time...)
a lovely read, and thank you
for inspiring my little, scribbled reply
January 18th, 2022 06:44
L. B. Mek said:
\'Riptide: of life...\'
just a beautifully worded song
of life\'s
Sea of majesty and poetic demise..
(Let us, ride high then
upon those waves, of fate
and seek our shelters
in those hillside\'s, of sand
for as long
as they gift us, that most
perishable of virtues:
Time...)
a lovely read, and thank you
for inspiring my little, scribbled reply
January 18th, 2022 06:44
Lost To Love (+1)
Vamsi Sudha said:
Nice write poet !! this paragraph is interesting
Your memory found me wordless,
too mute to carry on
Trapped between old verbs and nouns,
silence for a song
January 18th, 2022 06:44
Vamsi Sudha said:
Nice write poet !! this paragraph is interesting
Your memory found me wordless,
too mute to carry on
Trapped between old verbs and nouns,
silence for a song
January 18th, 2022 06:44
Matthew 18:3 (+1)
L. B. Mek said:
\'Or change the future, pointing
the finger of blame
Freedom: within you, the power
to change\'
Amen!
January 18th, 2022 06:36
L. B. Mek said:
\'Or change the future, pointing
the finger of blame
Freedom: within you, the power
to change\'
Amen!
January 18th, 2022 06:36
Lost To Love (+1)
L. B. Mek said:
every week, it seems
I find a new write
to fall in love with, gifted
by your talented mind..
thank you! for choosing
to share, dear Poet
January 18th, 2022 06:33
L. B. Mek said:
every week, it seems
I find a new write
to fall in love with, gifted
by your talented mind..
thank you! for choosing
to share, dear Poet
January 18th, 2022 06:33
Aenigma (+1)
L. B. Mek said:
\'You can burn a book,
but never burn its truth
The flames sear the meaning,
tattooed at the root\'
what is Truth?
is it in that Bonnie and Clyde
zest for living, every breath
of life\'s seconds
and flaming-out, early
but
illuminatingly: Bright..
or
a warped zeal, for control
that made priests, torture thinkers
assuring themselves
if they burn every book and stifle every idea
the world would remain, stagnant
and those favourable
\'status quo\'s\'
stay, forever in place
and it will be the Sun
circling
their Wilful, ignorance...
(just another great write Kurt
had to re-read a few times
to find my grasp of it
thank you!)
January 18th, 2022 06:29
L. B. Mek said:
\'You can burn a book,
but never burn its truth
The flames sear the meaning,
tattooed at the root\'
what is Truth?
is it in that Bonnie and Clyde
zest for living, every breath
of life\'s seconds
and flaming-out, early
but
illuminatingly: Bright..
or
a warped zeal, for control
that made priests, torture thinkers
assuring themselves
if they burn every book and stifle every idea
the world would remain, stagnant
and those favourable
\'status quo\'s\'
stay, forever in place
and it will be the Sun
circling
their Wilful, ignorance...
(just another great write Kurt
had to re-read a few times
to find my grasp of it
thank you!)
January 18th, 2022 06:29
Lost To Love (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¢ āBringing Up The Rearā
A very interesting poem with some intriguing phrases for the readerās delight to interpret. One of my favoritesā¦
ā riding shotgun through my mindā
Thank you for sharing, my dear Poet.
Laura š»
P.S.ā[Sorry for the delayed comment on this one. Just saw it and read it while Iām on my way traveling to todayās adventureā¦onto MSK.]
January 15th, 2022 15:43
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¢ āBringing Up The Rearā
A very interesting poem with some intriguing phrases for the readerās delight to interpret. One of my favoritesā¦
ā riding shotgun through my mindā
Thank you for sharing, my dear Poet.
Laura š»
P.S.ā[Sorry for the delayed comment on this one. Just saw it and read it while Iām on my way traveling to todayās adventureā¦onto MSK.]
January 15th, 2022 15:43
Lost To Love (+1)
Suman_Bhattacharya said:
So true...so true...
The words are breathing...
The script itself is speaking....
Congratulations... it is too good...
January 15th, 2022 12:29
Suman_Bhattacharya said:
So true...so true...
The words are breathing...
The script itself is speaking....
Congratulations... it is too good...
January 15th, 2022 12:29
Lost To Love (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¢ āLost To Loveā ā¦indeed!
āWith love a distant haunting,
we mime a tragic vow
What once we hadā¦ the good, the bad
āthis quietude aboundsā
These words are so telling and resonating. Iām hoping this abounding āquietudeā brings us a sense of calmness and minimal mental stress.
Thank you for sharing this relatable āDreamsleepā, my dear Poet.
Lauraš»
January 15th, 2022 12:17
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¢ āLost To Loveā ā¦indeed!
āWith love a distant haunting,
we mime a tragic vow
What once we hadā¦ the good, the bad
āthis quietude aboundsā
These words are so telling and resonating. Iām hoping this abounding āquietudeā brings us a sense of calmness and minimal mental stress.
Thank you for sharing this relatable āDreamsleepā, my dear Poet.
Lauraš»
January 15th, 2022 12:17
Aenigma (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¢ āBeyond The Flamesā
This is exactly how I envision your writings and any anecdotes you deem to share with this fan and avid reader of all your work.
āEscaping with the Muse in toe
āa fugitive decriedā
Hmmā¦Iām wondering š which āMuse in toeā? Just curious! š§
Lauraš»
January 14th, 2022 12:47
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¢ āBeyond The Flamesā
This is exactly how I envision your writings and any anecdotes you deem to share with this fan and avid reader of all your work.
āEscaping with the Muse in toe
āa fugitive decriedā
Hmmā¦Iām wondering š which āMuse in toeā? Just curious! š§
Lauraš»
January 14th, 2022 12:47
Rod Serling Remembered
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Came across an old Twilight Zone on cable and it took me back to the early 60\'s.
January 14th, 2022 12:30
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Came across an old Twilight Zone on cable and it took me back to the early 60\'s.
January 14th, 2022 12:30
Aenigma (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¢ āAenigmaā
Puzzlingā¦isnāt it?!
Your Dreamsleep is intriguing and itās providing much āfood for thoughtā.
Thank you for sharing, my dear Poet .
Lauraš»
January 14th, 2022 12:24
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¢ āAenigmaā
Puzzlingā¦isnāt it?!
Your Dreamsleep is intriguing and itās providing much āfood for thoughtā.
Thank you for sharing, my dear Poet .
Lauraš»
January 14th, 2022 12:24
Rod Serling Remembered
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
I like the title. Rod Serlingās interests and art has always intrigued me.
An interesting read. The poem reminds me of Serlingās āPicture Galleryā which I was lucky enough to view a while ago. I will also binge watch, from time to time, āThe Twilight Zoneā.
Thank you for sharing your thoughtsā¦always welcomed and appreciated.
Lauraš»
January 14th, 2022 12:12
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
I like the title. Rod Serlingās interests and art has always intrigued me.
An interesting read. The poem reminds me of Serlingās āPicture Galleryā which I was lucky enough to view a while ago. I will also binge watch, from time to time, āThe Twilight Zoneā.
Thank you for sharing your thoughtsā¦always welcomed and appreciated.
Lauraš»
January 14th, 2022 12:12
When Time Stopped (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¢ āWhen Time Stoppedā
A powerhouse of a poem.
ālike a pilot fish to a whale
Swimming through the current of times gone by,ā
A great metaphor that enhanced my read(s).
I read this a few times today. The more I read it, the more I was fascinated by your scripted words.
ā¢ ā āThou Shalt Not Covetā¦ā ā
An exceptional poem with an outstanding endingā¦
āThe Presence
as given
āfreely enduresā
Thank you for sharing, my dear Poet.
Lauraš»
January 12th, 2022 17:22
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¢ āWhen Time Stoppedā
A powerhouse of a poem.
ālike a pilot fish to a whale
Swimming through the current of times gone by,ā
A great metaphor that enhanced my read(s).
I read this a few times today. The more I read it, the more I was fascinated by your scripted words.
ā¢ ā āThou Shalt Not Covetā¦ā ā
An exceptional poem with an outstanding endingā¦
āThe Presence
as given
āfreely enduresā
Thank you for sharing, my dear Poet.
Lauraš»
January 12th, 2022 17:22
Jail Break (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Love your Dreamsleeps. Great reads. One of my favorite lines in
ā¢āāJail Breakāāā¦
āāreleased to scale the wallā
ā¢ āGypsy Windā
Yes indeed,
the āmiddle much harderā
and forever
āmarried to hopeā
with no chance of divorceā¦together and committed
āTill Death Do Us Partā.
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
January 12th, 2022 02:19
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Love your Dreamsleeps. Great reads. One of my favorite lines in
ā¢āāJail Breakāāā¦
āāreleased to scale the wallā
ā¢ āGypsy Windā
Yes indeed,
the āmiddle much harderā
and forever
āmarried to hopeā
with no chance of divorceā¦together and committed
āTill Death Do Us Partā.
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
January 12th, 2022 02:19
\'Writing The Storm\' (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Yes!ā¦another š to love and enjoyā¦šš» šš» šš» . Itāll definitely enrich my KPB collection.š
Laura š»
January 11th, 2022 09:31
Lauraš» said:
Yes!ā¦another š to love and enjoyā¦šš» šš» šš» . Itāll definitely enrich my KPB collection.š
Laura š»
January 11th, 2022 09:31
\'Writing The Storm\' (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Aarghā¦another book!
It is an intriguing thought though.
āSearching For Crazy Horseā is about my 40+ years motorcycle touring the American West.
Thanks LB
January 11th, 2022 05:59
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Aarghā¦another book!
It is an intriguing thought though.
āSearching For Crazy Horseā is about my 40+ years motorcycle touring the American West.
Thanks LB
January 11th, 2022 05:59
\'Writing The Storm\' (+1)
L. B. Mek said:
\'Each day a stalking,
your tracks to betray you,\'
great lines
(but my favourite thing
on this page
is your comment conversation
those memories and close proximity
contextualised content, may be enough
for a short, whimsical book
of memory lane, revisits
I know I would love to read it
if that genius
poetic mind of yours
ever wanted, to write it)
January 11th, 2022 04:46
L. B. Mek said:
\'Each day a stalking,
your tracks to betray you,\'
great lines
(but my favourite thing
on this page
is your comment conversation
those memories and close proximity
contextualised content, may be enough
for a short, whimsical book
of memory lane, revisits
I know I would love to read it
if that genius
poetic mind of yours
ever wanted, to write it)
January 11th, 2022 04:46
\'Writing The Storm\' (+1)
allen_vs_existence said:
I love The Doors! To young to have had the pleasure of ever seeing them live, unfortunately.
January 10th, 2022 22:35
allen_vs_existence said:
I love The Doors! To young to have had the pleasure of ever seeing them live, unfortunately.
January 10th, 2022 22:35
\'Writing The Storm\' (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Ray\'s right. The movie left me feeling the same way...
Unfortunately, Val Kilmer is a little too young to really
remember what it was like, but Stone should have known
better.
https://www.latimes.com/archives/la-xpm-1991-03-17-ca-544-story.html
January 10th, 2022 20:54
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Ray\'s right. The movie left me feeling the same way...
Unfortunately, Val Kilmer is a little too young to really
remember what it was like, but Stone should have known
better.
https://www.latimes.com/archives/la-xpm-1991-03-17-ca-544-story.html
January 10th, 2022 20:54
\'Writing The Storm\' (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
One of my favorites,
The Doors!
You were there when they performed at the
Whisky a Go Go?
Lauraš»
January 10th, 2022 19:48
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
One of my favorites,
The Doors!
You were there when they performed at the
Whisky a Go Go?
Lauraš»
January 10th, 2022 19:48
Out Of The Void
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Wowā¦two super poems . Reading them, I sense and feel a familiarity about them. The more I read them, the more Iām attracted to themā¦like the pull of a magnet.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura š»
January 9th, 2022 13:30
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Wowā¦two super poems . Reading them, I sense and feel a familiarity about them. The more I read them, the more Iām attracted to themā¦like the pull of a magnet.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura š»
January 9th, 2022 13:30
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