Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm
Antigua Sonos
Rocky Lagou said:
Great job! Love these little universes you take the reader through.
March 17th, 2022 13:02
Rocky Lagou said:
Great job! Love these little universes you take the reader through.
March 17th, 2022 13:02
Antigua Sonos
Christina8 said:
A wonderful write! The different scenes captivated my mind. Awesome!
March 17th, 2022 10:15
Christina8 said:
A wonderful write! The different scenes captivated my mind. Awesome!
March 17th, 2022 10:15
One Phrase (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Your āDreamsleepā is most intriguing.
ācan words do more than waitā
Hmmm š¤ā¦
an interesting query.
Lauraš»
March 16th, 2022 22:14
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Your āDreamsleepā is most intriguing.
ācan words do more than waitā
Hmmm š¤ā¦
an interesting query.
Lauraš»
March 16th, 2022 22:14
One Phrase (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
I spy a challenge in your first-rate poem; hereās my feeble attempt to your challengeā¦
A poet I am not,
a dreamer I am
todayās regrets are
tomorrowās satisfactions
Thank you for sharing, my dear Poet.
Lauraš»
March 16th, 2022 19:30
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
I spy a challenge in your first-rate poem; hereās my feeble attempt to your challengeā¦
A poet I am not,
a dreamer I am
todayās regrets are
tomorrowās satisfactions
Thank you for sharing, my dear Poet.
Lauraš»
March 16th, 2022 19:30
Prairie Fire (+2)
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Written closely together. Thanks Laura.
Kurt
March 15th, 2022 21:25
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Written closely together. Thanks Laura.
Kurt
March 15th, 2022 21:25
Prairie Fire (+2)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Thought provoking poems.
Three āDreamsleepā standing on their own merits; however, I can see a relatability among the them.
Lauraš»
March 15th, 2022 20:55
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Thought provoking poems.
Three āDreamsleepā standing on their own merits; however, I can see a relatability among the them.
Lauraš»
March 15th, 2022 20:55
Eyes Front
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
āBrevity is a virtue of language.ā
Considering what is going on at the present time, youāre spot on with your penned words.
Complimentiā¦
Sei il Maestro della tua arte.
Lauraš»
March 14th, 2022 18:13
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
āBrevity is a virtue of language.ā
Considering what is going on at the present time, youāre spot on with your penned words.
Complimentiā¦
Sei il Maestro della tua arte.
Lauraš»
March 14th, 2022 18:13
Eyes Front
Rocky Lagou said:
Exactly. I love the way you can convey such meaningful messages through such succinct poems. Each step we take and our position in life all boils down to our past decisions and what we will eventually choose to do. Great job!
March 14th, 2022 13:17
Rocky Lagou said:
Exactly. I love the way you can convey such meaningful messages through such succinct poems. Each step we take and our position in life all boils down to our past decisions and what we will eventually choose to do. Great job!
March 14th, 2022 13:17
Diphthong (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks, Iāve always loved that word but havenāt had the chance to use it much.
March 11th, 2022 15:55
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks, Iāve always loved that word but havenāt had the chance to use it much.
March 11th, 2022 15:55
Diphthong (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
When I saw the title of your poem, āDiphthongā, I remembered how challenging it was for me to learn English. (Sorry for digressing a bit.)
ā¢ āDiphthongā
āPeople are people
āand a fool is but a foolā
I wonder how many readers would have thought of that befitting title for your two line poem. IMO, not many. After all You are the master of your craft, my dear Poet.
ā¢ āDrums Through The Brambleā
āAtheist or Pagan
contrast to compare
the first in self-worship
āthe second awareā
Flowing and smoothā¦a delight to read. I enjoyed the rhyme, rhythm and the contrasting and comparing of the subject matter. It took me to one of my favorite professionāteaching.
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
March 11th, 2022 15:45
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
When I saw the title of your poem, āDiphthongā, I remembered how challenging it was for me to learn English. (Sorry for digressing a bit.)
ā¢ āDiphthongā
āPeople are people
āand a fool is but a foolā
I wonder how many readers would have thought of that befitting title for your two line poem. IMO, not many. After all You are the master of your craft, my dear Poet.
ā¢ āDrums Through The Brambleā
āAtheist or Pagan
contrast to compare
the first in self-worship
āthe second awareā
Flowing and smoothā¦a delight to read. I enjoyed the rhyme, rhythm and the contrasting and comparing of the subject matter. It took me to one of my favorite professionāteaching.
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
March 11th, 2022 15:45
Diphthong (+1)
rrodriguez said:
Indeed. As a dog returns to its vomit, so a fool repeats his folly (Prov. 26:11).
March 11th, 2022 11:27
rrodriguez said:
Indeed. As a dog returns to its vomit, so a fool repeats his folly (Prov. 26:11).
March 11th, 2022 11:27
Reaching For Xanadu
L. B. Mek said:
were it not
for our self-stifling chains
binding our poetic dreams
to mere mortal streams
than, pure poetry\'s
innate river\'s
of limitless elemental essence
of interdimensional, intergalactic creativity
and irrespective
of Time, Trend or Tangibility\'s
restraints;
what poetic gaiety
would our words contain..
were we Truly, free
to chase after Coleridge\'s Xanadu, mirage realms
or Shelley\'s Skylark, of fleeting poetic expression
what wondrous imagination
we could distil and share
with this
our beleaguered and stunted world...
but whilst, one of us
still chooses
\'To Reach\'
like you, dear Kurt
can we not all, grip
your tailcoat
and strive, to soar
within Poetry\'s, most
instinctive peak clouds
of \'Wordsworthian or egotistical sublime\'...
March 11th, 2022 04:50
L. B. Mek said:
were it not
for our self-stifling chains
binding our poetic dreams
to mere mortal streams
than, pure poetry\'s
innate river\'s
of limitless elemental essence
of interdimensional, intergalactic creativity
and irrespective
of Time, Trend or Tangibility\'s
restraints;
what poetic gaiety
would our words contain..
were we Truly, free
to chase after Coleridge\'s Xanadu, mirage realms
or Shelley\'s Skylark, of fleeting poetic expression
what wondrous imagination
we could distil and share
with this
our beleaguered and stunted world...
but whilst, one of us
still chooses
\'To Reach\'
like you, dear Kurt
can we not all, grip
your tailcoat
and strive, to soar
within Poetry\'s, most
instinctive peak clouds
of \'Wordsworthian or egotistical sublime\'...
March 11th, 2022 04:50
Reaching For Xanadu
Christina8 said:
Just an excellent, stirring, well written poem! Wonderful Kurt!
March 10th, 2022 14:37
Christina8 said:
Just an excellent, stirring, well written poem! Wonderful Kurt!
March 10th, 2022 14:37
Reaching For Xanadu
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Just left MSKā¦turned on my iPhoneā¦and thereās your posting which Iāve just read. Another amazing, but necessary writeā¦with heartbreaking effects.
Iām thankful for your shares because it brings to the forefront what really matters in the insane world of ours. Our personal situation canāt compare to whatās happening.
Lauraš»
March 10th, 2022 13:42
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Just left MSKā¦turned on my iPhoneā¦and thereās your posting which Iāve just read. Another amazing, but necessary writeā¦with heartbreaking effects.
Iām thankful for your shares because it brings to the forefront what really matters in the insane world of ours. Our personal situation canāt compare to whatās happening.
Lauraš»
March 10th, 2022 13:42
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