Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm



Through The Glass Darkly (+2)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

A great gem of a poem that deserves my undivided attention.
You never disappoint me with your ā€˜Dreamsleepsā€™.

Love that magnificent ending, my dear Poet.

LaurašŸŒ»

December 16th, 2021 11:26

Dreamsleep
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Very sweet of you. Thanks Laura.

Kurt

December 13th, 2021 17:40

Dreamsleep
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

Iā€™ve actually been hoping for this poem ā€œDreamsleepā€.

A magnificent beginning to your poemā€¦
and a promising ending which makes me look forward to many, many, many more ā€˜Dreamsleepā€™ poems youā€™ll be writing.

Thank you for sharing your amazing gift.

LaurašŸŒ»

December 13th, 2021 15:29

Branching Inward (+2)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks. No dash because the meaning IS the magic. They\'re not two
separate things. For brevity\'s sake I omitted the IS.

Appreciate the commenting.

Kurt

December 12th, 2021 22:38

\"My God\" (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks for reading, Dave.

December 11th, 2021 22:15

\"My God\" (+1)
Doggerel Dave said:

That\'s religion for you..........not going to elaborate after your second piece...... ā˜ŗļø

December 11th, 2021 22:09

Creation\'s Tears (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

I have 4, and I hate to brag, but Braden tests as genius. As a 7 year old, heā€™s hard to stay ahead of. He loves mechanical things and can do the most complex Lego arrangements that leave me wantingā€¦

December 11th, 2021 16:29

Creation\'s Tears (+1)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

ā€¢ ā€œBradenā€™s Songā€
I suppose one can win the game but not beat it.

A very astute grandson.
The apple doesn\'t fall far from the tree.

Thank you for sharing.

LaurašŸŒ»



December 11th, 2021 16:22

Creation\'s Tears (+1)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

ā€¢ ā€œCreationā€™s Tearsā€

Before I read your masterfully scripted poem this morning, I heard the devastating news about the deadly massive tornadoes. It truly saddened me . Each time something like this happens, it makes me appreciate my life moreā€¦no matter the pain and the heartaches.

ā€¦and I believe God is still crying, IMHO; this also saddens me.

I DO appreciate your poetry more and more each day. Thank you for sharing.

LaurašŸŒ»

December 11th, 2021 15:59

\"My God\" (+1)
woundedheart said:

It is true they were fought in the name of God but we know it was really fought for wealth power and land or in modern times oil and minerals. Great write though if only the wars could be decided more sensibly say on a chess board.

December 11th, 2021 13:14

Creation\'s Tears (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks C.

December 10th, 2021 19:05

Creation\'s Tears (+1)
Coyote said:

BeautifulšŸ™‚

December 10th, 2021 17:47

Tone Death (+1)
C E Thomas said:

Beautiful. A poem that deserves such a great title. You\'ve made me feel so much, in not so many words; you should be proud of your work, and write many more.

December 9th, 2021 21:59

Tone Death (+1)
Draven said:

Really like this

December 9th, 2021 19:17

Tone Death (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thank you.

December 9th, 2021 14:44

Tone Death (+1)
woundedheart said:

The words still an orphan. .. Great line and a very well penned poem

December 9th, 2021 14:03

Waiting For An Echo (+1)
L. B. Mek said:

\'Waiting for an Echo
More Precious Than Gold:
The script of experience\'
these lines: aligned on a page
just stumped me - frozen-still
for a good minute!
seriously, such a privilege
to read your work, Kurt
\'I read and learn\' thank you!

December 7th, 2021 04:30

Waiting For An Echo (+1)
Danica said:

Wow! I can feel this!
Perfect!

December 6th, 2021 14:50

Blessing\'s For Sale (+1)
Lorna said:

Especially loved the first one..... you got it!

December 5th, 2021 05:53

Blessing\'s For Sale (+1)
Eugene S. said:

Your words are always so profound.

December 5th, 2021 05:47

Blessing\'s For Sale (+1)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

Two powerful and amazing writes. A contemplative read.
Thank you for sharing.

LaurašŸŒ»

December 5th, 2021 00:20

The Forest & The Trees (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks Jerry

December 3rd, 2021 17:25

The Forest & The Trees (+1)
Jerry Reynolds said:

Damn, Kurt.
That is a dead-center shot.

December 3rd, 2021 16:07

The Forest & The Trees (+1)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

ā€¢ā€The Forest & The Treesā€
A befitting title for your
two couplets.

ā€¦without the trees, thereā€™s no forest!

LaurašŸŒ»



December 3rd, 2021 11:37

No Kiss On The Mouth (+1)
Doggerel Dave said:

That first piece - it was the rhyme and construction....the rhyme and construction I tell Ya, which got to me.....

December 2nd, 2021 19:11

No Kiss On The Mouth (+1)
Jerry Reynolds said:

Beautiful, Kurt.
Especially meaningful to a catholic boy.

December 2nd, 2021 16:53

Before Thereafter (+1)
Lorna said:

Witty little ditties

November 30th, 2021 12:44

No Mans Land
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks Lorna

November 30th, 2021 09:48

Safe In Our Beds (+1)
L. B. Mek said:

\'Indelibly Inked\'
deserves to be posted again and again, on its own
one the very best!
from your endless, list of great\'s
dear Masterful Poet, thank you!

November 30th, 2021 05:56

Baited & Switched
L. B. Mek said:

and we\'ve allowed ourselves
to be caught-up in the nets
of life\'s unnecessary, distractions
since we were, but tadpoles
looking up, at those shorelines
to our evolutionary dreams..
(another thought provoking write Kurt, thanks for sharing)

November 30th, 2021 05:52



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