Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm



Vinculum
Rocky Lagou said:

YoooO!!!!! YooOooOOoOoOo! Omg. I was entering this expecting at least 6 stanzas of beauty. And to my LOVELY surprise, I get 4 LINES of GLORY. This poem is the substratum of life! It\'s really us just experiencing others experience us. Bravo! šŸ’–šŸ’–šŸ‘šŸ‘

February 22nd, 2022 11:08

Sylvan Escape
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thank you.

February 21st, 2022 22:21

Blessing\'s Restored (+1)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

Interesting titles for
your amazing poems.

Thank you for sharing, my dear Poet.

LaurašŸŒ»

February 21st, 2022 22:14

Sylvan Escape
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

ā€˜Feel the bracing numbness,
lift what canā€™t be touched
free one starling in the night
ā€”windblown through the muskā€™

Your amazing writing is irresistible and enticing. It craves to be noticed and read.

Thank you for sharing.

LaurašŸŒ»


February 21st, 2022 22:03

Words Of Prey
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks Laura.

February 21st, 2022 21:56

Words Of Prey
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

A huge praise to you,
dear Poet, for penning this great poem.

Thank you for sharing.

LaurašŸŒ»

February 21st, 2022 21:54

Beyond The Words
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks. He\'s really something and a Poet to boot.

February 21st, 2022 19:47

Beyond The Words
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

Wow šŸ¤©ā€¦
These words need to be framed.
I love this so much.ā¤ļø

Thank you for sharing.

LaurašŸŒ»


February 21st, 2022 19:26

Song From The Mountaintop
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

Your deliberate choice of words in writing this poem allows me, the reader, to visualize the amazing beauty of that magical ā€˜Mountaintopā€™ that you were blessed to experience.

Laura šŸŒ»



February 18th, 2022 12:00

Language Denied
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

Iā€™m enjoying this read; but, it is a puzzler.

LaurašŸŒ»

February 17th, 2022 18:44

Language Denied
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

Iā€™m enjoying this read; but, it is a puzzler.

LaurašŸŒ»

February 17th, 2022 18:43

The Leaves Turn
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

ā€˜The leaves turn
and my mind releasesā€™

Love those aha momentsā€¦
those mental enlightenments.

LaurašŸŒ»



February 17th, 2022 18:27

Hollow Grams
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

ā€˜a lens that wonā€™t focus
ā€”an image beguiledā€™

What will it take to focus that lens?!

A very interesting and intriguing poem. Had to read it a few times. It really made me thinkā€¦and thatā€™s a good think.

Thank you for sharing, my dear Poet.

LaurašŸŒ»



February 17th, 2022 17:01

Through The Doorway I Was Shown
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

A great read of an awesome poem.

I believe you grabbed life by the hornsā€¦

ā€˜But a key was thrown out to me,
unlocking things Iā€™ve yet to know
Of a still uncertain future,
through the doorway I was shownā€™
ā€¦and
ā€œWhatever you can do or dream you can, begin it. Boldness has genius, power, and magic in it.ā€ (Johann Wolfgang von Goethe)

I believe that you ā€œNever let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game.ā€ ( Babe Ruth)

Loved reading this great poem and challenged myself to delve into the wholeness/message of the poem.

LaurašŸŒ»



February 17th, 2022 10:24

What I Most Remember
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks

February 16th, 2022 12:16

What I Most Remember
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

Beautiful.šŸ˜

LaurašŸŒ»

February 16th, 2022 11:56

Aloneliness
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

I love this writing for obvious reasons. You made me aware of your muse a while ago, but this is the first time I met her in a poem; therefore, I consider this the official introduction.

Many times I crave solitude. I crave that oneness with my thoughts to feel at peace.

ā€˜Aloneliness,
most trusted friend
you that I count on
there till the endā€™

Iā€™ll definitely be there till the end and hopefully vice versa.

Thank you šŸ™šŸ» šŸ¤—

LaurašŸŒ»

February 16th, 2022 11:51

Hollow Grams
Rocky Lagou said:

Okay I love the play on words with the title and this poem is very weighty. The diction is cleverly collected and the meaning is so true. Bravo! šŸ‘

February 16th, 2022 11:48

New Memories Rehearse
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

ā€˜Words mate in the fog
as the letters reverseā€™

ā€˜Sleep only forgiven
as new memories rehearseā€™

What great couplets!
Youā€™re an amazing poet, my dear friend.

LaurašŸŒ»




February 16th, 2022 00:42

Your Soul To Repast
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

ā€˜But truth has no time limit
No ticket to claim
One choice will release itā€™

So trueā€¦
we have the power
and the choice.

LaurašŸŒ»

February 16th, 2022 00:35

Now Mine To Keep
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

I love this one so much.

Your words are so meaningful, poignant, and beautifully express how I feel these days.
Thank you my friend.šŸ™šŸ»

LaurašŸŒ»

February 15th, 2022 14:04

In The Darkness And Alone
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

ā€˜Is part of me still orphaned there,
ā€”in darkness and aloneā€™

I have a suspicion it might be!

LaurašŸŒ»





February 15th, 2022 13:51

Dying Embers
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

Hmmmā€¦
this is flooding my mind.
ā€˜ā€”dying embers of the pastā€™.

LaurašŸŒ»

February 15th, 2022 13:45

No Words Left
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

The ā€˜feelingā€™, the ā€˜meaningā€™ā€¦
are all there.
(Of course, thatā€™s only my humble opinion.)
Loved it.

LaurašŸŒ»

February 15th, 2022 13:33

If We Were Young Men
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

Weā€™re not that old yet! Letā€™s continue the fight till the light has been completely extinguished.

Iā€™m glad Iā€™ve come to visit your first postings on MPS. I really, really appreciate your response to the comments youā€™ve made about your poetry. I like that very much.

LaurašŸŒ»

February 15th, 2022 13:15

Set In Stone
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

One of my Dadā€™s favorite proverbsā€¦
ā€˜ā€¦il lupo perde il pelo ma non il vizioā€¦ā€™
(the wolf loses its fur but not its vice)

ā€˜ The flyā€™s in the ointment,
the die has been castā€™

Itā€™s so difficult to change those feelings. I will forgive; but itā€™s so hard to forgetā€¦no matter how many years have gone by.

I love the way you wrote this, my dear prolific Poet.

Thank you for sharing.

LaurašŸŒ»

February 11th, 2022 14:38

The Keyhole (+1)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

Two awesome and relatable ā€˜Dreamsleepā€™.
Love them both.

Thank you for sharing, my dear Poet.

LaurašŸŒ»

February 11th, 2022 14:12

The Keyhole (+1)
Rocky Lagou said:

Great writing! I love the succinctness of this and its eloquence. \"new freedom endeared\" šŸ’–Oh sweet sweet liberty.

February 7th, 2022 13:31

F-Stop (+1)
Buzz Bray said:

Contrasts, contradictions, the oxymoron of life. Nicely Done!

February 4th, 2022 14:13

F-Stop (+1)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

F(irst) Classā€¦
all the way.

LaurašŸŒ»

February 4th, 2022 12:59



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