Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm
Wasted Breath
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Reading your couplets have evoked feelings beyond angerā¦
It will take time to absorb.
Lauraš»
September 28th, 2021 14:46
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Reading your couplets have evoked feelings beyond angerā¦
It will take time to absorb.
Lauraš»
September 28th, 2021 14:46
Bent Straight
L. B. Mek said:
what exactly is \'Bent?\'
is it curved or folded
do tips, align?
or are they skewed
by gradients of Time? or
being subjugated by a wilful, Fate..
in which case, are we
Purposely, kept
in a state of chaotic Flux
so we don\'t recognise
that\'s our reflection: we\'re endlessly, Chasing...
(you\'ve done it again Maestro
you\'ve flicked your Pen
and got me scribbling my excited reply,
I\'m just grateful you don\'t charge us for the height\'s we reach, utilising that spark of Inspiration, you Gift us)
thank you Kurt, a Great philosophical head twister you\'ve shared
September 28th, 2021 03:44
L. B. Mek said:
what exactly is \'Bent?\'
is it curved or folded
do tips, align?
or are they skewed
by gradients of Time? or
being subjugated by a wilful, Fate..
in which case, are we
Purposely, kept
in a state of chaotic Flux
so we don\'t recognise
that\'s our reflection: we\'re endlessly, Chasing...
(you\'ve done it again Maestro
you\'ve flicked your Pen
and got me scribbling my excited reply,
I\'m just grateful you don\'t charge us for the height\'s we reach, utilising that spark of Inspiration, you Gift us)
thank you Kurt, a Great philosophical head twister you\'ve shared
September 28th, 2021 03:44
Bent Straight
Trenz Pruca said:
Always enjoyable and thoughtful. Thank you.
September 27th, 2021 17:31
Trenz Pruca said:
Always enjoyable and thoughtful. Thank you.
September 27th, 2021 17:31
Blinded By The Light
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
āThe most treasured of things
to be loved and endeared
āyour actions canāt borrow or stealā
Your wordsā¦my treasures.
Words that will live on in perpetuity.
Our actions speak for us without saying a word.
I wish this could be faved ā¤ļømore than once. Words that will live on in perpetuity.
Lauraš»
September 27th, 2021 10:48
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
āThe most treasured of things
to be loved and endeared
āyour actions canāt borrow or stealā
Your wordsā¦my treasures.
Words that will live on in perpetuity.
Our actions speak for us without saying a word.
I wish this could be faved ā¤ļømore than once. Words that will live on in perpetuity.
Lauraš»
September 27th, 2021 10:48
Blinded By The Light
L. B. Mek said:
its rare, you present your poetic voice in such a direct and accessible manner
but then, reading the important message you\'re reaching-out with
I can identify with your purposed intentions
and laud, your tenacity of empathetic sincerity!!
simply brilliant Kurt, as always
September 27th, 2021 05:46
L. B. Mek said:
its rare, you present your poetic voice in such a direct and accessible manner
but then, reading the important message you\'re reaching-out with
I can identify with your purposed intentions
and laud, your tenacity of empathetic sincerity!!
simply brilliant Kurt, as always
September 27th, 2021 05:46
To Always Return (+1)
L. B. Mek said:
\'Sometimes,
the very best informed
remain the most naĆÆve\'..
Amen!
(maybe, that\'s why I treasure this stunting, limitations
that will always have me the student
and never a graduate: of Life...)
thanks for sharing
such a meaningful message, dear Poet
September 27th, 2021 05:42
L. B. Mek said:
\'Sometimes,
the very best informed
remain the most naĆÆve\'..
Amen!
(maybe, that\'s why I treasure this stunting, limitations
that will always have me the student
and never a graduate: of Life...)
thanks for sharing
such a meaningful message, dear Poet
September 27th, 2021 05:42
Praesidium
L. B. Mek said:
\'that great divide\'
\'To write and wander
among the spires\'
\'The sand the measure
of all between\'
\'Are your words personal or objective,\'
\'The second has all the letters present
ā¦except āIā
\'Whatās in my soul
āand unforeseen\'
(forgive my rudeness, dear Poet
but this is how your majestic Poetry
revealed itself to me,
thank you for inspiring my poetic growth: endlessly, incalculably!)
September 27th, 2021 05:38
L. B. Mek said:
\'that great divide\'
\'To write and wander
among the spires\'
\'The sand the measure
of all between\'
\'Are your words personal or objective,\'
\'The second has all the letters present
ā¦except āIā
\'Whatās in my soul
āand unforeseen\'
(forgive my rudeness, dear Poet
but this is how your majestic Poetry
revealed itself to me,
thank you for inspiring my poetic growth: endlessly, incalculably!)
September 27th, 2021 05:38
Oraculum (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thank you, Laura...always very kind!
Kurt
September 25th, 2021 21:07
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thank you, Laura...always very kind!
Kurt
September 25th, 2021 21:07
Oraculum (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
So humble and unpretentious of you my dear poetā¦ā¦ā¦
āI donāt write for you,
I donāt write for me
āI write for themā
ā¦ā¦..and you admirably do it well.
Thank you for sharing your gift.
Lauraš»
September 25th, 2021 19:05
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
So humble and unpretentious of you my dear poetā¦ā¦ā¦
āI donāt write for you,
I donāt write for me
āI write for themā
ā¦ā¦..and you admirably do it well.
Thank you for sharing your gift.
Lauraš»
September 25th, 2021 19:05
Oraculum (+1)
Jerry Reynolds said:
Head twister, Kurt.
Will think about it all day. Thanks.
September 25th, 2021 10:06
Jerry Reynolds said:
Head twister, Kurt.
Will think about it all day. Thanks.
September 25th, 2021 10:06
With The Dawn
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Out of the shadows into the lightā¦
Lightā
our guideā¦
our pathā¦
the essence of life.
Thank you for sharing
this gem of a poem.
Lauraš»
September 24th, 2021 19:06
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Out of the shadows into the lightā¦
Lightā
our guideā¦
our pathā¦
the essence of life.
Thank you for sharing
this gem of a poem.
Lauraš»
September 24th, 2021 19:06
To Always Return (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:
I\'m glad you feel the message....
Kurt
September 24th, 2021 00:35
Kurt Philip Behm said:
I\'m glad you feel the message....
Kurt
September 24th, 2021 00:35
To Always Return (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Definitely for you
āone time is not enoughā.
The more you see,
the more you want to seeā¦
the more you want to listen to those voices that always bring you back.
It is part of your existence.
I truly sense your latest visit in these writings.
You travel out West on your bike and I travel through the pages of āSearching For Crazy Horseā. It is my go to whenever you reference your trips out West.
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
September 23rd, 2021 23:32
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Definitely for you
āone time is not enoughā.
The more you see,
the more you want to seeā¦
the more you want to listen to those voices that always bring you back.
It is part of your existence.
I truly sense your latest visit in these writings.
You travel out West on your bike and I travel through the pages of āSearching For Crazy Horseā. It is my go to whenever you reference your trips out West.
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
September 23rd, 2021 23:32
The Ostrich
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Your āDreamsleepā is a gem jammed with the truth. So many with their āhead in the sandā and facts be d*****!
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
September 21st, 2021 15:08
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Your āDreamsleepā is a gem jammed with the truth. So many with their āhead in the sandā and facts be d*****!
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
September 21st, 2021 15:08
The Indian Sign
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Ask not for whom the bell tollsā¦
Kurt
September 21st, 2021 10:23
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Ask not for whom the bell tollsā¦
Kurt
September 21st, 2021 10:23
The Indian Sign
L. B. Mek said:
everywhere there\'s a few
\'like minded\' gathering of people
preaching to their own choir
creating an insulated cocoon of a \'safe space\' for each other, only..
you can assume, in short order
\'a pseudo aristocracy will manifest\'
from within that group
and those few, \'chosen\'
will devolve
fighting to keep that taste of power and influence, they now crave..
\'rinse and repeat\'
times millenniums, and spread it like a plague: conquering a planet
and that\'s why
anytime, we humans try to govern ourselves, inevitably
we end-up, sabotaging ourselves...
September 21st, 2021 04:31
L. B. Mek said:
everywhere there\'s a few
\'like minded\' gathering of people
preaching to their own choir
creating an insulated cocoon of a \'safe space\' for each other, only..
you can assume, in short order
\'a pseudo aristocracy will manifest\'
from within that group
and those few, \'chosen\'
will devolve
fighting to keep that taste of power and influence, they now crave..
\'rinse and repeat\'
times millenniums, and spread it like a plague: conquering a planet
and that\'s why
anytime, we humans try to govern ourselves, inevitably
we end-up, sabotaging ourselves...
September 21st, 2021 04:31
Sum Zero Sum
Kurt Philip Behm said:
My pleasureā¦ thanks as always for the
enlightened response.
Kurt
September 20th, 2021 08:46
Kurt Philip Behm said:
My pleasureā¦ thanks as always for the
enlightened response.
Kurt
September 20th, 2021 08:46
Sum Zero Sum
L. B. Mek said:
\'The voices of children,
our enemyās shield\'..
it always, infuriates me
when so-called activist\'s (especially those opportunistically abhorrent, celebs)
scream and shout about things,
they know so little about, because they choose
to dwell in their ignorance, excuses
for their pathetic virtue-signalling actions..
they never want the detailed complexities, just the fast-food
quick fixes...
so they\'ll march against one Nations actions for retaliatory warfare
and yet act all oblivious, when the Opposition
purposely, literally: utilises woman and children, as Shields, for their war mongering Regime...???!!!
If we let it, the absurdity of modernity\'s reality will eat us alive: truly!
But, we were gifted this life and like the generation\'s before us, who also decried this hypocrisy of social righteousness, in this warped reality, of phantom equality in our so-called evolved civility..
But!
we must, find a way to survive
yes we do our best, to create awareness and help those by our side
but we can\'t allow ourselves
to be swallowed-up by the bleakness in our horizon\'s of blanket night,
we must prevail, to get a glimpse
of Aurora\'s streaking forgiveness,
for another chance,
another day
another taste
of this blinked existence, we call life.
(another inspiring set of lines Kurt
had me typing away my feeble reply, as soon as I read that last line..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet)
September 20th, 2021 05:00
L. B. Mek said:
\'The voices of children,
our enemyās shield\'..
it always, infuriates me
when so-called activist\'s (especially those opportunistically abhorrent, celebs)
scream and shout about things,
they know so little about, because they choose
to dwell in their ignorance, excuses
for their pathetic virtue-signalling actions..
they never want the detailed complexities, just the fast-food
quick fixes...
so they\'ll march against one Nations actions for retaliatory warfare
and yet act all oblivious, when the Opposition
purposely, literally: utilises woman and children, as Shields, for their war mongering Regime...???!!!
If we let it, the absurdity of modernity\'s reality will eat us alive: truly!
But, we were gifted this life and like the generation\'s before us, who also decried this hypocrisy of social righteousness, in this warped reality, of phantom equality in our so-called evolved civility..
But!
we must, find a way to survive
yes we do our best, to create awareness and help those by our side
but we can\'t allow ourselves
to be swallowed-up by the bleakness in our horizon\'s of blanket night,
we must prevail, to get a glimpse
of Aurora\'s streaking forgiveness,
for another chance,
another day
another taste
of this blinked existence, we call life.
(another inspiring set of lines Kurt
had me typing away my feeble reply, as soon as I read that last line..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet)
September 20th, 2021 05:00
Highway 93 Revisited
L. B. Mek said:
someday, if I continue to strive
I\'ll have earned the capacity and opportunity to write like you, wise Poet
and that day, when the cursor is blinking away
after my final word has found, its rightful place, I hope
I remember these words I write today
and in doing-so, pay homage
even for that momentary, melancholic - breath
to all those, that help guide me
in this endless, poetic journey...
(a Brilliant set of write\'s, Kurt!
that second poem \'18kt memories\', reads like an epitaph they would have thrown-in, at the Poet\'s corner, when Tennyson and those of his ilk got their grand celebratory funerals)
September 17th, 2021 03:40
L. B. Mek said:
someday, if I continue to strive
I\'ll have earned the capacity and opportunity to write like you, wise Poet
and that day, when the cursor is blinking away
after my final word has found, its rightful place, I hope
I remember these words I write today
and in doing-so, pay homage
even for that momentary, melancholic - breath
to all those, that help guide me
in this endless, poetic journey...
(a Brilliant set of write\'s, Kurt!
that second poem \'18kt memories\', reads like an epitaph they would have thrown-in, at the Poet\'s corner, when Tennyson and those of his ilk got their grand celebratory funerals)
September 17th, 2021 03:40
Real Time
L. B. Mek said:
between consequence and regret, exists our opportunity: for action..
between, tomorrow and yesterday,
exists our capacity: to experience..
sometimes, we need reminding
this moment, belongs to neither
and yet connects us, to both
our past and future
a bridge we need to grasp earnestly, desperately: willingly!
(thanks for sharing Kurt)
September 17th, 2021 03:25
L. B. Mek said:
between consequence and regret, exists our opportunity: for action..
between, tomorrow and yesterday,
exists our capacity: to experience..
sometimes, we need reminding
this moment, belongs to neither
and yet connects us, to both
our past and future
a bridge we need to grasp earnestly, desperately: willingly!
(thanks for sharing Kurt)
September 17th, 2021 03:25
Time\'s Gauntlet
L. B. Mek said:
as I see it
\'They\' bequeathed us their Genius
for us to lean-on, knowing
we\'ll need it!\'
(these words you weaved, work on so many levels
personally, my initial interpretation
took me to our strained relationships with our muses or inspirations,
\'Searching for ideas
We challenge
āwith voices from the past\')
a great shorty, succinct and unassuming
but imbued with so much depth, a true showcasing of layered poetic brevity
September 14th, 2021 04:07
L. B. Mek said:
as I see it
\'They\' bequeathed us their Genius
for us to lean-on, knowing
we\'ll need it!\'
(these words you weaved, work on so many levels
personally, my initial interpretation
took me to our strained relationships with our muses or inspirations,
\'Searching for ideas
We challenge
āwith voices from the past\')
a great shorty, succinct and unassuming
but imbued with so much depth, a true showcasing of layered poetic brevity
September 14th, 2021 04:07
Time\'s Gauntlet
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
āTis wise and prudent
to heed the
āvoices from the pastāā¦
āthe legendsā.
So much history to interpret and understand between the white spaces of your written gem.
Lauraš»
September 13th, 2021 22:57
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
āTis wise and prudent
to heed the
āvoices from the pastāā¦
āthe legendsā.
So much history to interpret and understand between the white spaces of your written gem.
Lauraš»
September 13th, 2021 22:57
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