Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm
\"A Grin Without A Cat\"
Bobby O said:
A freaking clever and great math poem w action and axiomatic plot turns. Who knew the geometric given could be caught and burned but their freakin integer backup balked like a teamster striking for longer lunches and Euclidean has to hope that logic thrives after their sage finishes sight seeing at best or leaping from cliffs with a diagonally structured mirrored w balanced meridian thriving as axis of symmetry and it’s enough to reduce or even deliver the genius to a strategic tangent on the oblong elipse , it power base low a furious thrusted in action by the lever of Atlas made from the elliptical chord thickened with confidence and positive Apex and the tragedy averted and that chord had a secret and we all heard Hallelujah as if L Cohen time traveled. And the ale was warm.
September 10th, 2023 00:06
Bobby O said:
A freaking clever and great math poem w action and axiomatic plot turns. Who knew the geometric given could be caught and burned but their freakin integer backup balked like a teamster striking for longer lunches and Euclidean has to hope that logic thrives after their sage finishes sight seeing at best or leaping from cliffs with a diagonally structured mirrored w balanced meridian thriving as axis of symmetry and it’s enough to reduce or even deliver the genius to a strategic tangent on the oblong elipse , it power base low a furious thrusted in action by the lever of Atlas made from the elliptical chord thickened with confidence and positive Apex and the tragedy averted and that chord had a secret and we all heard Hallelujah as if L Cohen time traveled. And the ale was warm.
September 10th, 2023 00:06
Dark Itinerant (+1)
evenwheniLie said:
Pitfalls of humanity in a poem, my kind of party.. excellent
September 4th, 2023 11:19
evenwheniLie said:
Pitfalls of humanity in a poem, my kind of party.. excellent
September 4th, 2023 11:19
Michael\'s Call
L. B. Mek said:
(overcoming our fallible
a path to evolving into something
more than a pawn, in a universe
designed to reward chaos..)
another thought provoking read dear Poet
thank you!
August 25th, 2023 03:31
L. B. Mek said:
(overcoming our fallible
a path to evolving into something
more than a pawn, in a universe
designed to reward chaos..)
another thought provoking read dear Poet
thank you!
August 25th, 2023 03:31
Michael\'s Call
Parisab said:
‘The answer question free’ submission worded so purely.., Nice penning as always…
August 24th, 2023 21:02
Parisab said:
‘The answer question free’ submission worded so purely.., Nice penning as always…
August 24th, 2023 21:02
Mendacium
jarcher54 said:
Could you use fewer words? (-:
I appreciate the bare bones that don\'t mess around
August 20th, 2023 11:00
jarcher54 said:
Could you use fewer words? (-:
I appreciate the bare bones that don\'t mess around
August 20th, 2023 11:00
Time Warrior
Bigguy said:
I suspect there is more to this, but on first reading I strongly pictured the sword and sorcery films of the 1980s, and that made me very happy. Nice poem!
August 16th, 2023 22:14
Bigguy said:
I suspect there is more to this, but on first reading I strongly pictured the sword and sorcery films of the 1980s, and that made me very happy. Nice poem!
August 16th, 2023 22:14
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