Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm
Dreamsleep (+1)
Jerry Reynolds said:
I really identify with \"The Last Rhyme\". Well written, Kurt.
July 4th, 2023 16:18
Jerry Reynolds said:
I really identify with \"The Last Rhyme\". Well written, Kurt.
July 4th, 2023 16:18
The Devil\'s Ink (+1)
Aradhya said:
\"Depravity’s eye
will never blink
With tears of sorrow
the devil’s ink\"
loved these lines! truly an intriguing piece, dear poet. keep up the amazing work!
July 3rd, 2023 11:02
Aradhya said:
\"Depravity’s eye
will never blink
With tears of sorrow
the devil’s ink\"
loved these lines! truly an intriguing piece, dear poet. keep up the amazing work!
July 3rd, 2023 11:02
Eternity\'s Inverse (+1)
L. B. Mek said:
we strain to subjugate a wild
nature, prism
we invert as inert to presume
as belonging to us
(so deep, wise Poet
thank you!)
July 3rd, 2023 03:08
L. B. Mek said:
we strain to subjugate a wild
nature, prism
we invert as inert to presume
as belonging to us
(so deep, wise Poet
thank you!)
July 3rd, 2023 03:08
New Horizons (+1)
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Kurt,
“New Horizons”
An engaging and delightful read. As I read your poem, I envision you…
your travels, your life experiences, and so many other facets of your life will forever be present within me.
“As a poet it pays
to travel around
And visit new words
in verse still unfound”
“Your spirit set free
—the horizon your home”
“To scale every mountain
with peaks still to climb”
I admire and respect your courage.
Laura🌻
June 29th, 2023 11:06
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Kurt,
“New Horizons”
An engaging and delightful read. As I read your poem, I envision you…
your travels, your life experiences, and so many other facets of your life will forever be present within me.
“As a poet it pays
to travel around
And visit new words
in verse still unfound”
“Your spirit set free
—the horizon your home”
“To scale every mountain
with peaks still to climb”
I admire and respect your courage.
Laura🌻
June 29th, 2023 11:06
Marking The Secrets
Parisab said:
Absence of love bears hate… Such alarming content told so succinctly and skillfully in your poem…
June 26th, 2023 21:26
Parisab said:
Absence of love bears hate… Such alarming content told so succinctly and skillfully in your poem…
June 26th, 2023 21:26
Marking The Secrets
ekh said:
I adore your writing especially the first few lines
June 26th, 2023 12:00
ekh said:
I adore your writing especially the first few lines
June 26th, 2023 12:00
Now & Forever (+1)
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Kurt,
• ‘ We all are a masterpiece’
As His work of art, we are valuable. Having His constant love and care, our faith and goodness shall continue to grow and aspire to be the best we can be.
• “Thoughts Go Away”
Beware when ‘The feelings take over’…
it may be a ‘Pandora’s Box’!
Reading these two poems more than once, I’ve been encouraged to progress further with my thinking.
Thank you for your continued motivation and inspiration.
Laura🌻
June 25th, 2023 19:25
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Kurt,
• ‘ We all are a masterpiece’
As His work of art, we are valuable. Having His constant love and care, our faith and goodness shall continue to grow and aspire to be the best we can be.
• “Thoughts Go Away”
Beware when ‘The feelings take over’…
it may be a ‘Pandora’s Box’!
Reading these two poems more than once, I’ve been encouraged to progress further with my thinking.
Thank you for your continued motivation and inspiration.
Laura🌻
June 25th, 2023 19:25
McAllen Blues (+1)
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Kurt,
• “McAllen Blues”
My sentiments exactly.
• “Tracks Of Attila”
I’m envisioning your 14 words…
‘When the woods are full of the enemy
—start your fire at their backs’
I’m visualizing the scene!
I’m so eager to read the entire novel.
Laura🌻
June 25th, 2023 13:19
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Kurt,
• “McAllen Blues”
My sentiments exactly.
• “Tracks Of Attila”
I’m envisioning your 14 words…
‘When the woods are full of the enemy
—start your fire at their backs’
I’m visualizing the scene!
I’m so eager to read the entire novel.
Laura🌻
June 25th, 2023 13:19
The Reckoning
tattooedreverie said:
Damn, this is powerful, even in it\'s limited words. Nice work Kurt!
June 21st, 2023 10:07
tattooedreverie said:
Damn, this is powerful, even in it\'s limited words. Nice work Kurt!
June 21st, 2023 10:07
Voice Of Acceptance (+1)
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Kurt,
• “The Voice of Acceptance”
‘Time as his captor
in shoes of concrete’
• “Summer Rain
“ Painting with words
speaking in colors
Palette of voices
—rainbow Divine”
This literary technique of metaphors that you masterfully utilize is most powerful. They facilitate the reader’s understanding of the abstract.
Captivating poetry…to say the least!
Laura 🌻
June 20th, 2023 10:07
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Kurt,
• “The Voice of Acceptance”
‘Time as his captor
in shoes of concrete’
• “Summer Rain
“ Painting with words
speaking in colors
Palette of voices
—rainbow Divine”
This literary technique of metaphors that you masterfully utilize is most powerful. They facilitate the reader’s understanding of the abstract.
Captivating poetry…to say the least!
Laura 🌻
June 20th, 2023 10:07
Ashes In Shame (+1)
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Kurt,
Wow…the first word that popped in my head when I read these two poems .
• “Ashes In Shame”
‘And the serfs will rise up
in an infamous rage
The despots left burning
—their ashes in shame‘
Like an archer with his bow and arrow, you’ve masterfully hit the bullseye; especially with this one.
• “Never Ask…”
Yes, indeed…
You are the consummate poet!
My admiration and appreciation for your work will never cease.
Wherever I go,
Wherever I am,
A part of me
It will ever be.
Laura 🌻
June 18th, 2023 14:51
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Kurt,
Wow…the first word that popped in my head when I read these two poems .
• “Ashes In Shame”
‘And the serfs will rise up
in an infamous rage
The despots left burning
—their ashes in shame‘
Like an archer with his bow and arrow, you’ve masterfully hit the bullseye; especially with this one.
• “Never Ask…”
Yes, indeed…
You are the consummate poet!
My admiration and appreciation for your work will never cease.
Wherever I go,
Wherever I am,
A part of me
It will ever be.
Laura 🌻
June 18th, 2023 14:51
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