Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm
\'False Witness\' (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Padre, Figlio, e
Spirito Santo.
Amen!
Lauraš»
October 5th, 2021 12:53
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Padre, Figlio, e
Spirito Santo.
Amen!
Lauraš»
October 5th, 2021 12:53
Crossing The Equator (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Your āDreamsleepā poems are beyond impressive. So gracious of you to share your pen. Iām so blessed to be able to bask in the moment as I read your work.
Lauraš»
October 5th, 2021 09:22
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Your āDreamsleepā poems are beyond impressive. So gracious of you to share your pen. Iām so blessed to be able to bask in the moment as I read your work.
Lauraš»
October 5th, 2021 09:22
Crossing The Equator (+1)
L. B. Mek said:
\'Journeying inward
āwhere near meets the far\'..
Amen!
wonderfully woven, distilled wisdom
worded, at its most accessible..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
October 5th, 2021 04:39
L. B. Mek said:
\'Journeying inward
āwhere near meets the far\'..
Amen!
wonderfully woven, distilled wisdom
worded, at its most accessible..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
October 5th, 2021 04:39
Fault Line
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¢āFault Lineā
A āfault lineā of life will either make us better or it will make us worse. It will be disruptive and cause changes. Upheavals, especially unexpected ones, may seem unfair, but theyāre not always dreadful.
ā¢āThe Last Mirageā
Diving in all the wayā¦
āfor better or worseāā¦
as one of my physicians said!
I did a lot of pondering during the reading of your two intense poems. So much to think about!
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
October 1st, 2021 18:52
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¢āFault Lineā
A āfault lineā of life will either make us better or it will make us worse. It will be disruptive and cause changes. Upheavals, especially unexpected ones, may seem unfair, but theyāre not always dreadful.
ā¢āThe Last Mirageā
Diving in all the wayā¦
āfor better or worseāā¦
as one of my physicians said!
I did a lot of pondering during the reading of your two intense poems. So much to think about!
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
October 1st, 2021 18:52
Fault Line
L. B. Mek said:
had to read this two or three times and contemplate, why it gripped me with such intensity,
there\'s a sense of stunted despair in your lines,
like, even attempting to pretend and project a feigned sense of normality
could potentially become, that one step too far..
instead this words, seemingly represent a lifeline of rope, where
they allow us, to look at
than experience:
\'the tides of thirst,
the dam,
opened wide
āfor better or worse\'..
(a deeply layered write
beautifully worded
profound poetry!
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
October 1st, 2021 03:26
L. B. Mek said:
had to read this two or three times and contemplate, why it gripped me with such intensity,
there\'s a sense of stunted despair in your lines,
like, even attempting to pretend and project a feigned sense of normality
could potentially become, that one step too far..
instead this words, seemingly represent a lifeline of rope, where
they allow us, to look at
than experience:
\'the tides of thirst,
the dam,
opened wide
āfor better or worse\'..
(a deeply layered write
beautifully worded
profound poetry!
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
October 1st, 2021 03:26
Above The Beyond (Something For Laura)
L. B. Mek said:
so very true
(makes sense that we originally created music, before
we ever came to conceptualise letters and words
just wish, our education system was centred on that intuitive musicality of life
more,
than that alphabet we all require, to perfectly annunciate: our creative lies...)
this read definitely hit home, thanks for sharing Kurt
September 30th, 2021 02:58
L. B. Mek said:
so very true
(makes sense that we originally created music, before
we ever came to conceptualise letters and words
just wish, our education system was centred on that intuitive musicality of life
more,
than that alphabet we all require, to perfectly annunciate: our creative lies...)
this read definitely hit home, thanks for sharing Kurt
September 30th, 2021 02:58
Above The Beyond (Something For Laura)
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Kurt, music releases us from the tensions in our world.
Bohemian Rhapsody is so good, we sing it in a choir that I am in and it is always popular.
Andy
September 30th, 2021 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Kurt, music releases us from the tensions in our world.
Bohemian Rhapsody is so good, we sing it in a choir that I am in and it is always popular.
Andy
September 30th, 2021 00:23
Above The Beyond (Something For Laura)
Kurt Philip Behm said:
My pleasure, Laura.
September 29th, 2021 20:34
Kurt Philip Behm said:
My pleasure, Laura.
September 29th, 2021 20:34
Above The Beyond (Something For Laura)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
āThe minstrel frees the poetās words
āand drives the feelings homeā
Music and poetry are the two ultimate art forms...IMO. Your words have been freed and the feelings have been propelled beyond expectation.
Envisioning you, my dear poet, penning your special words while listening to Bohemian Rhapsody (one of my favorite musical pieces) is a gift in itself.
Thank you for your giftā¦
forever to be cherished.
Lauraš»
September 29th, 2021 18:34
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
āThe minstrel frees the poetās words
āand drives the feelings homeā
Music and poetry are the two ultimate art forms...IMO. Your words have been freed and the feelings have been propelled beyond expectation.
Envisioning you, my dear poet, penning your special words while listening to Bohemian Rhapsody (one of my favorite musical pieces) is a gift in itself.
Thank you for your giftā¦
forever to be cherished.
Lauraš»
September 29th, 2021 18:34
Wasted Breath
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Yep, just when you think it canāt get any worseā¦
September 28th, 2021 17:26
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Yep, just when you think it canāt get any worseā¦
September 28th, 2021 17:26
Wasted Breath
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Reading your couplets have evoked feelings beyond angerā¦
It will take time to absorb.
Lauraš»
September 28th, 2021 14:46
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Reading your couplets have evoked feelings beyond angerā¦
It will take time to absorb.
Lauraš»
September 28th, 2021 14:46
Bent Straight
L. B. Mek said:
what exactly is \'Bent?\'
is it curved or folded
do tips, align?
or are they skewed
by gradients of Time? or
being subjugated by a wilful, Fate..
in which case, are we
Purposely, kept
in a state of chaotic Flux
so we don\'t recognise
that\'s our reflection: we\'re endlessly, Chasing...
(you\'ve done it again Maestro
you\'ve flicked your Pen
and got me scribbling my excited reply,
I\'m just grateful you don\'t charge us for the height\'s we reach, utilising that spark of Inspiration, you Gift us)
thank you Kurt, a Great philosophical head twister you\'ve shared
September 28th, 2021 03:44
L. B. Mek said:
what exactly is \'Bent?\'
is it curved or folded
do tips, align?
or are they skewed
by gradients of Time? or
being subjugated by a wilful, Fate..
in which case, are we
Purposely, kept
in a state of chaotic Flux
so we don\'t recognise
that\'s our reflection: we\'re endlessly, Chasing...
(you\'ve done it again Maestro
you\'ve flicked your Pen
and got me scribbling my excited reply,
I\'m just grateful you don\'t charge us for the height\'s we reach, utilising that spark of Inspiration, you Gift us)
thank you Kurt, a Great philosophical head twister you\'ve shared
September 28th, 2021 03:44
Bent Straight
Trenz Pruca said:
Always enjoyable and thoughtful. Thank you.
September 27th, 2021 17:31
Trenz Pruca said:
Always enjoyable and thoughtful. Thank you.
September 27th, 2021 17:31
Blinded By The Light
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
āThe most treasured of things
to be loved and endeared
āyour actions canāt borrow or stealā
Your wordsā¦my treasures.
Words that will live on in perpetuity.
Our actions speak for us without saying a word.
I wish this could be faved ā¤ļømore than once. Words that will live on in perpetuity.
Lauraš»
September 27th, 2021 10:48
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
āThe most treasured of things
to be loved and endeared
āyour actions canāt borrow or stealā
Your wordsā¦my treasures.
Words that will live on in perpetuity.
Our actions speak for us without saying a word.
I wish this could be faved ā¤ļømore than once. Words that will live on in perpetuity.
Lauraš»
September 27th, 2021 10:48
Blinded By The Light
L. B. Mek said:
its rare, you present your poetic voice in such a direct and accessible manner
but then, reading the important message you\'re reaching-out with
I can identify with your purposed intentions
and laud, your tenacity of empathetic sincerity!!
simply brilliant Kurt, as always
September 27th, 2021 05:46
L. B. Mek said:
its rare, you present your poetic voice in such a direct and accessible manner
but then, reading the important message you\'re reaching-out with
I can identify with your purposed intentions
and laud, your tenacity of empathetic sincerity!!
simply brilliant Kurt, as always
September 27th, 2021 05:46
To Always Return (+1)
L. B. Mek said:
\'Sometimes,
the very best informed
remain the most naĆÆve\'..
Amen!
(maybe, that\'s why I treasure this stunting, limitations
that will always have me the student
and never a graduate: of Life...)
thanks for sharing
such a meaningful message, dear Poet
September 27th, 2021 05:42
L. B. Mek said:
\'Sometimes,
the very best informed
remain the most naĆÆve\'..
Amen!
(maybe, that\'s why I treasure this stunting, limitations
that will always have me the student
and never a graduate: of Life...)
thanks for sharing
such a meaningful message, dear Poet
September 27th, 2021 05:42
Praesidium
L. B. Mek said:
\'that great divide\'
\'To write and wander
among the spires\'
\'The sand the measure
of all between\'
\'Are your words personal or objective,\'
\'The second has all the letters present
ā¦except āIā
\'Whatās in my soul
āand unforeseen\'
(forgive my rudeness, dear Poet
but this is how your majestic Poetry
revealed itself to me,
thank you for inspiring my poetic growth: endlessly, incalculably!)
September 27th, 2021 05:38
L. B. Mek said:
\'that great divide\'
\'To write and wander
among the spires\'
\'The sand the measure
of all between\'
\'Are your words personal or objective,\'
\'The second has all the letters present
ā¦except āIā
\'Whatās in my soul
āand unforeseen\'
(forgive my rudeness, dear Poet
but this is how your majestic Poetry
revealed itself to me,
thank you for inspiring my poetic growth: endlessly, incalculably!)
September 27th, 2021 05:38
Oraculum (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thank you, Laura...always very kind!
Kurt
September 25th, 2021 21:07
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thank you, Laura...always very kind!
Kurt
September 25th, 2021 21:07
Oraculum (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
So humble and unpretentious of you my dear poetā¦ā¦ā¦
āI donāt write for you,
I donāt write for me
āI write for themā
ā¦ā¦..and you admirably do it well.
Thank you for sharing your gift.
Lauraš»
September 25th, 2021 19:05
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
So humble and unpretentious of you my dear poetā¦ā¦ā¦
āI donāt write for you,
I donāt write for me
āI write for themā
ā¦ā¦..and you admirably do it well.
Thank you for sharing your gift.
Lauraš»
September 25th, 2021 19:05
Oraculum (+1)
Jerry Reynolds said:
Head twister, Kurt.
Will think about it all day. Thanks.
September 25th, 2021 10:06
Jerry Reynolds said:
Head twister, Kurt.
Will think about it all day. Thanks.
September 25th, 2021 10:06
With The Dawn
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Out of the shadows into the lightā¦
Lightā
our guideā¦
our pathā¦
the essence of life.
Thank you for sharing
this gem of a poem.
Lauraš»
September 24th, 2021 19:06
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Out of the shadows into the lightā¦
Lightā
our guideā¦
our pathā¦
the essence of life.
Thank you for sharing
this gem of a poem.
Lauraš»
September 24th, 2021 19:06
To Always Return (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:
I\'m glad you feel the message....
Kurt
September 24th, 2021 00:35
Kurt Philip Behm said:
I\'m glad you feel the message....
Kurt
September 24th, 2021 00:35
To Always Return (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Definitely for you
āone time is not enoughā.
The more you see,
the more you want to seeā¦
the more you want to listen to those voices that always bring you back.
It is part of your existence.
I truly sense your latest visit in these writings.
You travel out West on your bike and I travel through the pages of āSearching For Crazy Horseā. It is my go to whenever you reference your trips out West.
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
September 23rd, 2021 23:32
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Definitely for you
āone time is not enoughā.
The more you see,
the more you want to seeā¦
the more you want to listen to those voices that always bring you back.
It is part of your existence.
I truly sense your latest visit in these writings.
You travel out West on your bike and I travel through the pages of āSearching For Crazy Horseā. It is my go to whenever you reference your trips out West.
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
September 23rd, 2021 23:32
The Ostrich
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Your āDreamsleepā is a gem jammed with the truth. So many with their āhead in the sandā and facts be d*****!
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
September 21st, 2021 15:08
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Your āDreamsleepā is a gem jammed with the truth. So many with their āhead in the sandā and facts be d*****!
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
September 21st, 2021 15:08
The Indian Sign
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Ask not for whom the bell tollsā¦
Kurt
September 21st, 2021 10:23
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Ask not for whom the bell tollsā¦
Kurt
September 21st, 2021 10:23
The Indian Sign
L. B. Mek said:
everywhere there\'s a few
\'like minded\' gathering of people
preaching to their own choir
creating an insulated cocoon of a \'safe space\' for each other, only..
you can assume, in short order
\'a pseudo aristocracy will manifest\'
from within that group
and those few, \'chosen\'
will devolve
fighting to keep that taste of power and influence, they now crave..
\'rinse and repeat\'
times millenniums, and spread it like a plague: conquering a planet
and that\'s why
anytime, we humans try to govern ourselves, inevitably
we end-up, sabotaging ourselves...
September 21st, 2021 04:31
L. B. Mek said:
everywhere there\'s a few
\'like minded\' gathering of people
preaching to their own choir
creating an insulated cocoon of a \'safe space\' for each other, only..
you can assume, in short order
\'a pseudo aristocracy will manifest\'
from within that group
and those few, \'chosen\'
will devolve
fighting to keep that taste of power and influence, they now crave..
\'rinse and repeat\'
times millenniums, and spread it like a plague: conquering a planet
and that\'s why
anytime, we humans try to govern ourselves, inevitably
we end-up, sabotaging ourselves...
September 21st, 2021 04:31
Sum Zero Sum
Kurt Philip Behm said:
My pleasureā¦ thanks as always for the
enlightened response.
Kurt
September 20th, 2021 08:46
Kurt Philip Behm said:
My pleasureā¦ thanks as always for the
enlightened response.
Kurt
September 20th, 2021 08:46
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