Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm
Strawberry Rain
Bella Shepard said:
I love the contrast in the first 4 lines, it creates such a mental image. A beautiful poem!
April 15th, 2022 14:36
Bella Shepard said:
I love the contrast in the first 4 lines, it creates such a mental image. A beautiful poem!
April 15th, 2022 14:36
Painting The Wind
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend, you make the intangible, tangible, with your beautiful words. My senses come alive. You have contrasted this nicely with the very sad state of our world today. Such is the dilemma of our existence. A great Write!
April 14th, 2022 12:33
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend, you make the intangible, tangible, with your beautiful words. My senses come alive. You have contrasted this nicely with the very sad state of our world today. Such is the dilemma of our existence. A great Write!
April 14th, 2022 12:33
Painting The Wind
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
A few years ago I was a guest reader at a local elementary school and had the privilege of reading the book āPainting the Windā by Emily MacLachlan and Patricia MacLachlan.
A wonderful story about a boy who lives on an island. He wants to learn how to paint the wind. He learns by watching what other artists (who come to the island during the summer to paint) are painting.
I love the way you used the five senses to express your thoughts.
Thank you for sharing your pen, my dear Poet.
Lauraš»
P.S.-āChain Gangāā¦spot on!
ā¦and yes, the ārich pull the stringsā.
I wonder what I would do if I were Elon Musk? Just thought Iād share this rhetorical question with you.
April 14th, 2022 11:06
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
A few years ago I was a guest reader at a local elementary school and had the privilege of reading the book āPainting the Windā by Emily MacLachlan and Patricia MacLachlan.
A wonderful story about a boy who lives on an island. He wants to learn how to paint the wind. He learns by watching what other artists (who come to the island during the summer to paint) are painting.
I love the way you used the five senses to express your thoughts.
Thank you for sharing your pen, my dear Poet.
Lauraš»
P.S.-āChain Gangāā¦spot on!
ā¦and yes, the ārich pull the stringsā.
I wonder what I would do if I were Elon Musk? Just thought Iād share this rhetorical question with you.
April 14th, 2022 11:06
Signare
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
āThe part you transform
is that part you possessā
I love this!
ā¦so beautifully stated.
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
April 13th, 2022 16:40
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
āThe part you transform
is that part you possessā
I love this!
ā¦so beautifully stated.
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
April 13th, 2022 16:40
United In Want
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
A mind opening little gem.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura š»
April 12th, 2022 20:31
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
A mind opening little gem.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura š»
April 12th, 2022 20:31
Invenire Vitam (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
ā¦vita nostra pretiosaš»šš»š»
Lauraš»
April 11th, 2022 12:54
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
ā¦vita nostra pretiosaš»šš»š»
Lauraš»
April 11th, 2022 12:54
The Reasons Falter (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
ā¢ āThe Reasons Falterā
Youāve raised the bar with the great questions youāve posed. Much to ponder upon. I love the way your poetry challenges its reader to think beyond expectations and not to hesitate.
ā¢ āGiving Allā
I shall give it my all. I will āWriteāā¦I will āSingāā¦I will āLiveāā¦and most most of all, I will āLoveā. Thank you for your continued support and inspiration.
Lauraš»
April 11th, 2022 11:03
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
ā¢ āThe Reasons Falterā
Youāve raised the bar with the great questions youāve posed. Much to ponder upon. I love the way your poetry challenges its reader to think beyond expectations and not to hesitate.
ā¢ āGiving Allā
I shall give it my all. I will āWriteāā¦I will āSingāā¦I will āLiveāā¦and most most of all, I will āLoveā. Thank you for your continued support and inspiration.
Lauraš»
April 11th, 2022 11:03
Invenire Vitam (+1)
Bella Shepard said:
If I\'ve translated this correctly it means Find Life. I love the first stanza, forgiveness and passion, so important to life. I think we wade through that flood of life every day, at least that\'s my interpretation. A thoughtful poem that makes me ponder and use the old brain. Thank You!
April 10th, 2022 12:29
Bella Shepard said:
If I\'ve translated this correctly it means Find Life. I love the first stanza, forgiveness and passion, so important to life. I think we wade through that flood of life every day, at least that\'s my interpretation. A thoughtful poem that makes me ponder and use the old brain. Thank You!
April 10th, 2022 12:29
Invenire Vitam (+1)
Christina8 said:
I feel at a lost to review your poetry. It\'s so good but I don\'t speak latin that well so I\'m not sure what the title is. I only wish I was smarter! :)
April 10th, 2022 11:38
Christina8 said:
I feel at a lost to review your poetry. It\'s so good but I don\'t speak latin that well so I\'m not sure what the title is. I only wish I was smarter! :)
April 10th, 2022 11:38
Anti-Baptism
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
Your āDreamsleepā is powerful. It poignantly states how a sudden attack can change certain circumstances in a flash.
I love how youāve encapsulated your message.
Lauraš»
April 10th, 2022 00:31
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
Your āDreamsleepā is powerful. It poignantly states how a sudden attack can change certain circumstances in a flash.
I love how youāve encapsulated your message.
Lauraš»
April 10th, 2022 00:31
Canus Temporis
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
āAging Timeāā¦great title as a reminder of the passing of time. Truthfully ten years ago I never thought about time as aging. As the years go by so does time; hence our time ages along with our years.
Thank you for sharing this āDreamsleepā gem.
Lauraš»
April 8th, 2022 21:44
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
āAging Timeāā¦great title as a reminder of the passing of time. Truthfully ten years ago I never thought about time as aging. As the years go by so does time; hence our time ages along with our years.
Thank you for sharing this āDreamsleepā gem.
Lauraš»
April 8th, 2022 21:44
Canus Temporis
Bella Shepard said:
Beautiful sentiment in this poem. I can truly relate, being of the older persuasion, the passing of time can grow so sweet. Thank you for the thought of the day.
April 8th, 2022 12:44
Bella Shepard said:
Beautiful sentiment in this poem. I can truly relate, being of the older persuasion, the passing of time can grow so sweet. Thank you for the thought of the day.
April 8th, 2022 12:44
Half Life
L. B. Mek said:
\'the future loses two\'
that\'s the problem
with the infinity in humanity\'s
incomprehension..
every factoid, is a thought away
from its future, as debunked theory
and so
our future, is an endless
Autumn, of assumption leaves
decaying
in the gaze, of belated realisation\'s
progress...
(just such a thought provoking write, Kurt
I couldn\'t help but try and scribble
a little poetic reply..
thank you!)
April 8th, 2022 04:11
L. B. Mek said:
\'the future loses two\'
that\'s the problem
with the infinity in humanity\'s
incomprehension..
every factoid, is a thought away
from its future, as debunked theory
and so
our future, is an endless
Autumn, of assumption leaves
decaying
in the gaze, of belated realisation\'s
progress...
(just such a thought provoking write, Kurt
I couldn\'t help but try and scribble
a little poetic reply..
thank you!)
April 8th, 2022 04:11
Half Life
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
You are super at penning *compendious and powerful writings.
āHalf Lifeā is a perfect example.
I suppose weāre not the only ones agingā¦so is time.
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
P.S.ā *compendious is one of my favorite words I learned when I was learning the English language. I thought it was appropriate to use it in my comment to your poem.
April 8th, 2022 00:37
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
You are super at penning *compendious and powerful writings.
āHalf Lifeā is a perfect example.
I suppose weāre not the only ones agingā¦so is time.
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
P.S.ā *compendious is one of my favorite words I learned when I was learning the English language. I thought it was appropriate to use it in my comment to your poem.
April 8th, 2022 00:37
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