Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm
Descartes Reborn
L. B. Mek said:
divide conscious from intuition
fraction thought within dreams
multiply feelings by perspective
then calculate
worth, in deliberating what comes after
before we fathom, what\'s needed in our now...
consciousness is a thread, connecting
all that we are, to all we were
and may yet still become..
it\'s etymology, a derivative of humanity\'s zeal
for sharing stories
well then, dear Poet
let\'s live life\'s
worthy of tomorrow\'s story\'s
and let that be understanding enough
for us
(a Great write!
I imagine in another consciousness
sat at a subtle cafe
maybe near Piazza della Signora
in beautiful Florence
we could have a questing conversation
so diversely resplendent
we would make the universe jealous...
lol)
March 17th, 2023 05:11
L. B. Mek said:
divide conscious from intuition
fraction thought within dreams
multiply feelings by perspective
then calculate
worth, in deliberating what comes after
before we fathom, what\'s needed in our now...
consciousness is a thread, connecting
all that we are, to all we were
and may yet still become..
it\'s etymology, a derivative of humanity\'s zeal
for sharing stories
well then, dear Poet
let\'s live life\'s
worthy of tomorrow\'s story\'s
and let that be understanding enough
for us
(a Great write!
I imagine in another consciousness
sat at a subtle cafe
maybe near Piazza della Signora
in beautiful Florence
we could have a questing conversation
so diversely resplendent
we would make the universe jealous...
lol)
March 17th, 2023 05:11
Descartes Reborn
jarcher54 said:
If consciousness dies in the forest, does anyone hear it die? Consciousness is hard to fathom, and almost as hard to spell. Colorful take on the questions.
March 17th, 2023 00:05
jarcher54 said:
If consciousness dies in the forest, does anyone hear it die? Consciousness is hard to fathom, and almost as hard to spell. Colorful take on the questions.
March 17th, 2023 00:05
Descartes Reborn
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks, it was written as a question because how do you know it never dies?
There\'s a difference between fact and belief.
March 16th, 2023 12:20
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks, it was written as a question because how do you know it never dies?
There\'s a difference between fact and belief.
March 16th, 2023 12:20
Descartes Reborn
Ok Waleed said:
Assuming that your consciousness is the only consciousness is foolish, consciousness never dies,
it can only continue through all consciousness that is connected… ehh well that’s my take. Good poem
March 16th, 2023 12:15
Ok Waleed said:
Assuming that your consciousness is the only consciousness is foolish, consciousness never dies,
it can only continue through all consciousness that is connected… ehh well that’s my take. Good poem
March 16th, 2023 12:15
Paid In Full
Ok Waleed said:
Have you ever seen the movie paid in full, it’s pretty good
March 15th, 2023 10:38
Ok Waleed said:
Have you ever seen the movie paid in full, it’s pretty good
March 15th, 2023 10:38
Beyond The Ether (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thank you for reading and commenting.
March 14th, 2023 10:51
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thank you for reading and commenting.
March 14th, 2023 10:51
Beyond The Ether (+1)
jarcher54 said:
A poet of few but efficient words. Thanks for this haunting and bittersweet reminder.
March 14th, 2023 10:49
jarcher54 said:
A poet of few but efficient words. Thanks for this haunting and bittersweet reminder.
March 14th, 2023 10:49
Trailing Regret (+1)
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
(so true wise Poet
another insightful exposition
of our poetic souls)
we surf the backwash of fate
while dogpaddling
what hope fuelled, brooklets
we\'re afforded in life...
March 13th, 2023 04:10
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
(so true wise Poet
another insightful exposition
of our poetic souls)
we surf the backwash of fate
while dogpaddling
what hope fuelled, brooklets
we\'re afforded in life...
March 13th, 2023 04:10
Minor Plus Est
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Kurt,
You are the master at
“ Using the simple
to state the sublime
Syllables shortened
—magic refined”
Laura🌻
March 12th, 2023 00:58
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Kurt,
You are the master at
“ Using the simple
to state the sublime
Syllables shortened
—magic refined”
Laura🌻
March 12th, 2023 00:58
L\'Allegro Remembered
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Kurt,
A insightful poem.
Thank you for prompting me to revisit Milton’s “L’Allegro”…
and “Il Penseroso”.
Grazie Mille.☺️
Laura🌻
March 11th, 2023 13:26
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Kurt,
A insightful poem.
Thank you for prompting me to revisit Milton’s “L’Allegro”…
and “Il Penseroso”.
Grazie Mille.☺️
Laura🌻
March 11th, 2023 13:26
\'El Maestro\'
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks Laura, that Argentinian was special.
March 11th, 2023 13:15
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks Laura, that Argentinian was special.
March 11th, 2023 13:15
\'El Maestro\'
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Kurt,
Wow! 🤩 You definitely piqued my interest to know more about Juan Manuel Fangio.
For certain a special and an amazing individual.
Loved the entire poem, especially
“ Chasing defiance
the sweetest
of wine”
Laura🌻
March 11th, 2023 13:09
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Kurt,
Wow! 🤩 You definitely piqued my interest to know more about Juan Manuel Fangio.
For certain a special and an amazing individual.
Loved the entire poem, especially
“ Chasing defiance
the sweetest
of wine”
Laura🌻
March 11th, 2023 13:09
Sand Trap
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks Laura, I dream of that perfect 1-word poem.
March 9th, 2023 12:21
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks Laura, I dream of that perfect 1-word poem.
March 9th, 2023 12:21
Sand Trap
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Kurt,
Succinctly stated and so true.
Your ability to express a huge thought with only twelve words is amazing!
You’re a remarkable Poet.
Laura🌻
March 9th, 2023 11:35
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Kurt,
Succinctly stated and so true.
Your ability to express a huge thought with only twelve words is amazing!
You’re a remarkable Poet.
Laura🌻
March 9th, 2023 11:35
Wounded Omnipotence
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Kurt,
Reading your words highlight my everyday thoughts of man’s personal relationship with God’s.
“I’m so grateful my Father weaves my very failures into His unique design for my life.”
Laura 🌻
March 6th, 2023 10:42
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Kurt,
Reading your words highlight my everyday thoughts of man’s personal relationship with God’s.
“I’m so grateful my Father weaves my very failures into His unique design for my life.”
Laura 🌻
March 6th, 2023 10:42
Martyrs & Clowns
L. B. Mek said:
\'of legacy we quest
in water\'s, muddied by circumstance
since before, birth\'..
Poesy as our window to questions
that unveil
what Truth, we\'re afforded in life...
A great write!
March 6th, 2023 05:06
L. B. Mek said:
\'of legacy we quest
in water\'s, muddied by circumstance
since before, birth\'..
Poesy as our window to questions
that unveil
what Truth, we\'re afforded in life...
A great write!
March 6th, 2023 05:06
\"Blessed Be The Meek\"
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
(\'The meek shall inherit the Earth\'
well then, as like Seamus Heaney
with our snug, QWERTY keys
upon fingertips that dream
let\'s get digging
inking, in search of that most perfect-fit
syllable
to farm our blank pages of poetic
chance
and unearth that good, good
turf, awaiting
cloistered and battered, in our heart\'s...)
March 6th, 2023 05:01
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
(\'The meek shall inherit the Earth\'
well then, as like Seamus Heaney
with our snug, QWERTY keys
upon fingertips that dream
let\'s get digging
inking, in search of that most perfect-fit
syllable
to farm our blank pages of poetic
chance
and unearth that good, good
turf, awaiting
cloistered and battered, in our heart\'s...)
March 6th, 2023 05:01
The First Daffodil
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'The whirlwind dharma
that so haunts my dreams\'
(Wu Wei quietude, escapist dogma
to juxtapose, mind\'s zeal for chaos)
March 6th, 2023 04:54
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'The whirlwind dharma
that so haunts my dreams\'
(Wu Wei quietude, escapist dogma
to juxtapose, mind\'s zeal for chaos)
March 6th, 2023 04:54
Before The Fall
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Kurt,
• “Before The Fall”
“The mirror once broken
—each crack filled with pain”
These words reminded me of a recent faux pas I regretfully made.
• “Invisible in nature”…
A powerful force within us that will
“rise to the surface
when conflicts begins”
This reminds me so much of Cutty.
Laura🌻
February 27th, 2023 13:24
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Kurt,
• “Before The Fall”
“The mirror once broken
—each crack filled with pain”
These words reminded me of a recent faux pas I regretfully made.
• “Invisible in nature”…
A powerful force within us that will
“rise to the surface
when conflicts begins”
This reminds me so much of Cutty.
Laura🌻
February 27th, 2023 13:24
Approaching Storm (#2)
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Kurt,
The magnitude of your words in this poem have piqued my interest and curiosity in reading your latest novel. Eagerly awaiting for it to be published.
Laura🌻
February 27th, 2023 00:49
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Kurt,
The magnitude of your words in this poem have piqued my interest and curiosity in reading your latest novel. Eagerly awaiting for it to be published.
Laura🌻
February 27th, 2023 00:49
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