Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm
Your Voice Reversed (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
āBehind whose mane I charge within
āin search of who I amā
I love this ending and the line
āthe Landed Gentry comes and goes
āthe crossroads blackest catā
Thought provoking to say the least.
Laura š»
April 21st, 2022 22:37
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
āBehind whose mane I charge within
āin search of who I amā
I love this ending and the line
āthe Landed Gentry comes and goes
āthe crossroads blackest catā
Thought provoking to say the least.
Laura š»
April 21st, 2022 22:37
Your Voice Reversed (+1)
Bella Shepard said:
I keep repeating the second stanza, and so many things come to mind. A very thought provoking poem, beautifully crafted.
April 21st, 2022 13:19
Bella Shepard said:
I keep repeating the second stanza, and so many things come to mind. A very thought provoking poem, beautifully crafted.
April 21st, 2022 13:19
Your Voice Reversed (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks LB. Very kind of you.
Kurt
April 21st, 2022 06:57
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks LB. Very kind of you.
Kurt
April 21st, 2022 06:57
Your Voice Reversed (+1)
L. B. Mek said:
\'invulnerable to what they sell\'..
(vaunted, that sea of belonging
cajoled, wheedled and enticed
we seek our shores, to belonging
their buffet of lies sweetened
insures, we\'ll surrender and comply
just one more bite
will surely get right
mounting debts, whilst dreams decay)
just another profound, write
dear Poet
(as ever, I humbly
read and learn)
April 21st, 2022 06:46
L. B. Mek said:
\'invulnerable to what they sell\'..
(vaunted, that sea of belonging
cajoled, wheedled and enticed
we seek our shores, to belonging
their buffet of lies sweetened
insures, we\'ll surrender and comply
just one more bite
will surely get right
mounting debts, whilst dreams decay)
just another profound, write
dear Poet
(as ever, I humbly
read and learn)
April 21st, 2022 06:46
As Night The Day
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Very true words...
Thanks Orchid.
Kurt
April 19th, 2022 09:40
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Very true words...
Thanks Orchid.
Kurt
April 19th, 2022 09:40
As Night The Day
Crowns4Christ said:
Seven simple words so full of truth and power, ourselves is the Mt everest of life,we must overcome it and it\'s the hardest thing that we will ever do
April 19th, 2022 09:31
Crowns4Christ said:
Seven simple words so full of truth and power, ourselves is the Mt everest of life,we must overcome it and it\'s the hardest thing that we will ever do
April 19th, 2022 09:31
Night Hunter
Crowns4Christ said:
Reminds me of Jesus in the wooded area when Judas\'betrayed Him with a kiss
April 18th, 2022 21:08
Crowns4Christ said:
Reminds me of Jesus in the wooded area when Judas\'betrayed Him with a kiss
April 18th, 2022 21:08
Angels Conscripted
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks Blue Orchid, Happy Easter to you too.
Kurt
April 17th, 2022 12:39
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks Blue Orchid, Happy Easter to you too.
Kurt
April 17th, 2022 12:39
Beatified (+2)
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
Three great reads, especially āBeatifiedā.
Thank you for sharing this beautiful Easter gift.
Lauraš»
April 16th, 2022 19:48
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
Three great reads, especially āBeatifiedā.
Thank you for sharing this beautiful Easter gift.
Lauraš»
April 16th, 2022 19:48
Beatified (+2)
Bella Shepard said:
Lovely combination. Love the last 3 lines, so very true.
April 16th, 2022 12:13
Bella Shepard said:
Lovely combination. Love the last 3 lines, so very true.
April 16th, 2022 12:13
Strawberry Rain
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
āA bleeding Madonna
āin strawberry rainā
A powerful vision
flooding my mind.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura š»
April 16th, 2022 00:08
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
āA bleeding Madonna
āin strawberry rainā
A powerful vision
flooding my mind.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura š»
April 16th, 2022 00:08
Strawberry Rain
Bella Shepard said:
I love the contrast in the first 4 lines, it creates such a mental image. A beautiful poem!
April 15th, 2022 14:36
Bella Shepard said:
I love the contrast in the first 4 lines, it creates such a mental image. A beautiful poem!
April 15th, 2022 14:36
Painting The Wind
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend, you make the intangible, tangible, with your beautiful words. My senses come alive. You have contrasted this nicely with the very sad state of our world today. Such is the dilemma of our existence. A great Write!
April 14th, 2022 12:33
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend, you make the intangible, tangible, with your beautiful words. My senses come alive. You have contrasted this nicely with the very sad state of our world today. Such is the dilemma of our existence. A great Write!
April 14th, 2022 12:33
Painting The Wind
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
A few years ago I was a guest reader at a local elementary school and had the privilege of reading the book āPainting the Windā by Emily MacLachlan and Patricia MacLachlan.
A wonderful story about a boy who lives on an island. He wants to learn how to paint the wind. He learns by watching what other artists (who come to the island during the summer to paint) are painting.
I love the way you used the five senses to express your thoughts.
Thank you for sharing your pen, my dear Poet.
Lauraš»
P.S.-āChain Gangāā¦spot on!
ā¦and yes, the ārich pull the stringsā.
I wonder what I would do if I were Elon Musk? Just thought Iād share this rhetorical question with you.
April 14th, 2022 11:06
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
A few years ago I was a guest reader at a local elementary school and had the privilege of reading the book āPainting the Windā by Emily MacLachlan and Patricia MacLachlan.
A wonderful story about a boy who lives on an island. He wants to learn how to paint the wind. He learns by watching what other artists (who come to the island during the summer to paint) are painting.
I love the way you used the five senses to express your thoughts.
Thank you for sharing your pen, my dear Poet.
Lauraš»
P.S.-āChain Gangāā¦spot on!
ā¦and yes, the ārich pull the stringsā.
I wonder what I would do if I were Elon Musk? Just thought Iād share this rhetorical question with you.
April 14th, 2022 11:06
Signare
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
āThe part you transform
is that part you possessā
I love this!
ā¦so beautifully stated.
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
April 13th, 2022 16:40
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
āThe part you transform
is that part you possessā
I love this!
ā¦so beautifully stated.
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
April 13th, 2022 16:40
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