Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm



Coming Together
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

An interesting and intriguing poem which I enjoyed reading and inspired me to give a lot of thought to the followingā€¦
ā€¢getting to know ā€˜the peopleā€™ I donā€™tā€¦
why not?
ā€¢feeling ā€˜the thingsā€™ that I canā€™tā€¦
why not?
ā€¢be not what your nature foretellsā€¦
why not?
ā€¢be what convention forbidsā€¦
why not?
ā€¢ā€˜love without borders or fearā€™ā€¦
why not?

All daring and tempting,
I fearlessly say.


LaurašŸŒ»

August 19th, 2021 18:49

Turning The Page
L. B. Mek said:

Amen!


August 19th, 2021 02:13

Turning The Page
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

Unlimited verses concealing
ā€˜the moments most preciousā€™ā€¦
ā€¦ ā€˜tis our truth to reveal.
Should we or shouldnā€™t we? Hmmā€¦
Our decision to make.

Thank you for sharing this thought provoking ā€˜Dreamsleepā€™.

LaurašŸŒ»



August 19th, 2021 00:20

Between The Lines (+2)
L. B. Mek said:

agree with you on so many levels
admittedly, we are creatures of instinct
even after much consideration
we mostly work our way back, to rely
on our first impressions..
I think Might/Power, in and of itself
can never be vilified, so acquiring it
is essential, its just
how we choose to utilise it, that defines
whether we\'re branded heroes or villains..
(such an intriguing read
thanks for sharing Kurt)

August 16th, 2021 03:53

Between The Lines (+2)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

Thereā€™s so much weaving and unweaving to unravel ā€œBetween The Lines (+2)ā€ā€¦
a welcomed challenge.

LaurašŸŒ»



August 15th, 2021 18:52

Just Passing Through...
Kurt Philip Behm said:

The American West is being overrun by transplants from both coasts. They\'re
trying to dictate their misguided political views on people that have ranched and
farmed there for generations.

I\'m no threat. I just want to borrow their roads (view) for a while.

Thanks

Kurt

August 12th, 2021 08:04

Just Passing Through...
L. B. Mek said:

sadly, a lot of this I can\'t relate to
but its poetry, makes me yearn to..
thanks for sharing
(sorry couldn\'t unfurl the colloquialisms
my friend) my loss, of that I\'m certain

August 12th, 2021 04:19

\"And The Word Was Made Flesh...\"
L. B. Mek said:

If we be made Perfect, in His image
then pray tell
why do we seek Wisdom, from outside
ourselves?
and if Religion is what equates to God\'s love
then pray tell
why do their crimes, taint our rivers crimson!
and if we must suffer
by other\'s interpretations of dogma
then tell me, why do we not pray
for them to be judged, quickly
and rid us all, of their malignant fallacies
so we may be finally free
to Question, flesh of our own fallibility
armed with Veracity\'s: holiness...
(a thought provoking wording
of pregnant brevity, Kurt
thank you for inspiring
my little scribbled reply)

August 12th, 2021 04:15

Will & Grace
L. B. Mek said:

\'ā€”or ever let a sunrise become old\'
what a great line
and I liked the horse trot, beat
to \'The way west\'..
such a meaningfully fun imagining
of that spirited wild west, heritage
(or maybe I\'m mistaken in my interpretation)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet

August 12th, 2021 04:01

\"And The Word Was Made Flesh...\"
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt.

ā€œā€¦And Dwelt Among Usā€¦ā€

Have a wonderful day,
my dear poet.

LaurašŸŒ»

August 10th, 2021 08:50

Will & Grace
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Good for you, Jerry.

Kurt

August 9th, 2021 08:46

Will & Grace
Jerry Reynolds said:

Well written, Kurt.
I resemble the first poem. Produces a lot of heart break, but I have no regrets.


August 9th, 2021 08:40

Remembering Greg Noll...
L. B. Mek said:

a succinctly worded tribute
thanks for sharing and by default
introducing him, to those ignorant like me

August 9th, 2021 05:16

Remembering Greg Noll...
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thank you.

August 9th, 2021 03:10

Remembering Greg Noll...
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

May he Rest In Peace.

LaurašŸŒ»

August 9th, 2021 00:53

Through A Glass Lightly
Kurt Philip Behm said:

And the same to you, Laura. Have fun
with your Aunt.

Kurt

August 7th, 2021 13:48

Through A Glass Lightly
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

The table is set and ready for the lunch weā€™re about to enjoy.
While Iā€™m waiting for my auntā€™s favorite Saturday lunch (a Margherita pizza with a glass of wine), I decided to read some of todayā€™s posted poetry. I noticed your poemā€™s titleā€¦and here I am I staring at my auntā€™s wine glass which sheā€™ll soon imbibe its contents.
What does any of this have to do with your poem? Nothing! Iā€™m just enjoying the coincidence of the glass and itā€™s timing.

A very interesting ā€˜Dreamsleepā€™ā€¦short but powerful!

Have a wonderful weekend, my dear Poet.

LaurašŸŒ»


August 7th, 2021 13:44

Through A Glass Lightly
flyingfish said:

sounds like your clock is a tad fast.

August 7th, 2021 13:10

Divine Nothingness
Kurt Philip Behm said:

...that I am, Amen!

August 7th, 2021 00:38

Divine Nothingness
flyingfish said:

\"I am that I am\"

August 7th, 2021 00:22

Divine Nothingness
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Yep!

:-)

August 7th, 2021 00:16

Divine Nothingness
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

Succinctly stated,
God is the whole.

LaurašŸŒ»

August 7th, 2021 00:13

\'Music By Moonlight\'
Jerry Reynolds said:

Very disciplined write, Kurt.
My favorite.


August 5th, 2021 15:16

\'Music By Moonlight\'
Kurt Philip Behm said:

And you\'re too kind. Thanks Frenia.

Kurt

August 5th, 2021 14:32

\'Music By Moonlight\'
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

O\' the loving nightingaleā€¦
ā€˜Beauty to beautyā€™ indeed.

Not only so many thoughts and feelings were evoked within me while reading your wonderful short but powerful poem; it also reminded me of Oscar Wildeā€™s short story, ā€œThe Nightingale and the Roseā€ā€¦although a tragic fantasy story, it had many other themes to reflect upon.

Thank you for sharing.

LaurašŸŒ»






August 5th, 2021 12:34

\'Music By Moonlight\'
Freni Karaluthara said:

Lovely Poem

August 5th, 2021 11:18

Pyrolysis
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

ā€¢ ā€œPyrolysisā€

Loved this fiery write.

Hot, hot, hotā€¦
Sizzling hot!

Thank you for sharing.

LaurašŸŒ»

August 3rd, 2021 11:47

Twilight Disconnect (+2)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

ā€¢ ā€œTwilight Disconnectā€
These nights are prone to get longer and longer.

ā€¢ ā€œTo Glen Campbellā€
One of my favorite artistsā€¦
obviously for his songs
and his
ā€˜twelve stringed harpā€™ā€¦.
(Thanks to my aunt for introducing me to that one).

ā€¢ ā€œA Silent Tollā€
ā€˜Are you everything you could have been,ā€™ā€¦
Hoping to have the chance to find out.

Three great reads for this long night.

The vinyl record player is readyā€¦

LaurašŸŒ»

August 3rd, 2021 00:58

Twilight Disconnect (+2)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks Jerry

August 2nd, 2021 15:39

Twilight Disconnect (+2)
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good read, Kurt.

August 2nd, 2021 14:55



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